A Romantic Rendezvous/OS corner/new OS p118 - Page 60

Originally posted by: love.mayurarti

Amazing os

Originally posted by: mayu-nups

nice os

Originally posted by: MayUr-ArTi_fan

This time I'm not late😆
Coming to the os it's brilliant as usual 👏 I love the fact that you didn't make mayank or nupur flirts despite the fact that both are so good looking👍🏼 there are very few such people👎🏼 the chocolate bit was too sweet😍 it was adorable that even though he never payed any attention to other girls he still knows what she likes and dislikes😊 nupur's reaction to vicky's love letter was amazing such people deserve such treatment👎🏼Mayank getting happy was cute😆 and the jealous collegues was great too😆 the entire shopping bit was super adorable😃 love the way her heartbeat raised at his proximity and the eating buying was sweet too😛 ice-cream bit was too cute especially the yours is sweeter compliment to nupur😍 and the fact that she also felt it got sweeter after he tasted it was like a chocolate(don't like cherry😳🤣) on the cake the beauty with brains compliment is spot on be it for nupur or the person playing her👍🏼 the confession was unexpected but super sweet😍 I love the way nupur blurted out her feelings and Mayank's shock was super adorable too😍 end was beautiful😍 they really are meant to be in each others arms forever and ever😍
keep writing more you know youre writing puts the biggest smile in the world on my face😃
thanks for the pm🤗

Originally posted by: .Divya.

This is like the sweetest and cutest OS ever written by you Shubs... A guy shopping for hours without complaining... WOW.. That's the cherry of this entire OS...

Brilliantly written Shubs.. 😊 😃 😃

Edited on pg 79 😃 🤗

Originally posted by: shubhsArti

@ ALL Ms.RESS,
guys edit your comments soon yaar, i am dying to know what you all think of the OS.😆😆😆

Originally posted by: Nikita-Sharma

Reserved...🤗

**EDITED**

awww...😍❤️ you kno the way you present the cute innocent love, thats so wonderful!! and your osz..whole story altogthr!! wow man Awesome!! 😳.. loved it so so so much!! I really liked the way you reasoned out everythng.;D and yeah it made me miss MN even more...the chocolate bit, the way she asked him out, the shpping session <3 and the icecream part! I dont think it was arrogance, it was Hotness...hehe :P well hotness also has its diff diff defination :P...and the confession was sooo cute!!...m totally in awe of ur os!!❤️ ...keep writing Shubu...seriously u have so many stories to say , you should really start off a ff...its my request/advice/demand...😃

Do keep writing...thanks for sharing!! 🤗 🤗 🤗

PS- dont b a kanjoos :P 😳

loads of love and hugs

Niks 😳