MJHT FF 2nd chapter updatng pg 3, 3rd post

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Suhaani/Drilabh (CID/MJHT)

@Drilabh_Suhaani

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Posted: 14 years ago

#31

i hope my hindi is okay so far. to avoid probs i kept it simple and wrote in eng in parts where i wud be uncomfortable... please feel free to correct me, am open to learning the language... if any doubts to be clarified, plz mention or plz pm and i will reply!

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np18

@np18

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Posted: 14 years ago

#32

good one...i liked the beginning.

but its going to take hard work as you have started from begining !

all the best 😊

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Suhaani/Drilabh (CID/MJHT)

@Drilabh_Suhaani

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Posted: 14 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: np18
good one...i liked the beginning.

but its going to take hard work as you have started from begining !

all the best 😊

yeah hard work indeed😆 u r right! but yeah i felt like writing my way instead of re-writing the whole thing... like u i also had plans of writing alternative plots- but then i didnt like some characterization traits of some characters etc etc etc...😆

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twinklesmiles

@-Twinkles-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#34

waiting to read more 😛

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Bhavanab

@Bhavanab

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Posted: 14 years ago

#35

My first post in your FF Suhaani !!!! ... I wonder where I had lost the link you pmed earlier 😛 ... anyways ... awsome to know about your ff ... writing something apart from CID ... and curious to read it ... have read some of it and I like ... umm ... love it 😛 ... will take out time and read it whole !!! All the best best best best !!!! You'll do great 😃

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Nivriti

@agreatperhaps

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Posted: 14 years ago

#36

Thanks for the PM! The update was simply awesome! Do PM me when you update the rest!😃

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Shafy_Kaira_MN

@Shafy_Kaira_MN

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Posted: 14 years ago

#37

very nice update...

loved the love of nupur towards gunjan...

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Faria Ferdousi

@Faria.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#38

Part 1
wow - it was sam's b.day- andhe got a bike as a birthday gift.. wah wah

nuts- wow nups nick name nuts- which was given by sam- i loved it- it sounds sweet
hey i loved Sanu Bonding- u know sanu wasmy all timefav... wanna s a strong bonding b/w SaNu... but as i m a mayur fan - so will expect more mayur scene...:D

hehehehhe- So Mr. Sharma i mean maaynk as usual bookish...loved his convo with his mom

part 2
Loved college scene- sam- nups and gunjan were awesome
loved them a lot

very nice update suhani
fantastic
keep it up

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mayur_eternal

@mayur_eternal

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Posted: 14 years ago

#39

Wonderful part..
Even i was a bit upset for not getting any mayur part..but as u said things happen gradually and i'm just keeping my fingers crossed for these two opp natured individuals to meet..will the relation take off in a fiery way like in the show...or will it be a smooth ride..
waiting for ur next update..and do pm me😊