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Faria Ferdousi

@Faria.

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#581

edittt
shubs love u darling
hayeee kya OS tha yaar
chooo chweet janu
mayur convo , their shopping and then icecream scene - each n every part was amazing
specially icecram wala part- it was damn cute...
hahahahaha loved maaynk here- gosh it was so unexpected... nups got shocked..lol lol

and their confession.. totally amyurish- jara hatke
the whole updatre was too much good
simply beautiful and rocking os

i know my shubs is superb in mayur os

oye i want more and this time i want a amyur OS with Shilpa aunty and i wanna see nups bonding with S.A

plz plz mere liye aisa ek os likho

take care
love ya

Edited by -Faria- - 13 years ago

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.SA.

@.SA.

Trailblazer

Posted: 13 years ago

#582

Originally posted by: -Faria-
edittt
shubs love u darling
hayeee kya OS tha yaar
chooo chweet janu
mayur convo , their shopping and then icecream scene - each n every part was amazing
specially icecram wala part- it was damn cute...
hahahahaha loved maaynk here- gosh it was so unexpected... nups got shocked..lol lol

and their confession.. totally amyurish- jara hatke
the whole updatre was too much good
simply beautiful and rocking os

i know my shubs is superb in mayur os

oye i want more and this time i want a amyur OS with Shilpa aunty and i wanna see nups bonding with S.A

plz plz mere liye aisa ek os likho

take care
love ya

thank you Fari.🤗
you made my day.😃
aapka hukum sir aankhon par.will try to write one with Mayu's mom.

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mayur_eternal

@mayur_eternal

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#583

Shubu..do u read my mind?Seriously..I was gonna ask u to update the gallery as u had promised..and what do i see when i check the pms 😃
U excel in all styles of writing..whether its a passionate one or a simple and cute one..(and dnt ever try an emotional one on our Mayur or Arti😆)
The first thing I loved in it is that Mayank congratulated her with her fav chocolates and a million dollar smile for her witty and much-deserving lessons to a flirt😳..and then he went with her for shopping..thats like a wow considering its Mr.Sadu we are talking about..
and the jewellery and ice-cream parts were really cute esp the ice cream one..they were behaving like a typical couple there..😳..and that second I knew a confession was due to be out any moment..but I expected Mayank to be the first to confess..but signals were pretty clear from his side that Nupur didnt have any diff in confessing her feelings first☺️
It was really superb..Luved it!!
If we could actually make this one shots into shows,Arti would've rocked again!!😳
Sigh!!miss them!!❤️

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Zehnaseeb

@Zehnaseeb

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#584

This time I'm not late😆
Coming to the os it's brilliant as usual 👏 I love the fact that you didn't make mayank or nupur flirts despite the fact that both are so good looking👍🏼 there are very few such people👎🏼 the chocolate bit was too sweet😍 it was adorable that even though he never payed any attention to other girls he still knows what she likes and dislikes😊 nupur's reaction to vicky's love letter was amazing such people deserve such treatment👎🏼Mayank getting happy was cute😆 and the jealous collegues was great too😆 the entire shopping bit was super adorable😃 love the way her heartbeat raised at his proximity and the eating buying was sweet too😛 ice-cream bit was too cute especially the yours is sweeter compliment to nupur😍 and the fact that she also felt it got sweeter after he tasted it was like a chocolate(don't like cherry😳🤣) on the cake the beauty with brains compliment is spot on be it for nupur or the person playing her👍🏼 the confession was unexpected but super sweet😍 I love the way nupur blurted out her feelings and Mayank's shock was super adorable too😍 end was beautiful😍 they really are meant to be in each others arms forever and ever😍
keep writing more you know youre writing puts the biggest smile in the world on my face😃
thanks for the pm🤗

Edited by MayUr-ArTi_fan - 13 years ago

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Divya

@MyInspirationz

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#585

This is like the sweetest and cutest OS ever written by you Shubs... A guy shopping for hours without complaining... WOW.. That's the cherry of this entire OS...

Brilliantly written Shubs.. 😊 😃 😃

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.SA.

@.SA.

Trailblazer

Posted: 13 years ago

#586

Originally posted by: 18anila1
awww...
dat was such an adorable OS...
i loved it lodsss...
beautifully written...
awesome OS...
d shopping thing actually dont go wid guys...
bt it was cute...
n d ice-cream part was cute n nice...
bt d CONFESSION was total hatke type...
i mean i nvr expected an confession like dat...
so it was a pleasant surprise...
n i loved it lodsss...
thanks for d pm...
will b waiting for ur another awesome OS like dis...
love ya...🤗

thanks a lot Anila.🤗
glad you loved my work.😊

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@.SA.

Trailblazer

Posted: 13 years ago

#587

Originally posted by: crazymayurian
osom

thanks a lot dear.😃

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@.SA.

Trailblazer

Posted: 13 years ago

#588

Originally posted by: nikki028
omggg such a lovelyyy os shubhsss...thnx to Nikhi(Angels_sweetz)she ws d one who told me abt this os of urs... reallyyy wonderfulll writing from u...👏

thanks a lot Nikki. glad you loved it.😃
& thanks to Nikhi too.😊

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.SA.

@.SA.

Trailblazer

Posted: 13 years ago

#589

Originally posted by: mayur_eternal
Shubu..do u read my mind?Seriously..I was gonna ask u to update the gallery as u had promised..and what do i see when i check the pms 😃
U excel in all styles of writing..whether its a passionate one or a simple and cute one..(and dnt ever try an emotional one on our Mayur or Arti😆)
The first thing I loved in it is that Mayank congratulated her with her fav chocolates and a million dollar smile for her witty and much-deserving lessons to a flirt😳..and then he went with her for shopping..thats like a wow considering its Mr.Sadu we are talking about..
and the jewellery and ice-cream parts were really cute esp the ice cream one..they were behaving like a typical couple there..😳..and that second I knew a confession was due to be out any moment..but I expected Mayank to be the first to confess..but signals were pretty clear from his side that Nupur didnt have any diff in confessing her feelings first☺️
It was really superb..Luved it!!
If we could actually make this one shots into shows,Arti would've rocked again!!😳
Sigh!!miss them!!❤️

OMG Amu ,you have made me all senti yaar, your comment is one of the best i have ever received.
🤗🤗🤗
love you.
i love to do the unexpected😆😆 thats why Nupur took the lead.
after all she is todays girl ,who knows what she wants & is not afraid of going after it.