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Posted: 13 years ago
very nice update

buy too sad ... i hope, mayur k beech sab thik ho jaye

mayank apne baby k aur nupur k bare me soche

continue soon/

thanks for the pm.


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Posted: 13 years ago
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such an heart wrenchin update Pri!
i feel terrible 4 nups!😭
i seriously hope mayu wud save deir child!
cont soon!🤗
n Pls start new MN ff soon!😛
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Posted: 13 years ago
plz update the last part soon and plz come back with another mayur romantic ff
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Posted: 13 years ago
Thank you all 🤗 for supporting, liking n leaving comments on my first mayur FF , 😃


I am ending this FF now with a happy note , thanks a lot again 😃
Edited by ..Priyanka.. - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Chapter 28 -Last Part

Mayank is feeling disgusted at himself for what has he done to his wife, when she needed him most, he was not there , , he is still sitting on the best n gone completely blank after reading the letter from Nupur to her unborn baby, he is cursing as much as he can for the situation he has created for Nupur, he wife is going through so much emotionally n physically but he being her husband was not there for her, he pushed her, blamed her n leave her alone to suffer. He mind stopped tihnking for few minutes than he looked at the letter again n it says, " I love your father more than you" , he started crying , he could not believe Nupur is giving up her chile for him.

Mayank, u r the most awful husband on this earth, you claim that u love ur wife the most but when she needed u most , u dissappaeard for ur selfish reason, how could u do this, Mayank mind n heart are saying same thing for the first time that how wrong he is

After few minutes of shock, he decided to rectify the mistake he has done which are not easy to fix n he does not want to delay anymore , if he does he will loose everything today, he has to save his chile, his wife , his family now, if he does not do that than he has no right to live , he settled himself and started looking for nupur like a mad husband everywhere , he checked in suhani room, living room, kitchen,, garden, nupur was nowhere, he got panicked by not finding nupur anywhere , he came back to his room , started looking again, he got scared n all negative thoughts started coming in his mind , he looked in the bathroom, room, studies , he could not find than he went to balcony to check n found Nupur on the floor, he just could not move to see Nupur on that condition , he ran towards her n calling her name so she can open her eyes, but nupur was not responding at all, he carried her, brought her inside n put her on the slowly , mayank was shocked to see his Nupur, she has changed completely in two days , she looked pale, weak, sad n lifeless but still breathing .

Kya kar diya mayank tune apne hee hatho se, meri wajah se nupur ka yeh condition hua hai, agar use kuch hua to main kaise rah paoonga, ? nupur please utho, kuch nahi hoga hamare bache ko, main kuch nahi hone doonga, maine bahut badi galati kar di, please utho, tum apne mayank se pyaar karti ho naa, please utho na, Nupur utho m meri taraf dekho, apne mayank ke uper cheelao,lekin apnee ankhe kholo, main nahi rah sakta tumhare bagain, mere liye utho please , Nupur uthoo, Mayank was talking to Nupur but he iis not getting any reaction from her, he is loosing his patients, hope .

Nupur , tum aisa nahi kar sakti ,utho , mere liye to utho, mujhe please akela mat chodo, main nahi rah paoonga, maine baad baar galati kee, tumhe baar baad mujhe maaf kiya, is baar tumhe pyaar ka sath dena hai, abhiman ke nahi, tumhe apne pyaar ke liye ankhen kholna hee padegaa, utho nupur, I cannot let u behave like that, u never ignore me, please nupur open ur eyes but no reaction, Mayank did not get any responsce from nupur again from , he just could let nupur behave like that , he started looking at her medical file n called her doctor with a panicking voice, doctor suggested Mayank to keep rubbin her feet n hands if he can n she will be in their house in 20 minutes. Mayank followed her instruction n kept talking to his wife but she was not reacting at all, he started feelng like loosing her, after 20 minutes doctor arrived , shilpa was in the living room playing with suhani & aditya , someone knocked the door , gopi opened n let doctor come inside '

Kya main aapkee help kar sakti hoo?, shilpa asked politly to the lady doctor

Mujhe nupur se milna hai, unke husband ne phone koya thaa, can you please show me their room so I can see Nupu, doctor said politly without reacting n disclosing anything

Nupur meri bahu hai, 2 din se kuch hua hai use, kitna poocha kuch bataya hee nahi, chaliye unke kamre main jaldi, shilpa knew nupur is not well

Do not take tension , she will be allright, let me treat her first, and she followed Shilpa ,suhani n aditya followed them , doctor saw mayank panicking, she asked him calm down

Mayank, please do not panic, kuch nahi hoga aapke Nupur ko, wo aapse bahut pyaar karti hai, She tried to calm him down n started her treatment but suddeny heard yound child crying

Nupsie mummy ko kya hua, wo kyon so rahee hai mayank , he started crying

Kuch nahi hua hai adi, nupsie mummy rest le rahee hai, aap rona band karo, doctor aunty theek kar dengi , Mayank tried to calm him down

Please aaplog sab thode der ke liye bahar jayyeeye, mujhe check up karna hain, doctor requested everyone to leave the room

Han doctor, we are waiting outside , chalo adi, suhani, Shilpa looked angrily at mayank ,

Everyone came outside along with Mayank, Shilpa manage to calm aditya down n asked gopi to take aditya n suhani downstair n give them something to eat. She was angry at mayank for nupur condition,,,,

Mayank, maine bola thaa, Nupur ka khayal rakhna, tumhari wajagh se aisee halat huee hai uskee, she shouted at him for his ignorance toward s nupur without knowing the the reason

Maa , mujhse galati ho gayee, I just want her to get better, I cannot live without her, Maynk was panicking n crying for his deed , shilpa saw her son crying for the first time in 19 years , she felt sorry for him , he was trually regretting for his ignorance towards Nupur, she has to support him because he was pankcking

Mayank, sambhalo apne aap ko, use kuch nahi hoga ,she will be allright, chup ho jao , shilpa made maaynk sit n tried calm him down

Maa, hamare bache ko kuch nahi hoga naa,agar kuch hua to main apne aapko kabhee bhee maaf nahi kar paoonga , yeh sab meri wajah se hua hai, mayank could not hide anymore , he has to let it out ,

Bacha, ? Nupur pregnante hai, tumne mujhe bataya kyon nahi, OMG she is pregnant , what did u tell her, did u tell her to abort the baby, Shilpa was shocked n surprised to hear about her granchild,

Maa,she needed me but I did not support her, we did not want child so early but she got pregnant, I panicked n did not know how to react , she needed me emotionally n she needed my support but I was running away ,I ignored her n told her to " decide whatever she wants to do because I do not want to be a father" , maa mujhse bahut badi galati ho gayee, mujeh meri nupur aur bacha chahiye, please save them , Mayank was begging his mum to pray for his wife

Mayank, how could you? Tumne us phool see bachee ko akele decision lene ke liye chod diya, kaise husband ho,I though u have changed n become responsible but no u r stil the same, I knew kuch to hai but she did not say anything, you r responsible for this pregnany also, how could you forget, sare admi selfish hote hai, , shilpa got angry when she reaslied what mayank has done to Nupur

Maa ,I love her , she is my life, I got panicked m mujhse bahut badi galati ho gayee, please mujhe jo bolna hai bolo, but I want my nupur n my child, Mayank was repeating samething

How come you changed your mind about your child now , u did know want , shilpa asked another question

Maa yeh dekhiye , mayank showed Nupurs letter to her unborn baby to Shilpa

Mayanak tum bahut lucky ho kee nupur jaise ladkee mile hai, jo tumhe aur tumhare pyaar ko pahle rakhti hai, apne bache se bhee pahle , she is ready to abort her baby becayse u did not want, I never expected this from u mayank , I feel disgusted that I could not look after my bahu

Maa , I m sorry mujhse bahut badi galati ho gayee hai, jo bolna hai wo boliye lekin pls mere nupur ko aur mere bache ko theek kar dijiye, he hugged his mum n could not stop cryin, shilpa could not stop hersel n hugged him back n saii " kuch nahi hoga mere bahu ko"

Mayank & Shilpa has been anoxiouly waiting for doctor to come out, its been 1 hrs , their eyes were coutinusly on the door, Mayank kept looking at his mother with worried face, Shilpa has seen different mayank today ,she knows , Mayank is very wrong what he has done but he has changed after marriage but may be he got panicked n run away from his reponsibiltiy after sudden news of having child , he indeed love wife very much , he should be there with her but he was selfishly thinking about himself when Nupur wanted him, Shilpa is glad that mayank has realised mistake on time n will make things better now but she is worried about Nupur, shilpa mind was busy thinking about mayank, nupur, baby. Becoming grandmother is the one of the best news for shilpa but she cannot even enjoy because of mayank messed up everything. Shilpa started praying for safety of Nupur n the baby , than she heard doctor opening the door, she came out n close the door behind, mayank ran to the doctor,

Doctor, how is Nupur, is she allright,what happened to her? He was shaking while asking the doctor n kept looking at Shilpa

Mayank & Shilpaji, aaplog ko bahut dhyaan rakhna hai, she needs emotional support, Doctor said is seriously n that line panicked shilpa nmayank more

Doctor, what happened to Nupur, what happened to our baby, please boliye , Mayank seems loosing hope of Nupur , tears started coming out again, he just sat on the sofa helplessly, shilpa saw that

Doctor, please saaf saaf batayeeye, Nupur kaisee hai aur baby kaisa hai, Shilpa stepped in after seeing mayan loosing hope

Shilpaji, Nupur ko maine abhee bacha liya hai, kuch aur der hoti to bahut kuch ho sakta thaa, she is very weak both emotionally as well as physically,fir se ignorance hua to we wont be able to save her, doctor said it in serious note

Thank you doctor, doctor , nupur ka baby theek hai naa? Shilpa was little relieved to know about Nupur, but she is getting worried about their baby

Hone wala Baby is very supportive to mother, baby knows maa is alone , baby is strong n in good condition, Doctor said with a smile on her face. Shilpa n Mayank got relieved after hearing this news

Thank you very very much doctor for saving my wife n our baby, I assure you , nupur aur bache ko kuch nahi hone doonga, Mayank bent his head n wholeheartedly said thank you to the doector ,,

Yes Mayank, we cannot take risk with her life again, look after her, she needs you , she needs her husband love n support , nothing else, maine use injection diya hai, she will be awake after 6-7 hours, make sure she eats properly n bring her to my clinc tomorrow morning for normal checkup, mayank u can go inside, rest of the instruction I will give to Shilpaji, doctors said whatever she has to say so mayank can realise his mistake

Shilpaji, Nupur bilkool theek ho jayegi ab, bahut weak ho gayee hai due to stress, kyoki ab uska pyaar uske sath hai, aap please tension mat lijiye, sorry I was bit harsh to ur son . Doctor looked at Shilpa n assured her everything is fine ..

Thank you doctor, mayan ke sath apne jo kiya , I do not have any problem but yeh I can assure you, ab wo nupur aur bache ko kuch nahi hone dega, thoda bewoof hai leking nupur ke liye pagal hai, I m very happy Nuour n baby are fine, doctor main dadi banne walee hoo, I m so happy, Shilpa said is happily to doctor n took her to downsairs, this time she does not want mayank to distract, he has to be with his wife '

Mayank ran to his room ( shilpa wanted Mayank to look after nupur , so she decided not to to go their room ) , closed the door slowly , n went straighaway to Nupur , she was sleeping peacefully, he thanked god for saving his wife n child, he kept staring at his wife, he just sat beside her n kept looking her pale n weak face ,he just wanted to hug her and assure her that " he will be always there for her n their child" . Nupur had been sleepingunder the influence of injection for past 7 hrs , mayank had been beside her since. Suddenly he felt nupur moving n heard something hurtful from Nupur, his heart broke again by seeing nupur in that concition n fault was his only

Mera bacha, I m sorry baby i could not save you , I m sorry my baby, she started mumbling as soon as she regained , mayank saw nupur patting her hand over her stomach n tears started coming

Nupur, please shant ho jao, hamare bache ko kuch nahi hai, baby is fine, please calm down, he moved closer n started stroking her head to calm her down

Hamra Baby, she heard this from mayank n opened her eyes, she saw mayank is sitting beside her n stroking her head,

My baby, I could not save my baby, she still mumbling same thing looking at mayank, he could not see her in that condition,

Nupur, Our baby is alive, safe , our baby is fine, feel it , mayank had to bring nupur out of trauma of loosing her baby, he put her hand on stomach n started caressing, nupur reacted on that she she felt conncection between her n baby..

My baby is alive, I can feel my baby, she was crying with the happiness than she realised mayank sitting beside , her expression changed ,mayank saw that

What happened Nupur, r u not happy?, Mayank asked herafter seeing her changed expression

Are you happy Mayank? She had a question in her eyes while asking to him

Nupur,we r going to be parents, I m the luckiest husband on this earth, Mayank tried to cheer her up but he really mean it

Aapko kya hua hai, aap to bacha nahi chahte the, you left me when I needed you, sudden change kyon? Nupur has gained conscious completely after hearing mayanks excitement about the baby

Nupur, tumne meri ankhen khol di, main abhee bhee fatherhood ke perfect nahi hoo but I know you will make me perfect in that field also, Nupur I m sorry I acted like a fool again, I ran away from my responsibiltiy, Mayank is being honest about his feeling to nupur

Maine aapke kab kholi ?,aapne to mujhse baat karna hee band kar diya thaa,you started avoiding me as if u r punishing me , Nupur slowly moved up n rested her head on the pillow while talking , mayank saw her getting stressed again

Nupur, please do not take stress,meri galati kee saaja apne aapko mat do, tumhara pati bahut bada gadha hai lekin wo tumse apne aap se bhee jyada pyaar karta hai, Mayank tried to calm her down

Mayank, I have loved you more than anybody ,you will always come first in my life , you knew that but u left me in the middle, Nupur still cannot forget the momnet when she needed her husband but he was not there

Nupur, now our baby will come first than me, our baby needs us , we have to take care of our baby together, I know it is not easy to forgive , lekin tum mujhe sach main pyar karti ho to please do not take stress n eat something, Mayank has to convince what he feels about their baby now, he has to keep nupur happy n healthy during the pregnanacy

Mayank, kya ho gaya hai apko, It is very hard to believe , I do not want you to be sympathetic towards me or my baby,I always wanted happy family mayank not forced, Nupur is not convinced with this new mayank

Nupur, we r n we will be happy family always, tumne meri ankhen khol di, I came home early in the afternoon for some work , I was looking for my contract n I found a letter " you to your baby" , you decided to abort the baby because you love me more than anybody , I was ashamed at my coward behaviour, God wanted me to see that later, god wants me to save our child , Mayank hold Nupur hand n stared crying n he put his head on Nupur Stomach n said " I m sorry , please forgive your father, please ask your mummy to forgive me , I cannot live without her n you " Nupur can see mayank regretting badly for his behaviour in past two days , mayank just wanted nupur to believe her this time, Nupur can see pain in mayank eyes n regret

Mayank,Pls shant ho jayeeye, we forgive you, i need hug from you now,we have been waiting for ur hug, come here, Nupur really felt sorry for mayanks condition, wo sach main apnee galati ke liye sharminda thaa n he is trually want to ractify his mistake he has done , she knows he wants his wife, family back , he wants his happines back which was missing for the past 2 days, Nupur felt Mayank is ready for parenthood, mayank gave long awaited hug to nuur n they cried together for the firs time for the new happiness coming to their life.

Nupur, we r going to have child, I m going to be a father, you will be best mummy n I will try to be a good father, but before that promise me u r going to look after yourself, so lets start now, I m going to get soup for you ,you need to eat that because our baby is hungry, than need to take medicine, aaj se main tumhara khayal rrakkhoonga,tum aur hamara baby mera responsibilty hai, Got it , Mayan wants to give priority to his family now rather than his dream project, he almost lost his wife , he cannot take second chance, he can start his dream project anytime but at the moment Nupur n baby comes first for him n he cannot see anything beyond them

Mayank, apke dream project ka kal final day hai naa, you need to work on that, I do not want any interrutption in ur dream project due to my health n baby, I can look after myself, family hai nnaa, Nupur is shocked mayank not giving priority his dream project he dreamt for years, she cannot let this happen

Nupur, I do not want to lose my dream family,if you r with me, than I can start another dream project anytime, mayank knew Nupur wont let this happen

Mayank, yeh kaise ho sakta hai, aap kitne mehnat kar rahe the is project ke liye, main apko beech main band nahi karne doongi due to me, Nupur is more stubborn than Mayank, she knew shw wont let him leave his project

Nupur, Project will still go ahead but without me, for the time being , so calms down please, do not get stressed , ab kam ka discussion band , chalo u need to eat something nahi to tumhari baat khatam hee nahi hogi, ek baar suru hoti ho to khatam hone ka nam nahi leti n he started laughing looking at Nupur surprised expression

Mayank, I missed you , please do not leave us alone ever, n she hugged Maynk back

Nupur, my life has just begun , hamare pyaa kee jeet huee hain because of our baby, we r going to be parents, hamare liye yeh naya dream project hai together now n we will be 100% successful n proud btw pahle beti hogi uske baad beta 😃😳, n he looked at nupur n saw her blushing, he missed that blush so much, he smiled n hugged her back very tight to assure her that he will never ever leave his wife, baby and family, its a promise he made to himself, he will put his love first and wil never run away from any problem ever😛

The end 😃

Edited by ..Priyanka.. - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Oh thank god Mayank realized his mistake before it was too late...
Nice chapter will miss this ff... please do try to come up with a new one soon... 😳
Take care 🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
finally mayank got some maturity
goona miss the story
start a new one soon
can i expect the epilogue?
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey so beautifully written and ossom update but im sad that u end such a beautiful ff plzz come back with another one
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice ending ...

pheeew ...finally apne mayu ko akal aa hi gai parenthood is most beautifull thing in the world hope now they will live happily forever .
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Posted: 13 years ago

aww... it was so amazing...

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