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Posted: 14 years ago
mehak plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz cont ur FF i love ur FF yaar plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
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mehek i love ur writing..........
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Nupur was putting the utensils, when her cell started
ringing. Nupur saw the name and a wide smile spread on her face. she
picked up the cell.

N: hello... kesi hai?

G: main thk hn di. Tum kesi hon? Baki sb kese hain? Koi pbl tu ni ho ri na? kya
kar ri ho? Nashta kiya ya ni?

N:bs bs bs … arey itne swal. Main thk hon,baki sab bi thk hai,koi pbl ni hai main bohat kush ho,abhi kitchen main ho aur han nashta kar liya hai. Aur kuch mere aka.

Nupur smiled at gunjan's bahaviour she is acting like her.She was the one who used to ask soo many questions in one go and now here she is answering.their was silence on the other side.

N: kya hova gun tu chup ku ho gayi.

G: di tmhari bohat yad ati hai.

Nupur felt sad.

N: mujhe b teri bohat yad ati hai….acha tub ta tu kya kar ri hai aur maa bauji thk hai na.

G:main bas clg k liye nikal ri thi aur han maa bauji thk hai.tumhe bohat yad kar rhe hai.

N: gunjan tu un ka khayal tu rakhti hai na?

G: han di main un ka pora khayal rakhti ho. Akhir meri di ne jo kaha hai kese na rakho?

Nupur smiled at her.she came out of kitchen still talking to gunjan, when mayank called her.

M:kaha reh gayi jan?

N TO G: ek min gunjan hold kar mayank bola rha hai.

G:ok di main wait karti ho.

Mayank came towards nupur and held her from her waist.nupur blushed.

M:kya ho rha hai hm.kab se tmhara wait kar rha hon tum bartan rakhne gayi thi ya saaf karne?

N: vo actually gun ka fone aya hai tu us se bat kar ri ho…tumhe kuch kaam tha kya.

M(romantically): kaam to bohat hai mrs sharma per

Coming closer to her.on the other hand gunjan was listening and grinning.nupur felt shy but suddenly looked at her cell.realizing gumjan is on hold she pointed towards her mob that gunjan is listening.

M(realizing):oh…um actually mujhe office jana hai koi zarori kaam a gaya hai and dad needs me… so can I go.

N(smiling):jao per jaldi ana.

M: yes mrs sharma main yun gaya aur yun aya.

Saying this he kissed on her forhead.

M:love u

N:luv u 2.

Mayank left and nupur strated talking with gubjan.she was
crossing the balcony when her eyes fell on sam who was sitting their looking
lost somewhere.

N(still looking at sam): gunjan main tujhe thori der tak call karti ho.

G: ok di apna khayal rakna.bye

N:bye.

Nupur went to the balcony and sat beside sam on the swing.he was still lost. To gain his attention she said

N: kya bat hai kitni khubsurat ladki sath bathi hai aur koi hai k dekhna b gavara ni smajta

Sam turned towards her.

S: oh bhabi ap… sorry muje pta ni chala… ap yahan koi kaam tha kya.

N: kyun main ese hi apne devar k paas ni a sakti.

S: nahin bhabhi esi koi bt ni hai mai tu bas ese hi.

N: kya hova sam kuch pareshan lag rha hain.

S:nahi bhabhi esi loi bat ni hai… bas ese hi betha tha

N:sam ek bat kaho

S: is main pochne ki kya bat hai pochiye

N: tu office join kar le.

S: o plz bhabhi main abhi apni life enjoy karna chahta ho ye sab tu karna hi hain

N: dekh sam ab teri umar itni ho gayi hai k tu office join kar le ek zimmedar insaan ban ja…main smjti ho k tu abhi ye sab nahin karna chahta hai per sam sirf apne ni balke bakiyoun k bare mai b soch…tuj per kisi ne boj ni dala aj tak per is ka ye matlab nahi k ab tuj per boj dala jaye tabhi tujhe ehsaas ho… sam kya tu ni chahta k mom dad mayank hm sb ko tuj per naaz ho..

Sam was carefully listening to her each word he never gave these things a little thought.

N: sach kaho tu beshak teri shadi gunjan se honi hai.per koi b parents apni beti ka hath ese sakhs k hath main ni deta jo irresponsible ho,jise apni zimmedari ka ehsaas na ho.kya tu ni chahta k maa bauji tuje gunjan ka hath dete hove naaz mehsoos kare k un ki beti ka future secure ho ga aur vo khush rahe gi.
Main ye ni kehti k tu apni zindagi jeena chor de per is ke sath ane wali
responsibilities ko sath le kar chal.plz sam sirf ek bar soch apne liye na sahi
per gunji k liye.

Nupur stood up and was about to go.when sam held her wrist.

S: thanks bhabhi.

N: kis liye?

S: mujhe ye sab btane k liye.

N: sam tu sirf mera devar hi nahi mera chota bhai b hai.

Sam hugged her

S: thanks bhabhi mai is bare main zaroor socho ga.

Nupur smiled and left.

AT EVENING:

Everyone was sitting in the tv longe and talking.

MM: kya hove nupur kitni chup ku ho.

N: nahi maa esa kuch ni hain main thk ho

MM: ek min… suniye tu

MD: hm

MM: ye ap k sahabzade kaha hai thori der k liye gaye the
aur yahan sham ho gayi per un ka pta nahin…. Arey us ko yad b hai k us ki shadi
ho gayi hai aur koi intezar kar raha hai us ka

MD: arey arey us mai us ki koi galti ni hai us per hota tu vo tu office b na jata per kaam hi imp tha is liye jana parha… aur han us ne call kiya tha vo kuch der mai ata hi ho ga.

Nupur was listening to their convo and felt relieve after hearing mayank's dad words. They were talking when it was interrupted by doorbell.

S: mai dekhta ho.

He was about to go when mayank's mom stopped him.

MM: tu kaha chala

S: kya mom ap b lagta hai ap ne suna nahi bell baji hai tu darvaza kholne jar aha ho.

MM: acha bell baji hai mujhe tu pta hi ni chala…. Betha reh yaha nupur beta tm kholo ja k mayank ho ga.

N:ji maa.

She stood up and walked towards the door. With each step
her heart beat was increasing.she reached the door,took a deep breath and
opened the door.mayank was standing their smiling.he came near her and kissed on her forehead.nupur heart filled with the warmth she always feel so secure and happy around him.

M: sorry jan mai ne bohat koshish ki per late ho gaya.

When mayank spoke nupur chain of thoughts broke and she
realized that she was a little bit angry on mayank.yes a little bit how could
she be angry on such a sweetheart,handsome and lovely person.she moved a little away from him and made a angry face.mayank looked at her face.

M(thinking): she is just so cute, like a little baby…my baby.i soo love her.

M: kya hova sorry na.

N: mujhe tm se koi bat ni karni ok

M: per mai sorry keh raha ho na plz maaf kar do ainda ni ho ga.

N: mayank dekho (pointing finger towards him) tm mujhe call b kar sakte the aur agar itne hi busy the tu msg hi kar dete.

M(holding his ears): sorry na plzzzzz

He said so sweetly that melted nupur's little bit anger.

N: thk hai is bar maaf kiya er phir esa kiya na tu

M:nahi ho ga.

Nupur smiled

M: ab andar chale

N:hm

M: after u.

They went inside.then after somtime they ate dinner .

MM: chalo beta hum tu chale bohat neend a rahi hai.

N: ji mom goodnight.

MM: goodnight beta and sweet dreams.

She kissed on nupur's forehead and went to her room.

S: ok bro bhabhi I need to done somework so see ya tomorrow
gud night.

MAYUR: gud night.

Mayor went to their room.nupur entered with mayank behind
her.as soon as mayank locked the door.he turned and lift nupur in his arms.

N(blushing): mayank ye.

M:shshhhh let we live this moment

They both looked at eachother.mayank took her to their bed
he laid her on bed and then himself on her.he started kissing her gently and
soon it became passionate.his hand reached to the lamp and soon the room got
darken.they again submitted themselves to eachother.



Ok so this is it.finally updated and feeling happy cause I
was trying to update it since three days and finally did.plzz do comments I
really need it. give ur suggestions too.i hope it's a long one.and yes I don't
know when will I update the next part but I will soon.

Love

Mahak







Edited by mahakmev - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
beautiful update dear
lovelyyyyyyyyyyyyy
Nupur is so sweet-loved Sanur convo
and mayur romance- By GOD- now i m blushing
fantastic part dear
keep it up
Edited by -Faria- - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
niceeeeeeeeeeeeeee mahak :D
really loved it :D
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey mahak! nice to have you back with writing. i always loved this story. its so cute.and i loved this update too.
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey thnx fr d pm!
res😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome part!!
loved it...
plzzz continue soon
thanks 4 the pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
lovely update
luved gunur n sanu convo..
aweeee...mayur were soooo cute n romantic
cont soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
Wao lovely part
Sooooooooooooo romantic
I love Sanu conversation and love mayur scenes
thanks for Pm
cont soon

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