updated(chapter-2)MAYUR-FF-The Virgin's choice

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hello everyone 😊 im new here 😃
The Virgin's Choice:
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Mayank is about to do more than just voice his reasons why Nupur's marriage should be stopped... He is going to steal this beautiful wife-to-be and whisk her away to his private Greek island!

NOw the kidnapped virgin bride, Nupur has a choice... or does she? Mayank certainly knows what he wants- he's determined to give Nupur the wedding night she's been denied...

will update soon! hope u guys like the concept! 😳
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Hmm sound interesting...n different
plzz continue soon..
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Thank youuu everyone for liking the concept! ❤️ 😊


Chapter One

IT WAS A FAIRY TALE COME TRUE.Three months ago, Nupur had been struggling to pay her bills. Today, she no longer worked two jobs in San Francisco, scraping frozen rain off the window of the broken-down car she jump-started each night. As of an hour ago, she's become a baroness, with the world at her manicured fingertips.

And Dhruv was her husband.

Nupur glanced at her new husband across the enormous gilded ballroom of his castle in northern Sweden. The slender, blond baron looked sleek in his tuxedo, sipping champagne as he was deep in discussion with several young women.

She was his wife now.She should have been ecstatic. And yet, staring at Dhruv across the room, she suddenly found she couldn't breathe. 'Very fancy wedding, Baroness,'' her father teased, then frowned. 'But why are you so skinny these days, peanut? You been sick or something?'' Her mother elbowed him in the ribs. 'It's her wedding day,'' she hissed. 'Nupur looks beautiful!'' He looked her up and down accusingly.''She's skin and bone!'' Her mother patted her own full cheeks.''I dieted before my wedding to you, But of course __'' she sighed '__that was five children ago. For heaven's sake, let nupur enjoy being thin, because it won't last!''

But nupur didn't laugh, as she normally would have while being teased by her large, loving family.Nor did she tell them that she hadn't lost weight on purpose. She just never felt like she could relax around Dhruv, even though__or perhaps because__he constantly assured her she was perfect in every way.

She'd told herself it was wedding day jitters, but though she'd already spoken her vows she was still feeling queasier by the minutes.Was it because she hadn't eaten since yesterday? Or because the corset boning of the bodice of her wedding gown was laced too tightly, causing her breasts to spill over the top? She should have felt like the perfect Cindrella bride, in fullwhite skirts and with a diamond tiara sparkling above her long lave veil. But she still felt small and out-of-place in the castle.And her mother was a bloodhound where her children's emotions were concerned. In a minute, she'd ask questions, questions Nupur couldn't answer _ not even to herself.

Trembling, nupur set down her crystal flute on the tray of a passing waiter. " I'm going out for some fresh air."

'We'll come with you.''

'No. Please, I just need a minute. Alone__''

Turning, she fled the ballroom. She ran through the empty hallways of the castle and out into the dark winter's night. NUpur closed her eyes, taking a deep breath that burned her lungs in the Frozen February air. She was married now. She'd thought she would feel... different.

At twenty-five, she'd long been an object of pity to her friends and siblings, all of whom were married. Every time they'd said, 'you're too picky'' or 'who are you waiting for nupur__Prince charming?'' nupur had cried in private, in her lonely single apartment, but she'd still kept faith. She was determined not to settle. She would wait for true love, even if it took forever.

Then dhruv has walked into the San Francisco diner where she worked the morning shift.He'd sat down at the counter and odered coffee and the breakfast plate special. dhruv was a wealthy, handsome aristocrat who' gone to oxford, who had his own ancestral castle in Sweden.From the moment they'd met, he'd pursued nupur with reckless abandon. Men had pursued her before, and she'd never been interested.But dhruv's incredibly romantic, complimentary charm has swept her off her feet. A week ago, he'd proposed marriage. 'Let's elope today,'' he'd begged. 'I can't wait to have you as my wife.'' They'd had magical wedding.And tonight, they'd make love for the first time.

Was that why nupur felt this sinking feeling inside, like the cratering of her soul? She was nervous. That had to be the reason she felt so ill. She had nothing to be scared about, she told herself fiercely. Nothing. She'd just married the man of her dreams, so why was her body still shaking as if preparing to flee? What was wrong with her? She closed her eyes. 'Please,'' she prayed softly, 'let me have a happy marriage''.

'So,'' a deep voice said behind her, 'you are the bride.'' nupur whirled to face him, her skirts sweeping the snow.

A man, dark as shadow, stood infront of three black SUVs on the edge of the graveled courtyard.His black hair and coat were illuminated in the moonlight, where he stood beside a pale, solitary rowan tree. Nupur trembled as if she'd seen a ghost.She whispered, 'Who are you?'' Without a word, he started walking toward her. Something about his malevolent stare and the shadows of his face frightened her. Nupur suddenly realized how far she'd wandered from the castle, and how alone she was. Would anyone even hear her if she screamed? Ignoring the instincts that told her to turn and run, nupur folded her arms over her white corseted bodice. Lifting her chin, she waited for his answer. The stranger stopped directly in front of her, his body inches away from hers. He was so muscular and broad shouldered he had to be almost twice her weight. His black eyes gleamed down at her. 'Are you alone out here, little one?'' She shook her head.''There are hundreds of people inside the ballroom.'' His cruel, sensual lips curved upward. 'Ah, but you are not in the ballroom, you are alone.And do you not know,'' he said softly, 'how cold a winter night can be?''

COLD. A shiver went through her but she wasn't going to say that to a stranger. 'I am not afraid of a little snow.''

'Such bravery.'' The stranger's black eyes traced over her body, burning her wherever they touched. 'And yet you know why I've come.''

'Yes ofcourse'' she said, bewildered.

'But you do not run away?''

She blinked, even as her feet inched backward of their own volition, and said, 'Why would I run?''

His black eyes searched hers as if sifting through her soul. 'You actually take responsibility for your crime?''

She glanced back at the castle to reassure herself, her husband and family were near. She had no reason to be afraid. She was so overwrought she was imagining things!

'By crime' do you mean the wedding?'' she replied lightly. 'It was perhaps a bit overdone but that's hardly a crime,'' But the man didn't even smile. She cleared her throat. 'I am sorry,'' she said. 'I shouldn't joke. You must have traveled a long distance for our wedding, only to arrive an hour too late. That would make anyone upset.''

'Upset?'' he ground out. ' I'll get you some champagne inside,'' she urged. Her feet started inching back again toward the castle. 'Dhruv will be so happy to see you.'' The man barked a sudden laugh, 'is that another joke?''

Nupur stopped. 'Aren't you one of his friends?'' The man drew closer to her, 'NO, I am not his friend''. His body towered over hers without touching her, leaving her in shadow. She felt his physical strength like a threat. She had to flee for safety_now. 'Excuse me,'' she choked out, stumbling back. 'My husband's waiting for me.Hundreds of people_security guards, policemen_are waiting for our first dance as a married couple...''

The man's hand flew out to grab her upper arm over her translucent lace sleeve, gripping her tight, preventing her escape. 'Married?'' he repeated in cold furry. Why was he looking as If he might kill her for saying something so innocent and so obvious? 'Yes its our_ You are hurting me! ' His hand had tightened, gripping painfully into her arm. His black eyes stared down at her with deep, fathomless rage as he slowly looked from her breasts, which were pushed up by the tight bodice, to the enormous diamond ring and finally his eyes met hers, and it was like a blast fire as he said in a low voice, 'You both deserve to burn in hell for what you've done.'' She gaped at him. 'What? What are you talking about?''

'You know,'' he said in a low, grim voice.''And you know why I've come.''

'I don't!'' she panted, struggling in his brutal grip. 'Are you insane? Let me go!''

'You are a liar, just as I knew you'd be,'' he hissed in her ears, 'What I did not realize was that your would also be so beautiful.''

'You've... you've made some kind of mistake.'' She licked her dry lips. 'No mistake,'' he said roughly, his grip tightening on her shoulders. 'you have committed a crime. Now u will pay.''

'you're drunk__ or crazy?'' kicking his shins, she wrenched away from his grasp. Desperately she fled toward castle.she ran for safety, ran for her life. Toward her family and her new husband and the crowds of beautiful, laughing and celebrating Swedes.

But the stranger caught up with her. He seized her, lifting her up in his arms, holding her tightly against his chest as if she weighed nothing at all. Her white, translucent veil flew behind them as he carried her across the snowy garden.''What are you doing?Stop!'' she cried, kicking and struggling in his arms. 'Let me go! Help! Someone help me!''

He pushed her inside the back door of the last SUV, then slid in beside her, closing the door behind them. " go " he said. The driver stomped on the gas, scattering rocks and gravel as the back tried slid on a patch of ice. The other two cars roared ahead of them, as they sped into dark forested mountains of the countryside.

Nupur looked at the madman beside her, the stranger who'd just stolen her away from everyone she loved. " you kidnapped me,'' she whispered. 'from my own wedding reception, what do u want from me? Why have u taken me?'' The man reached for her as she had moved away from him to the edge of her seat. For a single moment she thought he meant to strike her, so she flinched, closing her eyes. Instead, she felt the tiara and veil ripped from her hair. Her eyes flew open and she saw his window rolling down as he gripped her diamond tiara and the white gauzy veil in one hand. 'what are u doing?'' she gasped. He didn't reply. He just flung the tiara and veil out onto the road. The window slid noiselessly back up. Nupur shaked in new fury, 'how dare you?''

'It was a fake,'' the man replied coldly.

'it's priceless heirloom.It has belonged to my husband's family for generations_____''

'fake,'' he cut her off. He turned away, adding in a low voice, 'as fake as your so-called marriage''.

'what?'' she whispered.

'you heard me''

'you're mad''

For a moment she thought he wouldn't answer that, either. Then his jaw twitched. 'you know your marriage is fake.Just as you know who I am.''

'I don't''.

'My name is Mayank Sharma,'' he bit out, watching her.

MAYANK SHARMA!

She'd hear dhruv shouting out the name in a rage in a Swedish diatribe to his assistants and bodyguards. Now her husband's apparent enemy had kidnapped her.

MAYANK SHARMA!!!

Nupur suddenly couldn't breathe. That name meant this wasn't a mistake. This wasn't a dream. She'd been kidnapped by her husband's enemy. And from what she'd seen, he was a remorseless, vicious villain with a heart of ice. 'What are u going to do with me?'' she whispered.

Mayank gave her a chilling smile.''Nothing, absolutely nothing.'' She didn't believe him for an instant. She had to get out of here, before he tossed her out the window next! She grabbed at her door handle, but it was locked.

Girmly, he shackled her wrists with his hands, pushing her back against the seat, his body crushing hers. 'You can not escape.''

'help!'' she screamed, though she knew it was hopeless. 'someone help me!''

'No help is coming for you, Nupur Bhushan.'' He looked down at her with hatred in his black eyes. 'You . . . are mine.''


will update soon! 😊

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brilliant..
Please do pm me..!!
Edited by shafy_MN - 11 years ago
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Woww woww outstanding starting dear...
Firstly to I was like yeh kiya nupur married to dhruv 😲
But phit entry hui humara hero Mayank Sharma k..
but mayank k story kiya h?? He love nupur?? Or he is dhruv enemy
let's see kiya hta h aga..I m eagarly waiting for next story..
plzz continue soon
n last I m loving ur writing style..
Thanks for pm 😊
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Awww guys thank u sho mush for liking it 😳 there u go 2nd chpter!

Chapter Two

He hadn't expected her to be so beautiful. As the SUV flew down the road through the snowy night, Mayank stared down at her slender wrists shackled in his hands. The instant she'd tried to escape, he's instinctively covered her with his body, pressing her into the soft leather of the backseat. Mayank could hear the soft pleading pant of her breath, smell the scent of fresh linen and tea roses that clung to her skin. His body tightened, and he forced himself to look away. He wasn't supposed to want nupur. Despise her, yes. Use her? Certainly. So how to explain this sudden rush of desire?

Nupur was a moral and mercenary, devious and ruthless and cunning. He'd known that, but somehow, he hadn't expected her to be so beautiful. Now, he could almost understand why Dhruv has risked so much to take her as his pretend wife. Ay man would want to possess a woman like her.

She looked, mayank thought, like a woman who'd just made love in the heat of explosive fire. He wanted her. And that made him angry. She must be luring him deliberately, h thought, teasing him like a coquette. Turning her feminine charms on him in hopes of evading punishment, in hope of winning his heart his side. TOO BAD FOR HER THAT HE HAD NO HEART.

His men had been watching TROLLSHELM CASTLE for days, since mayank had first heard about this so-called wedding. Mayank had planned to kidnap dhruv, and make him reveal Gunjan's location by force. But dhruv was too cagey for that. He'd never come out of his castle alone.

Mayank couldn't wait any longer. After a year, he was no longer sure of gunjan's condition. She could be dying. In desperation, he had nearly stormed into the castle with all his men, gun blazing, even knowing it could only end in disaster. Then he'd seen the man's new bride leave the castle in the dark, moonlit garden. When mayank saw her illuminated by the eerie northern lights, he's known it for the miracle it was. And he'd seized the opportunity.

Mayank knew all about nupur, the waitress who squandered gunjan's fortune on jewels and furs and designer clothes. The little gold digger had just lied her way through the most sacred vows of a marriage. But at that, she began to struggle wildly, kicking at him with her high-heeled shoes. 'stop!'' he commanded, using his body to compel her to obey. But to his amazement, though she was so much smaller, even though she had no chance of winning, she continued to fight. 'You bas***d! You coward! You criminal!'' she panted. 'my husband will find you. He'll stop you.you'll never get away with this!''

'be still'' he demanded.

Ahead in the moonlight, his largest jet was waiting for them on a deserted landing strip. When nupur saw the jet, her whole body sagged with sudden despair. The SUV stopped, and she turned to him. A single tear streamed slowly down her cheek.

'don't do this,'' she whispered.''please...whatever quarrel you have with dhruv, don't force me on that plane. Please, whoever you are__let me go back to the people I love!'' LOVE. As if this venal woman knew anything about love! 'let me go back to my husband,'' she continued tearfully.

Mayank's lips curled.''I told you, you have no husband''. She gasped, looking terried.

He stared back at her as the driver opened his door. 'I am begging you.'' She whimpered, 'don't hurt him! '

Roughly, he grabbed her arm. 'and the reason you have no husband,'' he bit out, 'is because Dhruv already has a wife.''

Nupur went numb with shock. As mayank ppulled her from the SUV, leading her across the dark tarmac to the waiting plane, she did not resist.

'but he cant have a wife'', she said numbly. 'I am dhruv's wife!''

' the wedding was fake,'' he said coldly.''the vows were fake.the minister was fake. And most of all, miss nupur__ you are fake''.

The captain and co-pilot welcomed and then disappeared to the front of the cabin to complete their take off preperations.

Alone with nupur in the front cabin, Mayank stretched out his arm on the back of the leather seat. As he took a sip of his champagne, he seemed relaxed. Contented.

'you're wrong about dhruv,'' nupur choked out. 'he wouldn't have done this awful thing you're accusing him of__''

'bigamy,'' he added.

She flinched. 'don't use that horrible word!''

'you're right,'' he said coolly, finishing off his flute of champagne and setting it down.''it wasn't bigamy, because his wedding to you was a sham from start to finish.''

'you're wrong''

'did u ever sign any paperwork?''

Nupur sucked in her breath as she realized for the first time that she'd never signed any papers. No marriage license. No forms. Nothing.

' no,'' she said automatically. No! nupur shook her head fiercely. 'dhruv wouldn't have pursued me if he were already married. He wouldn't have even noticed me pouring his coffee in san Francisco!''

'he wouldn't?''

'No! he wouldn't! marriage lasts forever. It is the friendship and passion that's lasts your whole life. Loyalty and love are the foundation of everything!''

He stared at her sardonically.''And where did you hear that, princess?''

'I didn't have to hear it from anyone,'' she snapped.''my parents have been married for nearly forty years. My grandparents were married for sixty before my grand dad died. All my brothers n sisters are married. All married. Happily. Forever.''

Mayank looked at her for a long time.''I can see marriage means a great deal to you.'' He gave a hard look at the ostentatious diamond on her left hand. 'so much that you didn't mind speaking a few false vows in order to get you hands on that.''

He thought she cared about this huge diamond ring? She clasped her hands together tightly. you think I would have let dhruv even flirt with me if I'd thought he was married? Never!''

'everything is for sale in this world. Everyone has a price.'' Rising to his feet, her captor crossed two ssteps to her. His eyes were like black fire. He towered over her. 'Dhruv has no money of his own. His money comes from his wife's inheritance, from her wealthy mother. That's her money you r wearing on yor back right now.''

'I don't believe you.''

'keep on telling yourself that, princess.''

'if any of this were true, if he were as bad as you say, why wouldn't his wife just divorce him?''

Mayank looked away, his jaw clenching. 'she can't''

'why?''

Narrowing her eyes, he looked at her. 'they were in an accident. She's in a coma. Not that you would care.'' His tone made it clear he thought nupur was a greedy, heartless brat.

'where are you taking me?''

He didn't answer. He stared at the screen on his laptop and typed rapidly.

'where are you taking me?'' she repeated more forcefully.

'its irrelevant.''

'tell me where.''

'I hardly think you are in a position to make demands.''

'you kidnapped me!''

'such a melodramatic word.''

'how else would u describe it?''

'justice!'' he said coldly.

'you don't have my passport.''

'that's all been arranged.''

'hows?''

He shrugged. 'as everything else is. For a price.

'tel me where we're going right now... or else... or else...''

He looked at her, his dark eyes amused, ' or else?''

Oh, how she wished she had her brother's old baseball or even a heavy handbag t threaten him with! She tried to look very mean as she thundered, ' you will tell me where or I will make this flight your own private hell!''

Mayank stared at her for a long instant.''Now that I believe,'' he said mildly as his lips quirked, typing a few words on his computer, he turned back to her and said, 'im taking you to Greece.''

'why?''

'to force dhruv to give me what I want.''

'and that is?''

'if he loves you like u think,'' he said the word scornfully, 'he will agree to a trade.''

'trade?'' she stared at him. 'what trade?''

'you. For her... I will you to force him to divorce his wife. His real wife.''

' I am his real wife,'' she said quietly. 'you have made a horrible mistake!''

' I couldn't understand why he would pretend to marry you like this. But if you didn't know he already had a wife...'' his eyes traced her face, her breasts, her body.''did you give him some kind of ultimatum? Did he think pretending to marry you was the only way he could keep you in his bed?''

To keep her in dhruv's bed? Nupur gaped at him, she'd never been in his bed___ or any man's! she was saving her virginity for her wedding night!

The thought made her suck in her breath. With a ragged breath. 'our marriage was real.'' She said. ' there is no other wife.''

' I am telling u the truth nupur.'' He said quietly.

'Who is she then?'' nupur said in a small voice.''his supposed first wife?''

'GUNJAN Sharma''

'gunjan sharma???''

'you know the name?''

' there's a wealthy family in san Francisco, mentioned often in newspaper.''

'the same.'' He said grimly.

' but the parents are dead,'' nupur recalled. ' there only child is barely out of high school. I read she left for college.''

'she is in coma,'' he said brutally.''no one knows she needs help. And I cant find her and get her to hospital. But u r his weakness. He will trade her. For u.'' she shook her head, dazed. 'you are the most beautiful woman I've ever seen.' Except for.. that.'' He frowned as his eyes narrowed.''take that off.''

'what?''

'you dress. Take it off.''

'what are you talking about?''

'the wedding dress is an insult. To her. To me. Take it off. You are not a bride.''

'I was_ am.''

'take off that dress,'' he growled. 'Or I will take it off for you.''

' I have nothing else to wear!''

He gave her a cold smile. 'that is not my problem.''


will update soon! 😳

Edited by kerry7 - 11 years ago
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its getting really interesting...nice update dear...
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Amazing dear...
the story is getting interesting in each update...
hmm so gunjan is dhruv first wife n mayank sis..
Waiting for next update... aj he da do yar wait nhi ho rha ..
u write soo well ..abi tk kaha thi? I hope to get more ffs, ss n os from u :-D:-D
Thanks for pm..
p.s what is ur name dear?? 😊
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Hey Dear
congratulation for starting a Mayur FF
i must say you are an awesome writer
beautiful story
Please update soon and PM me
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Superb update
Maynk kidnapped nupur bcoz she got married his rival Dhruv.
very interesting

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