A Romantic Rendezvous/OS corner/new OS p118 - Page 51

Originally posted by: DhanakZ

😳

it was extremely romantic

kash show ma bhi bath tub wala scenes ka wakt sajan entery na marta to hay

I loved it u know still I am blushing do hard

thanks for pm

write more on Mayur

Originally posted by: MayUr-ArTi_fan

finally editing i'm sorry i'm horribly slow all the time👎🏼 ask jenu, kinza baji or even yourself i take forever replying😆

coming to the os like i said in the pm it is absolutely amazing👏i had serious doubts about a continuation to this scene since i still have never been able to figure out what they were planning to do or more importantly what Mayank was planning to do but you cleared up everything☺️and that too in a very sweet and romantic way. It was in no way vulgar like you were doubting it might be😳it was a simple and sweet os in which i could easily picture MN. MN not AR🤣 that goes a bit too far🤣 i never knew you could write romance this well😲you surprise me every day Shubhu😆 but honestly the description/detail is really well written without being OTT and it made me blush really badly☺️ wont write more since i cant get into details of the OS😆but loved each and every bit its one of your best OS's ever tied with the PBM one of course☺️

thanks for the pm keep writing more love you🤗

Originally posted by: Bhawna_arti

Lovly os.

Originally posted by: palz_ArTi4ever

finally u agreed to whatever i said dat day..😊u made a right decision no doubt..exceptionally well written...wish they could come up with such a scene in the real show...😳 do come up with such piece of writing in future as well..🤗

Originally posted by: shubhsArti

thank you Payal.😳😳
ps-kuch zyaada ho gaya kya??😳😳

Originally posted by: surbhi.sur

sooo romantic...

Originally posted by: daniella05

awesome n romantic❤️

blushing ☺️☺️

Originally posted by: shubhsArti

ho Priya , shevati me post kela majha OS.
kasa kela majhe mala thauk 😆😆.
glad you loved it.love you too.

ps-why this emoticon(😳) 😕😆