Your writing is good 😊 but the topic quite controversial.....i dont approve of a 16 year old succumbing to this sort of temptation....i mean how much does she even know about people or life at that point in time...and this precisely explains why theres such a highly prevalent problem like teenage pregnancies in today's world!
my personal belief is that you shouldnt completely surrender yourself to someone unless you know they will vow to be with you through every phase of your life (which to me means marriage)....i know im probably standing in what has become a minority of the population in today's date but i feel proud of the same....i think your willingness or lack there of to allow someone to have that right over you shows how much you respect yourself as an individual
this is not to say that i think you're trying to endorse this type of behavior....well i hope not.....because this very reason (of teens thinking of sex as a casual thing) scares me for when i will have kids in the future....it seems like all innocence is lost
but sorry to get into that whole realm of discussion....about your writing once again, i think the style is great 😊
naina
Edited by sumonetolub - 14 years ago