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BlueEyes

@GulaabiAakhein.

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+ 6

Posted: 15 years ago

Heyy guyys!! I was sitting on my table to study yesterday after watching miley jab... An idea just truck my mind!! Here it is!! .................................................. They play truth and dare!! Chada's turn! gunjan asks him to do something which he likes!! He says he wants to show his real face to gunjan.. ill continue from there!!
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Mayank was shocked.. Why is samrat doing this now?? Does he realise what hes doing?? Gunjan is gonna be furious!!

G: kya?? asli chehra??

S: haan..

He gets up and slowly takes off his pagri.. his beard and moustache!!

G: Samraat??? tum??

S: haan chashmish!!

Gunjan was hurt again!! main toh kabhie soch bhi nahi sakti thii ki samrat... crapp!! why did this happen wid me.. har baar mere saath hi aisa kyun bhagwann!!

S: chashmish woh.. tumhe...

G: BAS!! BOHOT HO GAYA!!! MAIN APNI LIFE KO NAYE SIRE SE CHALOO KARNA CHAHTI THII.. ISLIYE EXCEL JOIN KIYA!!! Par tumne.. tumne yeh bhi kharab kar diya!! kya chahte ho tum??????

S: gunjan.. plz relax.. meri baat toh sunno!!

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Rohan ash and ria were also there!!

A: samrat?? di?? yeh sab kya hain??

R: ash.. main samjhata hoon!!

A: nahi rohan!! mujhe samrat se sunna hain!!

S: ashwini ruko main gunjan se baat kar raha hoon!!

Ash was shocked!! what was going on?? samrat had disguised as chada and that also for gunjan?? why??

G: mayank challo!!

M: gunjan... ek baar.. plzz ek baar.. nupur ki khaatir samrat ki baat sun lo!!

G: Tum bhi... tum yeh sab jaante the??

M: haan.. aur tumme change bhi dikh raha thaa.. samrat ka phir eek baar tumpar asar ho raha thaa...

G: STOP IT!!!

S: gunjann plzz.. ek baar meri baat sun lo!!

G: jo kehne hain bahar aakar kaho!! yaha sabke saamne nahi!!

She and samrat went out in the garden!!

S: chashmish.. tum naraz thi mujhse.. apne aap se!! aur apni zindagi se!! par shayad yeh mujhse dekha nahi gaya!!

G: tum mujhe akela kyo nahi chhod dete!!

S: gunjan.. maine suna hain tumhe mere baare main baat karte hue!! Mujhe aur nupur ko laga ki tumhe apni muskaan wapas dene ka waqt aa gaya hain! aur haan yeh sab main nupur mere saath thii!!

G: Stop it samrat!! tum dii par kyo blame daal rahe ho!!Dii ab iss duniya main nahi hain!! aur yahi sach hain!!

S: par tum iss sach ko nahi sambhal pa rahi!! Tum hi batao agar nupur yaha hoti toh kya woh is kaam main mera saath deti??

G: Agar dii hoti toh yeh sab kuchh nahi hota!! par... humph.. chhoro!!

S: nahi chashmish.. maine dekha.. tumhari muskurahat wapas aa gayi thii!! kaafi hadh tak! Kyun apne aap ko band rakhna chahti ho!! Chada ki baat sunno aur khush raho!!

Phir agar tum mujhse door rehkar khush ho toh wohi sahi!!

G: ho gaya?? main khsuh hoon samrat!! aur isse zyada khushi mere hisse main nahi hain!!

S: tum usse ander aane se rok rahi ho!! shayad ab tum mujhse pyaar nahi karti.. par mere liye sabse important hain ki TUM khush raho! isliye ab tak zinda hoon!!

G's head shot up!! What did he say?? he wanted to die??

S: life main kuchh bhi permanent nahi hota.. na log aur na hum.. isliye.. jitni life hain usme khush raho.. khulkar jiyo!

Bas.. main chalta hoon..

G: samrat.. main excel se resign karti hoon!!

S (turned around) Sorry chashmish.. maine tumse pehle excel ke trustee ke post se resign kar diya!! tumhe college chhorne ki zarwat nahi hai! aur agar chhodna chahti ho toh apne next trustee se resign karna!!

He walk away!!

All the things samrat just said was going around in gunjans mind.. she was confused and she still loved him a lot!! he still cared so much for her!! she was overwhelmed!! she just wanted to go hug him!!!

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Samrat went in..

M: kya hua??

S shook his head!!

A: samrat!! mujhe bataoge ki tum meri di ko kaise jaante ho??

G: main batati hoon!!

A: dii.. kya ho raha hain yeh? samrat sir chada kyo bane the??

S: main chalta hoon mayank!!

G: ruko samrat!!.. ek baar tumhe kho dene ki galati kar chuki hoon!! phir nahi karna chahti!!

Mayanks sad face grew into a huge smile!!

Samrats face lit up!!

G was smiling.. Ash was shocked!! Rohan was very happy!!

S threw his hands open for gunjan and she ran into his arms!!

Mayanks eyes were full of tears when he saw her!! he saw nupur smiling!! she had her thumbs up for mayank!! she was overwhelmed!! Mayank smiled... he knew nupur was very happy!!

S: I love you!!

G: I loveyou too samrat!! i always have!!

M: Thank god!! ab sab normal hain!!

A: Di? aap aur samrat??

G; haan ashwini... main aur samrat ek doosre se bahut pyaar karte hain!!

A: yeh bhi sun lo dii.. yaad hain jis larke ke baare main maine aapko bataya tha.. jo hamare ghar aya tha..

G: haan.. woh bhi excel main hain naa...

A: woh samrat hain!!!!!!!

G: kya??

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Hey guys hope you liked it!!

I just hope it happens like this!!

Gosh!! cant wait for it!!

Edited by Mjhtrox11 - 15 years ago

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BlueEyes

@GulaabiAakhein.

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 15 years ago

Heyy guyss.. You need a Recap:

Ashwini and gunjan hv a arguement where ashwini puts the blame on gunjan that bec of her she is not happy... N then gunjan tells her to try wooing samrat...

She promises ash that she wont tell samrat anything abt this.. Mayank sees nupur.. he talks to her..

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The next day College

S: Chashmish abhi tak ayi kyun nahin...

M: Hey dude.. woh aa jayegi.. chill!!!

S: mayank.. main kal so bhi nahi paya!! itni khushi ho rahi thii..

M: Woh tumhare paas nahi hoti toh tum so nahi pate.. woh hoti hain.. tabhi so nahi pate!! uff!!

S: dude.. woh aa gayii!!

M: kaha??

S: abhi excel enter kiya... ab mere hi office ke taraf ayegi!!

aa rahi hai..

Suddenly ash enters!!!

Mayank bursts out laughing!!

A: kya hua mayank sir??

M: kuchh nahi.. samrat ko laga ki gunjan thii!!

S: main galat nahi tha mayank.. woh dekho...

Mayank turned back again.. Gunjan entered..

G: kya hua.. tum sab yaha??

M's eyes widened...

M: wah!! kya connection hain!!

G: kya hua?? mujhe koi batayega?? ashwini.. yaha kaise??

Ash looked at gunjan then turned back to samrat..

S: koi kaam tha ash?

A: umm.. woh.. nahii.. bas..

M: apne class main jao ashwini.. meri class hain abhi!!

A: yes sir.. she leaves after giving gunjan a stern look!!

S: ajeeb larki hain..

M: chalo baad main milta hoon.. bye!!

G: bye

Samrat nods!

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S: toh chashmish..

(looking at her)

G: toh.. kya??

S: Kaisi ho? (confused what 2 talk abt)

G: umm... main theek hoon..(confused too)

S: toh bolo??

G: kya??

S: Tum mere office main kyun aayi?? bolo??

G: umm.. woh.. bas.. aise hi..

S: meri itni yaad aa rahi thii..

G: nahiin.. bilkul nahii..

S: achha??? (he goes to her.. closer..closer..closer..)

G: samrat.. ye.. kya kr rahe ho?

S: shhh

G: meri class hain mujhe jana hoga... (she goes)

S catches her hand..

G: samrat chhodo naa!!

S: nahiin chhoda toh??

G: samraat.. please!! (she says sweetly)

S: Hayyyee!! he puts his hand on his heart,.. she giggles and runs away!!

Agli baar tumhe mujhse kaun bachayega chashmish.. dekhti jao!!

he sits and starts his work...

Ashwini comes..

S: tumhari...toh..class

A: haan.. par samrat mujhe tumse baat karni hain!!

S: kya hua ashwini,.. bolo??

A: yaha nahi.. Kahi bahar chale.. cafe treat??

S: par ashwini...

A: plz samrat.. bohot important baat hain.

S: tumhari dii?

A: unhe plz mat batana!! samrat aadhi ghante main cafe treat!! k?

S: ok!

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he goes to gunjans cabin..

G: hi.. tum yaha??

S: aaj kya kar rahi ho?

G: bas kuchh pending kaam baki hain.. aaj meri class toh kahtam ho gayi.. sirf 2 hi thii...

S: achha!! chalo na movie dekhne chalte hain!!

G: abhi?? nahi..

S: Theek hain.. aadhi ghante main.. mujhe kisi nse milna hain.. phir main tumhe yahi se pick kar loonga!!ok?

G nods.. G: par kisse milna hain??

S: woh...a.. (oops im not supposed to tell her) woh main baad main bataoonga.. tum apna kaamkhatam karo.. main aata hoon!!

G: theek hain..

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Ash was waiting.. She saw samrat coming.. her heart began thudding loudly.. What would she tell him?? How would she tell him? what if he refused!! but i dont think he will!! just hope not!!

S: heyy ashwini.. kya baat tha.. batao?

A: itni jaldi kya hain.. coffee??

S: plz ashwini.. kaam ki baat karo..

A: ek coffee toh pee hi sakte ho na??

S: tum shayad bhool rahi ho ki tum apne college ke trustee se baat kar rahi ho!!

A: trustee?? mujhe laga hum dost the?

S: haan hain.. par..

A: par kya samrat..

S: fine.. excuse me.. 2 hot coffee plz..Happy!! ab bolo.. mujhe jaldi jana hain!!

A: kaha??

S: woh main gunjan ke saath movie ja raha hoon!!

A: kya!!!!!!!!!!

S; itni shocked kyun ho??

A: woh.. kya tum di se pyar karte ho??

S: ye kya hain ashwini? main yaha tumhari baat karne aaya hoon!!

A: bolo na..

S: haan bohot!!

A: aur mujhse?

S: What!!! he stands up (everyone stares at them)

A gets up too..

S: kya kaha?? pyar? tumse?

A: main yahi kehna chahti thii.. ki samrat.. I..I love..

S: BASS!!!! aur nahi.. ashwini main tumhe dukh nahi dena chahta.. already life main tumne bohot dukh jhele hain.. par..

A: plz samrat!! mujhpar daya karne ki koi zarwat nahi hai!!Kya tum mujhse pyaar karte ho?

S: Nahin!!! nahin ashwini.. i dont LOVE YOU!!!

thats the truth.. n will always remain..

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Hope ull liked it!!

M gonna continue this I guess!!

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BlueEyes

@GulaabiAakhein.

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 15 years ago

Samrat and Gunjan were finally back together!! but Ash... what was about to happen next!! This was so not gonna be good!!

Gunjan was shocked!!

G: kya?? samrat tum??

S: haan... woh.. tumh.

A: haan dii.. aap jaanna chahti thii na.. woh rohan nahi thaa!!

G: what? ashwini chalo mere sang!! abhi!!

M: challo main tum logo ko chhod deta hoon!!

G: nahi... hum chale jayenge!!

S: bye chashmish...

G: bye samrat.. kal college main baat karte hain!!

She took ashwini's hand and pulled her...

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M: samrat.. congrats yaar!!

R: haan sir!! finally...aapko apna pyaar mil hi gaya!! ab aap meri madad karenge na??

S: thanx dude!! aur rohan main tumhari madad zaroor karoonga!! pakka!!

Ri: par mujhe kuchh samajh main nahi aaya?? gunjan maam toh mayank sir ke saath thii na??

M and S: what????

Ri: im sorryy par hum sab ko aapdono ko dekhkar toh yahi laga!! mujhe ash ko aur luv ko!!

M: woh meri wife ki behein hain riya!!!!!!

R: wife?? sir aap married hain!!

M: haann.. isliye bol raha thaa.. mujhse door raho!!

S: what are you guys saying?? ria mayank yeh kya ho raha hain?

R: exactly?? whats wrong sis!!

M: kuchh nahi samrat!! he went away!!

S: chalo guys.. picnic over!!

R Ri: yes sir... 😕

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At home Gunjan-Ashwini convo.

G: samrat tumse kitne bare hain kya tum jaanti ho?

A: dii.. ab toh aap yahi kahengi naa.. aapko samrat jo mill gaya!! aap mere saath aisa karengi yeh maine socha bhi nahi tha!!

G: kya? tumhe lagta hain ki main isliye yeh sab keh rahi ho?? Agar tum mayank ke liye bhi aise bolti tabhi main yahi kehti!! Woh tumse atleast 5 yrs bare hain!! how can you even think of him like that???

A: bas dii mujhe kuchh nahi sunna hain!! aapne meri saari khushiyan barbad kar di!!

G: oh! tumhe lagta hain ki agar main nahi aati toh samrat tumse pyaar karta??

A: haan dii.. mujhe yakeen hain!! samrat ne rohan ko mere liye ek poem likhkar dii!! ab bolo!!

G: ashwini tum nahi samajh rahi ho... samrat tumse kabhi pyaar nahi kar sakta!!! woh mujhse bohot pyaar karta hain!!!

A: par usne zindagi main kuchh bohot important khoya hain!! isliye woh hamesha philosophical baate karta hai...

G: ashwini... woh main thii.. usne mujhe kho diya tha.. kyoki.. she stopped!!

A: kyoki kya di??

G: usne meri di ko maara tha!!

A: kya?? usne?? kaise

G: woh gaari chala raha tha aur phir gaari out of control ho gayi aur di... hamesha ke liye chali gayi!!

A: Par dii.. whatever!! samrat mera hain!! aapka nahi ho sakta!!

G: theek hain ashwini!! main is baar tumhe kuchh nahi boloongi!! tum try kar lo!! agar samrat tumse pyaar karta hain toh main tum dono ke beech nahi aaoongi!! par agar woh tumse pyaar nahi karta toh tum samjhogi aur life main aage badogi!! promise??

A: promise!! par aapko mujhse promise karna hoga ki aap samrat ko kuchh nahi batayengi is bare main!!

G: theek hain!!

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That nite

G to herself: ashwini main jaanti hoo samrat ko.. woh tumhe dekhega bhi nahi!! apna dill mat dukhao!! par mujhe pata hain.. jab woh tumhe mana kar dega toh tum aur khsush rahogi aur normal rahogi!! rohan tumhare liye perfect hain!!

S to himself: (talking to nupur while looking outside the window) nupur... thank you aaj mera saath dene ke liye!! aaj tumhari wajah se chahsmish mujhe wapas mill gayi hain!! sirf tumhari wajah se!! Aur ab main chahsmish ko apne se kabhi alag nahi hone dunga!!

M: nupur.. (looking at her picture) i love you!! aaj tumhari bohot yaad aa rahi hai!! sach!

N: mayank main tumhare paas he toh hoon!!

He looks back!! nupur was standing in a red saaree..

M: nupur...

N: shh.. tumne aaj jo kiya uske liye thanx.. gunjan ko main aise nahi dekh sakti thi!! woh mere moth ke liye samrat ko kyun blame karti thii!! woh ek accident tha..

M: pata hain nupur!! par tabhi.. main bhi pehle samrat ko hi blame karta tha.. par ab mujhe bhi samajh aa raha hai ki uski koi galati nahi thii!!!!

N: bye mayank!! have a good life.. aur haan ria bohot sweet hain!! par haan... uske chakkar main mujhe bhoole na toh!! meri nazar hamesha tumpar rahegi!!

M nodded!! bye nupur!

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Alpenliebe

@Alpenliebe

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 15 years ago

edited !! Ooooo....very bad I am 2nd 😭
Wow Manjari, yaar tumne phir se kamaal kar diya.......
OS was simply amazing.....Sajan united at last...........yipeeeeeee !!!!
Keep it up dear.....do write more OS......yo are an amazing writer
Thanx for the pm sweets

love

Aditi

Edited by me_angel - 15 years ago

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maria

@marisol45

Inactive

Posted: 15 years ago

awwe just awesome
loved sajan
really wish this happens in the show

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SoniRita

@SoniRita

Viewbie

+ 60

Posted: 15 years ago

Omg omg manjari awesome idea yaar too good kaash Aisa show mein bhi ho hey tum ye os pm karna CVS ko samjhi loved it yaar loved it to core bt omg I jst hopeee ash don't come between sajan man anyways I knew da reaction of gunji she gonna be mad at him n she was bt aww loved Sammy dialogue n dat lead info sajan makeup woohoo anyways r u gonna update part 2 also continue asap

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BlueEyes

@GulaabiAakhein.

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 15 years ago

@anu.. its no point sending it to the cvs!! as if they will even read it!!

n im not that good also! glad you liked it!!

and about the part 2.. m not too sure! this was just an idea I got!

maybe i update but.. i already hv 2 ffs n dont hv time to update them!!

@aditi!! thanx a lot!! really happy ull liked it soooo much!! keep reading and commenting!!

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RapChick101

@RapChick101

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

loved d prt!!!
esp Ash cuming to kno tht Samrat ONLY BELONGS to Gunjan!

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BlueEyes

@GulaabiAakhein.

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 15 years ago

thanx alot meerri!!

I just wish this happens!! Sg back together would eb so cool!!

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SoniRita

@SoniRita

Viewbie

+ 60

Posted: 15 years ago

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Originally posted by: Mjhtrox11
@anu.. its no point sending it to the cvs!! as if they will even read it!!
n im not that good also! glad you liked it!!

and about the part 2.. m not too sure! this was just an idea I got!

maybe i update but.. i already hv 2 ffs n dont hv time to update them!!

@aditi!! thanx a lot!! really happy ull liked it soooo much!! keep reading and commenting!!

hmm manjari if u get time naa plz do update dis os n hey dear u should write more os like dis u r really good at it ok