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Gagori Chatterjee

@jyoti06

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+ 8

Posted: 16 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: coolpurvi

great points. I think we shud send the link ot this thread to Gavie too. it may help is faster implementation of our suggestions

I want more emotions in the story. There shud be more more emotions in RK scenes. Raj shud feel the pain of kranti n kranti shud feel it

U r right Purvi ..I guess I will PM this thread to Gavie also now...he might help us in getting this feedback directly to the production team😉😳..fingers crossed😆😃

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Ranjna Narang Monga

@ranjnanarang

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#22

Jo one more thing I would like to add here. Since this show is one story please try and give tracks some logical interconnection. It actually looks like that we are watching three different stories whthout any connection what so ever.

And sometimes Lovely and mami track looks absolutely unnecessary. So please try to give them some credible interdependence.

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Bugger

@Bugger

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#23

i agree wit ranjana here ......... they shud show sum interconnection between otehr characetrs also ........rite now it seems ....3 diff stories going on!! they shud interrelate these stories!!

ppl hav put down excellent points ............so i dun hav much to say but my 2 cents here

1. they shud show kranti interacting with her luved ones also!! kranti shud b shown meeting wit nirmal and her mamaji atleast once in a while so tht her emotional side cud also be seen!!she luvs them immensly......but now i think she forgot them at all!!

tht sister bonding . mamaji-kranti bonding is now lacking!! i m missing it!! ..........i think tht is also one of teh main flavour of the show ......which will refrain teh show frm being monotonous!!

2. i think they shud show sum real kk work!! being a kk doesent mean juss to scream the naras on top of their voice!! i think the first and the last kk work the yhad shown was of sohan tauji stopping the ammunitions of britishers!! i will like creatives to go back to their research and see wat kk's hav done to make life miserable for britishers instaed of juss standing in teh court and defending sum or teh otehr kk!! in 1942 era britishers were actually fed up of such kk's ..who was alwayz .trying to oppose their every move!! i wud like to see more action frm their part!!

3. creatives pllzzz complete teh scene .........many times they leave the scene halfway!! in each scene i think they hav so much scope but they dun utilize it!! for eg....mela scene.....they cud have shown so many things happenng in mela!! even diwali scene ......where kranti burnt her hand cud be shown in a much better way!! and many more scenes where i felt the scene cud have been taken a better turn ....r left in between!!

4.i think the ysud work on mamiji' s charcter also!! i think its high time .....she shud have a heart change too against kranti and many other things!! her same old charcter isgetting boring!!! they can give a nice shape to mamiji's track also...........after all she is a motehr too!!

5. kranti was feeling bad ...so i think ...mabbe kranti gets herself arrested to save rahim chacha and so tht bauji can get RB too ....so it will b ek teer se 2 nishaana...............so mabbe seeing this kurbani ....raj strts feeling sumthing!!

i think after last episode ..........this cud b the only way to sve bothe charcters

Edited by Bugger - 16 years ago

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morningdew

@morningdew

Dazzler

Posted: 16 years ago

#24

Havent been able to read the posts on this one.. (have been answering that dolt JO's most silly qns) but will surely come back, read all the views and counterviews, and give my expert comments.. 😃

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apus fan

@sami01

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 16 years ago

#25

apart from all those views i would like to add one point please make prabhleen work on her eye expressions and also on her voice its very very flat.....but she seem like good actress am sure she will welcome this suggestion and becoem even better

for gavie just one suggestion...really like ur acting abilities gavie but can u please do soem voice modulation..into soem of ur dialouges specially concern ones ..but ur eye exressions r brilliant keep it up ...👏

rest of cast r doing ok job .....main focus should be on kakaji and his dharampatni and plase now rai bahaduri ........talks....move the story into emotional dreamland so much scope u have..creatives go with it...

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morningdew

@morningdew

Dazzler

Posted: 16 years ago

#26

Dawn.. those were brilliant.. and Ranjna, Bugs and Purvi have also made some very valid points.

Jo, when are u thinking to mail this over? And if Gavie's id is a real one, its a good idea you had to mail it directly to him too.

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Gagori Chatterjee

@jyoti06

Alumni

+ 8

Posted: 16 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: morningdew
Dawn.. those were brilliant.. and Ranjna, Bugs and Purvi have also made some very valid points.

Jo, when are u thinking to mail this over? And if Gavie's id is a real one, its a good idea you had to mail it directly to him too.

Ena finished mailing to colors and Gavie😃...I hv mailed this entire link now and so we can just keep on adding our suggestions here..😳

@Sam:Yes I agree with that voice modulation part...I hope Gavie personally listens to this😉😛

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Dawn

@Dawn Idol

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#28

@Bugs............. tht sister bonding . mamaji-kranti bonding is now lacking!!

Great point ......... I agree ........... you know sisters are like usually like sounding boards for one another ........... K & N could meet and talk about what is on their mind .............

Somethings .....It is easier talking to a sister than a husband ........ N can talk about S's lack of planning when it comes to money and her job too ............ K can talk of how she's concerned about R at some level but at the same time cannot let go of her KK ideals ...........

And Mamaji with his wordly experience should be able to guide the 2 sisters ..............

2. i think they shud show sum real kk work!!

Exactly ............ right now the KKs are just groping in the dark without a leader .........

3. creatives pllzzz complete teh scene .........

I agree ..........so many scenes left us with a feeling of being cheated ......... eg .... the sceen when K burnt her hand saving R ..... and R rushes off to get some ointment ... then what ???

Why doesn't he return with it ????

And on guessing that the Buddha is responsible for K's scars .... what happens ??? .... R has some stirring of guilt .... then he just lets it go ??????

K was def not going to tell tell him anything nor was she expecting his sympathy .......... but why did he not pursue it ????

They could have shown him genuinely remorseful ....... It could have turned out to be really poignant scene ............ the turmoil in his mind for the injury he has caused her unknowingly ........... and his hesitating / uncertain steps towards letting her know he did not wish for those things to happen .......

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purvi

@coolpurvi

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#29

some more

1. I want reintroduction of Tribhuvanlal's younger son in the story so that Raj cud know abt kranti's past

2 I want a Jiju-Saali meeting... I mean Raj- Lovely meeting. Lovely doesnt know waht to say what not to say. hope her stupidity will help Raj to know abt how mamiji ruined kranti's life

3 let Raj help Britsh in arresting KKs so that Raj cud see how they torture KKs n then repent for it

4 Let kranti surrender herself before british to save both KKs n RBship so that Raj cud realise that kranti do cares for his family n can pay any cost for his family. This might built some attachment between RK

5 KKs will now doubt Kranti but that will be a interesting twist

6 BBR kewal pls throughRaj-kranti out of the house as soon as possible. Or when Raj will realise that he betrayed his country by helping goras n he can never fulfill his father's wish he himself offer to leave the house along with kranti

Edited by coolpurvi - 16 years ago

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Gagori Chatterjee

@jyoti06

Alumni

+ 8

Posted: 16 years ago

#30

Dawn I really agree with your one very important point..that is the creatives should complete few scenes,....I was also expecting Raj to put the oinment on Kranti but instead there preferred showing how Raj and Kullu r taking sweets for that Takla😡..

The Raj saw those scars and reacted too but in the morning it was all gone with the wind..why??😆😕...

Nirmal-Kranti hv not met sinse Kranti's marriage and it looks as if both r not bothered also to meet each other..😕

What about Sanjay-Rajbir friendship here ??😕

Somewhere some links r really missing..Creatives need to join them properly now😃

And I m just adding this Ranjna's post here in this feedback thread...because some very important predictions r made in this post by Ranju,Aash and Purvi which might work in favour of the serial😳

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/mohe-rang-de/1089701/a-new-theory-part-ii-updt

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