Hey Radhi 1st of all Congrats 4 writing Ur 1st Os.....I must say The Os was cute and adorable....Each scene n dialogue was Nice...
Samrat-The Boss,Gunjan - PA,boss Love at 1st sight N Both love one another But pretend they hate 2 hide their love,then confession of love,Gun in Sam LAP and Sajan intimate kiss
OMG! when I read this whole story I felt as if I was reading Full romantic MILLS & BOON Type story😉😉.............In M&B also boss n PA fell n love n pretend 2 hate n then unite in love😉😉...
Wow!! what a Story Radhii...Good work.....Samrat name Full Meaning- S 4 SADU etc was also nice😉.....Nice OS............................
Wasey RADHII Tumney MEREY SAMRAT KO KHADOOS Kaha😡😲 ........Pheley Joseph Neh SAM ko Khadoos kaha and Now U also.😲😲...AND Yeh Sam Bhi Thoda Khadoos Thoda Joseph Ke SAM Jasa Hai .......😉😆..........By the way 😉Samrat Khadoos Nahi hai Sam is Excellent 😉😆😃..............
But really Radhii Story was Awesome ...👏.........Do write more Os dear n Pm me whenever u write one....Thanks 4 Pm🤗...........................
Love Gunjan😊😊......................
Edited by 1gunjan7 - 14 years ago