god!! gal u really need a standing ovation and a tight hug for such a wonderful outflow of words and expressing those feelings, passion and pain🤗
m speechless...have no word to describe!! loved the rose and notes tied with same color ribbon paragon.... and specially the wonderful words in very note...ahhhhh let me write those lines..
' jab hum lade tum rooth gayi .. mera jhoot woh reason bana ki maine tumhe hurt kiya... par aakhir tum maan gayi.. hui thi tab ek nayi shuruaat Valentines ke Din .. ek white rose ke saath ....
aaj phir hum wahi hai .. aur isiliye yeh rose bhi....' ' dosti har rishte ko khoobsurat banati hai... har rishte mein important hoti hai... humne yahaan kuch aise pal bitaye .. jo humesha mujhe yaad aaye...
yahiin hui woh shuruaat jo na tum samajh paai na main... tumne mujhe padhaya , maine tumhe hasaaya - hum milte rahe aur pyar hone laga ...' shuruaat toh hamari wahi hui sahi maiynon mein... tumne mujhe bulaaya aur main chalaa aaya... wahi jahaan maine tumhe kabhi anjaane hurt kiya to kabhi daraaya .. aur wahi jahaan maine tumhe pehli baar galle lagaaya ... wahi jahaan mere saaz ke saath milli tumhari awaaz...." wonderful lines😳..and the way u rhymed them kudos!!⭐️ i was flowing with the feelings of that moments...was actually visualizing those moments wich samrat mentioned in the notes while reading it😳
then sajan's convo in music room...suberb fantastic👏 yaar i had always said...kash we get it the way u hav written it in mjht too!! that was so beautiful...that i started imaging sajan and it seemed so fairy tale actually it gave sajanic feel by imaging sajan while reading!!
wonderful... marvelous updt....i just loved it too much😃
Edited by charmee_sammy - 15 years ago