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ginny munjal

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Posted: 14 years ago

#11

heyyy i loved ur ff

wat a terrific starting :)

plzzz include me in ur pmlist

would love to read all the fuder parts

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valliyah

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Posted: 14 years ago

#12

Sweet update...Mayur ever adorable...both r in dreamland...cont soon n plss pm when update...!!!

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@DhanakZ

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Posted: 14 years ago

#13

Love;y part dear

i love it

Plz plz next time pm me

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Faria Ferdousi

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Posted: 14 years ago

#14

Beautiful start
very nice
do cont it
an plz try to pm me next time
take care

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Ritu

@cuteritz

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Posted: 14 years ago

#15

THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR YOUR COMMENTS😊

Part 3
After all the waiting at last it was 6am in the morning as soon as the clock struck 6 o'clock Nupur was up and started waking up Gunji & Dia becuz they had 8am college and there was a lot of work pending at home.
And today was nupur's day of work so didn't want to be late at all.
Nupur tried hard at last Dia woke up but Gunjann was not waking up at all. Just then an idea struck her . She winked at Dia and she got it what was nupur up to and joined in.
N & D- aare SAMRAT tum yahaan
G - all of a sudden she woke up and said all horrified SAMRAT kaha hai wo acha toh aap dono subhe bhi shuru hogaye .
N - tum uth nahi rahi thi iss liye kiya acha chalo tum dono jaldi se tyaar ho jao college nahi jaana kya .
D & G - acha di
N - main jaati hun breakfast banaane
D - tikhe di
Next side
Mayank's mom is trying hard to wake him up but that's not of any use
He is not waking up .
S - acha tu sota reh main mandir akele hi chali jaati hun bye sadu
M - maa main sadu nahi mayu hun bhool gayi kya acha jao mujhe sone do aur dhyaan se jaana ok
S - so ja kumbh karan kahi ka bye
Other side nupur gets ready in a very beautiful yellow churidar
D - kya baat hai di boss ko maar dal ne ka iraada hai
Kya ?
N - chup kar besharam tujhe college nahi jaana kya
G - di class cancel hogayi aur aise bhi humein aapko best of luck wish karna tha
D - haan di all the best
G - all the best di
Nupur hugs them
And says thank you so much acha bauji kaha hai
D - apni study mein
N - acha tikh hai bye pehle main mandir jaugi phir office
G & D - bye di
Nupur goes to her bauji
Mr Shashi bhushan nupur's father - a very respectful person and the best father for his three daughters and the owner of the Bhushan empire but still a down to earth person who finds happiness in small things and can do anything for his daughters and very open minded just like mayank's mom .
N - namastey bauji
B - namastey bete aur best of luck
N - thank you bauji and love you
B - love you too beta
Nupur takes his blessings and hugs
B - acha beta plz ghabrana mat aur bikul cool ho kar kaam karna aur temper thoda control karna aur koi bhi pareshan kare toh mujhe ek phone karna ok
N - tikh hai bauji aap to mujhse bhi jyaada nervous lag rahe acha bye
B - bye bete take care
N - ji bauji
Nupur leaves
First she had decided to go to a temple
But on the way she sees two guys pulling some aunty's purse and she started fuming and parked her car came out and took her pepper spray and her knife with her which she carries regularly for safety .
She came and stood behind the thieves and waved at the aunty to calm down and chill and that aunty was none other than Shilpa mayank's mom
Nupur took out her pepper spray and sprayed in the thieves eyes and said Sharam nahi aati kisi ka purse churaate huye and came and stood in front of them and pointed her swiss knife in front of them and continued to scold them and shilpa aunty stood behind nupur
N - tum dono unka purse dete ho yaa nahi ya mein apni churi chalao tum par [ all furious]
Thief - T
T - nahi denge [ trying to remove the pepper out of his eyes ]
N - acha nahi doge
T - nahi
Nupur pulled the purse from his hands and handed it to Shilpa aunty and in anger that thief pushed Nupur due to which she got hurt on her head it was nothing serious to get scared for but Shilpa got scared for that poor girl but she was proud her as she fought for her .
Nupur got up and now she was fuming even more [ remember when in the serial nupur beats up yash who shot gunjan just imagine that ]
Nupur takes sand in her hand and throws it in the guys eyes .
Nupur - aunty jaldi se police station main phone kijiye tab tak mein inhe pareshan karti hun
MM - Haan beta karti hun
One of the two guys ran away and the other guy was struggling the sand in his eyes and till then the police arrived and arrested that guy and npur decided to drop shilpa aunty at her place by her car and they reached home .
Scene outside sharma mansion
MM - beta thanks a lot for the help
Nupur -its ok aunty
Mm - aare beta tumharr haath pe toh chot lagi hai
Nupur - aare aunty ye to kuch bhi nahi hua
Mm - beta tumne meri itni help ki toh mera toh itna farz bunta hai chalo mere saath ghar chalo tumhe dawai laga deti hun
Nupur - aunty mere job ka first day hai aaj mein late ho jaogi
Mm - kitne baje hai ?
Nupur - 9 o'clock
Mm - toh abhi kitne baje hai ?
Nupur - 8 o'clock
Mm - to phir chalo muje kuch nahi sun na waise tumhara naam to meine poocha hi nahi
Nupur - aunty mera naam nupur hai
Mm - bahut acha naam hai waise mujhe kehna padega ki tum bahut brave ho
Nupur - thank you aunty
And they go inside .
Precap - mayur's meeting in the sharma mansion and both are shocked to see each other
Happy reading!😊

Edited by cuteritz - 14 years ago