Can We Be Together Again?-A SaJan OS

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hooooola people!!!!! Ok....I am Palak...Am new here and this is my very first post in this forum..Tried my hand at writing..Hope u'll like it..! It is somewhat a continuation of yesterday's SG scene.

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Samrat's dialouges in red

Gunjan's dialouges in blue

Samrat stepped towards Gunjan..and she kept moving backwards...until and unless there was a wall behind her...Seems that each particle of the "World" wants them to re-unite!

She could feel his warm breath on his face..She could feel him so close......

"Sam....."

"Ssshhhh...Kya tum mujhse ab bhi naraaz ho?"

Gunjan nodded answering a positive.She gazed into his chocolaty brown eyes.

"Tumne..tumne..mujhse jhoot kyun bola?" Her voice broke..She felt a lump in her throat

"Chashmish...maine aisa is;iye kiya kyunki...kyunki main tumhe khush dekhna chahta tha...Tumhari 100 daaton se mujhe koi fark nahi padta lekin...tumhara 1 aasoon...mere liye bahut kimti hai..uss ek aasoon ki wajah se mera dil bhi rota hai...Kya ab bhi tum mujhe maaf nahi karogi..?"

"Tumhe toh maaf kar diya..Lekin khud ko kabhi nahi kar paungi! " She burst into tears.

Samrat hugged her.

"Chashmish..."

"Haan Samrat....Main apne aap ko kabhi maaf nahi kar paungi..kabhi nahi!!! " Tears rolled down...The spark of gulit caught of fire..She was burning...burning inside!

"You don't deserve me...you deserve someone far more better than me..someone who'll care for you...someone who'll alwayz stand by you..and someone who'll never leave you.."She fell on her knees..She was devasted of her own mistake.

Samrat picked her up.

"Chashmish.....3 saal ho chuke...aur sab badal gaya hai...Tum,main,hum...Tumhe nahi lagta HUM badal gaye hain?"

"Hmmm.....Hum sach mein badal gaye hain....Ab woh pehle si baatien nahi rahi....ab hum ek doosre se aankhien churate hain..bahut kuch chupate hain..Par Samrat maine itni badi galti ki hai..."

"Chashmish...tum samajhti kyun nahi...tumhari koi galti nahi hai...uss waqt situations hi aise the...Aur agar tum Sorry bol bhi rahi ho toh.................Maine tumhe maaf kiya!! " (Samrat Style!!)

"Tum bahut achche ho Samrat! "

"Well,Main yeh janta hoon...but still..Thnx for the compliment! "

"Tum na!" She hits him playfully.

"Achcha suno....woh..ummm...Ok fine....listen...I mean....CAN WE BE TOGETHER AGAIN???"A ray of hope shined through his eyes.

Gunjan smiled and hugged Samrat...Samrat too responded by caressing her hair.

But..........The hug was disturbed.

"Popatlal mil gaya! Popatlal mil gaya!!!!! " shouted ther official Kabaab Mein Haddi, U-D-A-Y...Uday!!!!!!

"Yeh Uday bhi na...."said a very irritated Samrat.

"Swami chaliye ji!! " Gunjan was tomato red.

"Oye! Hoye! Chaliye ji..Meri Sweeto!!!!! "He gave her peck on the cheek.

And they left the place happily...hand-in-hand...

I wrote it in my school...I dunno howit turned out to be....
Do hit the like tab!
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Regards,
Palak
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Posted: 14 years ago
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LOVED IT!!!
Do write more on SaJan!!
plz do pm me wen u do!!:)
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Posted: 14 years ago
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awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww tooo cute....loved it ....
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: AttractiveAdya

LOVED IT!!!

Do write more on SaJan!!
plz do pm me wen u do!!:)

Thnk so much honey for likin it!!!🤗
Will surely PM u!😊
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Originally posted by: Kiely

awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww tooo cute....loved it ....

Thank u soo much darling!!!😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
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wooooooow palak😲
kya likha hai!!👏
luved it❤️
too januable😳
do write more😉
and ya do i need to say to pm me!😛
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Originally posted by: Aasthahere

wooooooow palak😲
kya likha hai!!👏
luved it❤️
too januable😳
do write more😉
and ya do i need to say to pm me!😛

Thnk u baby!!!!!!!!!!!!🤗
Januable...Embarrassed
Will surely PM u!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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wow palak!!!!😊
beautiful os dear
u write very well!!
totally loved it!!!!!!
it was soo januable!!!!!!!😉
do write more!!!!!😃
n do pm me!!!!!!

luv ya
deepti🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey awesome cute os...do write more n do pm me...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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aaaaaawwwwwwwwww such a sweet os🤗......
bt meri ek shikayat hai. why ws it too short?????? i wanna read more😳.........
bt anyways, it ws really very sweet.........n d last part......swamiji chaliye n oye hoye sweetu ji......haaaaayyyyyyyyeeeeeeeeee dil khush ho gaya mera😍😍.......
do write more n pm me 4m next time😛...

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