Me and My shell- MJHT OS. Epilogue on page 27 - Page 11

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Posted: 15 years ago
amy this is one request please made this OS as a SS or FF really wonderful concept and we all would join u in this SS and FF if u don't mind hon that's only suggestion
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey dat wz aweasum
plz make gunji n nupur frnds again plzzzzzzzzzzz
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Posted: 15 years ago
tht was sooooooooooooo cute part
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Posted: 15 years ago
wonderful.....i loved how samrat kept coming to gunjan for help........and the last part was sooooo cute.....cont soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hey Amy just read both of ur updates n to be frank, both were too gud....the first one, showed the insecurities of Gunjan, she blamed Mayank for the bitterness in her n Nupur's relation where as its Nupur herself who lost her soul in the glitter n glamour of the big city, she not only deceived her parents n her best friend but also herself...n as a result Gunjan was blamed for every thing...n its obvious, Gunjan developed a hatred towards relations!!!!!

The best part for me is Sam's entry....esp wen he came to return two teaspoon of sugar!!!!! 😆 😆 Then da call part...n finally gajar ka halwa....GOSH!!! dat was damn cute....n best thing is dat his naughty acts brought smile back to Gunjan's face after a long tym!!!!!

Both the parts were fabulous dear....n the most important fact why I like this ff is, its so close to reality, not very much filmy n all....Any ways do continue soon honey!!!!


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Posted: 15 years ago
aweosmeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee updt loved it both parts r superb contineu soon n thanx 4 the pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
nice update but no nupur?????

thx for the pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
beautiful updates
really liked the beginning of sg
looking forward to the next part
do continue soon😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hello friends,
Hw ru all?

i'm back wid another update. and this time with some clarifications also. But before that, let me thank all the readers who accompanied me till now and commented on my updates.

@achoose,shaheen_memon,richa,divya_kaldivya,zarfishan1983 : Mayur will be back in scene as the story moves. U'll have to wait for it.

@natasha: hey dear, i write parts according to story's need. Its theme is not based on sajan or mayur romance. Its about teenage insecurities and lost friendship. And thats what i'm trying to portray. Mayur will come back in story, but at a right time. I hope you cope up with the story till that time.

@ashi: Hey dear, I will think about making it an FF.

@Adi : 🤗As always, luv ya fr your review :)

@All Samrat lovers: Well, sorry to make you wait for a long time, but i hope i didnt disappoint you all.

And finally, the clarification @all: Friends, I know Nupur in this story sounded a little mean to many of you. But I dont want to make any of my character mean. There are situations wen many of us see only one side of coin, especially teenagers. In this age,There might be some situations when a person ignore other's point of view, but that doesnt make that person less sensitive or mean. Nupur, in this story, is very naive and can get easily carried away. Gunjan is more matured and quiet. Their opinion differs as they grow and come to college. wen mayank enters, gunjan gets little time with nupur and she starts hating mayank, Natural reaction. Nupur , as anyone who's fallen deep in love, thinks that her friend is not happy for her and is jelous, again its natural. The class, when stops talking to gunjan after the nupur- bday incident, doesnt know the whole story. and naturally they choose to stand behind Nupur whom they know well. This happens many-a-times.

coming to the people in gunjan's workplace- The collegues, who share work, tight timelines, deliverables, also share their thoughts, problems, laughter. But by this time, gunjan has build up a wall arround her. she doesnt want to mix up with anyone. she never laughs, never talks to anybody on any issue other than work. The collegues, who obviously doesnt know her past, cant understand her and call her psychic, saddist, etc. Once again, its normal.

Everyone is correct on their own place. yet everyone is making a mistake. We come accross people like guunjan in our life. But do we really pay any attention to them?

Anyways, i've gone too far. The whole reason of this explanation was to tell ya all that done blame a person. It might be the situation, which creates the problem.

Okay, i'll stop here. Here goes the next part-


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After much thinking, Gunjan came to a conclusion that Samrat's way of talking is sweeter than his halwa. As usual Samrat's magic lingered on Gunjan for that day and next day. When it was time to return the box to Samrat, Gunjan questioned herself whether to go or not to go to his house to return the box. Finally she decided to listen to her heart and braced herself to go to Samrat's house.

She pressed the door bell of his house and waited for few seconds when he opened the door. He had a big cutlery spoon in one hand and was wearing an apron.

"Hey, what a correct timing..can u plz taste my rajma curry and let me know if everything is ok?" saying this Samrat left her at the door and went towards his kitchen.

Gunjan was standing at the door steps unable to decide whether to go in or not. "Gunjan…come in..where are you" shouted Samrat from his Kitchen.

Gunjan stepped in the house and realized that this was the first time since she came to Bangalore did she stepped into anybody's house. She noticed, the house was clean and neat, had decent furniture and she could listen some soft soothing music from the speakers somewhere. Gunjan walked slowly towards the kitchen. Samrat was ready with some rajma in a small bowl and asked her to taste it.

"ummm..its nice…everything is ok…" said Gunjan after tasting the Rajma

"oh good…see my mom doesn't believe that I am good cook..i will have to make you talk to her one day…then only she might believe" said Samrat feeling satisfied.

"Ok, I will leave now" said Gunjan.

"Why?..i have prepared dinner for both of us." Said Samrat.

"What….?" Said Gunjan with shock.

"Well I knew you would come home to return my box today and obviously you will come little early..and also I am sure you would not have got time to cook dinner by now" said Samrat while putting plates on the dining table.

"How were you so sure that I would come?" asked Gunjan amused.

"Well I can read People's mind..after all I am a Psychiatrist" said Samrat

"Psychiatrist!!" exclaimed Gunjan.

"ya why?..cant handsome men become psychiatrists?" said Samrat naughtily.

"aha..i didn't mean that" smiled Gunjan "I don't know if you are lying or telling truth..yesterday you were saying it was your birthday..now today you are saying you are a Psychiatrist!"

"no..seriously..i am a Psychiatrist..i don't lie on Wednesdays..u know" said Samrat.

"uh..u r impossible..anyway what made u believe that I will have dinner with you" asked Gunjan

"Well, today is my birthday..and I knew you wont be able to say no" said Samrat.

"What..plz..you think I can be fooled twice, and that too with same trick?" said Gunjan

"ha ha..see I was born on 6th may and today its 6th september ..so its my monthly birthday" said Samrat showing her the seat.

Gunjan and Samrat laughed together and started having dinner. Samrat was indeed a good cook and Gunjan liked everything prepared by him..no not only the food..but she realized she liked Samrat's charming nature.

"So, what made you come to Bangalore?" asked Gunjan having her sweet dish.

"I saw that this city had lot of scope for doctors like me..so I choose this place for my practice" said Samrat.

"Scope!" exclaimed Gunjan

"yeah..you see..Bangaloreis a software hub for India..and hence more patients for me" said Samrat with a naughty smile again.

"aha..so you mean software engineers are mad people?..Mister..Even I am a software engineer..remember that!" said Gunjan.

"Oh..is it..i never knew that beautiful gals too are becoming software engineers" said Samrat flirtingly.

Gunjan wanted to retort but suddenly realized that he was complementing her and gave him a smile.

"thanks" said Gunjan blushing.

"thank god..you understood that.. I thought you'll miss it. " said Samrat with a twinkle in his eyes.

While Gunjan was about to leave his house after dinner, Samrat asked "So at what time should I come for dinner tomorrow at your house?"

"what?" said Gunjan and stared at him questioningly.

"yeah..My reading says you are a girl with self-respect, right..? i know you will return my dinner!!" said Samrat again with his flirting smile.

Gunjan couldn't stop smiling and said "hmmm..smart..haan..come at 8pm..dinner will be ready."

After coming home , thoughts of Samrat and whatever they talked lingered in Gunjan's mind. She looked herself in mirror a thousand times. All her life never did any guy talked to her the way, Samrat talked. She realized that she smiled and laughed so many times on that single day. Samrat did some magic on her.

Next day she was not able to concentrate in her office work too. She was too busy thinking what she should prepare for dinner and what all she need to buy to prepare food. She even tried searching some recipes on the internet.

She left office early at 5 pm and went to grocery store to buy all vegetables and groceries to prepare dinner. She decided to make Jeera rice, Palak Paneer, Cabbage kofta, rotis, fruit salad and lassi. She finished off everything by 7:30 and cleaned the kitchen and dining hall. She realized she never cooked so fast earlier. She dressed herself in one of her best casual salwar suits and waited for him.

The bell rang, but not the door bell. She looked at her mobile. It was from home.

"Hello, mom"

"Hello beta. How ru? Its been so long , u didn't call. So I thought I'll call you. Is everything alright? "

"I am fine mom. I was busy with work lately. So couldn't call" Gunjan made an excuse. Since she moved to banglore, she had distanced herself from her family too.

"Ok. But don't stress yourself with much work beta. And have your dinner properly." Her mom said with concern.

The word dinner brought a smile on her face. "Yes mom, I'll have my dinner properly. You don't worry. So, whats new there?"

"Umm.. actually.. beta" Her mom hesitated a little, "Nupsie's mom met me the other day.."

Gunjan's smile vanished as she heard the name nupsie.

Nupsie! Nupur… 'Don't call me that again' Nupurs words echoed in her mind.

"Mom! I don't want to hear anything related to her. Please." She said sternly.

"But gunjan.."

"I'm busy now. Will call you later" and she disconnected the call.

Her previous excitement was all vanished. She felt like crying.

Exactly at 8pm her door bell rang. She wanted to sink in her bed and cry. But she got up and opened the door after some time.

Samrat looked handsome as ever. He wore a short shirt and jeans and looked cute.

"Wow you look wonderful" said Samrat.

"Thanks. Come in." Said Gunjan slightly blushing, but he sensed that something's wrong with her.

Samrat stepped into her house for first time and was soon impressed.

"You did all those paintings?" asked Samrat looking at big canvas paintings in her hall.

"Hmm..yeah..i do it for passing time. Its my hobby." said Gunjan in a low tone.

"Oh man…they don't look like amateur paintings Gunjan..these are master pieces!!" said Samrat who kept gazing at those beautiful paintings.

"Oh please…I am not a trained painter..thanks anyway..come lets have dinner" said Gunjan, little flattered by his praising.

And then he talked about her paintings for a long time. Gunjan's mood lifted up with his genuine interest in her art.

When Samrat saw what all she prepared, he said "sorry for giving you trouble!"

"No its fine. Cooking for one person extra is not a trouble" said Gunjan while serving food in his plate.

"Don't say that otherwise I might come everyday" said Samrat.

Gunjan wanted that to happen everyday. She never felt so happy after a long time. Throughout the dinner, Samrat kept on praising her food and she got more and more attracted to Samrat's charm. After dinner they talked for long time. Samrat kept making jokes and Gunjan laughed non-stop. Gunjan never realized when it was already 11:30pm.

Samrat suddenly looked at his watch and realized it was late. "Hey ..sorry..its late..i should leave..you have to get up early to the office again tomorrow" said Samrat and got up to leave.

Gunjan didn't want him to leave and wanted to stop him for some more time.

"yeah..it was …it was nice.. having you here today" stammered Gunjan.

"really?" said Samrat

"yeah…u know..i never smiled and laughed this much before Samrat. You brought something back which I lost long time ago." Said Gunjan as nupur's memories flashed before her, her eyes were almost in tears.

Samrat kept looking at her intently for some time.

"so where is my fees?" said Samrat.

"Fees??" questioned Gunjan.

"yeah for bringing back what u lost!" said Samrat, naughtiness returning back to his eyes.

"aha..so I am your first patient it seems…tell me whats ur fees, I will give you" said Gunjan with a smile.

"ummm…lets see..umm" said Samrat making a thinking gesture "how about one more dinner, this time somewhere outside"

"done" said Gunjan almost immediately.

"wow…that's an improvement ..i thought you would hit me!!" said Samrat laughing.

"Don't worry! I'll never do that." Gunjan said laughing.

"Goodnight Gunjan!" samrat said in a husky tone.

"Goodnight samrat!" She said with heavy heart, and he left.

She stared at the direction he went for a long time before closing the door of her house. Her mind was replaying samrat's each and every word in front of her. The thought of her mom's call never touched her mind after that.


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Posted: 15 years ago
very nice update but wht happened to nupsie but update soonn

thx alot for the pm

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