Tere Ishq Mein .. - A MJHT SS - Part 3 PG 15 - Page 6

Originally posted by: anuverma

Finally , just finished reading the OS..what a beautiful piece of work...U should really start writing Aahana...loved the reversal of roles..Gunjan notbeing nervous and not giving the pendent and ring back , while Sam wanting and not wanting to give in ..u know I always wanted Gunjan to b positive and also to manaofy Sam ..Nw with this os u can show us different ways that Gunjanji will Manao Samratji....cant't wait to read further on...so I'm too with Aashi and Aarti and being greedy ...and hoping to get more goodies from u soon

thanks a lot anu .. god hun u guys are sweet but i really am not very imaginative 😳 .. and well this was a one off thing .. well i too want a more confident gunjan always so got her to be just that so glad u liked it jaana ... i dunno if i can continue this 😳

Originally posted by: kris97

Aahana,Great Os.You should write more.Please write a FF on Sajan.It will be great pleasure to read that.You convey emotions & feelings really well through your writing..

thx Kris well i really dunno if i can but will try 😳

Originally posted by: PheliNazar

This was adorable. =)

I'm a fan of your writing now. You can really work with words and weave them to bring feelings and emotions through them. Thank You for writing this.

thx a Lot dear

Originally posted by: DiyaS

Already gave you my feedback on msn 😆 ... this was soooo sweet ... loved it, especially Gunjan taking back her ring and pendant and refusing to give it back ... I've really been wanting her to wear that S again. And what I liked best was Sam at the end ... not finding it so easy to give in yet, although he's obviously finding it equally difficult to resist 😳😳😳 Makes for all sorts of interesting possibilities as Gunjan tries to manao him 😍 Love all the emotions you get into your writing, Aani!

but wth ... again coming with an order ... part 2 please!!! Isse man nahin bhara!

Diya 🤗 ya i know ur feedback was the most Imp one for me 😳 @ bold - me too 😆

@ red - thanks jaana well you know our boy loved her of course how could he resist when she is finally admitting she loves him 😉😳 but u know he is hurt..


@ blue -- may try mam .. well until a few mins ago was freaked as hell by Prii's news but now am happy so perhaps this week sometime if i can... 😳

Originally posted by: yasri

You so want her to act like this.......... but honestly I can't imagine it......... the bold Gunji!!............anw, nice OS I enjoyed reading it

yasri .. perhaps the gal Gunjan may not be able to do it but the woman she is now can sure act like that... 😉

Originally posted by: -Gayathri-

Aahana..beautiful piece of OS!! I loved it a lot..I've already become a fan of ur writings be it OS or any hot topics of urs..😳..Thanks a lot for this dear! U ROCK!! Btw it wud be interesting to see this kind of viceversa treatment in the show..me too want Gunjan to manaao Sam..dunno if they'll ever think of this considering the way they have been showing till now..but u never know they might come up wit this idea! hope so..Btw I wanna know how Gunjan wins over Sam in wooing him! So pls cont. soon..hon!..love u..🤗

thx Gayathri

jesus gals u r making me blush ☺️

@ bold - LMAO gal if they do that scene would be a killer 😆

Originally posted by: -mysterygirl-

awesomeeeeeee os loved it mindblowing os simply loved it

thx dear

Aahana if there's a nobel prize for OS (btw you need to tell me its full form, I know FF is fan fiction) writing, it has to go to none other but you. Just out of curiosity, how long did it take you to write this beautiful piece?

Aahana 🤗🤗🤗

Originally posted by: aarthi.ramani

Anni ..awwwwwww 😍 superb ...and beautiful.. Anni all our discussion abt this track are out there and dia has said it all abt ur OS.😆

Loved it core especially where u have brought Guru Samrat to her rescue again.. and role reversal of gunjan .. the naughtiness in refusing to give back the S pendent and the ring again.. loved the way u put Sam emotions in the end where he has not able to give in yet , ... i wish we get Gunjan manofy Sam in show .too. anni i want u contd this OS .. because one important thing is missing from our discussion.😉 So its an order from me also .... u better contd and add that..

😆 thx aaru well we talked a lot of stuff .. u know i even wanted it to be sad and all but u meens and ashu made me so chirpy i couldnt be sad lol 😆 well i really will try to make a part 2 thanks to all of you but i dunno if it'd eb any good if any 😳 anyhow thx jaana 🤗

Originally posted by: ar4evr

heyyy aahana..🤗
awwwsum os dear..⭐️
realy yaar..it was so touchng....👏👍🏼
n ur dialouges were perfect..👍🏼
lovvvved it 2 d core..
i hpe dat sumthng like dis happns in d serial 2...😃

thx Richa

Originally posted by: Mahiii

wow amazing OS just loved it.... superbb

thx mahi

Originally posted by: pragya_luvsajan

wow fanatstic awesome too good fabulous... i a mean truly amzing... i would love to see gunjan that way.... baap re.. i could imagine every bit... i mean it was outstanding ahana.. i have no words to express how much i loved it...

hey thx pragz 🤗

Originally posted by: devilofkindness

AWWW aahana ..i was already in love with ur siggies now uve made me a fan of ur writing too

such precision ........commendable ......!!!!

superb !!! mindblowing !!!! fantabulous!!!

regs,

neeraja

neeraja u really humble me thank u 😳

Originally posted by: Anu_sajan4ever

Omg omg omg omg wat an OS god hats off to u u wrote it wid all pain n positiveness n all god superb man haven't read like dis OS In my life felt so bad for gunji n Sammy in starting poor Sammy he had to suffer for wat he didn't even did I mean all his regret for killing nups was useless as nups alive anyways n den gunji positiveness wow wow loveeee it so she gonna be following guru samrat saying awesome omg loveeeee da way gunji was beheaving infront of Sammy I mean all her kissing n all omg m speechless never imagine gunji be like dat behaving n doing all dis widout hesitation wow wow awesome Kya mast likha hai awesome man good job hopeeee dis happens in show god u should pm dis OS to mjht creatives seriosly superb u rock loveeee dis OS so much

thx a lot Anu so glad u felt it was not something like u read and fresh 😛 well we all feel bad for Sam poor guy 😭 and as for positivity 😆 am a +ve person so def cant have a -ve OS 😉

Originally posted by: maisha.hossain7

yaar ahana....its awesumeeeeeeeeeeeeeee simply rocking...plz pm me me on the next part

thx maisha

Originally posted by: jyothiv

Aahana what a OS amazing .I am speechless.I know u r a g8 writer but this made me to say u r the BEST.

U have portrayed gunjaan and samrat so well.Yes gunjan will kiss and make everything alright.

Samrat suffered a lot for no fault of his.Chain and ring and draw u have said soo well.

I appreciate u r work.U r awesome writter.

hey thx Jyothi .. wow dear nope i m not the best Diya def deserves the title ..😃

Originally posted by: SaJan_RaDevBest

aahana it was an awesome os!!
loved the whole sequence of the os been decided by u!!
all the lines were beautifully described!!
keep writing dear!!
as u r awesome.... 😊

thx arushi

Originally posted by: laizu

This is minblowing. Loved it.

thx Laizu

Originally posted by: chilluppp

amazing os dear

loved it

thx dear

Originally posted by: ght_sajan

i am completely bowled over by your writing skills.........its not very often that one is left speechless.........you somehow manage to do that with me all the time.......that's the reason why i quite often forget to comment on your topics....I tend to get so involved with the whole thing that i forget to leave back my comment...so the next time I don't leave a comment you know who to blame😉

Sonu u always do praise me so highly really god gal u r on a mission to make me blush 😆 and wow i must say u r clever u blame me for not replying to me 😲 🤣

Originally posted by: vital123

EXCELLENT aahana!

sorry 4 replying so late. actually i'm out of city these days bt do manage 2 explore the internet.

Thank u sooooooooooooooooooooooo much sweetie 4 writing such a wonderful OS. It truly depicted the might be possible upcoming situation of Sajan.

It ws truly SAJANISH!

Ur really creative.

I loved the part where Gunjan makes up hr mind 2 manaofy Sammy.

Love u 2 bits!🤗

thx Rabia hey glad u liked it hon.. well could think of something ard the theme u suggested so thanks for it and its ok u replied late hon .. really no apologies needed😳

Originally posted by: saduf

nice os

thx saduf

Originally posted by: Sonya1986

Aahana if there's a nobel prize for OS (btw you need to tell me its full form, I know FF is fan fiction) writing, it has to go to none other but you. Just out of curiosity, how long did it take you to write this beautiful piece?

ok sonya u take the cake for really praising me beyond my deserving 😆 nobel price 😆

ok btw OS means one shot like a single episodic take 😳 and urmm as for the time i think it took me abt 3-4 days 😳