Don't let me go...[Updated at Pg.43 24th dec 2014] - Page 9

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awww loved it..continue soon..can't wait to read more..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: HSFA

Hello? Mere comment ka reply karo

Tauba~~ye update hai ke poora novel??
Ya khuda~~ye comments hain ke full-fledged critical appreciation
Sorry Marie & all other writers...I m a science student ~~ so in apt &short words~~
Marie,u r awesome!!
Edited by chulbuli94 - 12 years ago
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Edited on pg 11 :)
I want my reply ab:p
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Cute n sweet update..<3 ..Aww she planned a surprise for Sam..i loved their thoughts during walk..do continue soon..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Sorry for late commnet meeriii..bt finally i have read it...Very nice SS...since start to end it was awesome...3 bt too much long long updates...😃
Very well writte...Sajan's bonding was really wonderfull...The way they love and care for eachother no couple would ever replace their magic...Samrat concern for Gunjan was written beautifully..👏..Birthday partyscene was awesome..the whole gant masti and friendship was wonderful...overall very nice updates...keep it up..thanks for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Without any single person their gang was incomplete..and gunjan..she was soulmate for samrat...daughter like sister for mayur..for dia she was best sister...for benji it was a friend with whom he can seek advice specially in dia's matter...for uday it was a dearly sister who had never say no to him n had always make him feel better...

Marie you made me nostalgic... I'm missing MJHT now even more...

Gunjan looked at nupur n samrat..she doesn't wish like that ...people bug her family because of her..she literally sacrificed her time already n now this..never she would be able to accept this..

Thats Gunjan, always caring, loving, adorable and ever januable

SAJAN and kitchen romance

Wow Marie kya cake banaya... So true it's more than just a cake 😳

it was not just a cake..it was her love..her gesture to show what he means to her...he knows how she always feel as she is just not expressive...n not is like him..who had always manage to surprise her..but this time time for sure she had won...or say she conquered samrat shergill once again..

I am feeling nostalgic again... Seems like I'm reading MONAYA love story and not SAJAN... Mohit's Birthday when Sanaya wanted to surprise him with cake and surprise Birthday party but Mohit came to know all about it beforehand


Loved the last part 😳 SAJAN on swing under the starry night and their promise...

Edited by -Hey-Shona- - 12 years ago
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Sry I can't reply anyone i am bit busy..but here is update..i hope you enjoy surprises are on their way (: thank you for lovely comments <3

Continued..

He woke up as heard the voice his cell phone..he rubbed his eyes while his other hand searched for the phone..he opened eyes as realized he is stuck in his place...as he looked down ... he found her lying on his chest with adorable smile n tight hug...he couldn't help but stare n smile...his fingers creased her hairs..as she snuggled in his arms more...he just put the cell phone at silent without any interest of incoming call and adorably took her in his arms..it was the best morning..to see her beside him..he had a wide smile as he stares at her flawless beauty..he creased her cheeks lovingly..n was unable to stop himself as he just flicked her cute nose with his finger...

He regret a bit to disturb her sleep but as saw her struggling to open her eyes..she frowned while whisper "Soney do na Samrat "...as she just again hide her face in his chest adorably hugging him..he smiles and kissed her hairs...and closed eyes as he wished to be like this forever..

The sleep of lovebirds get disturbed again as alarm started ringing..both with frowns left each other as samrat turned the alarm off..while tried to lift himself up a little to be in sitting position..where gunjan yawned..n looked at samrat who made a sleep face..and same goes with gunjan..as she again turned to him n placed head on his chest putting arm around him...samrat smiled a bit n creased her hairs..


"This is the best morning "

She looked at him as they both shared a wide smile...and samrat cupped her face n kissed her forehead..

"Mine Too.."

Gunjan blushed as they embrace each other..it feel so lovely..wish it could last forever...

Finally after a lot of delaying they left the bed so could welcome the day..

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So Breakfast is ready chashmish will be here any minute..thank god we still have two hours..i hope these days went quickly..God this phone can ever stop ringing...

As his cell phone pulled him out of thoughts he sighed as accepted the call..

"Helloo.."

He spoke while looking at the breakfast he made...toast..egg..butter...tea..hope they are fine..

"Sam..."

As he heard the other feminine voice it made him stoned at his place..he was shocked ? surprised? stunned? breathless? or what listening her voice ?

"..."

"Happy Birthday Samrat..."

He should be happy or sad? he had nothing to say ...it was unbelievable for him...in all those years for first time she had called herself...n he just could whisper to made himself sure as reply of wishing...

"Mom??"

"I miss you Sam..How are you ,Son ??"

His eyes felt moist ..but his heart had mixed feelings..he was angry ? or happy ? it was so faint to get ...but only he knew he is going to end this convo with reasonable voice...

"I am fine...how are you?"

"Good... after listening to you..I hope i would be... able to meet you.."

Meet you?????what is she saying ??? is she crying ???

"What??"

"Take Care Sam..I will see you Bye.."

The beep tone pulled him out of the dream..he looked at mobile phone screen..the call ended...as he blinked his eyes ...he felt his cheeks moist...

How could she call me after so long time ???She remembered my birthday ?? What she was trying to say me?? is she coming back ? How i am suppose to break this news to chashmish ?? OH My !! WAIT DUDE !!Not Today At least !!


"Samrat...kidhar ho ?? kab sey bula rahi hon???

As he heard her voice...he quickly wipe away tears..n composed himself..throwing away his feelings deep down in heart..he can't tell her at this time at least...

"Samrat...samrat..tm yahan asey kuin kharey ho??"

He turned n smiled at her..

"Soory kuch ni breakfast banaya tmharey lea..."

She looked at him where he tried to not share any eyelock with her ..obviously she will get him...

"Mein ney bola tha k breakfast mein banaon gi phir ?"

He smiles as she frowns..he held her from shoulders n made her sit on chair...

"Next Time Tum bana lena abhi karo breakfast tm late ho jao gi..."

He turned to go but gunjan held his arm...

"Tum khidhar ja rahe ho?"

He smiles as look at her sad face..n patted her cheeks to make her assure...

"Wo mein ata hon fresh ho k ..."

"Tekh hai jaldi ao phir sath mein hi breakfast karein gey..."

"Par..??"

He was about to urge but her straight face let him know he can't...

"Samrattt.."

"Okay Fine Chashmish.."

"That's like my Samrat..go i will wait.."

"Yes Madam.."

He smiles seeing her smile...she certainly made his thoughts away for quite a while...

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After they were done with breakfast...and SaJan were about to leave for airport while gunjan' s stuff was to bring by dia there..Gunjan stopped samrat..

"Kia huwa chashmish ?"

Samrat looked at her with confusion but as she replied he bit his tongue..

"Wo mjhey ni pochna chahye tmhey kia huwa ?"

Gunjan sighed he really doesn't share till she herself ask from him.

"Kia? Chashmish i am fine..what happened ?"

Gunjan moved away her face..which make samrat to accept the truth.

"Nai batana mat batao jhoot mat bolo.."

"Acha Baba naraz tou mat ho..."

Samrat make her look at him n tried to melt him with his soory face...

"Mein naraz nahn hon..mujhey pata hai tum mjhey abhi nai bataney waley..."

Samrat smiles as the annoying expression were still there ...he put arm around her shoulder to let her relax..

"Yes islea tm tension free ho k jao aur jaldi ao phir samrat apni chashmish sey dil ki har baaat karye ga .."

"Samrat..Aik baat bolon ?"

Samrat looked at her..who seemed quite serious..

"Han chashmish kaho na kia kehna hai??"

Gunjan cupped his cheek n made him look in her eyes..n let her heart talk..

"Tum udass bilkul ni achey lagtey..jo bhi problem hai wo tum sort out kar lo is lea kbhi apni smile mat janey dena..tm har mushkil ka samna kar saktey ho samrat..aur tmhi tou kehtey ho mushkil kbhi itni bari ni hoti jis ka hum samna na kar sakein...aur tm hmesha sahi descion hi lo gey..aur jo bhi descion lo gey tmhari chashmish tmhara sath dey gi hmesha...hum dono aik dosrey k sath hain na..har condition mein ..har situation mein..har pal..."

Samrat felt life is hard on them..he just can't afford being away from her...he embrace her in hug as she hide herself in his chest..

"I am going to miss you really a lot..."

"I know..."

She let her tears get absorb in his shirt while he let himself enjoy those last moments...

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"Samrat Tu Yahan College kia kar raha hai ?Gunjan ko chodney ni gya ?Goodbye ni kahye ga kiya?"

Benji and Mayank joined samrat in cafeteria..he just make a worst face to them...

"Benji please already i am feeling terrible with this thought k mein usko do din tak nahn dehk sakta aur Good Bye ? I can't say it..."

Mayank looked at benji while eyeing at sad sarmat..whose eyes widened as he heard him..

"Benji ..Samrat Gunjan ney bohat achey sey Good bye kaha hai kal raaat ko.."

"oh Shut up Mayank..aesa kuch ni huwa jesa tu soch raha hai.."

Where he smiled thinking about the best sleep he ever get in her arms..at same time he doesn't want them to think anything...

"Samrat mein wesa kuch ni socha par ab tu bol raha hai ..."

Mayank didn't left him so easy..but Samrat being samrat didn't let him go with this teasing as he grab his collar ..and mayank just smile seeing samrat trying hard to hide his blush..

"Tjhey Nupur k hathon sey marney ka shoq hai ya merey mayank ?"

Benji diverted their attention...

"Isko chodh Samrat..Raat ki party pe ana mat bholein..."

"raat ki party ??"

Samrat looked at both of them in shock...while mayank n benji exchanged glances..

"Samrat Gunjan hmey khass tor pey bol k gaye hai k party lazmi rakhni hai tjhey ana bhi hai..."

Benji spoke..n samrat felt like killing both of them for announcing that news...where his heart adored gunjan at same time he felt extremely sad without her...

"Chashmish tou Chashmish hai...tum log tou mana kar saktey the ? you guys know i m least interested in any party.."

"We are soory Samrat..Gunjan jab tmharey lea itna kuch kar sakti hai tu tm uskey lea aik party tou attend kar saktey ho na.."

Benji as replied..samrat glared him..n mayank just enjoyed the situation...

"Stop being cheap benji..Hum dono ko aik dosrey ki baat man kar ehsan ni kartey ...aur na hi hmey jataney k zarorat parti hai..."

"Tekh hai Samrat..phir Raat mein mulaqat hoti hai.."

Mayank n samrat shared a hi-5 as mayank left...while samrat too make benji stand by grabbing his collar..

"Fine..Chal Benji Class..."

"Oh God Aik chashmish jati ni k uski rooh terey mein a jati hai.."

Benji freed his collar n make a worst face..samrat as much enjoyed his complain at same time glared him...but soon his voice changed his tone to a really buttering one as he placed arm around benji's shoulder..

"Tu kisi din bohat pitney wala hai mujhsey btw chashmish ney tjhey konsa gift mjhey deney ko bola hai ?"

"Tujhey kis ney bataya k gunjan mjhey tera gift dey k gaye hai ?"

Benji looked at him..friends are so mean in this...he moved away his hand n showed a bit attitude..

"Chashmish ka Samrat hon ..Har baat ka pata hai mujhey ..ab sedhey sedhy bol na..Kia dia hai usney merey lea?"

Samrat felt so impatient to know about his gift...certainly it is going to be a special one from his chashmish...They walked in the class n joined the lecture..

"bata utalwa ho raha hai..sabar kar ..sabar ka phal metha hi ho ga.."

Samrat glared him..and then diverted his attention towards lecture...

"Thank you for the brand new information..ab apni bqwas band kar aur lecture pe dehyan dey.."

"here goes sab kuch pani mein...we can never feel gunjan is not with us.."

Samrat didn't help in smiling..as the image of his chashmish become more clear...he tried hard to concentrate..but always end up in thinking about his chashmish...

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"Happy Birthday ..."

Samrat turned and saw a beautiful girl with a sweet smile n happy face...Samrat find it a bit amazed..as he got many wishes since morning but this girl is different...like the one she was not interested in him..but was interested in wishing him...

"Thank You.. We never met before right ?"

Samrat gave a thank you smile...she smiled a bit uncomfortably..

"Yeah ... Gunjan is not here today ? "

There was much disappointment in her voice .. he felt so here is someone else too who found her missing...and just then thought of last day about gunajn's secret admirer came in his mind...

"Oh You are her Secret admirer?"

Samrat as spoke unintentionally ..the girl's colour turned into pale..like she got red handed doing something illegal...

"Huh? Wo i am getting late i have to go..."

Samrat smiled involuntarily as saw her panicking n leaving..

"Wait wait relax mein tmhey khaney wala nahn ho apna name tou bata do..chashmish ko bhi janana tha...Thank you tou bolney do humey ?..."

The girl turned and saw samrat giving his genuine smile which made her smile n she just replied with her sweet smile..

"Mujhey late ho raha hai..Happy brithday once again..I wish for both of you to stay blessed and happy..."

Strange...Aesey bhi log hotey hain world mein kia ? We don't even know her and she is so genuinely concern about us ? Wow...Finally i saw someone with sensible mind at least in college warna subha sey itna over attention manage kartey kartey exhaust ho gya hon...mana i am samrat par i am really committed now thoda tou relaxation do bhai...Chashmish hoti tou abhi mujhsey dus dafa khafa ho chuki hoti aur beess martaba tou mujhi ko tease karti...Chashsmish aye gi tou we wil track her..n surprise her..it will be fun seeing her panicking .. i am right she is gunjan's secret admirer...otherwise why would she run away on my question..? I hope chashmish is fine..uski flight comfortable ho aur uska schedule tough na ho... usko call karon ? nahn wo busy ho gi..i should wait for her call...

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Pata nahn samrat ko kiya tension tha ..i just hope uska din acha guzrey...uska birthday uski trah special ho...par yeh promotions bhi na..pata ni kuin har dafa hmara plan meri hi waja sey kuin karab hota hai ? mjhey yeh film karni hi ni chahiye the..stop it chashmish ..samrat ney sun lia na tou phir sey aik lamba sa lecture miley ga...aur phir shaid mein aesey hi samrat key kabil ban jaon...dosron k nazar mein..kudh tou mein jitni thoda bohat achi relation ship mein thi lagta hai us sey bhi gaye...har baat mein koi na koi mistake ho jata hai k samrat ka dil dukhta hai..kbhi yeh timing aur kbhi koi aur musibat...pata nahn kab hmari life mein thoda sakoon aye ga..pehley jesa k hum dono aik dosrey key sath time spent kar sakein gey..yeh bhi koi kushi hai boring lights..wohi camera action..jhoti smile..zabardasti key expressions..fimly dialogues.. kitna kuch karna parta hai aik choti si commitment ko pura karney k lea..agar yeh di ka sapna na hota...samrat ki nazron sy kudh ko na dekhna hota ...tou mein kbhi yeh life na chunti...samrat sach kehta hai..k hm yahi chahtey hotey hain k humey bheer mein bhi pechan ley...gum hona tou sirf har muskhil sy mun morney k lea wish kartey hain...life mein sab acha hota hai...agar khushiyan aur gum bantaney k lea samrat jesa sathi ho aur di jiju jasi family aur dia benji uday jasey dost..jo family sey bhi barh kar apko chahein..zindagi kitni jaldi badal jati hai na..aur apko badal deti hai..aj mein yahan hazaroon ki bheed mein kitna confident behtein hon...par fir bhi us aik insan ki kami mujhey phir bhi mehsos hoti hai...kuch chezein waqai ni badaltein..jasey mera aur samrat ka pyaar..hmara rishta ... is rishtey ka naam koi aur ho na ho merey lea yahi bohat hai k hum dono aik dosrey sey pyaar kartey hain..

"Gunjan tmhara Act start honey wala hai 2 minutes mein..."

She sighed as heard call for her..in her white gown she looked at herself for last time...n with a smile turned to move out in glamorous world...

Lo a gai meri bari bhi...Wish me luck samrat..i hope k mein Hmara sapna pura kar sakon...

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Finally ghar a key sakoon mil gya hai...warna college mein tou chashmish ki kami aur zyada mehsos hoti hai...aur ab mein uskey apney ghar mein bhi illusions dekhna band ni kar sakta...Chashmish jaldi ao na...janti ho mera bilkul man nai hai party ka ...han tm tekh keh rahi ho mein waqai pareshan hon...pata ni pareshan hon k kush ...smjh nai a raha ..subha sey itna koshish kia k mein mat sochon par mom ki awaz hai key...itney salon baad sun kar jasey ajeeb si khushi mili hai.. jab last time mein ney phone kia tha unsey tmhari movie key lea help manganey k lea tou chashmish mjhey guilty feel huwa tha jasey unho ney jhat sy problem solve kar di thi aur even kha bhi tha key unhey acha laga mein ney unhey call kia...but uskey baad mein unsey baat hi ni kar paya chahye jitna ignore kar lon chashmish fir bhi mjhey mom dad waqai bohat yaad atey hain...jitna bhi gusa kar lon...yeh dil hai key manta hi nahn..sara kasor tmhara hai tmney mujhey badal dia hai..ab gusa hon bhi tou bhi nikal ni pata ...aur speically mom dad sy ,...jab sy tmsey promise kia hai k mein unhey kbhi hurt ni karon ga...pata nahn chashmish mom ney mjhey aj wish kia tou waqai laga yeh birthday sab sey acha hai..even key tm nai ho yahan..par hum tou har pal sath hain na..is lea tou abhi bhi tmsey apney dil ka haal keh raha hon...kuin key janta hon k tm bhi meri fikar kar rahi ho gi..meri chashmish jo ho ..tmhey pareshan na karon tou kisey karon ? Uff abhi ready bhi hona hai party mein janey ka...bilkul man nai hai chashmish...acha baba gusa mat ho..ho raha hon tyar..tmhara gift bhi tou dekhna hai yeh benji bhi na majal hai k usney thoda bhi hint dia ho ...chalo mein chashmish tmsey ready ho k milta hon...

Samrat smiled as kissed her pic n place back the frame as got and open his wardrobe find his suite there hanging...

Wow chashmish tm bhi na...merey kaam abhi sey karney lag gaye ho ..you are going to be best wife Chashmish...

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"Samrat itni boring party ?"

Samrat smiled as heard nupur..n took his soft drink...n replied calmly ...

"Party tm logo ney throw ki hai guys merey honor mein tou entertain bhi tm log karo gey mein tou sirf attendance laganey aya hon.."

Samrat had no issue ..he was just passing the time with least interest...

"Samrat mana tmhari ch...i mean gunjan ni hai par hm bhi terey kuch lagtey hain?"

Benji who was about to say chashmish..get his tongue in control as saw samrat glaring..

"Benji tou tu merey mun lag hi na..itna wait tou chashmish ney mjhey basket ball victory kiss deney mein ney nai lagaya tha jitna tou uska gift deney mein laga raha hai..."

Samrat glares him ..while others smirks as he spoke n mayank's reply made everyone laugh except samrat...

"Wah samrat tmhey gunjan ney victory kiss dia tha..tou i m really curious benji tjhey gunjan ney samrat ko kis..."

Samrat interrupted him by punching him on back..

"Bqwas band kar mayank teri biwi yahen khari hai.."

Dia spoke which divert samrat's attention for mayank who had exchanged his place from nupur to be away from samrat...

"Han aur samrat tmhari chashmish ni hai tou iska matlab hai tm kuch bhi bata saktey ho hmey ?"

"Candy tm mjhey aesey keh rahi ho jasey chashmish ney tmharey aur nupur k sath kbhi kuch share ni kia haina ?"

Samrat was sure they knew it ... it was nothing for them like they can't share with their friends...

"Bilkul right samrat..gunjan kbhi hmey tmharey aur uskey darmiyan kuch bhi koi bhi baat ho nai batai.."

"Wow meri chashmish bohat smart hai.."

Samrat felt proud listening them..it was just a strange happiness...a glimpse of their moments took him in their dreamland..and everyone could clearly guess it from his smile...

"han ya tm bohat besharm "

Samrat have to hide his smile as he heard mayank..n he quickly glared them to make up for the situation...

"Shut Up!!.. Chalo na chashmish ki performance ka time honey wala hai wohi dekhtey hain na tm logo key boring chehrey dekh kar mein wesey hi bore ho gya hon..."

"yes Samrat Shergill chalein aj apka hi din hai..."
Benji put arm around his shoulder which samrat threw away showing his clear annoyance because of gunjan's gift...as they all moved to watch gunjan's performance on the huge led they had placed in hall..

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"Benji Chashmish ka gift dey now bas"

Samrat stoped benji as saw him trying to sneak away after gunjan's performance...

"Sam sabar kar abhi mujhey gunjan key magic sey bhair tou aney dey.."

Benji teased him ..which samrat made a bit restless he was too much taking test of his patience since morning..

"Yeh teri akhri warning hai mjhey mera gift dey warna mein tera yahein muder kar don ga.."

Benji tired to stop his laugh as saw samrat grabbing his collar...

"Collar chodh samrat log kiya sochein gey?"

"Logon ki parwa mein ney aj tak ni ki...aur tjhey merey sey ab koi ni bacha sakta smjhey."

Samrat left his collar n just glared him..as realize really every second person there was staring at them...

"Janta ho janta hon teri gunjan ni hai na yahan..khair tera gift subha ka music room mein para hai.."

Benji calmly replied him...n as expected he received a smack on arm from samrat..

"music room mein ? subha ka ? i wil kill you benji .."

"bye samrat pata hai ab tu mjhey kal hi miley ga..."

Benji smiled as saw samrat rushing towards music room...

God !! Why i didn't come here today ? ab yeh gift khahn haii..? miley ga bhi key nahn...Yeh...Tou ...

He looked here n there to search his gift...and then in a corner a red rose get his attention..it was a guitar shaped box..with a red rose n a letter...he kneed down on floor as he grabbed the red rose...n creased it on his face...n looked at the petals who were now little dead as were there since morning...he opened the letter..

"Happy Birthday My Samrat...Janti Hon Benji ney bohat sataya ho ga na tmhey gift key barey mein na bata kar ? [Haan bohat chashmish i hate him..[mana bhi kia tha par kia karon tmhara best friend hai thoda nautanki tou uska haq hai..[Tum ni badal sakti..What chashmish ? mein nautanki...ao sahi tm phir pochon ga..]..Chalo ab gusa hona band karo..mujhey pata hai tmney party zaror attend ki ho gi..[Tm kuch khao aur mein na karon..]...bore bhi huwey ho gey merey begair i know..[Han pata hai apni importance islea bohat nakhrey utwaney lag gaye ho chashmish..]....Tension na lo ..aik dafa yeh tmhari di gaye musibat khatm ho jaye tou tmharey sarey naaz nakhrey mein uthaon gi promise..[Tum bhi na chashmish...jitna mein chahta hon meri chashmish merey bina jeena sekhey utna hi tm mjhey apney begair jeena mushkil kar deti ho..]..Han tou kuin mein tmhey jeney don apney begair ? tm merey ho haq hai mera tm par....[Janta hon jasey tm par mera..aur hmsey hmari kushi koi ni cheen sakta..]....Bohat miss karon gi.[Sach mien bohat yaad a rahi ho tm.].par meri fikar kartey kartey apna khayal rakhna mat bhol jana...[Meri Chashmish .].mein bas jaldi hi wapis aon gi aur tmhey tmhara special waley brithday gift ke lea wait bhi ni karwaon gi...[Mera special birthday gift ? Really Chashmish ?].paka promise agar apna khayal rakho gey ..[Tmhari koi baat tal sakta hon kia mein ?]..I love you samrat ....[I Love you too Chashmish..]...."

Thank You Chashmish for this gift...

He smiles as feel like she is with him...as he opened the guitar case n found there his favorite one...which he had selected months ago to get ..but gunjan had made him promise that she will get it for him...n will gift him...n now it was in his hands...he smiles thinking..he wil play it only for her once she will be back...He felt peace while walking out from the college with his gift...finally a day is passed n another one is to go...

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Samrat was smiling to himself as he moved towards his bike but then some noise diverted his thoughts as he looked at the corner...he walked to it...n there saw a drunk girl with two guys who were trying to make her go with them...Samrat sighed...n walked to them n stopped the guy's arm who was about to take keys from girl's hand...

"What is your problem guys ? Change your mind n leave her alone..."

The two guys looked at him in confusion...while the girl was in trying to put keys in her car's lock but as she was drunk she hardly was able to control herself...

"Why?"

The guy moved to samrat..n samrat showed them his hands down...

"Because i am getting late and that girl clearly have no interest in you guys..now you guys have to leave ya kal princi sey tm dono ko college sey bhair karney ki request forward karon ? choice is your's.."

Samrat was clearly have no intention to get in any trouble he wished to end this with no more drama..n like he was heard..as they heard the watchman's whistle they both ran away...Samrat helplessly shake his head n looked at girl ...who lost her balance ...and samrat supported her..

"hey are you fine ??"

Samrat looked at the girl ...n get bit upset as recognized her the same girl who had behaved rude with him...but before he could think anything..he found that girl faint...he sighed miserably ..what he is gona do with this girl now???????
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I Just hope party goes well...why samrat is not callling ?? he was supposed to call me after party ? is it still going on ? is he with anyother girl ? oh Gunjan stop it ..? WHY he is not calling me ???? ab tak tou wo free ho jana chahye tha..kia hai call karu ?...ab yeh call utha kuin ni raha ? han mein jo ni hon usney tou full party enjoy kia ho ga na...UGghh stop imagining gunjan..mera samrat aesa ni hai...han par wo itna sedha bhi nai hai...mjhey miss kar raha hota tou aik dafa call tou karta ? lakin nahn...usko tou fursat hi khahn honi hai...jo mjhsey baat karye ga..uski tou jaan chutt gaye na mjhsy...uff samrat call kar bhi lo warna asey gusey sey pagal hotey hotey hi mein ney so jana hai ...



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"heloo.."

He smiled as he laid down on bed n heard her voice...

"Samrat? kidhar they ? phone kuin ni utha rahey the ? tm tekh ho na ? tm kisi ladki key sath the ?

"Wah chashmish tmhey kasey pata?"

He thought of teasing her...

"kiya?????tm waqaiii..."

He found her voice bit low...as he had confirmed her doubts...

"Han ...gusa ho ?"

"Ni..."

She tried hard to calm down herself n stop herself from breakdown...

"naraz ho ?"

"mein kuin naraz hon..tmhari life hai jasey marzi spent karo ..."

Gunjan was sad...what he thinks of her ?to tease her like this ? or seriously he except her to be calm down on hearing her boyfriend is with another girl.???

"Itna sa sun kar itna bara sara sad face bana lia hai agar yeh bata dia key tmhari dushman merey guest room mein so rahi hai tou ..."

Samrat stares at her pic...he know her ...he was succeed in distracting her from other thoughts for sure...

"WHAT???"

Gunjan almost yelled..he met that girl again ? god it would be worst day in that girl's life...

"Relax Chashmish Mein tmhara samrat hon.."

Samrat smiled as thought gunjan would be jealous...

"isi baat ka tou dar hai ..tm phir usi ladki sey miley? tmney phir jaghra kia us sey ? phir usko battein sunai kia ? wo tmharey dar sey faint ho gaye kia ? wo tmharey ghar kia kar rahi hai ?"

Samrat's smile vanished as heard her concern...n that too for someone who is mean to her..he was okay if she is concerned about her friends but other than others...ugh he hates it..why to wory for useless people who doesn't deserve it ??

"Oh My God!! I wish chashmish sometimes .ya ..kbhii.. tou...galti sey tm kisi key barey mein fikar mand hona chodh do..."

Gunjan smiled a bit as heard irritation in his voice but she was now concern about other matter more...

"Samrat merey questions ka jawab do..."

"Fine Miss.Chashmish..han again unfortunately wo merey samney a gaye ... aur jaghra hontey hotey reh gya as wo tou meri bhaon mein faint ho gaye..."

Samrat was in mood to make her scream by choosing exact words to attack on her thoughts...

"kiaaa?"

"han phir mein usko apney ghar ley aya...aur..."

"aur...?"

"Aur yeh key acha bhala time pass kar raha tha mein key tmhara phone...helo ? Chashmish..."

Gunjan fumed in anger as get he is teasing her..for another girl..n she just didn't like the fact..n more the whole situation made her sad..she just wished to be along him..no matter what...but was unable to do...

...God..Chashmish ney sach mein mera phone cut kar dia ?God khahein wo waqae mein naraz tou ni ho gaye.. Chashmish please pick up the call...dam...usko tang kartey kartey hmesha hurt kar deta hon...

"Chashmish.."

"kia hai ? kis lea phone kia hai ? mein ne tou distrub kia na tmhey..joa na tm usi key pass..tym pass karney..."

Samrat suppressed his smile as heard her jealous voice but it was more helpless feelings she was trying to describe for being away from him...

"Acha Baba Soory Mazak Kar raha tha tmhey tang karney ka dil kar raha tha warna tm melo drama shuru kar deti na..."

He said with a sad face...as he realized no matter how much they ignore the fact that they are not missing each other..they end up feeling left out more..

"Tum bohat battamiz ho samrat bohat zyada..tmhey zara meri fikar ni hai..."

She felt tears helplessly leave her eyes...as she stares at his pic...

"Hmm..ab tmney bol lia tou aik baat kahon ?"

"Bolo.."

She wiped her tears...n a small smile appeared as listened him...he was changing the subject for sure to make themselves better...

"Tmhey Dekha tou aesa laga jasey Parion key dais mein sey koi pari zammen par a gaye ho..."

"par uskey par-rey ko tou zara fikar ni hai uski ? wo tou usey bus sataney mein laga rehta hai.."

He smiled as finally he could hear her smiling...

"Par wo tou us pari sey bohat pyaar karta hai..."

"Wo pari jitna pyaar ni kar sakta..."

She felt so helpless...the distance between them was killing them for sure...

"Acha yeh tou wqt hi bataye ga...btw Samrat ko apni chashmish ka gift bohat acha laga...aur special brithday gift ka intezar rahey ga"

"Mujhey tmharey pass ana hai samrat...mjhey yahan kuch acha ni lagta..."

Samrat felt his eyes moist...as he heard her moist voice...

"Sirf aik din aur chashmish phir mein tmhey kbhi ni janey don ga..."

"promise ?"

"Han promise..ab tm so jao thak gaye ho gi..."

"Tm bhi so jao..us chudail key pass janey ka sochna bhi na..."

Gunjan tried to be strcit...but samrat's reply let her know they don't need to discuss anything..they know each other very well..

"I Love You Chashmish..."'

"Janti hon..."

"Yeh kia answer huwa ?"

Samrat make face as heard her pointless answer while gunjan blushed n enjoyed their convo...

"Ab tm question asey pocho gey tou answer tou thoda different ho ga na..."

"Tmhey wapis ao gi chashmish tou sarey badley lon ga mein..."

"Badley tou mein ney leney hain samrat shergill..."

"Okay Miss samrat ki chashmish...ab ap so jaein bohat late ho gya hai..."

"Tm merey pass yunhi raho gey na ?"

Her voice make him smile...to listen again n again just make them feel happy once again...

"Hmesha chashmish..."

"Tm tekh ho na samrat...?"

Her concern for him never leaves her...

"han chashmish..aur tum..?"

"Hmm...tekh ho wapis aney ka wait kar rahi hon..."

"Mein bhi tmharey aney ka hi wait kar raha hon...Good night..."

"tekh sy sona bye.."

"bye ..."

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Preview of next Update :)

"AP YAHAN ???"

"Mayank mein phir sey woh galti kbhi nai repeat karon ga jis sey chashmish ko dukh miley mein janta hon mjhey kia karna hai..."

"Samrat tm khahn they sara din ? Gunjan kab sey tmhara intezar kar rahi hai..."

"Gunjan ? Yahan ? Kuin aye hain wo yahan ??"

"Samrat Tum merey sath aesa nai kar saktey..I Love you Samrat..."
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Posted: 12 years ago
#88

Look my long comments have been named as critical appreciation 😆 so this time I'll try to be precise.

Coming to an update well it was Sajanish. Their presence could be felt<3 They live in each other others..have become each other's heartbeats. The morning was indeed the most the special and best one for sure<3 Having your loved one by your side is the best thing ever<3
Sajan are so adorable! Loved the update. Wonderful penned down. The breakfast scene was januable simply! I am curious to know about his mom now 😆The scenes that came to mind while reading the update were of the cutest scene when Samrat says 'Khud ko meri nazar se dekho' and the bheer wala scene that was so true. You refreshed those moments and then the way he helped Gunjan and their separation The Miss Samrat ki Chasmish brought back memories of the party where Gunjan was drunk that was adorable:P <3
They talk to each other as if actually talking and understanding each other which they do despite being far away<3 😳 This is the magic of their love and bond.
Their monologues were worth reading<3 The gang scenes makes me miss MJHT more and more. 😭
Loved the way Samrat was teased. The gift awww out of the world. The letter well love pouring out from each word of theirs.
Uff that girl 😡 I so hate her uska naam rakho kuch bohat maza aye ga 😉 I loved the jealous Gunjan her emotions were so true of any teenage girl having a boyfriend that too Samrat jesa insecurity to hogi na 😳
Their phone convo was amazing. Loved it to the core<3
The precap I fear k kuch galat n ho but then I trust you. Is the comment ok? Tell me u want my long comments jo badnam ho gaye hain? 😆
Do update soonish :)
Edited by HSFA - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#89
precap- samrat ne kya kiya? tum hamesha scary precaps kyun deti ho,
nice update, and as usual sajan were very cute
its bad that gunjan cannot give sufficient time to samrat
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Posted: 12 years ago
#90
awesome update//:)loved it..:) eagerly waiting fr the next part..😳

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