WITH YOU ALWAYS -A SaJan SS {COMPLETED} - Page 11

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Posted: 14 years ago
All the 3 parts mindblowing.Wtg. 4 the 4th part.
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aweosmeeee updt loved it loved how samrat support gunjan contineu soon
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: SajanRox11

OMGG Guys!

You are doing a great job!
This is such an awesome SS!!
Its even better than mine! I loved it!
Superbb yaaar!
I Loved the way you guys wrote it!
First Samrats naughty behavior and then his MOM!
CRAPPY LADY! Hate her! she sucks!
But I lovved Sam! as usual! he just rockked it in front of his MOM!
LOL!
he shud have sed na.. "Agar yeh aapko MOM nahi bulayegi toh main bhi nahi bulaoongaa!"
Awesome guys!
Im actually Loving this SS of yours!
Good Job!
And from me a badge:
Love Youu!
Manjari..

OMG Manjari .........Thanks a lot for the bedge ......... n we are not as good as u r sweety ... U r a born writer n we are just starters ..... but u r the best ....I m happy that u liked our very frst SS.😃
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: SwaNia_1

OMG Manjari .........Thanks a lot for the bedge ......... n we are not as good as u r sweety ... U r a born writer n we are just starters ..... but u r the best ....I m happy that u liked our very frst SS.😃

Thats because it is beautifully Written!
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Res! vl read it very soon n vl edit my rply here hun! :)
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Posted: 14 years ago
heyyyyyyyyyy superb awesome part..
d sajan kitchen scenes were very cute..n hatee sam's mom..sam loves gunjan soo much..lovd his emotional side..u wrote it very very well..👏im loving dis ss..do cont soon n thanks 4 d pm..😊
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samrat rocks!! Lovd da way he was teling hs mom!! The part was amzng! Pls cmtnue soon
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loved ur ss a lot...can u plz pm me from next tym....................
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Hi Friends.....We are back with NEW Updates Parts of our SS😊 Thank you all for your encouraging Comments. Here is "PART 4". We hope it is up to your Expectations. Do Please Comment and Criticize.......We would love to hear😳
Thanks to SOHAM for helping us with this particular track.



Love,
SwaNia_1 & 2

PART- 4
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As Samrat's mom left the room she had devious plans taking form in her mind.


I - { Tum Kuch bhi karlo Gunjan ! tumhen toh Samrat se alag hona hi hoga.......I can't tolerate U with my son.}

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S - Chahe koi kuch bhi kahe .......Chashmish ko main apne se kabhi bhi alag nahin hone doonga.

And Samrat hugged Gunjan tightly.


No one ate that night. Samrat and Gunjan were together in their room. Gunjan still had teary eyes and this was disturbing Samrat. If only he did not have that important meeting tomorrow.......he would have taken Gunjan someplace where she would at least for the time being forget what had happened.

S - Chashmish......tum theek toh ho na??????? Mom ki baatoon se pareshan hone ki zaroorat nahin.....she is not Important in our life.Jab mujhe unki sabse zyada zaroorat thi tab woh mujhe akela chhod gayeen.......Jab woh gayeen toh mera fault bhi nahin tha...toh unhone mujhe kaunse baat ki punishment di???? Aaj unhen koi haq nahin ki,woh tumhen wrong kahen. Main yeh sab wahan unke saamne kehta par mujhe pata hai ki, yeh baat tumhen achhi nahin lagti iss liye maine yeh unse nahin kaha.

G - Main mom ki baatoon se pareshan nahin hoon Samrat........woh maa hain....unhen haq hai............I M feeling guilty...because, meri wajah se tumhe kitna kuch sun na pada....... aaj kitne dinon baad tum apni mom se mile aur meri wajah se.....

Samrat smiled ...this is so like my Chashmish and hugged her. Gunjan was taken aback......but seeing Samrat's face she was lost in him......both were looking into each other's eyes......love was definitely in the air.......both forgot about their problem that was pacing about in her room.

Samrat pulled Gunjan closer to him as his hands moved over her back. Gunjan did not resist.....all her tension simply vanished when she was in her husband's arms...........Samrat gently moved her hair behind her shoulder and kissed her on the neck. Gunjan closed her eyes in sheer bliss......as Samrat's lips moved .... on her face..........

Slowly both moved towards the bed, still engrossed in each other and Samrat gently laid Gunjan down on the bed and switched of the lights........



Next Morning-

G- Hey Samrat...utho !! ..............aaj tumhari meeting hai na???????? Jaldi utho!!

Samrat moved lazily .......but when he saw his good luck charm smiling at him........he was out of bed in a jiffy........he knew his day was going to be awesome......the meeting would be successful ..........after all Gunjan had brought only good luck in his life.

G- Tum jaldi ready ho jaao aur breakfast ke liye aa jaao. Mom is waiting for U.

Hearing his mom's name , Samrat frowned....but then decided that this day was too good to spoil......with their first wedding anniversary round the corner ,Samrat had planned a surprise for Gunjan.

At the breakfast table..all three were eating......all were hungry as no one had eaten last night.Samrat was reading the newspaper while eating and his mom was looking at him.

I- Tumhari khana khaate waqt read karne ki habit abhi bhi hai???????

Samrat did not reply........Gunjan gently moved the paper away and told Samrat to reply to his mom .

S- Nahin........main dinning table par everyday read nahin karta. Chashmish ko yeh baat pasand nahin hai aur joh baat chashmish ko pasand nahin woh baat main karna nahin chahta............

Mom hated this statement......but,she doesn't say anything.

Samrat was ready to leave for office. Gunjan wished him best of luck for his meeting and before his mom could say anything , Samrat had left.

Gunjan was busy in preparing lunch. The door bell rang and Gunjan opened the door to find Neil standing there.

G- Neil ,Hi ! ! what a pleasant surprise!!!!!!!! aaj itne dinon ke baad tumhen apni iss dost ki yaad ayee??

N- arrey!!...........Mrs. Samrat Shergill...mujhe andar aane ko nahin kahogi????

G- (Smiling).........sorry!!....aao na...........kaho kaise yaad aayi hamari??? Thodi der pahle aate toh Samrat se bhi mulaqat ho jaati...

N- Woh Actually, Meri nayee film ka Premier hai........toh socha jinki life par film banayi hai unhen sabse first invite karta hoon. Mujhe pata tha ki abhi Samrat ghar par nahin hoga Its OK...main usse phone par invite kar doonga..... yeh lo Invitation Card.

Gunjan accepted the invitation and was about to say something when sam's mom came in...and asked rudely...

I- Yeh kaun hain , Gunjan???..........she asked.........thinking about something.

G- Ji yeh Neil hain........hamare Friend. Apni film ki premier par invite karne aaye hain.

I- Oh...........hello main Sam ki mom hoon. Gunjan apne dost ke liye coffee nahin banaogi???????? ...........She asked sweetly.

Gunjan was surprised to see mom speaking so sweetly with her. [[Poor girl... was happy too...........If only she knew what was going on in mom's head!!!!!!!!!!]]

I- Toh kabse jaante ho tum Sam ko???????

N- Ji !! Actually,Woh main Gunjan ka dost hoon.........MORENA main hum saath saath padhte the.......yahan Mumbai aane ke baad jab Gunjan se mulaqat huyee toh Samrat se bhi mila.......aur phir hum Dost bane.....

[[ Poor Neil............had no clue how he was helping that woman scheme against Gunjan.]]

He told Sam's mom everything about himself.

Sam's mom had a look of victory on her face............she knew all the trust and love could be broken with this one pawn............Neil.............or so she thought.

After Neil left , Gunjan finished her cooking and went to her MIL's room to ask her to come for lunch.But,She(Sam's mom) flatly refused saying,she was not hungry.

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When Samrat came home in the evening his mother was waiting for him. Gunjan was in their room as she had a headache.After some general convo. Mom said to Samrat-

I- Sam......aaj Gunjan ne tumhen through the day call kiya tha???

S- Mom Gunjan mujhe nahin , main usse call karta hoon......uski voice sunta hoon toh accha lagta hai.......dil ko sukoon milta hai. But aaj mujhe time hi nahin mila usse phone karne ka aur usne bhi nahin kiya............hai kahan woh???

I- Apne room main.......aaj uska dost aaya tha na........toh woh bahot khush hai.

S- DOST!!......... kaunsa Dost??????

I- Neil..............tumhen pata nahin tha ki woh aa raha hai???

S- NEIL aaya tha????????

And he ran upstairs............
She was happy.......she thought she had hit bull's eye......now a fight and some more misunderstandings later Gunjan would be out of Sam's life.

S- Chashmish...aaj Neil aaya tha?????? Kya kaha usne?????? kahan tha woh itne dinon tak..?????

G- Samrat....woh apni new film ki premiere ka invitation dene aaya tha...........this Thu. ko hai.........usne tumhen call nahin kiya??

S- Nahin aaj woh main busy tha naa meeting mein......toh cell off rakha tha...........but kya keh raha tha woh????

Gunjan told him everything and Samrat was really happy to hear about Neil's progress. It was then that he realised that Gunjan did not look well.

S- Kya baat hai Chashmish?????? Tumhari tabiyat theek nahin lag rahi.

G- Kuch nahin Samrat. bas thoda headache hai.......aaram karoongi toh theek ho jaayega. Tumhari meeting kaisi thi??????

S- Meeting toh successful honi hi thi.....Morning mein sabse pahle apni Chashmish ko jo dekha tha....... (He smiled)

Samrat said with a gleam in his eyes.

G-Tum aur tumhari flirting...!!(she said with false anger...and smiled) Wait,Tumhare liye kuch khane ke liye laati hoon.I know,Aaj meeting ke chakkar main tumne lunch bhi theek se nahin kiya hoga.

Samrat smiled at his Chashmish.........she knew him so well.

S- Toh aaj lunch main tumne kya khaya????

G-Samrat woh aaj breakfast itna heavy hua tha ki.... I skipped lunch.

S-No wonder tumhen headache hai.Tum apna care kabhi nahin karti...hamesha doosron ki fikr zyada hoti hai tumhen...

Gunjan was about to say something when Samrat stopped her and said........

"Main abhi tumhare liye medicine le aata hoon.Aur aaj hum dono Dinner Date par chalenge......."

G- Aur Mom??????? Woh akeli ghar par.......

S- Ab Chashmish , Date par toh mom ko lekar nahin jaa sakte na??????

And smiling , he left ....

G- I know Samrat , tum mujhe better feel karane ki koshish kar rahe ho.Main bhi try karoongi ki mom ka behavior mujhe jyada effect na kare.

Outside the room............

S- Main janta hoon chashmish......Mom ke aane se tum bahot jyada stressed out ho. But aaj dinner par main tumhe ek surprise doonga. I am sure tum bahot khush ho jaaogi.

Samrat knew Gunjan was stressed out with his mom's entry. And so he knew... his plan to celebrate their anniversary would cheer her up.

Samrat went downstairs to get lime water for Gunjan. Mom was waiting to see an upset Samrat but was quite annoyed to see a worried Samrat. She was wondering what could have happened and asked in fake concern.....Kya baat hai Samrat??? Gunjan theek toh hai naa????

S- haan......she just has a headache toh medicine le jaa raha hoon uske liye.

And Samrat left from there......his mom was bewildered.........did nothing happen??????? Does Samrat trust Gunjan so much that knowing about her past with Neil he is not bothered that Neil had visited when he was not in home????

As Samrat was going up to his room his mom stopped him

I- 1 sec.,Kya tumhen koi farak nahin padta ki Gunjan se milne uska aashiq aaya tha???? kaisi ladki hai yeh??? Accha hai..........tum office chale jaao aur yahan.....

S- Enough mom!! And,Please! Stop It............I just hated you till now but now I pity you.Do U know...what R U saying?? You don't know anything about Friendship , Love & Trust ........how would you know anyway????????? Have you ever loved anyone? All you have loved is Money,Status ........so,how would you know about the love that Gunjan and I share??????????

Samrat angrily stormed off from there.

I- { I know.....What I want....?? Yeh tum nahin.....Uss ladki ka Jadoo bol raha hai.....Usne mere Bete ko Mujhse dur kar diya.....Usse Main.......!! }

Mom knew it was not going to be easy to separate these 2.......she had to have a better and bigger plan .......no misunderstanding was going to separate them....... she would have to keep them away from each other physically..........so with time they would move apart

She went to her room to think about her plan and waiting for a chance to implement it. Unknowingly.......Samrat was going to help her implement that plan.......[[but would that plan succeed???????????...To B Continued....]]

Edited by SwaNia_1 - 14 years ago

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