Memories In the Making-The Sharmas(MN)Link p.149 - Page 35

Originally posted by: mahakmev

mindblowing loveddddddddd it it's osom blosom.thanks 4 the pm

Originally posted by: Bhawna_arti

amazing part.😊

Originally posted by: kirti123

wow loving mr and mrs sharma

beautiful update

mayur were cute in college

just loved the part

thanks for the pm

😊

Originally posted by: ridi_onasis

haye......this naughty sharma😍......it was superb...........loved it

Originally posted by: -SupriyaluvsMN-

aww... terrific ishita!!🤗!
part 5...
ahh... i soo luvd d tit 4 tat .. by Mr. sharma!!!☺️😆
utterly cute!!!!😍😳
totally luvd it!!!!!😳😃
do continue soon
& haan.. all d best 4 ur studies as well!👍🏼

Originally posted by: achoose

mindblwoing uupdaate dear.......... now this is one of the ff which am desperately waiting to get updated

Originally posted by: drfizaahmed

Thts sweet, romantic...lovly ,mind blowing...n tooooo mayurish....lov ya

Originally posted by: tellycrazy

Hey Ishita,

Wonderful update as always😃 Your FF shows all the beautiful moments of Mayur which, I'm sure, all the fans are yearning to see.😊 I am sorry for not commenting often in your FF but I do read them! University work keeps me busy and I do not find much time to comment on all the FF's I read. But while I am at it, a special mention about the update that covered Mayank's dad. I thought you did a fabulous job with relating the past to the present by awakening the paternal feelings in Mayank when talking about his dad's demise👏 A very touching and one of my favourite updates of this FF😃 As a writer, you've got to take a bow⭐️

I am a sucker for Mayur romance, so do keep that coming and continue soon😃

Thank you! It's ok, I totally understand as I'm a uni student myself and I rarely get time to come on IF these days. I do know u read the ff ...I recognize ur user id from the "like" post.

Originally posted by: cutiepie12

hayyyyyyyeeeeeee da revenge ws awesum......ufff mayank is completly a kller boy wid all his looks n nautanki n dat dimple smile........by GOD simply da best....

loved dis part a lot......love mayur😊

Originally posted by: ruexangel

I'm in lovee with your ff.....like seriously!! i loved everything about it!!

dialogues, scenes, moments, description *sigh* and it's not often I will praise every little thing about an ff, but i soooo loved it! 😳

pleaseeeee continue soon

and that heartbeat line was too good, I'm so glad you made it realistic and funny instead of going down the cheesy smushy lovey dovey route 😆