updated(chapter-2)MAYUR-FF-The Virgin's choice - Page 2

Great one
simply one of the best story i've ever read
update soon please

Dhurvs first wife was gunjan sharma who was mayanks sister. dhruv betrayed gunjan thats why mayank wants to take revenge by kidnapping nupur .. Amazing update

Lovely FF
Congrats Dear
hope to get next part soon

At first io want to congratulate you for starting a FF on Mayur

Thank u so much dear. So sweet of you.

You seems to be new in this forum

I don't know what encouraged u to write on Mayur but as a die hard and ardent Mayur Fan I just want to HUG you dear for starting such a beautiful and very different story..

Firstly I loved your writing style- so beautifully written both updates. It doesnt seem that its ur first FF. I think u write regularly. any way coming to ur update- so Nupur got married with dhruv who deceived Mayanks sister Gungan - who was in coma now. To take revenge maaynk kidnapped Dhruvs newly bride Nupur. But u said nupur is ruthless, cunning - I mean a bit selfish lady- which was really very tough for me to imagine. As I alwz found Mayur as a very sweet, cute and lovely couple where both of them are reaaly really very nice. But no prob- I also loved this new thing of NUPUR. But I want her to change herself from such a ruthless girl to a lovely girl.LOL LOL.. and about mayank- BY GOD already fall in love with this character. Awesome update dear

Sooo beautiful Update

Please do cont soon and pm me

Nice update
waiting for next part

its palagrism work..i've read this novel..the dialouges and the scenes are copied and manupulated by her..same to same.

Sighhh- i feel like a fool right now
i was so excited about this FF- thought to read something new on Mayur
but but- arghhh.

anyway thank u sia..

i hate those people who try to grab the appreciation for work which wouldn't actually their own.

Originally posted by: rimshazeb

Amazing dear...
the story is getting interesting in each update...
hmm so gunjan is dhruv first wife n mayank sis..
Waiting for next update... aj he da do yar wait nhi ho rha ..
u write soo well ..abi tk kaha thi? I hope to get more ffs, ss n os from u :-D:-D
Thanks for pm..
p.s what is ur name dear?? 😊

Originally posted by: kerry7

Hehe awww u r so sweet thanks dear.. btw my name is maham... i have got an exam tomorrow so i cant update it today but will do soon...

Aww thanks again but its from a novel so maine nai likhi.. lekin yeahi will write more ffs os.. btw i was a silent reader before so chupi hue thi 😆