mayur new story part 5 page 119

First Previous

Page

Next Last

Frequent Posters

...EhSaas...

@...EhSaas...

Trailblazer

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#11

thank yo all for yr lovely comment

here is my next part hope so u will enjoy it 😃

criticism are most wel come 😊

Quote

Shafy_Kaira_MN

@Shafy_Kaira_MN

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#12

aweome part...

Mayu won the bet

it's girl..

wow beautifull name...

Mayank really cares for her daughter and really loves Nupur

Awesome part ..

Just too good...

Scary precap...

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

Faria Ferdousi

@Faria.

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#13

Jayaaa

HUG HUG HUG

OMG jaya- u r such a brilliant writer yaar- i never knew it

it was damn good part
loved the way maaynk was pacing around the hospital an was praying for nupur.. he loved her lot an so he was tensed abt her...
woo nupur has given birth of a baby girl - and wo bhi mayank jaisa expect kya thik vaisa.. r wah Mayank ki tou lotery laag gayi
he was very happy and nups too

ye kya both nupur and baby were weak- hummm tension ki baat hai..:(

i felt sad that mayur celebrated the naamkaran ceremony without their parents bcos they dint came here. my poor mayur. they were waiting for them but they dint attend the function. dil he toot gayi in dono ko...

OMG baby was not responding- kya hua usko??
i hope everyhting is fine

oye plz use kuch maat hone dena

awesome part jaya- i must say
u r superb

keep it up dear

loeve ya