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Saniya

@saniya.x

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Posted: 14 years ago

#11

WOW, this was beautiful ! I miss Gunji-Ash convo's, the beginning was very descriptive i could visualize it all !

This line made me blush "Oops" she grinned a big one "excuse me ashwini, it's my hubby" 😆☺️

Write more😳

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nisha

@XSilentWishesX

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+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#12

Beautiful OS ZJ!

WOW i loved the way u described nature!😍

Too good!👍🏼😍

I agree with this os u know a lot!

Ash is not selfish!

There comes times in our life where we have to take a stand for ourselves!

And u exactly showed it!

I admired the way Gunjan spoke!

Simply lovely!

Altogether the concept and the bonding between Gunjan and ash was mindblowing!

Thanks for the pm and write more 🤗

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Mystery

@desiresoul

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Posted: 14 years ago

#13

hey ZJ awesomeeee os loved it jst loved the way u described ash and gunjan emotions simply beautiful thanx 4 the pm

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gurpreet

@preety88

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+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#14

fantastic awesome os...u should write more

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gunjan

@1gunjan7

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Posted: 14 years ago

#15

Hey Zeejay OMG !! Wow!! 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

Ur Os -"A Day In The Life Of Gunjan Shergill "Has Left me speechless.....Its so so excellent👏👏.................................U have written it very beautifully........Its just completely Truly Awesome👍🏼👍🏼⭐️⭐️👏👏.....Its so Good that While reading I was Visualising the whole scene 😍infact I was drooling and was in dreamland😍..................Ur Os is Rocking......................Ur description of nature , talk between Ash n gunjan everything was Fabulous👍🏼⭐️👏..............................And in the last when gunjan said "Oops excuse me ashwini its My Hubby" when Gunjan Shergill said these words I had a smile on my face 😊....................Now I am returning to my Monaya dreamland to Dream n drool over Ur Os and Gunjan n Gunjans Hubby Samrat 😍😉😊........Sajan /Monaya rock👍🏼👏...Sajan/Monaya are very very sweet n Januable😊👏.............................

Once again Superb Os and u are a Fantastic writer...........👍🏼⭐️👏⭐️👏......Do Write More OS ZJ...............................And Thanks 4 the Pm🤗.......................................

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mehak arora

@Mojo.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#16

wow u such a good writer u seriously write so good........r u a real writer???? i think so because ur story was so good and the way you wrote it was fab....😊

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Maisha007

@Maisha007

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+ 6

Posted: 14 years ago

#17

its a very different os!!!! loveddd it alottt!!!!!!!!!

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Aaru77

@Aaru77

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Posted: 14 years ago

#18

Beautiful OS.. aww loved ash character here and more the conflicts .... good job ..

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Sadaf Rizwan

@saduf

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#19

hey zee....very long time?huh? anyways...loved your OS alot

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SoniRita

@SoniRita

Viewbie

+ 64

Posted: 14 years ago

#20

hey ZJ wowww after so longgggg u writing OS naa m so happy u wrote OS dis is called rocking come back lol anyways wat a beautiful OS dear ur OS i always admire n loveee da starting was jst superb da way u descibe da nature it was peaceful for me i can visualize dat n den talk between ash-gunji loved it so emotional i loveee der bonding miss ash-gunji talk man bt seriosly u did full justice to ash character as u loveee ash rite n den hayee da last line "oops excuse me ash my hubby" hayeeeeeeeeee me in dreamland now of sajan/monaya heheh anyways u r an amzing writer dear👏⭐️ do write more

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