Sajan OS- test of love :))

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Posted: 14 years ago
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its been ages i have written any OS on sajan so today i thought to write one shot on sajan this is not based on mjht i hope u will like it ,do read it and share ur views missing them badly but lets just revive them with such a OS i hope i will do justice to this OS with sajan's char

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one man stepped out from train watching hustle and bustle on platform he is more nervous ,tensed, happy to meet her first time yes first meet of his first love, its not like that he never dated anyone but he never felt such a happy feeling in his life b4 this like butterflies got in his stomach how would she look like ,will she be as same as i was thinking and dreaming from past 2 years , yes its been 2 years he is in contact with her but he never see her bcz it was their deal if they will find that they r perfect for each other and understand then they will proceed in their any kind of relation whether it would be friendship or love but he knew from the first with her all convo on phone or e-mail that she is the lady who can understand him well more than himself she is so innocent so pure and he always felt this with her each and every words she must be beautiful bcz her heart is so pure and beautiful that one thought gave him goosebump and smile came on his face like first time one girl made blush to samrat shergill yes samrat shergill one of the best BB player and coach of excel college

it was the day when first time he talked to his lady love gunjan her name gave him one smile on his face when princi for one work said to talk to gunjan for one official meeting of two famous college excel and st.xavier their convo started with formal and casual meeting for two college's betterment and when it became more friendly to personal they never came to know he always waited for her call everyday that when her call will come and they will share their day's all stuffs

he never tried to collect any info abt gunjan to princi or any other person bcz he seriously wanted to be honest with her even in their deal not to know more abt each other till they know that they r the perfect for each other in the sense of understanding and trust but after 2 years it was gunjan who first time asked him that she wants to meet him he was so glad at that day when he felt that he is serious for this relation all friends laughing on samrat for his blind love gunjan but mayank always supported him saying if u seriously feel her in urs then u should share ur feeling with her as well and he confessed her at that day but she was not so sure that this relationship will give what kind of result to them and thats why she decided to meet him and she invited him to her city and she said u will find me with my purple rose

he never asked how old she is , how is she look like but she always said i have specs and he used to tease her chashmish first she didn't like it but then he regularly calls her chashmish and when he said her gunjan on phone she always became angry on him why r u saying me gunjan do call me chashmish its not like that he can't collect any info abt her but he never wanted he always wanted to give space to gunjan to go ahead when she feels like that and today that day arrived when he will meet his first love who will be his first blind date and whom he will propose today bcz he is sure that she is the one whom can he love unconditional without any more expectation

he came out from train with mixed feelings and starts looking here and there and his cell start ringing

samrat: hi chashmish where r u i am here on platform as u said u will recognize me so i didn't give my any hint so can u see me right now

he asked this with naughty smile on his face😉

gujnan: ya samrat i can see u or if i said i am looking at u right now then what u will feel

samrat starts looking here and there to find out gunjan his chashmish but he didn't find any girl with purple rose

samrat: that's not fair chashmish u r seeing me and i can't see u at least just hold purpul rose so that i can see u i can't find u here

gunjan: samrat that's the test of ur love u have to find me with ur eyes of heart bcz only ur heart and soul can find me and recognize me but i will give u hint i am behind that one big pillar and sitting on bench near it ,do come fast i can't wait to meet u

smile came on his face and he said yup me coming chashmish just wait

after call he starts running towards that pillar and saw two lady sitting on that bench both were having specs he was confused seeing them as he didn't find any purple rose to any of girl's hand

he went near to them he saw first girl sitting there reading one book she was beautiful and delicate girl with having specs she was so innocent when she turned to face samrat small smile came on his face as if this girl is his chashmish then he saw other girl ,not girl but one elderly lady reading magazine having age of near 45 and she has also specs , her face was so dull and having wrinkles on his face with dark spots as if she tried to manage her beauty with make up but b4 he could think anything more abt her he saw one purple rose in that elderly lady's hand

he was shocked to death 😲😲

he was stunned ,shocked how can this possible this is my chashmish whom i love more than my life this is my blind date whom i am gonna propose his head starts bursting with pain he just stepped back for one moment and turned around he felt pain in his heart his all dream shattered in one moment what to say to her how to talk to her that this is not his chashmish whom he love whom he craved for all this 2 years he cursed his fate for playing cruel game with him his brain said to him just run away with this situation as she is still lost in reading magazine she didn't see him just go away and tell her truth when her call will come

he just want to run away from this pain hurt feeling but suddenly something stopped him his heart

why r u running with ur own feelings its not her fault that u fall in love with her with ur convo she never said anything abt her only u always dreamed her like this that's not her fault she always trusted u and shared all her feelings but its ur fault u got attracted and started loving her u were saying u love her unconditional then what kind of condition is this that u want her in same age urs, its not her fault at all and also not urs its ur love for her who always made love her more and more so what if she is elder than u she understands u she loves u and she trusts u that's the reason today u r here to meet her and to propose her u can't back off now bcz u gave ur heart to her she said in last convo that u have to find her with ur heart and soul

this is the person who made u learn what is called true friendship and love from past 2 years u were in his contact he shared ur happiness ur sadness ur all feeling with her and only and only bcz of her face and her age u r running away from her beautiful love n heart that's not she all deserve she truely loves u and that's the reason she is also here

finally in this battle of heart and mind finally heart won samrat turned to face her she was still reading same magazine she was so lost in that magazine that she didn't realize that samrat is standing there from 10 mins and fighting with his emotions then he started to go near her

samrat to that young lady :excuse me if u don't have any problem i want to talk to this lady alone

young lady: ya sure why not i was also thinking to go away from here u just carry on 😊

have a nice day 😊

samrat : same to u too 😊

samrat thought once that how foolish he was that he was running from his first love so what if she is not the way i thought but she is still same beautiful as i thought bcz she is my chashmish he made up his mind and thought to start convo to her

samrat: hi i thought i will be late here but train was in time 😊

that elderly lady smiled and said yes that's true

samrat : so r u happy on seeing me i am so much happy to see u here

elderly lady: yes same here i am happy to see u here too and she again starts reading

samrat: its so weired i never talked with my chashmish like this why i am saying all this stupid thing this is chashmish just be confident u everyday talk to her but i am feeling something weired her voice is so different here i mean i can't feel same love in this voice i don't know why god samrat just focus what r u thinking this is ur chashmish remember ur first love whom u gonna propose whom u love so what she is elder than u (ya she is same age of my mom 😆)god stop it smrat what does she feel when she will come to know that u r thinking like that abt her she will be hurt u can't make her hurt like this

samrat to elderly lady: but sorry i was few mins late here and make u to wait

elderly lady: late for what my son, u can seat here to wait i don't mind why should i feel bad if u r late only that person can feel bad who was waiting for u not me 😊

samrat was again shocked SON 😲she considers me son what's going on what is she talking abt something is wrong in me or in her talk or we r misunderstanding each other

samrat : wait chashmish i am here only for u and u r saying that u have no problem and u want to make me wait for none 😕

elderly lady: what did u say CHASHMISH u stupid boy😡 u have no any sense and respect how to talk to any elderly lady of ur mother's age i tell u today's generation no respect for anyone 😡

samrat: stupid 😡 how dare u to say this to me i always say u chashmish u have no problem then what happened today 😕

elderly lady: what r u saying son r u mad or what 😲

samrat: stop it gunjan now its enough

elderly lady: gunjan who gunjan😕

samrat : look lady there is some confusion i guess u r gunjan bhushan right 😕

elderly lady : no i am not i am mrs mehara who is gunjan ? and why did u call me gunjan

samrat was in again shock what the hell is happening today why everything is weired oh god i will be mad now for sure

samrat : ok look lady i think there is some big confusion today i am here to meet my first love chashmish i mean gunjan and that purple rose supposed to be in my gunjan's hand so i guess u r gunjan right bcz none girl or lady have purple rose here except u 😕

mrs mehara: god this purple rose is not mine that girl sitting beside me gave me as i loved this rose 😳

samrat :what that girl sitting beside u was chashmish 😃 my gunjan

elderly lady : ya may be she is ur chashmish , go son don't waste time she must be waiting for u

and when he turned to search his chashmish she was watching them with one satisfaction one big smile on her face and he also smiled on seeing her like this

he went towards her

samrat: so u were testing me chashmish with naughty smile 😉

gunjan: no i was testing myself samrat 😳i was testing myself bcz i wanted to know whom i love seriously loves me if i would be in any age or i would be not same as he thought does this matter to him that i am beautiful or not or he only loves me for what i am the way i am

samrat : so what u got to know abt ur love does he love u or he disappointed u 😉

gunjan: he won my heart and again stole me from myself he is best and he seriously loves me

saying this she hugged samrat to make him to know that she loves him there is no any words to describe her love and happiness bcz her hug said everything both were lost in each other's arm both were happy to have true love in each other's life it was their love who made them together today they fall in love without seeing each other bcz their true soul and heart made them to fall for each other

samrat broke their hug

samrat: so chashmish my first blind date i wanna ask u that will u ....

gunjan cut him in middle yes i will 😳i will marry u samrat i will be always with u , i will love u always i promise



samrat was amazed to get sudden reply from her she always understands him and today she again proved it and with this thought in happiness he hugged her once again

after hug

samrat: i also promise u chashmish when u will be like that elderly lady i will praise u more than anyone everyday so that u will feel u r always beautiful for me i will praise ur wrinkles ur dark spots everything 😆😆

gunjan : with shock what 😲and starts laughing hit his chest 😆 i don't mind at that time i will praise u with ur white hair and also remind u that not me but u r also growing old 😉


two soul find peace in each other's arm on that day there were two soul 's wonderful story written with promises that in any condition we will be together

it was their test of love and after that they lived their life happy everafter 😳

that was the best day one made for each other couple become one samrat and gunjan became sajan 😳

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i hope i justified this os don't throw me chappal for gun's less dialogues bcz this os was based of test of love where gun without any word said everything and abt samart i know what u all will say 😉😆

Edited by aashizin - 14 years ago

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Posted: 14 years ago
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res wow🤗

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hey aashi🤗

beautiful os dear
hat's off👏
totally loved it
u penned down the feelings of Samrat n Gunjan really well
I loved the the love between Samrat n Gunjan
do make more!!!
n thanx for the pm!

Luv ya
deepti🤗
Edited by deepti_mohit - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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res .. Thank you sooo much for this Aashi 🤗

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Wow Aashiii 🤗🤗, beautiful OS and i loved the concept<3 ! Beautifully written ❤️ !
I really loved this line "no i was testing myself samrat 😳i was testing myself bcz i wanted to know whom i love seriously loves me if i would be in any age or i would be not same as he thought does this matter to him that i am beautiful or not or he only loves me for what i am the way i am " .. It soo proved that this is the actual Gunjan Bhushan (:
Do write more please Embarrassed
Edited by MoNayaKiDeewani - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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omggggg aashi gr8 concept!u did full justice to sajan aashi.d very line of gunjan..."i was testing myself"...proves that its like our gunji who cant let anything bad happen with anyone's lyf coz of her.she just wanna make sure if she being NOT that beautiful will change his feelings for her/not else she wont like to be with him...coz dats not love but just an infatuation.dis was really touching aashi.n reading sumthing on sg after such a long tym is so refreshing.luvv u 4 this beautiful OS.🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: princessyashika

omggggg aashi gr8 concept!u did full justice to sajan aashi.d very line of gunjan..."i was testing myself"...proves that its like our gunji who cant let anything bad happen with anyone's lyf coz of her.she just wanna make sure if she being NOT that beautiful will change his feelings for her/not else she wont like to be with him...coz dats not love but just an infatuation.dis was really touching aashi.n reading sumthing on sg after such a long tym is so refreshing.luvv u 4 this beautiful OS.🤗

u seriously liked it 😛🤗i was so nervous bcz such a concept don't click in reader's mind but after reading ur reply i am so glad u seriously liked it this is biggest compliment for me 🤗 ya gun's dialogues were less that was the reason she was testing herself with her own love without saying she said everything and that was my main concept and i think i clicked this concept in ur mind that's the reason u praised our gun thanks a tone dear it means a lot for me 🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
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res
ashi di i love ur os.
I will comment in a detail soon😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
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very different and very nice i like it a lot
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: aashizin

u seriously liked it 😛🤗i was so nervous bcz such a concept don't click in reader's mind but after reading ur reply i am so glad u seriously liked it this is biggest compliment for me 🤗 ya gun's dialogues were less that was the reason she was testing herself with her own love without saying she said everything and that was my main concept and i think i clicked this concept in ur mind that's the reason u praised our gun thanks a tone dear it means a lot for me 🤗



totally aashi ur potrayal is truely like our gunji...any other girl in this situation wud have gone gaga seein that her blind date was guy like samrat😆 i mean who wud like to take risk with such a sexyy guy🤣 but shez our gunji...the evr practical n mature.she is expected to do sumthing of this sought only.😳
Edited by princessyashika - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Ressy!!!😳

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Aashi di 🤗 firstly yes u have written something after a long time, i was shocked to get your pm😆 but it a amazing os di!❤️
it was sooooo beautifully written n the way u portrayed sajan in the os is wonderful
i felt soo good after reading this os
Samrat n Gunjan's relationship is soooo beautiful n some lines r soo beautiful...love them
Lovely di...i am in love with this os
aww i was missing my sajan sooo much but after reading this os, i felt like they r back with a bang😳 u r deffo one of the most best writers in the forum aashi di
this os made my day!! thanks for writing this n plzzzzzzzzzz do write more...plzzz aashi di
u r fab! thnx a ton for the pm as well!

luv
debo😳

Edited by Januable_Sajan - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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👏👏,lovely concept,wonderfully put across............simply superb,Aashi.Justifies our Sajan.........exactly the Sajan we fell in love with.Loved the OS.Do write more,would love to read.

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