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Posted: 14 years ago
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Nice cs. I liked it a lot. Gunjan is mayank's sis! And sam leaved the gang for sheenah! Thats sad! But i don't want sam and sheenah as a couple. And i don't want gunjan to be more modren and talkative! Sorry, if i had hurted u. I'm just telling my pov. Do cont soon. Thanks for pm
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Gang @ Canteen..

"Benji, I think you should tell her." Gunjan said in a positive tone.

"No dude, she will kill you! Don't tell her." Mayank said in a negative tone! J

G: He should

M: He should not

G: Should!

M: Should not!

G: Should!

M: Should not!

G: Should!

M: Should not!

G: Should!

M: Should not!

"Guyz Guyz' Stop fighting yaar! If you both are not able to decide, Mera kya hoga yaar?" Benji declared.

"Benji, if you don't want to tell her. Just give her hints. If she is able to catch them; good! If she is not able to catch them; find another one!"

" Hm' I guess you are right Gunji!" Mayank said in defeat.

"I am always right!" Gunjan replied triumphantly. "But yesterday was really amusing. Benji, learn to control your feelings dude!" With a giggle!

Mayank made a confused face and said! "What happened yesterday Gunji?" Benji tried to interrupt but Gunjan giggles and said "you don't know?" Mayank nods in a no. "Don't worry I will tell you. Yesterday when we all were watching Ajab Prem Ki Gazab Kahani on the home theatre and the song~ Tu Jaane Na came, Benji was staring at Dia continuously and I heard him say, "Kash ki Katrina ki jagah Dia hoti aur Ranbir ki jagah mein! It's so romantic" Oh God! That was so funny!" Gunjan completed.

"OMG! That is why you were laughing between that song?" Mayank replied as if someone said Nupur had topped the college!

Gunjan nods in a yes while giggling.

Suddenly Nupur and Dia come. Benji starts staring at her. His trance is broken with a loud screech from his side. Well, from Nupur!

" By God! Mayank you haven't seen Dabangg yet! Gosh'" Nupur said in disbelief!

"Nupur, what's the big deal in it?" Mayank replied horrifyingly

"Guys, I gotta go! Shukla Sir's class you know! I swear if it was in my hands, I would have fired that stinky professor in the case of fainting all his students in the class and speaking such harsh Hindi!" Gunjan said with a giggle.

All laugh and Gunjan leaves. Everyone is smiling but then stop when they see Sheena and Samrat entering the cafeteria together, hand-in-hand.

" By God! Yeh chudail kabhi Samrat ka peecha kyun nahi chodti?" Nupur remarked.

"Samrat par ek chudail ka saya hai. Aur kehte hai ki bhoot aur chudail, tumhara peecha kabhi nahi chodte!" Mayank replied with a chuckle.

Nupur starts to say something but is interrupted by the one and only Chudail (in her language ~ Witch) Shee-nah!

"Hey Guys!"

Dia smirks and replies tauntingly' "I remember ki ham abhi tak friends nahi bane kyunki aisa hi to sirf close friends kehte hai! Right guys!"

Whole of the gang felt keep silent was the best thing. Even though MayUr and Benji knew, she was exactly right.

"Exactly Candy"! Samrat said while sitting on a near-by table. "Main bhi Sheena ko yaha isiliye laaya hu. Taaki hum ache dost ban sake" he completed smiling at Sheena

Suddenly Uday enters'

"Hey guys! Do you know? Prom night is this Friday. And we are not allowed to go alone so I was thinking Mayank that I will go with Gunjan if you don't mind." Uday said in a pleading manner

Mayank looks at him angrily and replies.. "Shut up Uday! She won't go with you even if you are the last person on this earth, and anyways we all knew about the prom and she is already going with Benji!"

"Benji ke bacche! Tu na! Ab mein kiske saath jaunga?" Uday asked horrifyingly. He moved his head and saw Mayank giving him a dirty look. He quickly faced the other side. Samrat's heart pinched when he heard that. He was confused.

"Akele chala ja dude! Tere saath to koi bhi ladki nahi jaana chahegi!" Samrat replied laughinhly.

"Exactly dodo! Anyways, mein chalti hu tumahare saath! Even I don't have a date!" Dia said matter-of-factly!

"Why? His Highness tumhare saath nahi jaa rahe?" Samrat asked confusingly and in a way taunting her.

At the mention of RV's name, Dia's eyes moistened.

"Now what happened Dia? Why are you not taking his side. I love him na!" Samrat said tauntingly.

Dia left the canteen in a jerk. Her tears were not un-noticed by Benji which pained him and he followed her. Nupur became restless but Mayank put a supporting hand on her shoulder and nodded in a no and communicating with eyes to let Benji handle it. Sheena smirked and Samrat seemed to be confused. Uday gave an angry look to Samrat.

"Guys! Why are you all looking so pale? Did I say something wrong?" asked a shocked Samrat. He was totally confused. 'I thought they were dating each other.' He said to himself'

"Yes you did Sam! Yes you did!" Uday replied in nodding in a no! He looked as if he was going to cry in any moment. Which further shocked Samrat.

And by saying this Uday went in search of his Deeds.

*Swap*

Gunjan is walking in the corridor. Surprisingly Shukla was absent today so she had a free period. She was roaming around and she walked past a figure who was sitting on the stairs and crying on Benji's shoulder. Gunjan turned to see Dia crying. She without even a second thought ran up to her

"What happened Dia?" She asked.

But no reply came from her. Instead she stared to sob more! "Don't worry Dia!" Benji said consolingly.

"What happened Benji? Did someone say anything to her?" Gunjan said in a caring tone and was interrupted by Uday who was blabbering to himself..

"What does he think of himself? Deeds ko hurt karega and I will just keep on watching? Tumne theek nahi kiya Mr. Samrat Shergill! You will have to pay for this!"

"Uday! What are you blabbering?" Gunjan said shockingly!

Uday and Benji tell about the happenings in the canteen! "Mr. Samrat Shergill! You should have not done that! You will have to pay for it!" said Gunjan.

Precap: Gang tries to lighten up Dia's mood. Sheena and Samrat go on a date.

Guys, please be true with your comments... I tried my best to make it effective and a much more clearer *Introduction*

~Love, Nivriti❤️~
Edited by SajanRox - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: gnaneswari

Nice cs. I liked it a lot. Gunjan is mayank's sis! And sam leaved the gang for sheenah! Thats sad! But i don't want sam and sheenah as a couple. Do cont soon. Thanks for pm

Hey Gnaneswari! Don't worry SaJan will be a couple soon! They say na "Love is Blind!" That is why Samrat left the gang for Sheena! Well not exactly because he is still not aware of the war of SHEE-Nah and the Gang! He will find out later! Thanks for liking it! Love, Nivriti!
P.S: Have updated the next part!😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
#24
res😉
*edited*
hey nivs...awesome part...👏...
just luvd it sooo much...cant understand sam's character in it...hes dating tht shee-nah😡...stupid..duffer...
just luvd it to d core...waiting fr sam' realization and sajan confession eagerly...😛...once again a fab job...👏⭐️👏...cnt soon...
luv u always
urs
biks😉😃😳
Edited by ambikamuskaan - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hey Biks,
I kept my promise and updated the first part of *Love is always Complicated* But you always reserve your comment! Please unres soon! I have made a special mention of that too! Hope you liked it and unres soon! Love, Nivriti❤️
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: 358674

awesome👍🏼

Thanks for liking it! Hope I made up to your expectations!😊 Love, Nivriti
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Posted: 14 years ago
#27
Nice update. I liked it. But, i don't want gunjan to be like this! This is not so gunjan! I know her charector in mjht is so sensitive. U can modify her charector, but not this way! Sorry, if u had hurted by my comment. But, i was just telling my pov. I hadn't meant to hurt. But why sam had told her all that! Is he don't know what happened between rv and dia? Waiting to read next update. Do cont soon. Thanks for pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: Kritianya

Nice concept
continue soon

Hey Kritika! Thanks for liking the concept! Will try and update soon! Love, Nivriti!😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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wonderfulll part
truely amazinggg
but hum sab ko SAJAN ka scene kab dekhne ko milega yaar...
plzzz ...
iss shee-nah ki bachhi ko toh main nai chodungii...i hate her soo much.
bechari dia ko hurt kardiya...
aur samrat ko bhi uske eyes per blind fold baandh diya...
per plzzz saare misunderstanding dur kardo..
lzzz
luv ur ff sooo muchhh
luv it
update the next part soon
thnx for the pm.

sara

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: gnaneswari

Nice update. I liked it. But, i don't want gunjan to be like this! This is not so gunjan! I know her charector in mjht is so sensitive. U can modify her charector, but not this way! Sorry, if u had hurted by my comment. But, i was just telling my pov. I hadn't meant to hurt. But why sam had told her all that! Is he don't know what happened between rv and dia? Waiting to read next update. Do cont soon. Thanks for pm

Hey Gnaneswari! I know you wanted to see Gunjan in her sensitive way! I am not hurt... Infact I am HAPPY you put in your POV! It makes me understand the expecations of my readers!😊 And Gunjan will turn into a sensitive character gradually! Hope you don't mind me saying but ~ You are being too fast to judge her character!😳 And thanks for liking the update! And yeah! Samrat is unaware about the heart-break of Dia and breakup of RanIa!😊 This is a joint plan of Shee-nah and Ranvijay! I have kept that there was no pool party and Shee-nah's true colors are still to be discovered by SAM!😳 Don't be confused! The next few updates will make it more clearer. It was just an introductory part! Will continue ASAP! Love, Nivriti!

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