One-shot! MayankNupur. Just The Way You Are.

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Ritu.V

@Ritu.V

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Posted: 14 years ago

"@ havokhotline

Do not know ur name.. but i must tell u .. I loved this FF... it has got the meaning. ... it is kind of Mills & Boons Story .some people feel closer by small hugs and kisses , some thinks it is not good.. but U do not have to change to make relationship work, other half shud accept u the way u r .His reason was valid and her avoiding him was reasonable also.. both were right but they needed to communicate . It suits Mayank and Nupur a lot ... Thanks ..

Please do write more ...

Edited by Ritu.mjhtrv - 14 years ago

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mjht-geet-dmg

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Posted: 14 years ago

Lovelyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy ,..Loved it 😊

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Faria Ferdousi

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Posted: 14 years ago

Wow dear
it was a very beautiful oS
amazing dear
do write more

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Auroni

@Auroni.92

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Posted: 14 years ago

Enjoying thoroughly while reading...Wonderful piece of work...

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Alisha2887

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Posted: 14 years ago

Beautiful OS

Please do write more

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AmyArTiMayUr

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Posted: 14 years ago

This was a great piece of work...you write really well...please do write more😃

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Fatty :)

@havokhotline

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Auroni.92
Enjoying thoroughly while reading...Wonderful piece of work...

Hey :D

This is Subi here. Thank you so much for the comments :D I will be posting another OS soon ! :D

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Supriya

@-SupriyaluvsMN-

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Posted: 14 years ago

hey!!!
dat ws Awesum!!!!
totally luvd it!!!
do write more!!!

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Kankshita

@thegameison

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Bete, you dint have to be so cheesy, uh?! Ouch, what do I say? I enjoy reading your works, they seem to me like you enjoy writing every bit of your pieces. If you like them, why should I mind, right? I totally love your skill, and you're creative, somehow. You should try writing other stuff too, you've the conviction - I am quite sure you'd manage serious writing and other topics easily and beautifully too.

And as for this, one - I liked how you wrapped it up. No, not the 'cups her face and kisses' but how he loses himself to her, after all. This strikingly resembles Mayank, you know. And I sorta like it when a man loses his inhibition and displays what he feels. That has an ironic ring to it, and you captured it really well.

P.S. They are both clingy, I think. Unhygienic people! 🤓

-Kankshita

Edited by -Kanky- - 14 years ago