FF: LOVE WILL FIND ITS WAY. (part-4 updt on pg 10) - Page 6

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Posted: 16 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: saba_saiel

Wow pari this is mind-blowing, such a lively and full of entertainment parts, truly awesome, amazing, just can't tell u how much I enjoyed it, I imagined it all, waiting for the next part and when our hero and heroine meet, wow there's so much fun in store for us, looks like a brand new serial has started with the same cast, awesome yaar, thanks a lot.

thanku thnaku saba dear , and ur write hum yehi soch le ge ki we all r watching , i mean reading new show with our all time fav cast.next part will be soon updated dear
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Posted: 16 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: pennu

Pari ji...

loved the way you introduced Raj and Kranti.... just as in films.. Now waiting to see their first meeting.... so do it fast....

sure dear they will soon mgoing met just wait and watch and have patience
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: namita25

Haila pari you are toooo gooooooooooooood yaar...👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼.loved the way you introduced the characters 👏👏..👏👏you have presented an altogether different version of MRD...........sanjay in love with Kranti😲.. .I am thirsitily waiting for the next part.....

thanku thanku namrata sweety bus thora intazaar aur,as i'm working on my both scripts so update soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
#54

aww meri khoobsoorat si pari ji yeh kya kar dala tune..👏.

itni pyaari si kahaani ⭐️
aur hum aaye hi nahi pehle
but u know na my life....kitni baar kitni busy ho jati hoon
but am loving the concept and loving thye way story i sshaping up
bus abhi jaldi se milwa do dono ko
me waiting for next update
and thanks so much u wrote i n english
eagrely awaiting next part👏👏👏
glad am now catching up on ff's
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Posted: 16 years ago
#55

Originally posted by: sami01

aww meri khoobsoorat si pari ji yeh kya kar dala tune..👏.

itni pyaari si kahaani ⭐️
aur hum aaye hi nahi pehle
but u know na my life....kitni baar kitni busy ho jati hoon
but am loving the concept and loving thye way story i sshaping up
bus abhi jaldi se milwa do dono ko
me waiting for next update
and thanks so much u wrote i n english
eagrely awaiting next part👏👏👏
glad am now catching up on ff's

haya alhaa ,aap ka intazaar karte karte to budhe ho cale the, lekin chalo akher kaar aap aye bahar agayi, sami jiiiiiiii,aap ka hi intazaar ta bus ,,, i know dear how soo busy lekin fir bhi tum ne time nikala i'm glad , aur sabse bari baat , meri choti c koshish aap sab ko achii lagi, bus aur kay chahiye, , aap , hain , mrd forum, MRd family hain , mRd hain (in my memeories always now😔 ) to hum hain.
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Posted: 16 years ago
#56
thanku all for lovly my VM guys
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey pari

its very interesting yaar

both the parts were very good….

I liked this role reversal thing….. Raj susheel types… n Kranti studied in London…

was feeling bad for her…poor girl….always lonely

but of course things ll change for better once she meets Raj…isn't it?

I was going to ask where she is now…. But I guess with Raj going to England she is still there …

I would love 2 read more

cont sooooooooooon


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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: netu19

hey pari

its very interesting yaar

both the parts were very good?.

I liked this role reversal thing?.. Raj susheel types? n Kranti studied in London?

was feeling bad for her?poor girl?.always lonely

but of course things ll change for better once she meets Raj?isn't it?

I was going to ask where she is now?. But I guess with Raj going to England she is still there ?

I would love 2 read more

cont sooooooooooon


thanks for liking it dear , and dont worry soon they going to meet , coz they have to yaar, just a little more wait.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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guys thansk u like it and next part wil be soon updated as is these days i'm little bit busy so give me some time.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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ok guys me back again with new update and here is part 3 hope u all enjoy it. sooooooo here it goes :
Part 3



28 Dec. 2008, Delhi 7:00 pm
In SINGH NIWAS


Bhuji was at home, and discussing about the party arrangement with chahiji , bhuaji and nirmal.

B: so every thing is planed for party, venue and all.

C: every thing is planned just need to call the guests.

BH: veer u just need to call u friends, even I've asked, nirmal, and raj to call whom they want to call for the party, and me and bharjaji going to call are all relatives.

B: but where is raj he hasn't com yet,

C: he must be stuck some where, mean while y don't u talk to ur dear friend and invite him for party?
B: I was about to!!

Then bhuji moved to his room to talk to his friend.

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Scene shifted to club
Royal club

Where raj was with his friends and playing bowling match and discussing about future plans. All his friends were there samir, varun, vineet, ami and others.

VA: god!!!! Guys it's a split, now either 8 or 10 go, it's impossible to strike them both in same time.

A: shut man!!! We r going to loose this game.

R: stop it guys!!! We r not going to loose it.

A: raj!!! u saying like u can strike them at the same time.

Samir, varun, vineet at the same time shout at ami and said

AMIIii!!!! Shut up!!! He is raj, and how can u forget he is a champ, so chill.

Then raj strike bow and bowl turns , n turns n turns n turns and keep Turing and every body was stunt for a min. and then bowl hits the 8 and then it goes to 10 and on the same time both gets down and they wins the match. Every body is enjoying there winning treat, and start discussing abut there futures plans.

VN: so raj I've heard that u have planed to go London for ur MBA.

S: what!!! When!!! How!!!Raj!!! Ur going to London, all of sudden????? And you haven't told us!,

VR: what yaar!! How can u forgot that what we have decided, that after complete the collage we do MBA together. And now all of sudden ur planning to go to London?

R: haa yaar!!! I've planed to go to London for my MBA, and it's not all of sudden decision, u all knows that. I've to take the responsibilities of our business and anyways I've forget to tell u all, that we are throwing party. And we all r invited.

A: party!!!! Wowwww, but what's the occasion?????

R: first its New Year eave, second, my dad's best friend got awarded. So dad thought this the best time they celebrate reunion.

VR: wooww yaar, ur dad is too great he is throwing a party for his best friend.

Raj checks it out his watch and found its 8'o clock now.

R: hi guys, ok I'm leaving now I'm getting late every body was waiting for me.

Every body said together ok bye raj!!!!!

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Scene shifted to Mumbai

28 Dec. 2008 8:00 pm

RAO MANSION

Huge Mansion, big gate, Cars are there , and inside the mansion one man wearing suite with wine in hand is standing near the Bar. And then one servant comes and said

Servant: sir there is call for you from Delhi, some Mr. Kulbushan Singh on phone,
And man turns (he is Nimesh Rao Kate's Dad)

NR: Helloo, kulbushan, how r u my dear?? Where were u , its being ages. Where u vanish?
From other side of phone.

B: I'm fine. Yaa, its being ages, and vanish , that word I guess suited to u better., I try to call u up so many times, but I guess u were so busy, in ur business and did 'not get time to meet ur child hood friend. Is it ur friendship. I've heard that u have award with best business man of the year award, I'm so happy for u.

NR: , oh thanks yaar, even I'm desperately want to meet u, here is so many thing I've to share with u as in these years I'vnt talked to any body abut my feeling and suffering.

B: what happen my friend, is every thing okk

NR: not actually dear, in these yes lots of thing happens in my life, and now I've left so lonely. And I want my dear friend support now.

B: I'm always with u my friend, oh I forgot to tell u that I'm throwing a party for New Year eve. And this party in incompletes with u coz the second reason for this party was u got awarded. So comes to Delhi, we can drink together, and memorized all the thing which we used to do earlier in ur child hood and u can also share u feeling with me.

NR: I'll definitely come; I've to come as its u r party.

B: ok bye, and take care.

NR: Bye

And both hang up the phone.

But Nimesh is still engross somewhere else as he was thinking abut what happen in his past life and he was looking at the pics of his wife and daughter. And suddenly one tear rolls from his eyes and drop at the pic.

NR: its being 12 years, my life I'm still struggling for peace, and I' vent seem my daughter, SEEMA (Kate's mom name) after u left life is no mean same to me, I got every thing but still didn't find peace at all, I indulge my self in my business so that I can forget u and move on in life but for me its like time has freeze , and I didn't give time to our daughter when she needs me, I left her alone , see today I've every luxuries thing, I'm successful business man , people, see me as there role model, but I'm so alone but now I'll win me daughter's love, trust , faith back I' ve to go to her, and tell her that her dad loves her a lot, and take her back home, her home, our home, hope she will forgive, she will naa SEEMA???? And yes I know now what I have to do!!

Nimesh Rao is talking to her wife pic, then he pick's up the phone and makes a call

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Scene shifted to London
28 Dec. 2008 11:00pm
RAO MANSION


Phone rings?. Trink Trink Trink, Trink, Trink ??..

Nanny goes towards the Phone and picks it up

NY: Rao's residence

NR: hello!! Sushma (kate's naany name)

NY: Sir, Ur calling this time, is that every thing okk??

NR: yes yes every thing is fine, where is Kranti???

NY: she hasn't come yet. Actually she is arranging party for New Year so, she is busy with that a

NR: ok,, acha!! Listen, when ever kranti comes, tell her that I'm coming to London take her back home.

NY: what???????

Nanny is surprised and didn't find words to say anything.


NY: But sir, sorry to say, I don't thing so, she come with u,

NR: I know!! But I can handle it.and you have to help me in this!

NY: sure sir, i'm with u,i can try to make it inany posible way.

And then they hang up the phone.

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Scene shifted to

28 Dec. 2008 11:15pm

LONDON DISC

Music is very loud, very body was dancing, dim disco lights, drinks, wine were going on.
And there in corner Kate was sitting very upset and usual sanjay try to do funny thing. But today Kate was really very upset.

S: Kate comes on let's go and dance?

K: Sam, I don't feel like dance!

S: Kate come on yaar, now don't be a spoil sport now, I don't want to listen anything. Or else I start dancing here, and manager will throw us both. Come on let's go

Then they both dance for a while, and ten suddenly one guy try to some miss behave with Kate and then Kate got pissed off. She turns around and grabs him from collar and start; fighting with her basically she was beating him badly. And every body was staring at her as they all were watching some WWF and there Sam tries to stop her.

K: what u thing haa!! U jerk, I'm going to kill u!! U didn't even now whom u have trouble. U bloody jerk, moron, stupid. (While saying all these she was still beating him)

And Sam tries to cam her down.

S
: Kate stops it!!! Every body is staring at us.

K: leave me Sam, I'm going to kill him, call the manager where is manager.

And Sam is continuously tries to stop her, when he was failed to stop her then he picks her up from waist while still she was beating him with her legs and he put her on side but she was still shouting and throwing the things on him.

K: just get out of my way, I'm going to kill him, where is the dam manager!! MANAGER MANAGER!!call the MANAGER Rite now!!! MANAGERRRRRRRR

Then manager arrives

M: What's happing here???? Who's shouting??? Yes Mam what's the problem y u making chaos here???

K: MR. MANAGER!! Y the hell u allows these stupid jerks here??? I want to see him behind the bask (She was standing by holding that jerk from collar)

M: mam plz first came down and tell what's the matter?

K: this jerk is troubling me (Then Kate tell her whole story)
S: kate leave him, they will hanndel him now, and u have already beat him so much, as he is looking allready half dead. OH JHANSI KI RANI stop it now.

And then manager ask the guards to throw him out. And then whole problem was sought it out. And kate and sam both also left from disc. And kate was still talking about that person. And whole incident

K: don't now y the hell that manger left him like this, stupid, and moron!!!!

S: Kate stop it now, its over, u have already taught him a lesson. and i'm sure he is not going to tease any girl now in his whole life,And see we reach to ur home, now go sleep.

K: u won't come inside?

S: I wish to but its very late now, and I think I need to leave now,

K: ok then bye, see u tomorrow.
S: yaa bye!!


end of part 3


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ok guys this is it for today , hope u all like it , labhaa saa update , so enjoy it and plz don't forget to give ur comments , suggestion, and feebback to me, as i'm always wating for that.
and next part will be soon updated


Love
Pari😊


Edited by pari29 - 16 years ago

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