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Posted: 11 years ago
#61
Finally read all the updates ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜Ž
OMG Superb Amazing Updates yaar ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘
Itnna jyda intense and passionate โค๏ธโค๏ธ
I just loved it โค๏ธโค๏ธ

Gunjan searching for job.. Gave IV for Mahrotra company par wahaan se call nai aya coz uske fate mein toh Samrat se milna likha tha ๐Ÿ˜ณ
Samrat carefree guy ... Not attached with family.. But one day his dad confronts him and asks him to join office.. ๐Ÿ˜›
Chalo atleast he agreed ๐Ÿฅณ
Office scene ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
SaJan's 1st meet
She was about to fall he held her
Lost into her eyes
Ye toh hona hi tha
Aww Samrat wished to see her only as her PA ๐Ÿ˜ณ
But Mr Nanda said they already selected someone ๐Ÿ˜›
Next day finally he got to know her PA is Gunjan only yipeee ๐Ÿฅณ
He didn't let her go and work on employees cabin after all she is special .. She is Samrat's PA ๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜Ž
He asked her to make presentation ๐Ÿ˜ฒ
Aww my sweet soul worked day and night on that presentation ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ
Arjun too helped him yay he is good bro. ๐Ÿ˜ณ
Samrat gifted her cell phone ๐Ÿ˜‰
SaJan's Jungle trip
Aww Gunjan got hurt ๐Ÿ˜ฒ
Koi nai Samrat first aid her and cure it ๐Ÿ˜‰
Eksss Tree house โค๏ธ
They slept close to each other haaye

Wats with that Ranbir ๐Ÿ˜ก
And not to forget Gunjan gave presentation on his behalf and they got contract ๐Ÿฅณ
And the party ๐Ÿฅณ
Though nothing happened much but still Gunjan came forward for his rescue when others were accusing him of taking advantage .. ๐Ÿ˜Ž

With a passing time they became best of friends ๐Ÿ‘
Friendship k baad hi love start hota hai ๐Ÿ˜‰
Mahrotra called Gjnjan to join in .. She lied she ll consider only to tease him.. ๐Ÿ˜‰ Samrat darr gya ๐Ÿ˜›
Made contract papers he he ๐Ÿ˜†
She signed..

He got new cabin aur uske andar Gunjan ka bhi cabin ๐Ÿ˜‰

Nandini after Gunjan to marry someone ๐Ÿฅฑ
Samrat promised to help her .. He made her sign papers to renew her contract .. She signed without reading..

Next Day OMG How could this happen..
Legal marriage bhi ho gyi ๐Ÿ˜ฒ
Main toh bahut khush ho gyi ๐Ÿฅณ
Wait ye Kya Gunjan gussa her family gussa
Samrat bhi shocked ๐Ÿ˜ฒ
Something is fishy
That Ranbir ficaso .. Gunjan always feeling someone following her.. Stalking her.. Is this all connected with their marriage
Or its all Karan's plan to make Samrat responsible guy ๐Ÿ˜•

Nandini ne Gunjan ko ghar se nikal diya
Yay Samrat came and took her with him
Ek hi room mein ๐Ÿ˜‰
Par she blamed him for everything ๐Ÿ˜ก
Samrat said she ll be free after 6 months.. He ll divorce her..๐Ÿ˜ฒ

Samrat's parents hates Gunjan ๐Ÿฅฑ
I don't like Damini ๐Ÿ˜ก

Samrat worked hard for some project which Gunjan was not aware about.. But he didn't got tender awww Gunjal consoled him..

Karan asked them to leave.. Sammy can stay but not her.. ๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ต

Yay Sammy Gunjan ko apne sath le gya new house mein ๐Ÿฅณ

New house - New beginning
Ups and down in relationship.. ๐Ÿ˜ณ
Vo Honey voney Jo bhi hai lizard kahi ki ๐Ÿ˜ก
I hope she never comes back ๐Ÿฅฑ
Par Vo party wala dance. Haaye
Outside are mein closeness โ˜บ๏ธ
Ghar mein Gunjan Ki craziness to find ways to live with him in his room โ˜บ๏ธ
Sath mein Sona
Vo fire incident ๐Ÿ˜ฒ
Gunjan's illness
Samrat taking care of her wow loved it โค๏ธ
Cheeks kissi missi, forehead kissi missi โ˜บ๏ธ
Dheere Dheere time passed .. 6 months over ๐Ÿ˜ฒ
Divorce papers ๐Ÿ˜ฒ
Then confession ๐Ÿฅณ
It was so intense โค๏ธโค๏ธ
Kissi missi โ˜บ๏ธโค๏ธ

Gunjan's Birthday ๐Ÿฅณ
I love Gunjan.. Dusri girls ki tarh muh nai fulaya Khud ko hi surprise party dedi ๐Ÿ˜†
Rain ... And kissi haaye romance mode on โค๏ธโ˜บ๏ธ

Romance grew more and more... Kids talk.. Future planning.. aww ๐Ÿ˜ณ
3 kids chahiye ๐Ÿ˜‰

Hmm vomitting

They decided to remarry ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
Aww Sammy came her house chupke chupke.. ๐Ÿ˜‰
Shower romance โ˜บ๏ธโค๏ธ

Gunjan fearing Kuch Bura hone wala hai
Marriage day.. Sammy ready.. Gunjan ko phone call aya.. Jise sun k uske hosh ud gye ๐Ÿ˜ฒ
Aisa Kya hua ๐Ÿ˜•๐Ÿค”

1 year leap ๐Ÿ˜ฒ
Gunjan seems weird
Arjun worried for her sis
He went out for work fr few days..
Neha needed medicine for Aashi..
Gunjan went alone to buy medicines..
Ugh someone attacked her ๐Ÿ˜ฒ๐Ÿ˜ก
Ring ko nai diya awww sammy ki ring na โค๏ธโค๏ธ

Yay Sammy aa gya ๐Ÿฅณ
Takes her hospital ๐Ÿ˜ณ
Lives in her house until Arjuna returns..
Gunjan don't want him to live in her room with her
Next Day Arjun aa gya ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
He asked Sammy to live with them hurray ๐Ÿฅณ
Ab Gunjan kab tak feelings hide karegi ๐Ÿ˜‰
Btw I don't know why but I think Aashi is SaJan's daughter maybe I am wrong ๐Ÿค”

Really an amazing story Ash ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ
โค๏ธed it..
Waiting for next part ๐Ÿ˜ณ
Continue soon ๐Ÿ˜‰

BTW here are my 5 stars for amazing updates ๐Ÿ˜‰ โญ๏ธโญ๏ธ.โญ๏ธโญ๏ธ.โญ๏ธ

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Posted: 11 years ago
#62

Originally posted by: Barbievishi20

Tu yahaan pe post kyun nai karti? ๐Ÿค”
main feedback bhi blog pe doon ๐Ÿค”


teri marzi hai... blog banaya he iss liye tha k fictions likhun gi. ๐Ÿ˜ณ
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Posted: 11 years ago
#63

Originally posted by: Barbievishi20

main yahi pe feedback deying ๐Ÿ˜›


tu ne mere reply dene se pehle he decide kar liya ๐Ÿ˜†
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Posted: 11 years ago
#64

Originally posted by: Barbievishi20

Finally read all the updates ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜Ž
OMG Superb Amazing Updates yaar ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘
Itnna jyda intense and passionate โค๏ธโค๏ธ
I just loved it โค๏ธโค๏ธ

Gunjan searching for job.. Gave IV for Mahrotra company par wahaan se call nai aya coz uske fate mein toh Samrat se milna likha tha ๐Ÿ˜ณ
Samrat carefree guy ... Not attached with family.. But one day his dad confronts him and asks him to join office.. ๐Ÿ˜›
Chalo atleast he agreed ๐Ÿฅณ
Office scene ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
SaJan's 1st meet
She was about to fall he held her
Lost into her eyes
Ye toh hona hi tha
Aww Samrat wished to see her only as her PA ๐Ÿ˜ณ
But Mr Nanda said they already selected someone ๐Ÿ˜›
Next day finally he got to know her PA is Gunjan only yipeee ๐Ÿฅณ
He didn't let her go and work on employees cabin after all she is special .. She is Samrat's PA ๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜Ž
He asked her to make presentation ๐Ÿ˜ฒ
Aww my sweet soul worked day and night on that presentation ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ
Arjun too helped him yay he is good bro. ๐Ÿ˜ณ
Samrat gifted her cell phone ๐Ÿ˜‰
SaJan's Jungle trip
Aww Gunjan got hurt ๐Ÿ˜ฒ
Koi nai Samrat first aid her and cure it ๐Ÿ˜‰
Eksss Tree house โค๏ธ
They slept close to each other haaye

Wats with that Ranbir ๐Ÿ˜ก
And not to forget Gunjan gave presentation on his behalf and they got contract ๐Ÿฅณ
And the party ๐Ÿฅณ
Though nothing happened much but still Gunjan came forward for his rescue when others were accusing him of taking advantage .. ๐Ÿ˜Ž

With a passing time they became best of friends ๐Ÿ‘
Friendship k baad hi love start hota hai ๐Ÿ˜‰
Mahrotra called Gjnjan to join in .. She lied she ll consider only to tease him.. ๐Ÿ˜‰ Samrat darr gya ๐Ÿ˜›
Made contract papers he he ๐Ÿ˜†
She signed..

He got new cabin aur uske andar Gunjan ka bhi cabin ๐Ÿ˜‰

Nandini after Gunjan to marry someone ๐Ÿฅฑ
Samrat promised to help her .. He made her sign papers to renew her contract .. She signed without reading..

Next Day OMG How could this happen..
Legal marriage bhi ho gyi ๐Ÿ˜ฒ
Main toh bahut khush ho gyi ๐Ÿฅณ
Wait ye Kya Gunjan gussa her family gussa
Samrat bhi shocked ๐Ÿ˜ฒ
Something is fishy
That Ranbir ficaso .. Gunjan always feeling someone following her.. Stalking her.. Is this all connected with their marriage
Or its all Karan's plan to make Samrat responsible guy ๐Ÿ˜•

Nandini ne Gunjan ko ghar se nikal diya
Yay Samrat came and took her with him
Ek hi room mein ๐Ÿ˜‰
Par she blamed him for everything ๐Ÿ˜ก
Samrat said she ll be free after 6 months.. He ll divorce her..๐Ÿ˜ฒ

Samrat's parents hates Gunjan ๐Ÿฅฑ
I don't like Damini ๐Ÿ˜ก

Samrat worked hard for some project which Gunjan was not aware about.. But he didn't got tender awww Gunjal consoled him..

Karan asked them to leave.. Sammy can stay but not her.. ๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ต

Yay Sammy Gunjan ko apne sath le gya new house mein ๐Ÿฅณ

New house - New beginning
Ups and down in relationship.. ๐Ÿ˜ณ
Vo Honey voney Jo bhi hai lizard kahi ki ๐Ÿ˜ก
I hope she never comes back ๐Ÿฅฑ
Par Vo party wala dance. Haaye
Outside are mein closeness โ˜บ๏ธ
Ghar mein Gunjan Ki craziness to find ways to live with him in his room โ˜บ๏ธ
Sath mein Sona
Vo fire incident ๐Ÿ˜ฒ
Gunjan's illness
Samrat taking care of her wow loved it โค๏ธ
Cheeks kissi missi, forehead kissi missi โ˜บ๏ธ
Dheere Dheere time passed .. 6 months over ๐Ÿ˜ฒ
Divorce papers ๐Ÿ˜ฒ
Then confession ๐Ÿฅณ
It was so intense โค๏ธโค๏ธ
Kissi missi โ˜บ๏ธโค๏ธ

Gunjan's Birthday ๐Ÿฅณ
I love Gunjan.. Dusri girls ki tarh muh nai fulaya Khud ko hi surprise party dedi ๐Ÿ˜†
Rain ... And kissi haaye romance mode on โค๏ธโ˜บ๏ธ

Romance grew more and more... Kids talk.. Future planning.. aww ๐Ÿ˜ณ
3 kids chahiye ๐Ÿ˜‰

Hmm vomitting

They decided to remarry ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
Aww Sammy came her house chupke chupke.. ๐Ÿ˜‰
Shower romance โ˜บ๏ธโค๏ธ

Gunjan fearing Kuch Bura hone wala hai
Marriage day.. Sammy ready.. Gunjan ko phone call aya.. Jise sun k uske hosh ud gye ๐Ÿ˜ฒ
Aisa Kya hua ๐Ÿ˜•๐Ÿค”

1 year leap ๐Ÿ˜ฒ
Gunjan seems weird
Arjun worried for her sis
He went out for work fr few days..
Neha needed medicine for Aashi..
Gunjan went alone to buy medicines..
Ugh someone attacked her ๐Ÿ˜ฒ๐Ÿ˜ก
Ring ko nai diya awww sammy ki ring na โค๏ธโค๏ธ

Yay Sammy aa gya ๐Ÿฅณ
Takes her hospital ๐Ÿ˜ณ
Lives in her house until Arjuna returns..
Gunjan don't want him to live in her room with her
Next Day Arjun aa gya ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
He asked Sammy to live with them hurray ๐Ÿฅณ
Ab Gunjan kab tak feelings hide karegi ๐Ÿ˜‰
Btw I don't know why but I think Aashi is SaJan's daughter maybe I am wrong ๐Ÿค”

Really an amazing story Ash ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ
โค๏ธed it..
Waiting for next part ๐Ÿ˜ณ
Continue soon ๐Ÿ˜‰

BTW here are my 5 stars for amazing updates ๐Ÿ˜‰ โญ๏ธโญ๏ธ.โญ๏ธโญ๏ธ.โญ๏ธ


OMG! Tu ne toh 24 hours bhi nahi lagaye 29 chapters parhne ke liye. Aur jab I was reading your comment toh mujhe woh sab yaad aa raha tha jo jo moi ne likha hai. ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

I never thought that it would turn into a passionate one. In fact, there is always a high demand for intense scenes but jitna story ke accordingly theek laga utna likh diya. ๐Ÿ˜ณ

Thank you so0ooo0ooo much Vishu for such a positive response. Loved to read your detailed review about my story. ๐Ÿค— And the best part was 5 stars. ๐Ÿ˜‰

I am trying to give 30th update before my uni starts because I know after that, I won't get enough time to write. ๐Ÿ˜›
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Posted: 11 years ago
#65

Originally posted by: ritzsammy

Lovely upate aashu..:)


Thanks Ritz ๐Ÿ˜Š

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