OS-Nupur Bhushan:Not so typical Girl! - Page 3

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Posted: 14 years ago
#21
It was an extra-ordinary piece!!

sometimes when u live ur life according to norms and society it makes u so deprived of love and affection that the first chance u see to avail it becomes the ultimate goal of life, and at that time no boundaries can be taken into account.

loved reading it!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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awesooooome........
superb....
fab.......
loved it....
thanx for the pm.......
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Posted: 14 years ago
#23
awesome one sanam......😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Reserved...Missing you dee🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
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:) your writing is not bad at all...n stop thinking that it is not mature.
Actually it was really nice... i like the way u have portrayed nupur because there are actually people i recognize who are like that and i think its awsome to have that kind of attitude towards life.
Yea i was anticipating a happy ending n actually it is a happy ending but not wht a typical reader would guess.... :) thx
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Posted: 14 years ago
#26
beautiful OS Sanam!
very well written
thnx for the pm 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
#27
beautiful os
dat was different n u portrayed nupur feelings n emotions vry well
luved it dear
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hey
u back so happy
u call this piece immature
gosh wht a creature r u??
It's so beautiful

loved it

cont soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Your writing is good 😊 but the topic quite controversial.....i dont approve of a 16 year old succumbing to this sort of temptation....i mean how much does she even know about people or life at that point in time...and this precisely explains why theres such a highly prevalent problem like teenage pregnancies in today's world!

my personal belief is that you shouldnt completely surrender yourself to someone unless you know they will vow to be with you through every phase of your life (which to me means marriage)....i know im probably standing in what has become a minority of the population in today's date but i feel proud of the same....i think your willingness or lack there of to allow someone to have that right over you shows how much you respect yourself as an individual

this is not to say that i think you're trying to endorse this type of behavior....well i hope not.....because this very reason (of teens thinking of sex as a casual thing) scares me for when i will have kids in the future....it seems like all innocence is lost

but sorry to get into that whole realm of discussion....about your writing once again, i think the style is great 😊

naina
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Posted: 14 years ago
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....this is so beautiful the girl who gave me encouragement to write is now mocking her own writing, what has the world come to??😆

I like your portrayal and yes i do bits of me in it...in a strange weird kind of way ...and my weird acceptance of love but did you have to show it this way!😕 sacchi yaar.
Anyway its beautiful.
@ Naina - i don't think she was trying to say that the girl surrendered herself at the tender age of 16....i doubt it..😕 i think when she was 16....meant that she is older now when she let her emotions take a toll on her!!!😛

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