Don't let me go...[Updated at Pg.43 24th dec 2014] - Page 10

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Posted: 12 years ago
#91
A beautiful morning n my Sajan..

They can't live without each other ...
miss each other like hell...

Benji n Mayank r making fun of Sammy😆

I m so worried about that girl staying in Sam's house..

Just loved the jealous side of Gunjan...

@juhi...Yeah,the precap is really scary !!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#92

Originally posted by: pakpearl

A beautiful morning n my Sajan..


They can't live without each other ...
miss each other like hell...

Benji n Mayank r making fun of Sammy😆

I m so worried about that girl staying in Sam's house..

Just loved the jealous side of Gunjan...

@juhi...Yeah,the precap is really scary !!!!


Don't wory everything looks scary isn't scary😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
#93
woww once again superb upd loved it u penned down superbly 👏👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
#94
Thank God Marie that you clarified all that looks scary is not necessarily scary. 😊 But the update was too good. SaJan morning scene was so damn cute. I loved the way SaJan were together inspite of being apart. Hmm, jealous Gunjan, loved this. Please update soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#95

Originally posted by: HSFA

Look my long comments have been named as critical appreciation 😆 so this time I'll try to be precise.Agar yeh precise hai angel tou bas ho gya kaam😆

Coming to an update well it was Sajanish. Their presence could be felt<3 They live in each other others..have become each other's heartbeats. The morning was indeed the most the special and best one for sure<3 Having your loved one by your side is the best thing ever<3 Yeah keep on dreaming angel :P SaJan..I was more imaging MoNaya
Sajan are so adorable! Loved the update. Wonderful penned down. The breakfast scene was januable simply! I am curious to know about his mom now 😆The scenes that came to mind while reading the update were of the cutest scene when Samrat says'Khud ko meri nazar se dekho'and the bheer wala scene that was so true. You refreshed those moments and then the way he helped Gunjan and their separation The Miss Samrat ki Chasmish brought back memories of the party where Gunjan was drunk that was adorable:P <3 @red it was so sweet scene <3 i miss them <3 n Miss..Samrat ki chashmish it was too adorable <3 just wait there are loads of sajan scenes :)
They talk to each other as if actually talking and understanding each other which they do despite being far away<3 😳 This is the magic of their love and bond.
Their monologues were worth reading<3 The gang scenes makes me miss MJHT more and more. 😭
Loved the way Samrat was teased. The gift awww out of the world. The letter well love pouring out from each word of theirs.Thank You <3
Uff that girl 😡 I so hate her uska naam rakho kuch bohat maza aye ga 😉 I loved the jealous Gunjan her emotions were so true of any teenage girl having a boyfriend that too Samrat jesa insecurity to hogi na 😳 Yaar uska naam kia rakho yahi tou ni smjh aa raha bohat hain lakin mjhey ban thodi na hona hai :P hahaha.. she was not insecure ji she was annoyed coz he was teasing her :P
Their phone convo was amazing. Loved it to the core<3
The precap I fear k kuch galat n ho but then I trust you. Is the comment ok? Tell me u want my long comments jo badnam ho gaye hain? 😆 That's like my ANgel i wil never disappoint you :P hahaha yeah i love these comments <3
Do update soonish :)

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Continued...

He put pillow on his ears to stop the noise of door bell which was disturbing his sleep...but as it continued he sighed...n threw away his pillow ..with worst sleepy face..he grabbed his shirt n left the bed to walk out from his bedroom and open the impatient visitor at door...

"A raha hon kia musibaat hai sbha sbha tang..."

He had started shouted in high pitch n was totally iriitated but as soon as he opened door , his eyes widened on seeing visitor...

"Ap yahan ???"

He was so shocked to react...

"Sam..."

He felt so bad on his yell..as he realized the person is non other than his own mom...he felt his childhood flashing back...but soon he have to overcome as felt her face fainted coz of moist in his eyes...the smile which he saw a moment ago on her face was gone away..n there was huge disappointment.. does he need to know it's reason ? it was so obvious ...he didn't react seeing her..hug ? not even a smile...he just give the space...n it was just a silent invitation...

Samrat wiped his tears as he closed door n gather his all courage to face his mom...he turned n saw his mom in tears...

"Mom..."

Before he could say anything more..he heard the noise..a feminine figure joined them in hall...n samrat mother's eyes moved from that girl to him...he bit his lip..he didn't wish anyone to know about his personal matter ..n there was no reason that he would not be questioned by his own mother..as suhani had already told about SaJan relationship ...

"Tum Gunjan ho ?"

He looked at his mother who seemed really shocked...while the other girl looked at samrat with puzzled expressions...The shock in his mother's voice made him to think...what his mother expect to be gunjan like ? .. there was so many things they have to talk about certainly..n he want least that girl to even hear about it...

"Tmhari car ki keys side table pe hi pari hain..aur tmhari car bahir garage mein park hai.tm ja saksti ho..."

Samrat spoke with straight face..which make hsi mother to stare at him...was he upset ? angry ? or too straight ?

Samrat moved to the main door he doesn't wait for the girl to reply..as he opened the door n it was clear signal there was no reason she could stay longer a moment...she just walked through hall with no expression n moved out...she looked at samrat back..

"Thank You..."

Samrat without any reply closed door at her face...which made the girl shocked ...

He turned n saw millions questions in her mother's eyes..

"Tum gunjan ko cheat kar rahey ho samrat ? Suhani ney tou bataya tha tm us sey pyar kartey ho samrat... tm asey tou ni they kbhi..."

He looked in his mom's eyes..the fear..the regret..the pain...did it effect him a bit ? more than that her words echoed.."tm asey tou ni they kbhi"...it just made him smile regretfully..as he remembered his life before gunjan...that was so normal for him..n today it made him even uncomfortable ? just coz he didn't wish to hurt his chashmish..she changed him to this..a new person..that is now committed to his girl friend ..not only because he is meant to ...but because he loves to n wishes to...be with her..to be honest with her...yeah he was never like this ever...

"Mein waqai aesa ni tha kbhi mom...but merey badlney sey fark parta hai kia kisi ko?"

He looked with hurt to his mom..it should be her to make him a better person rather than gunjan who changed him to be this one...Her mom had puzzled expression..it had took great courage for her to come here..but she didn't know she wil have to see like this...his son can't cheat ? his son at least is not like his dad...

"You are like your dad..Cheater.."

He looked at his mom...who was now sitting on the sofa ...n literally shedding tears..she was so much disappointed ? why ? does she have any right on him still? after all the years ? she is just here to tell him that he is cheater ? and what about all the years he was being supposed to be like what ? but what like dad? was he cheated mom? what was he supposed to do in all the mess ? the reason of their divorce was that his dad cheated ? but after all these years does he care about this ? when he is happy being just chashmish's samrat rather than samrat shergill or sammmy ??

"does it bother you ?"

He was still the same expressionless for his mother..his thoughts was so disturbed that he just didn't get why he was not ready to say truth ...

"Bother samrat? I am the one who got cheated years ago n still whenever i remind it i feel like i was such an idiot to trust your dad...while getting married to him...n then leaving you to him..."

"You left me..then why you are back ??"

Samrat tried to make his tone even but still the pain was so visible...

Her mother looked at samrat...as saw him banging his fist on the wall to just control his anger..hurt..pain...did he deserve that ? it was so hurt-ful to watch her own son in such pain ? n that because of her ...fate could be cruel than this ???

"I never wished samrat of leaving you...And don't hurt yourself because of me..."

He turned and tired hard to hold back his tears but it just slipped on his cheeks..

"I Wish it could help me ..."

His mother couldn't see him like that..in pain and hurt ...life less..hope less...She completed distance between them..she felt her hands shiver..as she grabbed his hands...last time..they were tiny small soft...n now they were hard strong big...he felt her tears shedding mercilessly on his palms...may be the world can end at the moment..as he felt his mother grabbing his palms n kissing them...n placing eyes on them...n he closed his eyes...is it a dream ? a dream of getting mother back ? a dream he always shared with his chashmish ? that one day he will be able to feel that motherly love once again..how can he forget that day when his mother had last time had held his hands n kissed them before leaving...that time he didn't wipe her tears or looked at her..n this time..he was unable to ignore her...his fingers involuntarily wipes away her tears..she stared at him...n saw his tears leaving his eye's corner..

"i Missed you Mom a lot..."

His whisper was so faint n painful...but enough for his mother to listen...she just hugged him as his head placed on her shoulders...n than he was no longer any sarmat shergill or samrat or sammy..he was just a five years old kid who lost his mother in a way n now has finally found her back...The tears were not only of pain n hurt of all the years but also of joy of reunion...

After some moments..as they broke the hug..still have holding hands..n moist eyes ..n wet face...n as heard hiccups ...they both giggled..

Her mother ruffled his hairs..

"tum abhi bhi bachey hi ho...I missed you a lot Sam..."

"Apney aney mein bohat dair ki..."

He was sitting on floor kissing her mother's hand..while she was staring her son..who had grown up into a young handsome guy...she sighed with remorse...n creased his hairs...

"Janti hon...Par Sam...Suhani ney tou kha tha tm gunjan k sath kush ho phir wo ladki ?? "


As he heard his lips curved into a small smile..n before he could reply her mother's worry..the door bell rang..he smiled at his mother n moved to check on door..

He get surprised as saw whole gang there...

"Guys tm log yahan ? mein college ni aya tou aye ho ya koi baat hui hai ?"

He asked them with confused look..

"Andar aney dy pehely hmy.."

benji spoke n pushed him aside as they all get in...n got shocked as saw his mother there...

Where samrat who had snatched newspaper from uday's hand in last to see gunjan's pic...got shocked as read an article related to their relationship...her breakup with him...n her realtion with neil...just the same old news with new twists n turns...it didn't take time him to tear down the paper...

"YEH KIA BAQWAS HAI ?"

Samrat's rage made everyone exchanged looks...they had expected such reaction...

"Samrat...kia huwa hai ?"

Samrat looked at his perplexed mother...who was certainly worried seeing him in such anger...

"It's nothing mom...i have to go..."

"Samrat khahn ja raha hai ? please gusey mein..."

"Mayank mein phir sey woh galti kbhi repeat nahn karon ga jis sey chashmish ko dukh miley mein janta hon mujhey kia karna hai..."

"Samrat tm khahn ja rahe ho? aur kia huwa hai akhir...?"

"Mom kuch ni huwa hai...ap rest karo..benji mom ka dehyan rakhna mjhey jana hai mein ata hon..."

Before anyone could inquire he just grabbed the keys n left in a moment..everyone there had worried face..n the most his mother..who was now waiting anyone to speak up about the problem...

...

"Neil yeh kia bqwas hai ? Mein ney aik hi shart pe yeh film karni chahiye the na k meri family ka name tak ni aye ga ? phir samrat ka name kuin print huwa hai ? tm ney mjhey yakken dilaya tha k jo kal huwa tha wo fir bhi kbhi ni hoga ? phir ?"


Gunjan yelled in upset tone on neil as she came across the newspaper n rushed to him in hall downstairs..she didn't care about bunch of people she was more concerned about the whole issue...

"Gunjan calm down..i know this is huge..but tm ney samrat..."

"Neil sochna bhi mat k samrat ne phir sey woh galti repeat ki ho gi...kuch bhi ho sakta hai par samrat aik dafa galti kar k usey repeat ni kar sakta..."

Gunjan felt her blood boiled as get his thought...she just can't afford it...not for even a thought...her samrat can never...

"Par phir bhi aik dafa..."

"Neil mjhey abhi isi waqt wapis mumbai jana hai..."

Gunjan's voice had pledge..neil was puzzled...

"Kia gunjan abhi hmara aj ka show rehta hai..."

"Neil mjhey aur kisi show ko attend ni karna ...Merey lea kbhi yeh field thi hi ni...mein apni waja sey samrat ko aur koi dukh ni dey sakti..already meri waja sey hmara relation in months mein bohat suffer kar chuka hai neil..aur ab aur nahn...pata ni samrat ney kasey react kia ho ga..meri tou us sey baat karney ki himmat bhi ni ban rahi phone pe..neil mjhey wapis jana hai aj abhi.."

"Par..."

"Please Neil...mein tmhari film k lea already jitna ho saka wo kar chuki please mjhsy aur kuch expect mat karo..mein aj jo kuch hon sirf aik insan ki waja sey hon...aur wo samrat hai neil ..mien usy khona ni chahti..kisi bhi qeemat par nahn...aur tm jantey ho pyaar khona kitna dard deta hai..."

"mein abhi arrange karta hon tm room mein ja k rest karo..agar asey hi kisi ney dekh lia tou kham kha ka issue khara ho jaye ga..."

"Thank You Neil... Samrat will never regret on trusting you..."

Gunjan looked at neil with a small smile having moist eyes...yes it happened only because of one person...samrat shergill..she recalled how he made her agree for continuing doing this movie for her friendship with neil...how he showed his trust on neil...made her comforted with the decision of continuing the film ...for samrat's sake she was today there...but no she was unable to do any compromise on samrat...

...
"Gunjan tm ?"

Nupur got shocked as opened door ..they were still at samrat's home..it was near evening time...n there was no sign of samrat...n here seeing gunjan they were surprised...

"Di. samrat khahn hai wo college ni gya..wo kidhar hai mera phone ni utha rahaa di..wo ghar pe bhi ni hai kia..batao na ap log please..wo mjhsy gusa tou ni hai ? di samrat kidhar hai koi boley na??"

"Gunjan..."

Gunjan felt like new voice...she turned n saw samrat's mother..she knew about her...very well...after suhani had came in their life...gunjan along suhani and samrat had discussed a lot about their mother...

"Mom????????"

The words slipped from her lips...n she didn't even realize...while rest of gang exchanged glances..they were not comfortable but gunjan seem like know her from long time...Samrat 's mom stared at the girl...who was dress in a beautiful anarkali dress..open hairs...her glasses..n tearful face..

"Tum Gunjan ho ? Merey Samrat ki pasand ?"

She just couldn't feel herself on earth as she felt sm's hand creasing her cheeks..she perplexed more..she was already tensed coz of samrat..n now she was puzzled n nervous too..she just wished samrat to be along her...sm was no more her focus...

"ap...ap kab aein ????? Samrat Samrat kidhar hai ? Ap logon mein sy koi merey sawal ka jawab kuin ni dey raha.. wo tekh hai na ? usney ap sy tou ni naraz na ? wo mjhsy gusa tou ni hai na ? mjhey samrat sy milwa do please aik baar..."

Gunjan looked at rest of people there ...n mayank got courage to say...

"Gunjan relax...tm ro mat...samrat tekh hai...wo gya hai jab sy usney news suni..."

As she heard "news" ..she looked at sm fearfully..she didn't wish ever to make their first meeting like this...all the accusations on her was baseless..she couldn't afford losing samrat...

"mom mein ney samrat ko ni chora.. mein uskey begair ni reh sakti.. ap please usko kehna k wo mjhsy mera samrat mat chehney ?"i am soory..mein uskey begair ni reh sakti ..usko kehein please wo mjhey maaf kar dey meri har galti ko...mjhey ni prove karna kuch bhi logon ko..mein samrat ki chashmish kafi hon...mjhey mera samrat chahye..bas..mera samrat..."

She kneed down while crying terribly...everyone had teary eyes...they just had nothing to say...Samrat's mom stared at that girl...why ? this girl loved her son like no one could ever loved anyone...but how unfortunate she was ? her son is cheating on that girl ? WHY ? this was most shameful moment for her as mother...she never wished to see someone suffering like she did ...her husband cheated on her for all the years she had thought he loved her...but no she was just a wife...a wife of his family's choice...n she can't be his choice...had she knew about his affair would she had chose him as her husband ? no never..all the life she just had wished that she would have known the reality...n now could she let this girl suffer too ? in this delusion that the person she is loving is not her's ? is cheating on her ? she broke down because she is feeling she is responsible that their relationship is in danger coz of her...n if she get to know that he is cheating on her ? wouldn't it hurt her more ? it is less painful that you are the one who is responsible for break up rather than to be cheated by someone to whom u trust blindly n love selflessly...she can't let gunjan to suffer coz of samrat...!!

"Gunjan tmhey jana ho ga..."

As everyone heard samrat's mom ...their eyes widened with shock...gunjan was stoned listening her...

"Jana ?"

Nupur was shocked ...n just could mumble...Sm firmly spoke ...

"Nupur Mayank Gunjan ko yahan sey ley jao..ab sab khatam ho chuka hai..kuch ni bacha yahan gunjan k lea..."

Gunjan got disappointed as heard SM n got up forgetting everything..leaving samrat's home ?

"Ap Yeh kia keh rahi hain? Mein yahan sey khahn ni ja rahi jab tak samrat ni ata...mein samrat sey miley begair ni jaon gi..."

"Tmhey jana ho ga gunjan...tmharey aur samrat k beech mein kuch nahn bacha...sachai is sey zyada bhi takleef dey ho sakti hai islea behtar hai k tm yahan sey chali jao aur samrat ko bhul jao..."

Gunjan felt like someone is sucking her blood...or have twisted her neck..being away from samrat ...this thought just made her breaths stopped...

"Chali jaon ? bhul jaon ? Samrat ko ? APki trah ? Apko kia lagta hai mein bhi apki trah samrat ko akela chodh don gi .. usey uskey na karda gunha ki saza don gi ? samrat aur merey rishtey par kisi ko bolney ka haq ni hai...apko bhi nai..."

Gunjan never wished to be rude or yell at his mother..but she just couldn't help but to be bitter..how she just can say her to go away from her samrat's life ? what does even she know about them ? how could anyone say about them ?

Sm felt her voice shake but still she knew she have to do this...for her betterment...

"Gunjan tm galti kar rahi bohat bari...bohat pachtao gi tm...please meri baat man lo..yeh us dukh sy kum ho ga jo tmhey sach jaan kar miley ga..."

"Sach??? kaisa sach?ap kia kehna chahti hain ?"

Gunjan was confused hearing her...why sm was doing with her?how could she do like this to her son ?

"Nupur tm log gunjan ko yahan sey le ja saktey ho..."

Sm repeated her summon ...but gunjan just firmly replied back...she now was no more worried to clear her stance..she had already decided back to be in samrat's life...whether odds are at her side or not...

"Mein Yahan sey khahin nai jaon gi ...Mein yahein samrat ka wait karon gi..jab wo aye ga tou mein usey mana lon gi...aur wo mjhy kbhi ni chodey ga ...wo mjhsy pyaar karta hai..wo mjh par trust karta hai...mein yahan sey khahn ni jaon gi..."

She did what she said...no one was able to make her leave samrat's room since she had get in...she didn't talk to anybody anymore..she didn't listen anyone...she just remained quiet..she knew her wait wil be finished here only...

...

"Samrat...khahn the tum sara din ? gunjan aye hai...wo kab sey tmhara intezar kar rahi hai yahan...?"

Samrat looked at watch n got he was enough late..it was almost 11...hearing about gunjan he just got worried...

"Gunjan ? Wo yahan kuin aye hai ? uska tou show tha..."

He ran inside...n just then he saw his chasmish who had red swollen eyes n moist face...n her voice was shaking and she was limping because of her tired body which had no more energy...

"Samrat..."

"Chash..."

Samrat was unable to speak as saw her in miserable condition ..he moved forward to support her as she lost balance..she get on her feet by taking support from his arms...Samrat made her sit on near by sofa n kneed down in front of her as she began...

"I am soory samrat i am soory i swear is mein meri mistake ni hai mjhey tmharey bina ni rehna hai..mein tmhari chashmish hon ..sirf aur sirf tmhari samrat...wo sab jhoot hai..sab jhoo bol rahe hain..tmahri chashmish ni badal sakti tm jantey ho na..."

Where his heart was happy to listen her confession at same time seeing her miserable he felt crying hard...he cupped her face tried to wipe her tears..

"Chashmish..relax..calm down..itna kuin ro rahe ho ? aur tm yahan kia kar rahi ? tmhara show tha na ? "

"mujhey koi show ni attend karna samrat...mjhey ab kuch ni karna sunana kuch bhi nai samrat..mein bas tmharey sath rehna chahti hon ..bas mjhey khahin bhi ni jana..."

Samrat looked down at her face as she had hugged him possessively never letting him go...he creased her hairs slowly..to let her know there is nothing changed between them...

"Chashmish relax...kis ney mana kia hai tm merey sath ni reh sakti ?"

"Tm mjhsy gusa ho ? "

Gunjan asked him while holding his palms...samrat smiles at her foolishness n kissed her forehead..

"Chashmish mein kuin gusa hon ga tmsey ? tm ney kia kiya hai ? huh pagal ho tm bas ... at least aik phone tou karti mjhey aney sey pehley.."

"Mein ne kiya smarat..itna phone kia...par tm ney ni uthaya ..mein dar gaye thi..khain tm mjhsy khafa na ho...?"

How much she was breathless on reading that news ? she had thought about him only...how could anyone write about their relationship ? she can't afford samrat at any cost...

"Pagal ho tm bas..tmhara samrat tmsey kbhi khafa ho sakta hai kiya ? Mera phone ghar pe hi reh gya tha soory..."

"Samrat mein bohat dar gaye thi..bohat zyada..mein tmhey ni khona chahti..."

Samrat hugged her back as she hugged him letting herself know such things doesn't matter in their relationship..they have stronger relation...

"aur na tm khoney wali ho..ab yeh darpok gunjan ko bhagao yahan sey meri bhadur chashmish khahn hai? aur uski wide smile ?"

"Tm bilkul gusa ni ho na ?"

Samrat sighed ...she is just too innocent...she is going to take some time to come out of this fear of losing him...he wiped her tears..he need to change her mindset...

"Nai baba...bilkul gusa ni hon...ab yeh rona dhona band karo...chalo tmhey ghar chodh k aon..kham kha mein kudh ko thaka dia pehle journey kar key aur uper sey ro ro kar..dekha kitni lal ho gaein hain meri pyari chashmish ki ankhein ?'

As she listened about going away from him..feared crept back..how can he ask her to leave?she had herself said samrat before leaving she wants to live with him...marriage...may be it was her dream to get married to him one day...but since they had face un fateful incident in their life...she had decided back then...that she doesn't need any relation ...she just want to beside samrat...she just need him...that's all they wish...if ever he will believe on marriage they will have one ..only when he wishes the same...but she just had decided not to wait anymore..she just want to be with him in his life...she doesn't wish to spent life without him..

"Tm mjhsey gusa ho haina ? islea mjhey janaey ka bol rahe ho..samrat merey sath aesa ni kar saktey I love you samrat..."

Gunjan grabbed his arm letting her know she is not going anywhere..n if he is angry he have to let it go...as she just can't let anything ruin their relation...samrat smiles helplessly...he knew her chashmish...but things is going to take time n he knew it is not right time..she is just too emotional these days that she just forget her belief...how can he let her change herself ?

"I love you too meri jaan...aur mein tmsey gusa ni hon..ab tm yahan aj raat ruko gi tu tmhari mother in law pe tmhara first impression acha ni parey ga na..."

Listening mother in law she smiled as she recalled how they both used to discuss gunjan's first meeting with SM after suhani had left...and now it wasn't a good one for sure...

"Samrat...mom kab aien ?"

Gunjan looked at samrat ..in all the situation how can she ignore...samrat was tensed...and he was tensed for sure coz of his mother...what happened between them..? did he said what he promised to her ? to forgive them..to let go...to move on...did he ? Samrat smiles as saw millions question in her eyes ...n her hand clutching his arms..letting her know they are together ...

"Aj hi aein hain...aur tm ney bola tha na k gusa na hon aur zyada nakhrey bhi mat karo jab wo aein ..tou mein ne wesa hi kia tha...aur ...wo mom ka hi phone tha mjhey birthday wish karney k lea jis ki waja sey mein pareshan ho gya tha...i am soory pehley ni bata saka..."

Gunjan placed finger on his lips n shake head..letting him know it doesn't matter..what matter he is fine...

"Shh...soory mat bolo...I am soory..."

"Chashmish soory wo kuin?"

Samrat was confused why she was saying sory..where gunjan was ashamed..felt so difficult to meet eyes with him..how she can be rude with his mother ?

"Mein ne mom sy gusa kia samrat...unho ney mjhko janey ka bola..mjhey bilkul acha ni laga..samrat wo mjhey ni pasand kartein ? wo gusa hain mjhsy kia ?"

Samrat listened her..however it make him confuse..but soon he just get why it would have happen...of course he know the reason...

"Chashmish tm bhi na apney chotey sey dimag par kitna bhoj dalti ho..kum socha karo ...budhu chashmish aesa kuch ni hai..."

Samrat made her look at him...n assured her it is nothing the way she is seeing...

"Mein budhu ni hon samrat..."

"Janta ho tm meri jaan ho..."

Samrat winked at her as held her closer to him...and she blushed ...

"Mein yahen ruk jaon please ? mom ko bura ni lagey ga..."

She tried her best to somehow try to agree him but samrat seem have bigger plans..

"Han par tmhara wait tmharey ghar pe ho raha hai tmhari di ney meri jaan kha li hai k tmhey ghar chodh key aon..."

"Di ko..."

"SHHH...abhi chalo hum sbha milein gey i promise ...aur abhi tmhey rest karna hai...no arguments wrna sach mein gusa hon ga..."

Samrat made her stand and she make first a sad face n then smile at least he is going with her..they still can spent little time together more..

"Fine..."

"Mom...Mein Chashmish ko ghar chodh key ata hon..."

SaJan as walked out of hall saw his mother who seemed worried..as samrat turned to leave ..her voice made sajan shocked...

"Samrat mein tmhey gunjan ko cheat karney ni dey sakti ..."

"Mom ? cheat ?chashmish ko ?"

Samrat looked at his mother n then at gunjan..he didn't panic..because he knew why his mother was saying it still..he didn't clear up anything...n now he was more in mood to tease his mother...n also gunjan if she didn't get...

"Samrat ney mujhey cheat kab kia ?"

Gunjan was now seriously worried why his mother was saying it again and again ?

"Samrat...wo ladki tmharey ghar pe thi jab mein subha aye thi..."

Gunjan had smiled as heard..n find it quite amusing that his mother saw him with someone she didn't expect..however she already knew about that girl n was also assured it wasn't like that which his mom was thinking..but now gunjan had grabbed an opportunity to tease samrat n how can she let it go ?

"Ladki ?Samrat???"

Samrat as saw gunjan with no expression and questioning..he find it insulting and tried to let her know she can't go with her idea at least with him..

"Chashmish zyada acting mat karo..tm boaht achey sey janti ho k wo ..."

Gunjan smacked on his arm to interrupt and took step towards him which make him move back...

"k WO kia Mr.Samrat Shergil ? tm merey pechey mjhey cheat kar rahey the ? huh ? tmhey tou mein ni chodon gi..."

and at same time gunjan grab a cushion from near by couch n started beating him with that..

"Chashmish...Chashmish..Stop it...itna zor sey hit karna band karo...agar tmney zyada hit kia na tou waqai mein cheat karon ga.."

Samrat tired hard to stop her.n tried to grab her arms..but she was too violent ..and was totally taking this opportunity of agley pechley badley..

"Cheat? tm ney aesa socha bhi tu mein uska khoon pe jaon gi..."

Gunjan and samrat was acting like kids..jumping on couch...pulling each other hairs..throwing cushions all over each other...

"Kia? Mein tu smjha tha meri chashmish insan hai par tm tu vampire nikli cheat tu tm ney kia hai.."

Samrat totally was responding her yell in same loud tone n with same violation..he grabed her from back n clutching her arms with one hand...while prison-ing her in his arms he was quite successful in tying his jungli bili..

"Han mein ney kia hai ..agar tm asey hi mjhey tang kartey rahey na tu tmhey bohat pachtana parey ga...chodo samrat..."

"Nahn you have to ..."

She was resisting..while he was stopping her from getting free as he was assure that she will start the battle once again..in their resistance gunjan had got turned in his arms..n now they were facing each other..the resistance had now slowed down..as they both had realized they could feel each other breaths...where they seem lost now more..his mother had left to watch the fierce fight minutes more..n literally was totally confused and at same time find it so adorable...they are not serious she was of sure now..but still she want to listen once from samrat that its nothing like she had thought...

"STOP IT ...YEH KIA TAMASHA LAGA RAKHA HAI TM DONO NEY ? "

As they heard..their eyes widened with shock n biting their lips in embarrassment ..they let go each other..as gunjan corrected her dress n hairs..while samrat smiled lightly as looked at shy nervous embarrassed gunjan..he walked upto his mother n put arm on her shoulder..n looked at gunjan..who was now more nervouse coz of his gaze..

"Soory Mom..aesa kuch ni hai jesa ap soch rahi ho...chashmish janti hai us ladki ko..wo just drunk thi last night mein ney just uska help kia kuin key wo faint ho gaye thi islea usko ghar pe lana para...aur sbha ap jab aye tou mein nai chahta tha k wo hmarey barey mein kuch bhi sochey islea usko mjhey janey ko bolna para aur wasey bhi i hate her..."

As gunjan heard him..she stopped him immediately n forgot once again she is not alone with him that she could yell at him ..n soon she realized ...as saw his mother eyeing at her..for being so bold on yelling on his son in front of her..gunjan was in great mess she was of sure..n hence she tried to clarify herself by beginning from sorry.

"Shut up samrat.. asey kisi ko hate ni kartey...usney tmhara kuch ni bigada..aur ab uskey behaviour ko lea k argue mat karna merey sath...I am sory mom..."

"soory?mom? Yeh tm ney mom mom kia laga rakhi hai ? jab sey aye ho asey jata rahi ho jasey meri beti ho ? suhani ya samrat ni ho tm ..."

Samrat n gunjan exchanged glances as realized she was genuinely upset n annoyed with gunjan..samrat was now more panicking rather than gunjan..

"Mom chashmish..."

Samrat tried to support gunjan..where gunjan felt her eyes moist..she wasn't sad because she was upset.but more that she didn't allow her to call her mother..

"I am Soory auntie..."

"Phir sy soory ? aur ab auntie ? Tmhey Merey betey ki patni ni banana kiya ? meri bahu tu mjhey sirf mom hi bulaye gi..."

Gunjan had lowered her eyes but as soon as she heard his mother ..her face had a wide smile n looking at his mother n samrat to get assurance she heard right..n get it right too..

"Huh??"

"AP tum dono itney barey actors ho tou kum tou mein bhi kum nii hon..aur bohat shetaan ho tm dono.."

his mother literally pulled their ears..making them whine in pain n at same time happiness was so advent from their glowing face..

"Mom...thank you..."

Gunjan held his mother's hand n spoke...while samrat gave side hug to his mother as expressed his happiness..

"I love you mom..."

Gunjan looked at samrat who was even more happy than her n the way he had kissed his mother's hair while saying..she just loved seeing the son n mother...his mother literally had tears..but she didn't wish to make everyone else emotional too...so she just showed gunjan her hand ...

"Thank you ki lagti...merey samrat ki pasand ho tu mjhey tu pasand honi hi thi..."

Gunjan closed her eyes in fear n at same time happy..as sm made her hug her..n she felt like the feeling...to be in your mother's arm...the affection was new to her..n made her teary...but she knew she is not going to cry...as samrat had held her hand from back letting her now it is for rael..n she truly deserve this all happiness.

"Dekha mom mein kudh itna acha hon ise lea meri choice bhi achi hai..."

Samrat winked at gunjan..n she blushed as she wiped away corners of eyes..

"Tmhari achai mein sab janti hon.. jao ja k gunjan ko chodh k ao..wasey bhi hmarey kandhan mein shadi sey pehley ladki apney susral ni rehti ...merey pechey kia kartey rahe tum log wo mein baad mein poch lon gi...par abi aesa kuch ni honey wala..."

SaJan exchanged glances and the blush on their face was narrating their whole moment's story ...n sm was amused seeing both of them..it was so good to be back...Gunjan felt so much embarrassed as realized herself a moment ago she was forcing samrat to let her stop n here her to be mother in law was literally letting her know that she heard her for sure...samrat couldn't believe life can be perfect in moments ?

"Mom ap tension na lein apki bahu apki trah bohat traditional mind set ki hai...meri asi kismat khahn ?"

Samrat naughtily eyed at gunjan who was shy n nervously playing with her duppata...who looked at samrat..n glared him..to stop embarrassing her more..

They both walked out of home..gunjan glared samrat..as he tried to get hold of her hand..but she didn't allow...

"Tm bohat barey jhotey ho seriously.."

"Tm bhi kum actress ni ho Chashmish.."

"Han woh tou ab aye ga hi na mjhey itney mahiney sey jo sekh rahi thi..."

She spoke saldy as she remind of the today's incident...

"chashmish tmhey asey chodh k ni ana chahye tha neil ..."

Samrat tried to let her know she behaved emotionally today rather than handling situation...but gunjan totally stopped him..she just doesn't wish to complicate their life more...

"Samrat mein jo kar sakti thi neil key lea mein ney kia tmharey keheny pe...par is sey zyada mjhsey ni hota ..please tm bhi force mat karo...i am done with this...ab mjhey hamari life mein koi problem ni chahye..."

"Okay fine..abi yeh sad face mat banao...mjhey apni smile karti hui chashmish pasand hai...that's like my Chashmish...let's go..."

Samrat made her smile..n both left on bike to enjoy hours...and it was quite late when he was back home..he checked his mother who was now sleeping in her room..as he had fall on his bed..n closed eyes...he just realized the day was nothing less than a dream...the life was perfect...as he hugged a pillow imaging it to be gunjan to let himself know that he is happy for having the blessing called "Samrat ki Chashmish" in his life who just gave him everything today what he had ever wish...

Gunjan opened eyes as felt his arms around her n she hugged the bear which she had got gift from samrat...he gave her everything she could ever wish for..her dream to feel affection of a mother..today she lived it...he was with her..her life was perfect..she doesn't need anything else..

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Preview:

"Samrat tm abhi isi wqt ghar ao.."

"Kia chahye tmhey ? tmhari film tou already hit hai.. tmhey samrat ki kia zarorat ? tmehy jintey paisey chahye mjhey batao i can give u but let him be in peace..."

"Humari life kum muibatein hain samrat jo tm aik aur palney lagey ho ?"

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Thank You for wonderful response ... stay tuned to "Don't let me go" to enjoy SaJan :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Mera sara comment detail ho gaya 😡

Khair mere saath yehi hota hai 😆 Finally I read the update. Coming to the update it was WOw! Just magical<3
Too good! Is dafa no critical appreciation 😆 warna sari update ka sataya naas phir jaye ga
Khair it was just beautiful or should I say Januable! 😳 just like my Sajan.
Too cute and just loveable! Loved the amount of trust they have on each other is nearly impossible to se but hamare Sajan to hain hi unique<3
Their fight awww...my cute little monsters 😆 Adorable scene can't wait for more! The update was love yaar seriously<3
Lamba comment expected tha kya:P?
Precap par I won't be shocked and guys meriu Sweetheart par trust rakho na jese main rakhti hoon<3
Edited by HSFA - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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haila i reall all parts 🤣 🤣 🤣
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: MSmyworldMS

haila i reall all parts 🤣 🤣 🤣

Han aur aik line comment mein ni likkhi 😡
Edited by MSluvsSI - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: MSluvsSI

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