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Posted: 4 years ago
#11

Wah wah wah...

Boht badiya

Anjali and prakashi ko aag lgaane ka shonk hai..bus yhi karti rehthi hai yeh

Vir ne toh aaj aag lgaadi..apna pora zor dikha diya uss vikas par...ab bacha huya zor room mein dikha de pur ke sath🙈🙈🙈😻😻😉😉😉

Sakshi ki last line..ki she cant disturb vir as he is with purvi.. sakshi ke mooh se aisi baat shobha nahi deti...kyunki woh KK sara din mukhi ji mukhi ji ka mantar jaapti rehthi hai

Der aaye par darust aaye...salshi ko akal toh aayi ki vir ab purvi ka hai🤩🤩

Agle part mein thoda..nahi nahi boht jada romance dena😉😉😉

Pura perfect scene likha hai..bus tv par dikha de yeh log aisa hi...

As aage u can show woh promo wala scene..where sakshi tells to choose pur or sakshi

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Posted: 4 years ago
#12

Originally posted by: Manasi_16

Wow Supriya this is superb👍🏼

Hayee kitna sukoon mila mere dil ko to see Vir beating up that creep!!! And also the way he stands up for Purvi without listening to anyone

I really want something like this to happen


The hug It gave such warm n fuzzy feelings 🤗

Ab Sakshi is in revenge mode coz Vir shouted at her 🤪

Saki ki bhot jali thi 🤣🤣🤣


You write so beautifully...everything comes alive while readingLoved this one🤗

Jaldi update karo

Soon 🤪

Thank you diii 🤗🤗

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Posted: 4 years ago
#13

Originally posted by: Nezuko

Suppa 🤗🤗🤗

Yr tune itni jaldi likh diya 😆

Maine commitment jo ki thi 😳 jaldi to likhna hi tha naa 🤪

This is all I want from this track

Old VPS 🔥🦁 haye

Sari bhadas nikaldi tune 🤣🤣

Apni bhi aur sabki bhi 🤣🤣🤣 vikas ko pitwa ke manne bhot maza aaya. Aur jab saki ki jali to kehna hi kya 🥳


Lol saki having a emotional breakdown


Next update jaldi karna 😳

Sure 👍🏼

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Posted: 4 years ago
#14

Originally posted by: darkchocolates

This is so beautiful dear..smiley31 You are one of the best writers of the forum..❤️

My pleasure dii.. ki apko achha laga. Meri mehnat safal hui 🤗😳


The way Vir stood up for Purvi..Believed her unconditionally..smiley42So dreamy and perfect..smiley27

And that hug...So soft and gentle..☺️


And not to forget Vir beating that sh*t..smiley36 Dil ko sukoon mil gaya..

Mere bhi 🤣🤣🤣 I want him to beat this moron so hard that he remembers forever !


And him shouting on Sakshi..Hayeee..And Sakshi ka jalna..The best part..

Haai naa ? 🤣🤣🤣


Now you have to update super fast..Just can't wait at all..🤗❤️

Puri koshish krugi di.. ki jald se jald update kru 😎🤗

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Posted: 4 years ago
#15

Originally posted by: Jaspreet96

Wah wah wah...

Boht badiya

Anjali and prakashi ko aag lgaane ka shonk hai..bus yhi karti rehthi hai yeh

Inko isi kaam ka to paisa milta hai 🤣🤣

Vir ne toh aaj aag lgaadi..apna pora zor dikha diya uss vikas par...ab bacha huya zor room mein dikha de pur ke sath🙈🙈🙈😻😻😉😉😉

Abhi to bhot jhande gadne hai Vir ko 🤣🤣 aage aage dekho hota hai kya 😎

Sakshi ki last line..ki she cant disturb vir as he is with purvi.. sakshi ke mooh se aisi baat shobha nahi deti...kyunki woh KK sara din mukhi ji mukhi ji ka mantar jaapti rehthi hai

She is such a disturbing element Lekin abhi disturb karne ki galti nhi kregi wo ..kyoki Vir ke andar ka babber sher power me hai abhi 😝

Der aaye par darust aaye...salshi ko akal toh aayi ki vir ab purvi ka hai🤩🤩

Akal ayi nhi ab to buddhi ghumegi iski 😝🤣🤦🏻‍♀️

Agle part mein thoda..nahi nahi boht jada romance dena😉😉😉

Romance se pehle confession likhna padega yaar Di usse pehle cringe lagega 🤦🏻‍♀️

Pura perfect scene likha hai..bus tv par dikha de yeh log aisa hi...

As aage u can show woh promo wala scene..where sakshi tells to choose pur or sakshi

Fir to ye OS nhi SS ban jayga 🤣🤣🤣

Thanku sooo much for reading this dii 🤗


I'll update soon 🥰

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Posted: 4 years ago
#16

Originally posted by: Suppss

I'll update soon 🥰

This is Much better than the reality.

Please update soooooooon.

Only Your OS can save us from the sh*t that the writer is showing in the show. Please update soon.

Can't wait.


Please yaar koi MF k writers ka intro karao EK ko taki saba ko hata k enko writers bana le, aur hume kuch achha dekhne ko mile....

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Posted: 4 years ago
#17

Originally posted by: grace_10

This is Much better than the reality.

Please update soooooooon.

Only Your OS can save us from the sh*t that the writer is showing in the show. Please update soon.

Can't wait.


Please yaar koi MF k writers ka intro karao EK ko taki saba ko hata k enko writers bana le, aur hume kuch achha dekhne ko mile....

Thank you soo much for giving it a read and appreciating my work !!

I'll try to give the next update at the earliest possible till then chill 👍🏼


Saba I'm falling short of words to describe the cringe fest she has started !! 😵

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Posted: 4 years ago
#18

Originally posted by: Suppss

Thank you soo much for giving it a read and appreciating my work !!

I'll try to give the next update at the earliest possible till then chill 👍🏼


Saba I'm falling short of words to describe the cringe fest she has started !! 😵

Rehne do "🤬" yahi sab niklega abhi Muh se unki Tareef me

Thanks to you!

You gave such a wonderful story.❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago
#19

Waah Supriya. Too good. Brilliant efforts.👏

💯 Out of 💯 for this one.

Kitni jaldi mil gayi ye..aaj hi ispe suggestions discuss ho rahe thee naa..nicee👍🏼

& Thankyou for this..aaj toh much needed tha yrr.

Tumhari os padh ke show ki cringiyat se dhyan hata h mera toh.👏❤️

I think show ke liye bhi suggestions de sakti ho tum saba ko..wo bakwas likh rahi h kyuki..isse far better storylines forum pe h💪😎😂

Kudos! Can't wait for next one.❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago
#20

Yaar suppa...🤗


Aisa kuch mil jaye atleast ab...

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