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AWonderfulChaos thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
#61
wow ruchi di a heart wrenching one!! it was sad but beautufully written!! really nice!! do write more!!🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
#62

Originally posted by: RatiArTi

oh dat was a sad one😭 bt nice story pls write some sweet romantic n happy os... n pm me nxt time u write


thanx dear...i have already promised to write happy one...😛
thanx a lott😃

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Posted: 14 years ago
#63

Originally posted by: AmyArTiMayUr

Good one but pretty sad.....i prefer to have MayUr together with each other always......😃

Thanks for the pm...and once again...a nice story.and do write more😃


thanx a tonn dear....will surely write a happy one soon😃😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
#64

Originally posted by: Nikita-Sharma

wow ruchi di a heart wrenching one!! it was sad but beautufully written!! really nice!! do write more!!🤗


thanx niki for encouraging🤗

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Posted: 14 years ago
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write d nxt one soon hun😆😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: Nikita-Sharma

write d nxt one soon hun😆😳


okay bosss....bahut jaldi😃
a sweet,romantic one😛
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Posted: 14 years ago
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wow...great....but sad...:(
but i loved it
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Wow beautiful os ruchi dear
luvd it.
its sad but still luvd it very much.
Do write more.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#69
Hey frndz🤗
I am back again...and as I promised a happy OS of Mayur this time😳
Plz do read and free to give any comment/suggestion/criticism,all are welcomed. 😃

Reflexion of Love
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Nupur was standing outside the balcony,wondering about the flowers which were looking beautiful yesterday
when they were fresh but today,seem so dull and ugly duw to patches of weary skinnes.
"Love is also like these flowers ...looks so beautiful when it is new but...."she took a deep breath and tears came
into her eyes.

"why it happened with us???with our relationship???why mayank is not able to understand her now and why she
can't understand him???"

5 years back when they fall in love...they were the most perfect couple of the college!now what happened with their perfection?
she knows that she is not so beautiful,not so smart,as simple as she could have lost in crowd if mayank did come and hold her hands,but
now the person who pulled her from crowed is pushing her back and she have lost again!

"why mayank does not have time for her?why he use to come home late in the night and go office early in the morning without sighning
off to her,without saying a single word to her....sometimes she feels that they are strangers who are living with each other becoz they can't live alone!

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Today is 23 feb,Mayank and nupur's marriage anniversary

Nupur is not at all excited coz every year her excitement is ruined by mayank's office meetings , then planning for evening and
finally waiting for mayank,sleeping without taking dinner and then eating the anniversary cake in next morning or throwing it in
anger!
Mayank woke up early in the morning as usual and also forget the occassion as usual....He was ready for office and without saying a single
word he looked at nupur,there was a tear ready to fall from her eyes and she was trying to hold it for a few minuts more....
Mayank could'nt able to understand the reason behind her sad eyes...even not behind her quietness,her sadness..from past years.He was also getting late so he rushed to office.

"Good Morning sir!" saniya,his secratery said
"Morning saniya"said mayank without looking at her.
"sir!"
"yess...saniya" said mayank and looked at her...she was holding a big booke in her hands...
"sir ,for u and ur lovely wife...Happy marriage anniverary sir!"she said
Ohh My God!!!! saniya I forget ...maine apni wife ko wish bhi nai kiya....as usual" mayank had a great regret in his voice
"sir don't worry aap abhi call karke wish kar dijiye"
"no saniya...u don't noe anything,maine shayad pichle 4 saalo se ye nahi kiya,mai apne kaam apne junnon me sab bhul gaya"and mayank now
realized the reason behind teary eyes of nupur ."
"Ohh sir ! I wish mai aapke sath pahle hoti to i would never have let u to forget,sir ek wife ke liye ye din bahut special hota hai,and i can feel the excitement of this day for a wife"
Mayank was feeling so much of guilt and pain at this time,not bcoz he forget this day,but bcoz he forget how to make happy his sweetheart,he forget his love for his angel,he forget that
he has some responsiblities as a husband too!
"saniya maine apni nupur ko bahut hurt kiya hai,maine kabhi uske akelepan ko realise hi nahi kiya,kabhi uske chehre pe udasi ki vajah hi nahi jaanni chahi,maine kabhi....."and mayank voice got choked.
"Sir! plz sir aap pareshan na ho,aap ab bhi apni galtiyon ko sudhar sakte hai"
mayank looked at her in questioned face.
"sir aap aaj nupur maa'm ke liye koi surprise plan kariye and make her realise how special she is for u,Sir a girl is very emotional,she only needs love from her husband and if she gets so,she become
fully devoted to that person from all her hearts"
"Surprise...kaise...i mean..."mayank said thinking about some plan.
"sir aap pahle ye bataiye ke nupur maa'm ko kya pasand hai?"
"Nupur...my nupur is very simple,she gets happy in small things"said mayank and smiled and his eyes was wet.
"sir then u should arrange some surprise at home....i mean..."
"i got it saniya..."Mayank shouted happily.He is feeling the same enthusiasm as felt on his first date.
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Nupur was surprise to see mayank at home so soon.She was happy but can't smile as she was scared that this could be her dream.
Mayank smiled at her and said"nupur tum fresh ho jaao,u r lookin very tired"
"but mayank mai to abhi..."
"plz nupur kabhi to meri baat maan liya karo"said mayank and smiled
Nupur dragged her feet toward bathroom as that line of mayank reminded her of her old happy days...she counld'nt stop her to do so.
Nupur was thoughful about the sudden changed behaviour of mayank..Is he doing so intentionaly ?kya usey humare marriage anni yaad hai?is he planning for
some surprise?Noo...don dream nupur...it can't happen!
nupur came out of the bathroom and the room had changed,the light was dim and soft music were playing.nupur got amazed...and to her surprise suddenly mayank came infront of her
and kneeled , and asked Nupur, "May I" Nupur was so much of surprised that she could'nt say a single word..she got tears in her eyes but this time these were wat we say tears of happiness nd she willingly gave her hand to him.Mayank hold her softly in his arms....the song started...

It's amazing how you can speak right to my heart
Without saying a word you can light up the dark
Try as I may I can never explain
What I hear when you don't say a thing

The smile on your face let's me know that you need me
There's a truth in your eyes saying you'll never leave me
The touch of your hand says you'll catch me wherever I fall
You say it best, when you say nothing at all .................

they lost in eachothers arms and feeling comfort in closeness,Mayank cupped her face and kissed on her forehead "Happy Marriage Anniversary jaan"...Nupur was about to say someting
but mayank licked her lips and they were so close that they can feel the breath of eachother...."kuch na kaho nupur...mai janta hu maine tumhe bahut hurt kiya hai,par aaj mai un sabke liye
tumse sorry kahna chahta hu,dil se sorry....plz mujhe maaf kar do nupur for all i did with u,for not loving u and ...."

"shhh....now u keep quiet Mr.Sharma,tumhe mujhse maafi mangne ki koi zaroorat nahi mayank.Actually galti meri bhi thi ,maine kabhi tumhe khud se jodne ki koshish
bhi nahi ki,maine apne rishte ko bachane ke liye kabhi kuch naya karne ki koshish nahi ki...."
"to aaj kuch naya kar do Ms.sharma"mayank said naughtily
"mayank tum bhi na..."
"acha maa'm aapke liye is nacchez ne dinner banaya hai,to agar aap ki permission ho to shall we...?"
"wow u and dinner?"nupur was feeling like dancing on moon

they both went to dinner,Mayank had arranged candle light and decorated the room with red baloons and flowers.It was looking so beautiful.
"wow Mayank aaj to mai khushi se mar jaungi..."
"nahi nupur aaj na marna verna mera dinner waste ho jayega..."said mayank and smiled naughtily
"mayank!!!"they both laughed.
"dinner is very delicious mayank"said nupur taking some bites"but u forget to put salt in it"
"what????"mayank was like what to do now???
"koi baat nahi Mr.sharma ye to aapki aadat hai na 'bhulna' now it was nupur's turn to be naughty.
"nupur!"mayank hold her hands "i seriously regret my ignorance towards u..plz mujhe ek chance do and i'll prove that i love u more than anyone in this world,
nupur maine in 4 saalo me tumhe jitna door kiya hai utna khud ko bhi apne aap se door kar diya hai,aur ab mai hum dono ko pana chahta hu..."
"Mayank u need not to say that,mai to humesha se timhari thi aur humesha rahungi,tum mujhe khud se door karoge to tumhara intzaar karungi..par mai
tumse door kabhi nahi jaungi.tears filled in both of them's eyes...
"I love u nupur..."
"I love u too mayank"
They sat there , embracing each other. Feeling contented, with their confession...and Mayank hold her ,went to bedroom and they both lost in the intensity of love.


so that is it....waiting for ur precious comments.😳
with love
ruchi🤗
Edited by ruchi89 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey cool sweety, so u r back😊

will b back wid d comments soon😃

tk cr n thnx fr d pm😉

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