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Posted: 13 years ago
Nice Update, Lakshmi. You have justified each character really well and are sticking to the characterization. Every scene is beautufully depicted and loved the continuity. Please do try to continue soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: SwaNia_2

Nice Update, Lakshmi. You have justified each character really well and are sticking to the characterization. Every scene is beautufully depicted and loved the continuity. Please do try to continue soon.

Thanks a lot for ur encouraging comment. i'm happy that u felt my charectors r justified. And i hope i'll maintain it after the next update too. I'll try to continue soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Check my Reserve place on Page-30😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hey dear ur ff is really awesome
i would love to read it further
can u pls add me to ur pm list?😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Joseph_A

Hi Lakshmi, Awesome update...👏 👏 👏It was really superb Yaar... You featured all scenes in very interesting way. 👏 👏Its really Fabulous... N I mean it...No body,can handle this story accept you. Because,You are trying to portray a very different thing with a very simple manners...and this simplicity is main USP of this FF.

And now..coming to the Update... Its really too good. Samrat office scene n Meeting Part was Fantastic...It proves Samrat's honesty. Gunjan shopping part with her Gang...was really entertaining.I think 'Ring' sequence is coming in next part?? N yaa...Ria-Sam part too naa...? So...eagerly waiting for Next Part...Please,update soon... and last but,not the least..really sorry for my very very late unreserved.😳

Thanks a lot for this encouraging and appreciating comment, joseph. And please don't be sorry for unresing late. i can understand. I'm glad that u liked the update. And yes ring scene and sam-ria part are coming in next part. That's why i'm really nervous.
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: SAJANian_4ever

Hey dear ur ff is really awesome
i would love to read it further
can u pls add me to ur pm list?😊

Thanks a lot for reading and commenting. Readers comments really encourages me. And yeah, i have added u in the pm list.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Frst of all i m so so so sorry for commenting very very very very late ...seconly superb part ...loved ur characterisation n sam Sm part n Benji n sam fone part too ...waiting despretily for the frst meet of SaJan ...cont soon Lakshmi n thanks a lot for the PM...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: SwaNia_1

Frst of all i m so so so sorry for commenting very very very very late ...seconly superb part ...loved ur characterisation n sam Sm part n Benji n sam fone part too ...waiting despretily for the frst meet of SaJan ...cont soon Lakshmi n thanks a lot for the PM...

Thanks a lot for ur encouraging comment. i'm glad u liked the part. And please don't be sorry. I can understand. Will try to cont soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hey lakshmi! It's me ur jaan. 😊 Surprised huh?! I know... but, i'm angry that u haven't shared ur this writings with me. So, i'm also not telling u that i have joined i-f until u see this comment. Anyway, coming to story. It is fabulous.👏👏 The all introdution parts were very good and displayed every charectors graph well except ria's. i know it was necessary for further suspence in the story. And ur using ram's charector in this! But the story is very different from the movie other than the sammy's charector. u r writing it very differently. So, i'm very excited to read furthur coz i wanna know how will u handle the situation. Even though i can predict coz i know u very well.😉 add me in ur pm list. And yes, i won't tell u to update soon even though i want to read more coz i know ur condition and that u aren't be able to come online anymore now. So, please do take adequate rest. I will wait for updates with ur other readers. Get well soon, dear.
Edited by abhi_arshilover - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hello everybody,
I'm abhi. I'm very good friend of this ff writer lakshmi. I have some upcoming scenes of this ff just like promo or teasers. If u are interested to read them i'll post it here. Before u ask me, i tell u i'm having her permission. When i asked her she said i can post it if u all want to read. She can not be able to come online for next one month. So please let me know if u want the promos or wait for her to read the full parts of the ff. I'll post if major of the pm list want to read.
Edited by abhi_arshilover - 13 years ago

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