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Posted: 11 years ago
#61
awesome story..both parts are good dear
thanks for the pm

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Posted: 11 years ago
#62
very sweet update
Mayank aj accha kaam kya
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Posted: 11 years ago
#63
Loved sweet muskans sweet batein and also loved mayank today
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Posted: 11 years ago
#64
Muskaan was cute as usual
and mayank was awesome
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Posted: 11 years ago
#65
humari Muskaan bahut he sweet and cute hai
Loved mayur and muskaan a lot
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Posted: 11 years ago
#66
lalala lalala
Muskaan was in full form
but today mayank was the best.
Nupur ko bhi apne liye ladna chaiye
Beautiful update

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Faria.

lalala lalala
Muskaan was in full form
but today mayank was the best.
Nupur ko bhi apne liye ladna chaiye
Beautiful update

actually usdin mujhe oata nehi kis baat par bohot gussa aaya tha to Mayank ke zariye usey nikaal diya😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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CHAPTER - 2

CHAPTER - 3

In the morning,Nupur brought a small glass of milk for Muskaan.Nupur said,"Chalo chalo Muskaan beta,ye lo mamma aapke liye dudh lekar aayi hai.Jaldi se apna dudh finish karlo."On seeing the milk,Muskaan immediately closed her nose and said,"Nei!!Mu dudu nei peeyegi.Dudu ganni hoti hai,ganni babbu aati hai."Nupur asked,"Dudu se badbu aati hai??Par dudu to Muskaan ke liye bohot achchi hoti hai,hai na?"Muskaan nodded her head on both sides and then said to Mayank,"Papa mamma ko bolo na Mu ko dudu nei peena hai."He came towards her on the bed and sat beside Muskaan and said,"Pata hai Muskaan jab papa chote the na to unko bhi dudh peena bilkul achcha nehi lagta tha,par pata hai ek din,aapki daadi ne aapke papa ko ek secret bataya,ek baat batayi thi."Muskaan asked,"Kya kaha daadi ne?"Mayank replied,"Daadi ne kaha ke,agar hum log dudh nehi peeyenge na to hume ye bare bare chashme lag jaayenge,phir chashma pehenne ke baad hume kuch nehi dikhega aur phir ye sunne ke baad,maine hamesha good boy bankar dudh pee liya."Muskaan very carefully listened to her father and then she widened her eyes and asked,"Bae bae chamme(chashme) lagte hai??Kitte bae chamme lagte hai papa?"Mayank thought for a few seconds and then made Muskaan wear his sunglasses.Those glasses were so big for Muskaan's face that they almost covered her face.Muskaan found that everything was black around her.She screamed,"Mamma Mu ko kuch bi nei dikhta hai."The glasses then finally fall off her eyes,since they were very big.She was very scared on that and folded her lips and asked Nupur,"Mamma Mu ko bi kuch nei dikhega?"Nupur cupped her face and replied,"Agar aap dudh peeogi na har roz,to aapko kabhi chashme nehi lagega."In a crying tone,Muskaan replied,"Mu dudu peeyegi mamma,loj peeyegi."Nupur kissed her and said,"Thats like my good girl!!Ab chalo,jaldi se isey finish kardo."Muskaan drank the milk without any more complaint.

While Mayank was getting ready to go office,Muskaan came running and crying back to the room.She started searching for her mother and called her.Mayank came and asked,"Kya hua kya hua papa ko bolo?"Muskaan said,"Mamma!!Mamma!!"Mayank said,"Mamma yaha nehi hai beta,aap papa ko bataao,kya hua?"He picked up Muskaan and made her sit on his lap and then Muskaan said,"Bai daadi puja kal layi thi na,maine pachaad maanga,dalebi thi aul bai daadi ne mee haath mein pachaad diya,gam dalebi thi,Mu ko tot(chot) lagi."Mayank looked at her hand and then found that it had turned red.He then took her to washroom and then put water on her hand.After that,he angrily called Nupur and when she arrived,she asked,"Kya hua Mayank?"Her eyes then fall on crying Muskaan.She was worried and immediately took her into her arms and asked,"Kya hua beta,aap ro kyu rahi ho?"Mayank said,"Aaj hadh paar ki hai daadi ne to.Tumhe pata hai Muskaan unhe puja karte dekh kar,unse prasaad maangne gayi thi aur unhone,uske haatho mein,abhi tali hui garam jalebi rakh di aur uska haath jala diya."Indira could not believe her ears and then asked,"Unhone aisa..."Mayank said,"Main agar chahu to is maamle mein bol sakta hu par...main aisa karunga nehi aur main ye ummeed karta hu ke isbaar tum mujhe disappoint nehi karogi.Muskaan tumhaari beti hai,agar aaj tumne apna muh nehi khola na to...tum samajh hi rahi hogi."Nupur lowered her eyes and then took Muskaan to the kitchen.In the kitchen,Shilpa and Nupur were making jalebi for Muskaan.Nupur opened the fridge and took out some ice cubes and then wrapped it on a cloth.She said to Muskaan,"Abhi ye mamma Muskaan ke haatho mein rakkhegi na to dekhna Muskaan ka dard ekdam choo ho jaayega."Nupur slowly rubbed the the cloth with ice on Muskaan's hand.On seeing that,Shilpa asked,"Kya hua Muskaan ko,barf kyu laga rahi hai tu?"Nupur replied,"Vo daadi puja kar rahi thi to Muskaan ne unse prasaad maanga aur unhone garam jalebi uske haath mein rakh di aur uska haath laal par gaya."Shilpa said,"Dekh Nupur,maine tujhse pehle bhi kaha tha ke Mayank ko samjha aur tum dono yaha se chale jaao Dhruv ke paas aur dekho ab tum dono akele nehi ho Muskaan bhi hai,uske baare mein socho.Mujhe pura yakeen hai ke ye sab shuruwaat hai aur aagey aur bhi bohot kuch honewaala hai,ye log tumhe aur Muskaan ko yaha shaanti se rehne nehi denge."Nupur put Muskaan on the table and Shilpa pampered her and asked,"Muskaan ko bohot dard ho raha hai na?"Muskan folded her lips and nodded her head.Shilpa said,"Koi baat nehi mamma ne baraf lagaya hai na abhi ke abhi thik ho jaayega.Chalo,aapko daadi ne promise kiya hai na ke aapke liye vo jalebi banaayegi,dekho aaj banaya hai."Muskaan replied,in a crying tone,"Nei mudhe dalebi nei chahiye."Nupur pitied on seeing Muskaan's condition and rained kisses on her face and said,"Aise kyu bol rahi ho beta??Mamma hai na aapke paas,jabtak main hu aapko koi kuch nehi karega aur aapne kaha tha na ke aapko jalebi bohot pasand hai,isiliye hi to mamma aur daadi aapke liye subhe se jalebi bana rahe hai."Nupur took one jalebi which was cold enough and then gave it to Muskaan.But,she looked at it with so much scare that she was unable to talk.Still she nodded her head and said,"Mudhe nei khaana."Nupur broke a piece from the jalebi and put forward it to Muskaan's mouth and asked,"Mamma khilaayegi tab bhi nehi khaaogi aap?"Muskaan was scared but still slowly opened her mouth.Nupur fed her with the jalebi and then hugged her and said,"Meri bachchi,kya haalat bana di hai."She angrily grinned.

Savitri had some special prayer and so she sat late on breakfast alongwith Ratna after Mayank and his father left for office.Nupur arranged the breakfast on the table and sat with them.While Savitri was taking jalebi,the moment she touched that,she screamed aloud.She yelled,"Ye sab kya hai Nupur??Itni garam jalebi koi rakhta hai kya aise?Mera haath jal jaata to?"Nupur gave a stern look to her and replied,"Aapki umar to kareeb 70 saal hai,tab bhi aapka haath jal gaya aapko itni taklif hui hai aur Muskaan to bas 3 saal ki hai,aapko andaaza bhi hai ke usko kitni taklif hui hogi?Aapko agar usey prasaad nehi dena tha to aap na deti,aapko uske haatho mein garam jalebi rakhne ki kya zarurat thi?Aap apne aap ko aurat kehti hai?"Ratna pointed finger at her and asked,"Teri himmat kaise hui meri ma se is tarah se baat karne ki?"Nupur replied,"Jis tarah se aapko taklif hui hai hai ke maine aapki ma se is tarah se baat ki hai bua thik usi tarah se mujhe bhi taklif hui thi jab mujhe ye pata chala ke aapne meri beti ke haath mein garam jalebi rakh kar usey chot pohchaayi thi."She looked at Savitri and said,"Aapko Mayank ne kaha tha na ke aapko agar Muskaan pasand nehi hai to aap usey bother mat kijiyega,to phir kyu?"Savitri asked,"Arey ye to bachchi hai tune iski baat par yakeen kar liya?"Nupur replied,"Muskaan ke umar ke bachcho ko sahi galat aur baaki kisi bhi cheez ke beech ka fark samajh mein nehi aata,isiliye aur chahe kuch bhi ho,bachche kabhi jhut nehi bolte hai."Shilpa smirked on seeing Nupur's attitude.Ratna said,"Dekha ma aajtak jo larki hamaare saamne apni zabaan tak nehi kholti thi aaj vo aapse zabaan lara rahi hai."Nupur replied back,"Vo isliye bua ji,kyuki aaj se pehle main kabhi ma nehi ban paayi thi.3 baar apna bachcha khone ke baad,mujhe Muskaan mili hai..."She joined her hands and continued,"Please mujhse ye khushi mat cheeniye,meri bachchi ko chain se jeene dijiye,meri beenti hai ye aapse."She glared at them and left from there.

[ FEW DAYS LATER ]

After some days,Mayank returned from office one night quite late.Nupur,on seeing him asked,"Kya hua Mayank office se aane mein itna late ho gaya?Tumne to aaj phone bhi nehi kiya?"Mayank replied,"Vo main office se laut kar aate waqt anaath aashram gaya tha unhone hi bulaya tha,vo adoption ki saari formalities puri ho gayi hai,bas hume chalkar kuch papers par signature karne hai."She asked,"Iske liye waha jaane ki kya zarurat thi,ye to phone par bhi bataya ja sakta tha na?"Mayank replied,"Ha par actually unhone mujhe Muskaan ke baare mein kuch important baate bataane ke liye waha bulwaaya tha.Asal mein Muskaan anaemic hai."Nupur remained open mouthed and uttered,"What???"He nodded his head and replied,"Ha aur usko har 6 mahine mein kamsekam ek do baar khoon charaana parta hai.Maine jab unhe uski is bimaari ki vajah puchi to unhone kaha ke jab unhe Muskaan mili thi,tab vo shaayad kuch hi ghante pehle paida hui thi.Ek to bahaar itne der tak pari thi upar se proper medical care nehi mila aur saath mein jo minimum zaruri cheese chahiye ek bachche ko vo bhi nehi mila tha to vo thori anaemic ho gayi."Nupur said,"Hey bhgwaan!!Pata nehi kaise ma baap honge jo itne chote se bachche ko is haalat mein chor diya,vo to achcha hua ke hum usey lekar aa gaye."Mayank agreed and said,"Ha aur un logo ne ye bhi kaha hai ke vo log ek sarkaari hospital mein Muskaan ko blood donate karwaate hai.Par you know,mujhe aisa lagta hai ke hume uski proper treatment karwaani chahiye,kisi achche hospital mein,kisi achche doctor se."Nupur said,"Ha tum thik keh rahe ho.Tum kal hi kisi doctor se appointment le lena,hum kal saare formalities pura karke aate waqt,Muskaan ko waha check-up karwaakar laayenge."Mayank replied,"Maine ye pehle hi soch kar rakkha tha aur you know,mera dost tha na Benji,vo bhi is baar US se hamesha ke liye waapas aa gaya hai.Usey apni ma ke naam par ek hospital banwaana hai yaha,to main ye soch raha tha ke kahi aur jaane se achcha hai ke hum Muskaan ka treatment usise karwaate hai."Nupur was quite happy on hearing that and agreed to him.On hearing Mayank's voice,Muskaan came to him and said,"Papa,aapne kaha tha mei dolu laakal denge,aap laaye?"Mayank replied,"Papa ne apni pari se promise kiya aur vo nehi laayenge aisa kabhi ho sakta hai?Achcha pehle ye batao,gudiya ka haath kaisa hai?"Muskaan replied,"Mamma ne thanni(thandi) baph(barf) lagaayi aul chab chooo ho gaya aul fil mamma ne mudhe dalebi bi khilaayi,aththi baali thanni dalebi."He asked,"Sab Muskaan ne hi kha liya papa ke liye nehi rakkha?"She widened her arms and replied,"Nei papa ke liye itte chaaye hai!!"Mayank laughed on seeing her attitude.

CHAPTER - 4

Edited by -Paulomi- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome..
How rude..
can an olderly person be so rude to such small baby..!!
her heart won't scream for that
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: shafy_MN

awesome..

How rude..
can an olderly person be so rude to such small baby..!!
her heart won't scream for that


thanks
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