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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: shafyyy

Piyu bole piya bole jaanu na
Jiya dole hole hole kyon yeh dole jaanu na

Not bad, ab yeh suno
Dil ki jo baatein hain, baatein jo dil ki hain

Dil hi mein rakhna piya

Lab to na kholoon main, kholoon na lab to par

Aakhon se sab keh diya
Piyu bole piya bole kya yeh bole jaanu na
Jiya dole hole hole kyon yeh dole jaanu na

Piyu bole piya bole kya yeh bole jaanu na
Jiya dole hole hole kyon yeh dole jaanu na

Ek nadi se maine poochha itla ke chaldi kahan
Door tere peekha ghar hai balkhaake chaldi kahan
Thoda woh ghabraayi thoda sa sharmaayi
Ujhli yahaan se wahaan
Saagar se milne ka uska jo sapna tha meri hi tarah piya
Jiya dole hole hole kyon yeh dole jaanu na
Piyu bole piya bole kya yeh bole jaanu na

Jiya dole hole hole kyon yeh dole jaanu na
Maine poocha ek ghata se itra ke chaldi kahan
Pyaas ki bari zameen hai barson bhi tarsao na
Thoda woh gurraayi thoda sa tharraayi
Gajhri yahaan se wahaan
Preet rootha thi phir cham cham woh barsi hi teri tarah piya

Piyu bole piya bole kya yeh bole jaanu na
Jiya dole hole hole kyon yeh dole jaanu na
Piyu bole piya bole kya yeh bole jaanu na
Jiya dole hole hole kyon yeh dole jaanu na
Piyu bole piya bole jaanu na


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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: DhanakZ

Lovely Part dear

He loves her so much
Hope she can understand him soon
thanks for pm
cont soon

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: -SupriyaluvsMN-

aww.. such an awesum update...
i hope .. nups is realisin imp of mayu in her lyf!!
continue soon!
thnx 4 d pm!🤗

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Originally posted by: SHILPA-CUTE

awesome part dear. 😛

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Originally posted by: shafyyy

Piyu bole piya bole jaanu na
Jiya dole hole hole kyon yeh dole jaanu na

Not bad, ab yeh suno
Dil ki jo baatein hain, baatein jo dil ki hain

Dil hi mein rakhna piya

Lab to na kholoon main, kholoon na lab to par

Aakhon se sab keh diya
Piyu bole piya bole kya yeh bole jaanu na
Jiya dole hole hole kyon yeh dole jaanu na

Piyu bole piya bole kya yeh bole jaanu na
Jiya dole hole hole kyon yeh dole jaanu na

Ek nadi se maine poochha itla ke chaldi kahan
Door tere peekha ghar hai balkhaake chaldi kahan
Thoda woh ghabraayi thoda sa sharmaayi
Ujhli yahaan se wahaan
Saagar se milne ka uska jo sapna tha meri hi tarah piya
Jiya dole hole hole kyon yeh dole jaanu na
Piyu bole piya bole kya yeh bole jaanu na

Jiya dole hole hole kyon yeh dole jaanu na
Maine poocha ek ghata se itra ke chaldi kahan
Pyaas ki bari zameen hai barson bhi tarsao na
Thoda woh gurraayi thoda sa tharraayi
Gajhri yahaan se wahaan
Preet rootha thi phir cham cham woh barsi hi teri tarah piya

Piyu bole piya bole kya yeh bole jaanu na
Jiya dole hole hole kyon yeh dole jaanu na
Piyu bole piya bole kya yeh bole jaanu na
Jiya dole hole hole kyon yeh dole jaanu na
Piyu bole piya bole jaanu na


mujhe yeh gaana kahin na kahin use karna hain i like this song pehle hi post kar sakti thi na
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: princez_94

Nice update... Loved the jungle scene, Mayank's very caring.. I loved his heartful confession, he loves her very dearly but he wants love.. to be loved by someone.. his wife..

Lovely update I'm waiting for Nupur's confession, but looking at Nupur's backround its understandable that it takes time for her to realize what she feels for someone.. Because she knows what she feels but can't name it...
Continue soon... :)
-Laiba

nupur ki confession hi mere liye bahut problematic part hain i ned to think clearly about her confession .
nupur ko pehle khud ko samajna hain mayank ko aur use yeh bhi samajna hain ki maayank uske life main kya hain
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: -Faria-

Very Nice update dear
as usual loved mayur a lot..
Mayur were in jungle---ahhh kash jungle main thoda update aur mil jati
but anyway no prob loved the whole part..
mayanak is a true gentleman - he respect and loved ups alot...
and waiting for her confession...
hope nups will fall or mayank soon

next time try to update a longgg prt
TC

phir se chota hain please bura mat mano actually i need to cut it at some stage saturday big update with some good start
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Posted: 14 years ago
ok here is my next part long gap small part but ineed to cut it next part will be a good one

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