Originally posted by: yulZ
Ok i just cooked our dinner and had it .. unwillingly to go in there aswell 🤣 actualli wasnt hungry but mom forced to have diner so i did and just came to room.. mood was a bit gloomy 😆 so came to IF as i KNEW the smile that was lost in my face will appear like a magic if i am in here 😎 OMG now its like ur biography or something,.. 😳 🤣 🤣
and ya i was right 😎 thanx Sumi for ur beautiful post !! Awww... 😳
i did had a look at it yesterday before going to bed but didnt read it all as it looked LONG :O 🤣 but i was sure that i will chck it today and i did !! n mannnnn i am soooo glad that i checked it 😃 otherwise missing this OS would be like the worst thing would happen in my life 🥺🤣 well waise bhi padhke bhi kaun sa acchi baat huyi hai.. mera ghau aur fresh hogaya hai now 😳🤣 i will surely kill u one day Sumi 😡🤣 What a contradictory statement.. 🤔 👍🏼 🤣 In short.. You wanted to kill me.. 🥺 🤣
Now 1st thing i go impressed by was ur theme of the OS :) aww it was adorableee 😳 my Gunji lookss sooo chweet when she was complaining abt her hubby 😳😳 i honestly wished this whole scene to be in REAL MJHT ❤️ we would have gone crazyyyyyyyy then 🤪 I agree on this part.. 😍 Its likeeee the BESTTTT !! I was not getting bored, i was having fun, i was blushing, i was going aw in some bits, i was smiling and wat not ?? oo ya became jealous too *hmph*🤣 Jealous dinosaur.. *sticks out tongue* 🤣 but i LOVEE LOVEE LOVEEEEEEEEED it soo soo much :) this is my 1st OS reading and i am in LOWEEEEE with it ☺️🤣 gawddd u made me goo gaga over it now.. i think i will end up reading it abt 5 times daily 😳 OMG! That means soo much sid.. 😳 😆 M soo glad that u liked it bro.. 😃 i mean dudee its just sooo amazingg that only an idiot would miss to read it 😳 *blushes like a tomato* ☺️
the way u wrote the dialoguesss ,, the use of them in proper places and the perfect emotions just made its a complete package yarr ❤️ i cant say anythingg.. iam just left speechless !! 👏👏👏 Can u EVER be left speechless.. ? 😲 😳 🤣
lol abt the messing house comment all ican say is " Goo gunji goooooo😎🤣"
thats it !! i cant say anything more now !! coz my hands are shaking yarr.. its just toooo good 👍🏼 the hug at the end and ahem ahem the kiss 😡🤣 were the icing on the cake just like Sammy said ;P
erm abt the "i yell coz i care" 🤔 u chor .. u choriede MS dialogue to use in SG :o how could u ?😲🤣🤣 lol that made it PERFECT Sumi 😉 but ya how abt changing the title to "sth" that is made frm combining both SaJan & Monaya ? 🤣 That dialogue was intentional.. 😎
n wat u a pthetic writer ?? 😳 achii joke marleti ho😃🤣 I am serious.. 😳
n ya erm one thing i would like to advise so that u can become better 😊
Please next time when u write it think abt us and dont make it too good like this one ok 🤣 Lolzz.. Infact this is my last OS .. 😃
AWESOMEE Sumi !! 👏 👏 its the beautiful post i have ever read.. kasam se 😳
btw i know its such a silly Qs but wats OS 🤣