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.SilentPrincess

@.SilentPrincess

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#481

Nice update... Loved the jungle scene, Mayank's very caring.. I loved his heartful confession, he loves her very dearly but he wants love.. to be loved by someone.. his wife..

Lovely update I'm waiting for Nupur's confession, but looking at Nupur's backround its understandable that it takes time for her to realize what she feels for someone.. Because she knows what she feels but can't name it...

Continue soon... :)

-Laiba

Edited by princez_94 - 14 years ago

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samira

@-Samira-

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#482

marvelous update dear loved all mayur moments

thnx 4 d pm

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Gul

@DhanakZ

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#483

Lovely Part dear

He loves her so much

Hope she can understand him soon

thanks for pm

cont soon

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Supriya

@-SupriyaluvsMN-

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#484

aww.. such an awesum update...
i hope .. nups is realisin imp of mayu in her lyf!!
continue soon!
thnx 4 d pm!🤗

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Shafy_Kaira_MN

@Shafy_Kaira_MN

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#485

Piyu bole piya bole jaanu na
Jiya dole hole hole kyon yeh dole jaanu na

Not bad, ab yeh suno
Dil ki jo baatein hain, baatein jo dil ki hain

Dil hi mein rakhna piya

Lab to na kholoon main, kholoon na lab to par

Aakhon se sab keh diya
Piyu bole piya bole kya yeh bole jaanu na
Jiya dole hole hole kyon yeh dole jaanu na

Piyu bole piya bole kya yeh bole jaanu na
Jiya dole hole hole kyon yeh dole jaanu na

Ek nadi se maine poochha itla ke chaldi kahan
Door tere peekha ghar hai balkhaake chaldi kahan
Thoda woh ghabraayi thoda sa sharmaayi
Ujhli yahaan se wahaan
Saagar se milne ka uska jo sapna tha meri hi tarah piya
Jiya dole hole hole kyon yeh dole jaanu na
Piyu bole piya bole kya yeh bole jaanu na

Jiya dole hole hole kyon yeh dole jaanu na
Maine poocha ek ghata se itra ke chaldi kahan
Pyaas ki bari zameen hai barson bhi tarsao na
Thoda woh gurraayi thoda sa tharraayi
Gajhri yahaan se wahaan
Preet rootha thi phir cham cham woh barsi hi teri tarah piya

Piyu bole piya bole kya yeh bole jaanu na
Jiya dole hole hole kyon yeh dole jaanu na
Piyu bole piya bole kya yeh bole jaanu na
Jiya dole hole hole kyon yeh dole jaanu na
Piyu bole piya bole jaanu na

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arzzo

@arzzo

Navigator

Posted: 14 years ago

#486

hi firstly wats ur name?and lovely story read alll parts great concept lovely posts and great dialogues reallly love ur story love the nok jhok between sajan love the chemistry between manjan ,gunur and the gang each and every part was hillarious and lovely very intresting and eagerly waiting for ur update love the proporsal of sajan and nupur innocence i hope she soon understand mayu feeling and hope benia also be together plzzz update soon and plzzz pm

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unknown

@--unknown--

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#487

Originally posted by: arzzo
hi firstly wats ur name?and lovely story read alll parts great concept lovely posts and great dialogues reallly love ur story love the nok jhok between sajan love the chemistry between manjan ,gunur and the gang each and every part was hillarious and lovely very intresting and eagerly waiting for ur update love the proporsal of sajan and nupur innocence i hope she soon understand mayu feeling and hope benia also be together plzzz update soon and plzzz pm

nice to see your long response here is my update

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unknown

@--unknown--

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#488

Originally posted by: -Faria-
Very Nice update dear
as usual loved mayur a lot..
Mayur were in jungle---ahhh kash jungle main thoda update aur mil jati
but anyway no prob loved the whole part..
mayanak is a true gentleman - he respect and loved ups alot...
and waiting for her confession...
hope nups will fall or mayank soon

next time try to update a longgg prt
TC