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Posted: 16 years ago
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Rachna first of all tell us how are you now.

I am hnored that inspite of being sicj you have written such an amazing story for me. Loved it simply you have chosedn Kranti's profession very nicely such a fiery girl could be a reporter in the modern times, when we dont need KKs. Loved every bit of it.

After reading your story now I feel that once MRD goes off air (Hope not) Gavie and Prableen should come in a modern drama and they will look fab there as well.

Amazing bit and you write so well simply suerb.

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: Arwen...

Take your time Poet, i m not in a hurry...😊

Thanks. I don't want to hurry the LOTR answers and make a hash of them. šŸ˜•šŸ˜†

i hope u r feeling better?

A little better, but still woozy. A lot of things combined together at the same time.

read your story....the short stories and FFs on the forum makes one fall in love with raj and kranti again and again and again😳 i absolutely loved your version😊

Thanks for reading. 😊 I agree with you. Raj and Kranti are really wonderful characters, we only got to know them properly. Thanks once again for loving my version. 😳😃

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: ranjna_m2010

Rachna first of all tell us how are you now.

Me struggling to be fine. Viral infection, so my limbs are in a pretty bad shape.

I am hnored that inspite of being sicj you have written such an amazing story for me. Loved it simply you have chosedn Kranti's profession very nicely such a fiery girl could be a reporter in the modern times, when we dont need KKs. Loved every bit of it.

Arrey I am honoured you asked me to write. if only my limbs had permitted, I could have made a few changes and corrections. I myself noted 5 mistakes.

At one time I wished to be a firebrand journalist, so my Kudi obviously got that job. šŸ˜‰šŸ˜†

After reading your story now I feel that once MRD goes off air (Hope not) Gavie and Prableen should come in a modern drama and they will look fab there as well.

Of course, they can project other characters too easily. Please ask someone to contact me to write the script. I am in for it.

Amazing bit and you write so well simply suerb.


Thanks once again. I enjoyed writing it too.😳

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hey Rachna you must take care of yourself.
I think that this idea of your of putting up a script in order is very nice I cam also chip in case teh need be. Lets find a PH which can by our script and then we can come up wih a rocking super hit show. Lets take it to Star or some other better channel.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: ranjna_m2010

Hey Rachna you must take care of yourself.

I think that this idea of your of putting up a script in order is very nice I cam also chip in case teh need be. Lets find a PH which can by our script and then we can come up wih a rocking super hit show. Lets take it to Star or some other better channel.



I know it's a good idea.

And definitely COLORS Doesnt get any bhav. They are sick.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: namita25

congrats rachna.......and now get ready to be grilled.......

Hi Namita šŸ˜›. Thanks for your questions hun, I enjoyed answering them. Here goes.

1.your favourite book and why?

Namita, I love reading books a lot and I have loads of favourite books. But if you want to know, I love reading The Lord of the Rings Trilogy. Why? Because it covers every element of life - from sound family life, friendship, love, valour, dignity, treachery, hope lost and found and finally triumph of good over evil.

One has to read the Trilogy together to understand every thing thats written, because the English used is a bit ancient with some weird spellings, but not something that can't be understood. Better still to read The Hobbit and The Silmarrillon also, for a complete understanding.


2.what are your strengths?

I am fiercely loyal and romantic to the core, and once I set my mind on something, I will surely do it. It's another thing that I don't decide on anything easily.


3.What is your favourite Raj-Kranti scene?

Well, I didn't see all their scenes. But of the ones that I have seen, I like the Basant Panchami scene where Kranti is coming down the stiars witht he pooja ka thali in her hand, wearing the yellow colored duppata that Raj had coloured for her, and Raj standing at the bottom of the staircase looking at her like he was in a trance. Loved the prposeful way he folded his arms while going to his Lala land. And Kranti had such a sweet smile on her face when she saw Raj staring at her. Wow! Mar Jawan. FAINT.
šŸ˜³ā˜ŗļø
ā˜ŗļø And also during tabela 😳, ahem ahem ā˜ŗļø, I loved a particular point of time when Raj was gently easing Kranti down on the hay and the water beads on her forehead were glistening ā˜ŗļø. It was such a personal moment and such a sweet scene.


4.Write one romantic scene between Raj-Kranti?

The clock struck twelve as the back gate of the Lal residence opened and then closed after a brief minute. The air was biting cold, it being early January and the black shawl covered figure hurried to the dark staircase. A shaft of moonlight fell on a part of the staircase, illuminating the path to some extent. As the figure turned around the bend to enter the corridor, the edge of the shawl caught hold of a metal flower vase, sending it clanging across the floor. The sound was deafening as it broke the stillness of the night.

The other members woke up abruptly from their sleep as lights went on in their rooms, as well as the light on the hallway. Before anything could be understood, a hand shot from behind the curtains of a room, wrapping itself around a wrist, pulling the person inside the room and then closing the door soundlessly between them. This room was also dark, except for moonbeams casting hazy glow across the room. Holding the figure securely, who was now being pulled towards the open window, the person waiting inside the room was merciless. Only when he reached the window that he loosened his grip, as his other hand went and removed the shawl covering the face of the woman.

'Kranti' he whispered 'where have you been?'.

As the face of the woman was revealed, Raj marvelled at her beauty, comparing her to the moon in the sky and finding her even more lovelier.

'That's none of your business' Kranti retorted, as she struggled to free her wrist. 'I have already told you Raj that we won't interfere in each other's life no matter what.'

Raj smiled a bit 'Yes I do remember but that's what you decided and informed me, I didn't tell you anything.'

By this time Kranti had been able to free herself and she now threw the shawl away, shivering a bit. Raj was surprised to find her dressed in a simple handloom churidaar, not that it made any difference to him. She was the quintessential beauty in his eyes and he longed to hug her.

Raj knew that his wife was involved in KK activities and he did not stop her, though he was continuously worried about her. In fact, everyone in his family knew Kranti was a Krantikari, fighting for her country. What they didn't know that she still visited her group and took part in their actions, albeit in a hushed up way. Raj's Father was not well and Kranti didn't want him to know anything about her present freedom fighter status. But Raj knew and was constantly worried. He knew English spies were everywhere and though he empathized with the KK views of liberating the nation, yet he was worried lest Kranti gets caught.

He watched as Kranti folded the black shawl and kept it inside the almirah; and then went inside to change. Someone banged on the door and Raj went to open it. His Mother was standing outside alongwith his sister-in-law.

'Raj, didn't you hear the crashing sound?' she asked.

'What sound? Oh! The sound of the vase falling? Yes I did hear it' He replied.

'Then why didn't you come outside to check?' Bibirani, his sister-in-law asked, her eyebrows assuming an interesting shape.

Raj smiled, knowing that she was trying to smell a rat

'Parjaaiji, have you noticed that it's so windy tonight? And the windows to the hallway are open. Isn't it natural that one of the billowing curtains might have caught the vase to drop?'

Not known as someone to give up, BBR tried to peer inside the room 'Where's Devraniji?'

'In the washroom' Raj replied nonchalantly. He then suddenly added

'She has been throwing up tonight. Don't know what she ate tonight.'

BBR made a face and walked away. After all it was she who had cooked dinner.

Chaijee also turned away towards her room, while a chuckling Raj closed the door behind them.

Kranti had heard what Raj had told BBR, she had exited the washroom then. And she was furious. She came and stood in front of Raj, her eyes asking for an explanation.

'Well I had to give something back to Parjaaiji for interfering so much in our life' Raj said in a somber tone.

'And you had to say that I was throwing up?' Kranti asked, her voice rising by a notch.

Raj stared at her, she was looking so beautiful, her hair open, a dot of vermilion on her forehead; but yes, she was as obstinate as a child. He replied impatiently

'What did you expect me to say? That you returned from one of your KK meetings? You know it's so difficult for me to lie to Chaijee.'

'And I am forcing you to lie' Kranti retorted back.

'Shh' Raj said suddenly, his ears trained to the door.

Kranti looked at him puzzled 'What's it?'

Raj clapped her mouth with his hand and pulled her close, willing her to keep quiet. He had heard footsteps outside their room and knew that it must be his sister-in-law. Obviously Kranti hadn't heard anything and she was yet to know BBR. Their room was still dark and Raj hoped that he had shut the door firmly. He looked down at Kranti and removed his hand, though he didn't leave her immediately. She looked at him questioningly.

'Parjaaiji' he said.

'What if she thinks something else?' she asked in a whisper.

He looked down at her surprised, it had not entered his mind at all. Her eyes were intoxicating and he forgot what he was thinking for a moment.

'Who cares?' he finally said.

Kranti looked at him surprised and then said

'I do.'

She tried to look away but Raj held her chin and turned her face towards him, one of his arm wrapped protectively around her waist, holding her across his chest. She felt warm and safe and secure in his arms.

'I do too Kranti' he finally said. 'And I hope someday this will be the biggest truth in our lives'.

Kranti sighs and lays her head against his chest and closes her eyes.

FINITO


5.Describe youself in 100 words?

This is the worst thing. I won't count 100 words, just write a bit.

I am a simple person and my main strength/ weakness is that I trust people easily. I am also emotional, sometimes I cry even when a dinosaur dies in a movie. I love reading books and I buy a lot of books, that's were most of my salary goes, much to the chagrin of my family members. I love listening to music also and don't have die-hard favourites. I like to mix and match what I hear. I love listening to soft, romantic songs. I love dogs but I don't have one right now. Maybe someday I will have a dog. I wish I could write fabulously. I love watching a lot of movies too, mainly English because they are not stretched like elastic. I love the colour blue in all shades, but I like some other colours too and depend on fire colours to perk up my day. I am a sun person, I love clear, sunny days.









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Posted: 16 years ago
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Poet!!!! reading u r answers I notice that u like only Kaake and KudišŸ˜•so U obviously r not so much in love with other jodis😳

It seems like I have mostly Bengali friends herešŸ˜†so u r from Calcutta!

Are u watching any other show on the TV at present?😳 if u r not..what r u r reasons? do u love the KK jodi that lot that u ignore other jodis šŸ˜³šŸ˜†
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey Rachna hope u r fine now😊
So i m back 2 grillllllllllzzzzzz u he he he he šŸ˜†šŸ˜†
So these r my Q😃
1-Nowadays with slumDogM everywhere
  • have u seen d movie,if yes then did u like it(ur views),if no then why u didnt see is it so cuz were u never intrested 2 see it or couldnt find time?
  • with frieda n dev gettin so much fame u think theu really deserve it?i mean wht u hink was there acting so nice tht they r bein talked so much???
  • a r rahman got oscar n he really deserved it(no doubt) but u think was this his best work?i mean didnt he deserved award 4 his outher works 2,but got for SM
2-Have u read any of d shakespeare drama,if yes then which 1 u like n why??
3-In which movie u will like gavie n prableen together(opposite to each outher)??


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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hi Poet ..........
Love the way you write šŸ‘šŸ¼ .......... Romance is def your forte ........
R U from a literature background ?
I know you have a lot of Qs to answer .....
So I'll go easy on you :
1. Write two of your fav quotes.
2. Write a short story ( one or two scenes) with Kranti in her parents house in Amritsar and Raj happens to visit / follow her there ......
You are free to use any secenario .... only let them somehow meet in her parents house ....... and pleaseeeeeeeeeeeee let it have a romantic ending šŸ˜
BTW how are you ?????
Take it easy dear .......... we can ask Jo to extend your KOTW so you can complete all the Qs at an easy pace.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Dawn,
Loved your questions. šŸ˜’
I think I could do with some extra time.

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