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Itne saare updts ho gye, aur tumne mujhe ek bhi pm nhi kia ! :(
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Originally posted by: SujaLuvsMayur

Itne saare updts ho gye, aur tumne mujhe ek bhi pm nhi kia ! :(

I don't send pms to anyone now,those who are commenting,they are doing it without pms
Edited by -Paulomi- - 10 years ago
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oye hoye pallu. all a amazing updates. loved them to d core. San much thik hogaya. akshay druv ko aur bhi saza milne chaiye thi. ye nupur kyun case withdraw kar liya. its not fair. khair chodo ab mayur sajan pakhi panchi sab log khush hai yehi kafi hai. fabulous job. keep it up.
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Originally posted by: Faria.

oye hoye pallu. all a amazing updates. loved them to d core. San much thik hogaya. akshay druv ko aur bhi saza milne chaiye thi. ye nupur kyun case withdraw kar liya. its not fair. khair chodo ab mayur sajan pakhi panchi sab log khush hai yehi kafi hai. fabulous job. keep it up.

Because she is returning to US permanently and Mayank is also with her what else she needs
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CHAPTER - 51 TO 55

CHAPTER - 56

At night,when everyone returned from the party,everyone praised Mayank for his surprise and Paakhi said,"Papa you are awesome and you know mom loves such filmy situations."Mayank replied,"So tumhe kya laga hai ke tumhaare papa ko business ke alava kuch bhi nehi aata.Kyu?"Paakhi replied,"Ha mujhe kaise pata chalega mom ko to pataane ke liye aapko itna time lag gaya."Samrat replied,"Ya right!!"Paakhi said,"Mujhe bohot neend aa rahi hai,mujhe sona hai.Good night!!"The kids went to sleep and then Nupur said,"Ha abhi sabko apne apne room mein jaakar araam karna chahiye."Gunjan replied,"Ya Ronit ko mere bina neend nehi aati hai.He needs me."Samrat said,"Main sochta hu ke aaj se bachcho ke saath so jaau."While leaving,Gunjan said,"You're most welcome sweetheart!"Everyone rested in their room and Mayank too moved on to Nupur's room a long time ago.In their room,while Mayank was changing,Nupur was taking a shower.When he heard the sound of opening the washroom door,he looked there and found that Nupur was standing there with her bathing robe.

Yuhi bevaja dil mein nehi betaabiyaan...

Ye ishq hai season mein hai jo ab ravaa...

Mayank was stunned seeing her in that avatar as he didn't know that Nupur could be so vivacious .She walked slowly towards him making him surprised.

Aaja parakhle afsaana...

Dil ho gaya tera deewana...

She wrapped her arms around Mayank's shoulder and he was really very embarrassed and he raised his eye brows enquiring what happened and Nupur in the same manner replied as if everything was normal.She joined her head with his and smiled.

Dheere dheere se meri zindagi mein aana...

Dheere dheere se mere dil ko churaana...

Tumse pyar hume hai kitna jaane jaana...

Tumse milkar tumko hai bataana...

She unwrapped her bath robe and Mayank was stunned on seeing Nupur was wearing a night suit and she was looking extremely bold.

Ye zindagi...mushkil ho abto jeene mein...

Bechainiyaan din raat jalti hai seene mein...

Tere bina mujhe koi chehra nehi bhaata...

Mere bina tujhe chain bhi to nehi aata...

She started unbuttoning Mayank's shirt and he asked,"Ye kya ho raha hai by the way?"Nupur replied,"Maine kuch der pehle suna hai ke kisiko sirf business karna hi nehi aata hai,bohot kuch aata hai,so main ye soch rahi thi ke phir main kyu peeche hat jaau?Mujhe bhi to business ke alava aur bohot kuch aata hai.Phir tumne to kaha tha ke mera gift surprise hai so main tumhe apna gift to aaj hi de sakti hu na."Mayank smiled raising his brows.

Dil ka aalam hai aashiqana...

Dil ho gaya main tera deewana...

Nupur opened his shirt and wrapped him in her arms.

Dheere dheere se meri zindagi mein aana...

Dheere dheere se mere dil ko churaana...

Tumse pyar hume hai kitna jaane jaana...

Tumse milkar tumko hai bataana...

Mayank picked her up in his arms and then made her lie down on the bed.Both traced each other's face with the soft touch of their fingers.Mayank kissed Nupur and then his lips traced her face.

Dil ye mera maange teri hi chahatein...

Tu akhon mein hai to milti hai mujhe rahaatein...

Kaisi ab bandishein,ab kaisi ye majburiyaan...

After Nupur and Mayank had made love,Nupur had a heavenly feeling of her soul being touched by her love and that too in consciousness for the first time.Both lied facing each other covering upto the face with the blanket and Mayank kissing Nupur's fingers.

Dono ka ek hai fasaana...

Dil ho gaya main tera deewana...

Nupur came closer to Mayank and buried her face on his shoulder and closed her eyes.

Dheere dheere se meri zindagi mein aana...

Dheere dheere se mere dil ko churaana...

Tumse pyar hume hai kitna jaane jaana...

Tumse milkar tumko hai bataana...

Nupur and Mayank slept a peaceful night by hugging each other and only the stars outside remained to be the only evidence of their love.

Next day,in the morning,Paakhi got up and knocked into her parents' room as she had to get ready for school.She banged and called Nupur but there was no reply and so Paakhi was tensed.Paakhi yelled,"Mamma papa!!Darwaaza kholo.Now Iam getting scared."Nupur woke up on her voice and woke Mayank up.She looked at the time and said,"Oh God bachcho ke school ka time ho gaya hai."She shook Mayank and said,"Mayank its your office time."He woke up yawning and said,"Office to mera hi hai der se jaaunga to kuch nehi hoga."She said,"Par pehle uthkar darwaaza to kholo dekho Paakhi tabse chilla rahi hai."Mayank got up to open the door and Nupur stopped him again and asked,"Paagal ho gaye ho kya?Aisi haalat mein jaakar darwaaza khologe?"Mayank put on his clothes quickly and Nupur too rushed in to the bathroom and then Mayank opened the door.Paakhi came inside and yelled,"Itna time lagta hai darwaaza kholne mein?Pata hai main abhi dad se kehne waali thi ke vo police ko call kare."Nupur came out of the washroom and seeing her Paakhi went to hug her and said,"Mom please aisa kabhi mat karna."Nupur replied,"Iam sorry beta vo kya hai na kal aakh der se lagi aur isliye subhe uthne mein late ho gaya."Mayank said,"We are really very sorry Paakhi,I know tum dar gayi thi.Aaj ke baad aisa phir kabhi nehi hoga."Paakhi wiped her tears and said,"Chalo mujhe school jaana hai aur mera lunch bhi pack nehi hua."Nupur said,"Ha ha chalo."Saying she left from there taking Paakhi.

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CHAPTER - 57

[ 1 Month Later ]

One day,Gunjan said to Samrat,"You know Samrat peechle na ek mahine se dekh rahi hu ke hamaare baaju waale bungle mein bohot kaam ho raha hai.I think interiors hai."Samrat replied,"Ya they are leaving permanently for Australia,their hometown aur suna hai unhone ye ghar kisi Indian businessman ko bech diya hai aur vohi yaha interiors karwa rahe hai."Nupur said,"Ghar se yaad aaya kisine mujhse promise kiya tha ke mujhe mera ghar gift karenge vo bhi as anniversary gift par aajtak maine uski shakal tak nehi dekhi."Paakhi asked Mayank,"Really papa??Ye bohot galat hai.Aapne ye thik nehi kiya."Mayank looked at Nupur and then said,"Par ghar mein kaam ho raha hai na aur interior bhi to main tumhaare pasand se hi karwa raha hu na aise hi to tum logo ko waha nehi lekar ja sakta hu na.Varna tum hi kahogi ke dekho kaise fatichar se ghar mein laakar rakkha hua hai."Nupur said,"But that doesn't mean ke mujhe ye bhi na pata chale ke ghar hai kaha aur kaisa hai?Maine apne ghar ki shakal tak nehi dekhi hai Mayank."He said,"To main bol to raha hu ke surprise hai.Dekh kar bohot khush ho jaaogi.Sach mein yaar jiske liye itna sab kuch kar raha hu vohi mujhe baate sunaati hai.Samrat sach hi kehta hai you women are the same.Saari aurto ko apne patio ke naak mein dam karne mein na mazaa aata hai."Samrat said,"Its not your fault my dear dono behno ke khoon mein hi ye sab hai,dono hi khoon chuste hai."Panchi innocently asked,"Dad our moms are vampires?"Samrat replied,"Much uglier than that."Nupur said to Mayank,"Listen Mr Sharma apni hadh mein raho."Gunjan replied,"Jiju kuch kyu bol rahi ho di sab sangat ka asar hai."Samrat was about to speak hard and Namrata said,"Chup ho jaao saare,bachcho ke saamne lar rahe ho aur Mayank khabardaar agar meri bahu ko kuch bhi kaha to.Sahi hi to keh rahi hai ye,bichaari ko apna ghar nehi dekhna hai kya."Mayank replied,"Ye achcha hai ab meri daadi ko bhi apne saath kheech liya."Paakhi said,"Baridaadi don't you worry hume in sab jhagro ki aadat hai.Pehle mom aur dad ka dekhte the ab mamma papa ka bhi dekh lete hai.We are used to it."Panchi said,"Par ha dad ne kaha hai na to achcha waala surprise hi hoga."Mayank thanked Panchi and said,"Thank you my love."Nupur said,"Mayank main tumhe last time keh rahi hu ke agar kal tum mujhe ghar dikhaane nehi lekar gaye na to main tumhe is ghar se nikaal dungi."Samrat gave a bite to the apple and said,"By the way ghar mera hai,meri marzi ke bina yaha se koi kahi nehi jaayega."Gunjan snatched the apple and said,"Tum bhi ja rahe ho kal ghar se bahaar.Vaise tumhaare andar charbi bohot zyaada ho gayi hai,utaarni paregi."Saying she left from there.Samrat said,"Tumhaare jaisi biwia jinke paas hoti hai na vohi mard extra marital affair mein jaate hai."Nupur replied,"Ha to abhi ja sakte ho we literally don't care kyuki hume pata hai tum logo mein itna hunar nehi hai."Mayank said,"Ha vo to tum logo ke palle mein parke ye haalat ho gayi hai hamaari."Nupur and Gunjan both made a face to their husbands.

Next day,when Mayank said that he won't be able to take Nupur to visit their new house,she started stamping her feet and behaved like a kid,even younger to Paakhi.Mayank said,"Nupur bhulo mat hamaari ek khudki 9 saal ki beti hai aur yaha tum bachcho ki tarah behave kar rahi ho.Vo dekhegi to kya sochegi?"Nupur replied,"Vo yehi sochegi ke uske papa kitne...mere paas to word bhi nehi hai thik se tumhe describe karne ke liye."Mayank said,"Pata nehi Nupur tum to pehle aisi nehi thi,aajkal tum bilkul paagal ho gayi ho.Mujhe na kabhi kabhi aisa lagta hai jaise ke main tumhe pehchaanta hi nehi hu."Nupur made a face and then said,"Tum bohot vo ho gaye ho Mayank,Gunjan sahi kehti hai,saare mard shaadi ke baad badal jaate hai."Paakhi came to Nupur's room to ask Mayank to help her in her homework and found Nupur in that position and asked,"Mamma papa kuch hua hai kya?"He replied,"Tumhaari mom paagal ho gayi hai."She replied,"Vo to bachpan se hi hai dad ne kaha hai."Nupur said,"Us Sammy ke bachche ko na main aaj maar maar kar uska bharta bana dungi."Paakhi replied,"Main aapko hamesha ke liye bathroom mein bandh kar dungi ya phir terrace ke us store room mein bandh kar dungi permanently."She asked her father,"Papa aapne mere liye koi video game design kiya hai ya nehi?Aur why mom is behaving like that?"Mayank said,"Maine promise kiya tha na ke hamaara naya ghar jab bankar complete ho jaayega tab main tum sab sabko waha lekar jaaunga par mom ko abhi dekhna hai.Abhi to interior ka kaam chal raha hai na abhi kaise lekar jaau?"She went to Nupur and said,"Mom papa ne vo ghar le liya,ab interior ka kaam chal raha hai.Aapko beautiful cheez dekhna achcha lagta hai ya ugli cheezein.Surprise mein bhi ek alag mazaa aata hai na.To bas aap usiko enjoy karo na.Dekhne ke baad to saara suspense khatam ho jaayega.Mujhe dekho,main to itna excited nehi ho rahi hu."Nupur replied,"Par mujhse suspense bardaasht nehi hoti hai."Paakhi replied,"Mom aap ek thriller film pehle ending dekhti ho kya ke kaun asli culprit hota hai?Nehi na aap shuru se dekhti ho,pura patience rakhti ho na to is time par bhi rakh lo na.Vo bari daadi kya kehti hai ke ha...sabr k-ka...fal...meetha hota hai."Mayank happily replied,"Now thats called a perfect businessman's daughter."Nupur corrected,"Main bhi businesswoman hu by the way."Mayank replied,"Ya but not like me and Samrat.Business hamaare khoon mein hai and so Panchi,Paakhi,Ronit all have business in their blood."Nupur angrily asked,"Iska matlab ke tum mujhe nehi lekar ja rahe ho hai na?"Mayank replied,"Sorry no!!"Nupur said,"To phir thik hai,aaj se tum guest room mein sona,yaha aane ki jurrat bhi mat karna."Paakhi replied,"Mere papa ko daraao mat mom,pata hai he has a lavish apartment in his offices' top floor."Nupur said,"To vohi par jaa kar rahe yaha rehne ki kya zarurat hai.Huh!!Bhaar mein jaao tum,main abse kuch nehi kahungi."Saying she left from there angrily.

[ 1 Month Later ]

Due to Nupur's constant rude behaviour,Mayank decided to take Nupur to her new house and she was very happy for that and Paakhi thanked her father for that.She said,"Thanks papa varna mom ne mere dimaag ka na band baja kar rakkha hua hai."Mayank asked them to get ready and then he took them with him.At first,Mayank tied a cloth around Nupur's eyes and then took them to their new house.As soon as they entered inside the gate,Paakhi was about to scream with excitement but Mayank signalled her to keep quiet.When they stood in front of the house,Mayank unwrapped the cloth around Nupur's eyes and then asked her to open her eyes.When she opened her eyes,she was shocked that she was standing right in front of the bunglow beside Samrat's house and Mayank said,"Kaha tha na achcha waala surprise hai par nehi tumhe to sabr nehi ho raha tha."Nupur asked,"To phir itni der car mein?"He replied,"Its very simple sweetheart agar aise ghumaata nehi to pehle hi pata chal jaata na.Vaise you like it?"She said,"Like it???I love it!!"She hugged Mayank so tight that he was having suffocation and then he took them inside and showed them the house and then before leaving Mayank said,"Ab bas dono gharo ke balconies ko ek common corridor banwa kar jodna hai phir sabko aane jaane mein ye gate ke chakkar nehi kaatne parenge."Paakhi replied,"Papa I love you sooo much!!"Mayank kissed on her cheek and said,"I love you too my love!!"She said,"Main abhi jaakar mom dad ko batakar aati hu.Vo log bohot khush ho jaayenge."Saying she ran to her home.

[ 1 Year Later ]

Within 1 year,many things happened in their lives,first of all before getting into their new house,by Ranjit's wish,Nupur and Mayank got married to each other in a social marriage and then they went to their new house and after 10 months of Mayank and Nupur's marriage,Nupur became pregnant with their second child and for that everyone were very happy with that news.Panchi said to Paakhi,"Di dekh lena ab na mom aur Mayank dad baby se zyaada pyar karenge."Paakhi replied,"No problem dad hai na he'll always love me more than anyone else."Mayank happily said,"Maine Paakhi ko bare hote huye nehi dekha so hamaare aane waale bachche mein main uske bachpan ko dekh sakta hu."Namrata said,"Vaise I think hume Yash ko inform karna chahiye vo dada banne waala hai."Mayank replied,"Koi zarurat nehi hai daadi,Paakhi bhi to unki poti thi par unhone dhang se kabhi uske saath baat tak nehi ki hai.Unhe rehne dijiye unki so called biwi aur apne nalaayak beto ke saath.Ab mujhe unki koi zarurat nehi hai.Main apne parivaar ke saath bohot khush hu."Samrat said,"Ok lets forget all these things and lets enjoy aur ha hume Nupur ka puri tarah khayaal rakhna parega."Gunjan said,"Of course ab di ki saari responsibilities meri."Nupur said,"Ha ha karo ab to meri aish hi aish hai.Ab to jaise Gunjan Samrat ko tang karti thi,main Mayank ko karungi."Mayank made a worried face and asked,"What do you mean?"Samrat replied,"Pregnancy ke time par na bohot saare mood swings hote hai,aadhi raat ko cravings bhi hote hai.Don't worry dude you'll understand now.Vaise bhi main 3 bachcho ke time par mood swings ke atyaachaaro se pareshaan ho chuka hu,now its your turn dude."Mayank nodded his head.

[ 9 Months Later ]

As foretold by Samrat,Nupur actually made Mayank's life hell like demanding for small small things in the midnight and even fighting with him like kids.After 9 months,Nupur gave birth to a beautiful baby boy and they named him Vivaan in the naming ceremony.Paakhi said to her father,"Papa main bol rahi hu pehle se aapko iski jo dena hai de dena par na video game waali company meri hai,vo aap kisiko nehi de sakte hai."Nupur said,"Paakhi bhai abhi abhi paida hua hai aur tune abhi se hi hisse ki baat karni shuru kardi.Thats not fare!!"Paakhi replied,"Mom Iam just making sure that the company is mine but I love my brother don't worry,main isko sabse zyaada pyar karungi."Mayank said,"Don't worry vo tumhaari hi hai aur tumhaari hi rahegi."Paakhi said,"Ok don't worry main Vivu ka bohot dhyaan rakkhungi and I'll never be jealous of him even if you love him more than me."Samrat arrived and said,"Arey dekho ab sabki family complete ho gayi hai na to ek family photo banti hai."Everyone got ready and posed in front of the camera.

Nupur and Mayank had to face a lot of hardships in their life.One searched for his past in the darkness and one had to forget her past for the life of her love.But like every other life story,all became well as all ended well with a complete family of Nupur and Mayank with a daughter and a son and they all lived happily ever after.

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Posted: 10 years ago
finally a very happy end... it was really a painful story but with a very beautiful end...

hats off to u for this story...do write more...loved mayur sajan and the kids..cud actually visualize them..once again thank you for completing this story...tc dear...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Every good thing comes to end So this ff to ...And i Don't think Anyone Write on mayur Any more goonna miss mayur ..
thank you pallu for lovely ff ...
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Posted: 10 years ago
And it comes to an end... It was amazing reading ur stories... U r an awesome writer Thank u for writing MayUr FF
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Posted: 10 years ago
This was a winderful story & thanks for completing it Paulomi. Can you also complete kaisa ye ishq hai?

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