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Bonai

@Bonai

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Posted: 16 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: preearies7
great job...!!! I liked it...Holi episode...i hope this should be telecast...as you have written it...I am waiting when kranti tells raj "Mohe rang de" 😊

Thanks u liked it. Kranti bhi kahegi lekin....................

Ishq ke di galiyan tang hai
Sharmo sharmi mein bandh hai
Khud se khud ki kaisi yeh jang hai
Pal pal yeh dil ghabraye
Pal pal yeh dil sharmaye
Kuch kehta hai, aur kuch kar jaaye
Kaisi yeh paheli, mua dil mar jaana
Ishq mein jaldi bada jurmana
Tu sabra to kar mere yaar
Zara saans to le dildaar
Chal fikr nu goli maar yaar
Hai din zindadi de char
Haule Haule ho jayega pyar chaleya
Haule haule ho jayaga pyar
(is baar apna dimag nehi chalaya, udhar le liya)
Kyun .........................................

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Bonai

@Bonai

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: jyoti06
Woww Bona this was a real masterpiece👏..I really hope that the creatives come up with something similar for the holi special episode😳...it will b a wonderful scene to see Raj putting gulal on Kranti and that too with the help of his cheek-touching theory😉😆😛...that was the best part of your short story😳

Also loved the way Nirmal was trying to play the typical saali of her Raj jiju😉😛...too good yaar😳

Do come up with some more short and sweet stories😳

Chalo I m happy u also liked the 😳CTT (cheek-touching theory), we wanted this right .... so maine pehli bar to start kara diya😉, ab age dekhte hai keya hota hai show me.....😃. Aur yeha baki member kaise touching theory ko age lete hai 😉. Bholi Nirmal apne pati ke koi kam nehi aa rahi hai, chalo Jiju ke hi thodi kam me ayi.
Thanks dear I will try to imagine some more scene 😊.

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Ranjna Narang Monga

@ranjnanarang

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#23

Very nice Bonai

Hope the creatives take some cues from the forum here.

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riyasri25

@riyasri25

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#24

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Arre yaar isika continuation socha tha ke kuye ke paas Sanjay, Kewal, Raj sab ko apne apne biwi se dhulai (helping to take bath as it is holi, u know sabun thik se lagana hota hai na😉) karwaungi. But tum ne to pehle hi tel dal diya Raj ke sar par aur fir dono ko akele gusalkhana me bhi bhej diya😉 😆. to repetetive ya kind of similar ho jata isiliye rang lagane tak hi chod diya. keya kare gr8 minds thinks alike😃. But ur all scenes were also suparb 👏👏👏. keep writing (thanksssssss yaar )

but i really want you to continue this scene .RETATIVE BHII ho toh chalega.i dont mind if kranti helps him to take bath once again.😃

nor will any one else mind 😆