SaJan OS n nupur's comeback..updated on pg 23 - Page 13

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: JATINTHAKKAR

Debo,😃


Nice One.👏

Good Concept too.👏


thanks alot jatin!!
will cont asap 😃
thanks for reading n commenting! :D
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Posted: 15 years ago

hey friends!! so i'm back with the update of this os..its nupur's...oops neetu's first day in college, hope u will enjoy! :D

the trio conversation! (sam,gunji n mayu)
mayu: dekho guys, aaj uska pehela din hai, main nehi chahta ki kuch be galat ho
samrat: chinta mat karo mayank, sab kuch plan ke hisabse hi hoga
gunji: di ke aane ka time hogaya hai, vo aati hi hogi
samrat: guys, hamara nupur mission ka pehela din successful jaana chahiye, so ready!
majan?: yup!
neetu entering the college n walking in the corridors
sayank were standing together n mayank was watching her n remembering mayur moments
mayank: kabhie nehi socha tha ki aisa waqt bhi aayega jab apni nupur ko apna keh nehi paaonga
samrat: chinta mat karo mayank...neetu nupur zaroor banegi
or vaise bhi zyaada difference bhi nehi hain...nupur aur neetu mein "N" common to hain aur surname bhi same hain" sharma"
samrat teasing mayank
n mayank blushed😳
sam: aree, yeh such mein sharma raha hain
neetu came towards sayank
neetu: hello sir..vo main actually neyi hoon is college mein to mujhe pata nehi hain ki konsa classroom kaha hai so can u plz help me..she asked with a cute smile
samrat: oh sure! professor mayank sharma aapko guide kar denge..ok??
neetu: thanks alot
samrat winked at mayank n left mayur
mayu: to chale??
neetu: sure!
mayank takes her to the class room where they used to study
before!
when neetu enters the classroom she gets some unclear flashbacks (fb of mayur in the classroom) which she cannot recognize n gets very uncomfortable..when mayu sees the tensed face of her, he has a smile on his face
mayu: hmm kya hua neetu ji? aap teekh to hain??
neetu: ab haan, bas ajeeb sa lag raha tha, aisa jaise mein pehele bhi yaha pei aayi hoon..
mayank: oh, koyee baat nehi, aap thora sa rest kar lijiye
plz have a seat
neetu: okzz..thank u
as she sits down she gets all those flashbacks of mayur in the class, talking n their nokh-jhoks
neetu: plz. mujhe is class se bahar jaana hain, kehi aur chale
mayu: sure miss neetu, chaliye (with a big smile on his face)
he takes her to th library😉
cut to sajan
gunji: samrat, tumhe lagta hain ki yeh plan kaam karega??
sam:chashmish, aajtak mera plan fail nehi hua hain, aur yeh wala to zaroor kaam karega, tumhe mujhe trust karti hona?
gunji; khud se bhi zyaada😳
samrat: to bas, yeh trust aise hi banai rekho aur dekho tumhaari di kaise tumhe pehchaanegi
gunjan nodded n both of them smiled
cut to mayur
as she enters the library, once again she gets all those unclear flashback..mayur locket fb, their talk about thier son n nokh jokhs fb
mayank: yeh hamaare college ka library hain
neetu: vo to mujhe bhi dikh raha hain, lekin yeh jaga bhi....
mayu: yeh jaga bhi kya??
neetu: haan, ku..kuch nehi
lekin yeh jaga bhi tumhe hamari hi yaad dilah rehi hain na nupur?
mayank says it in his mind...when the bell rings n gunji enters the library, she sees them together n smiles
mayu: anyways ab meri class hai to ab aapko hamari college ki councilor gunjan bhushan aapko yaha pe help karegi :)
neetu: gunjan bhushan?? yeh naam maine kahi suna hai kya?? hmm
neetu: jee teekh hai, vaise thank u mister mayank sharma
mayu: mention not
mayu leaves n gunji sees her her a bit tensed
gunji: kya huya?? aap teekh to ho?
neetu: haan bas, yahan pe sab kuch bohot ajeeb lagrah hain
gunji understood why was she feeling like that
neetu: vaise tum yaha pe councilor ho?
gunji: haan, vaise aapko pata hain, meri ek di hain, jo bilkul aap ki tarha hain, to kya main aapko di bulah sakti hoon?
she asked with lots of hope..
neetu: of course gunjan! mujhe yaha pe agar ek choti behen mile to mere liye bohot acha hain
both of them smiled!
suddenly they heard that there was an announcement everybody rushed outside
neetu: are yeh log aise kaha jaa rahe hai
gunji: vo actually kuch annouce hone wala hai, to isliye sab jaa rahe hai...to hum bhi chale di
neetu: haan, chalo :)
samrat was standing in front of everyone...
samrat: ok..everybody! mujhe kuch announce karna hain
kal college mein ek bohot bari party hain...aap logo ko shayad surprising lage ki kis vaje se yeh party hain
well, yeh party kyun hai, yeh main aap sab ko kal bataonga..so request hai ki sab students aur teachers kal college ke is grand party mein aaye..
as samrat was announcing majan looked at each other n smiled which was a sign that the plan was going well
After the annoucement everybody went including neetu
on the trio were left
mayu: samrat plan bohot acha chal raha hain n today's day was successful
samrat: gr8! bas agar aise hi chalta gaya to neetu ko nupur bane se koi nehi rok sakta
gunji: vaise kya kal ki party ki sab taayari ho chuki hain??
sam: of course!
mayu: kal neetu party mein aaygi lekin nupur ban ke jaayegi 😉
to kya hoga party mein?? kya neetu ko kuch aayega yaad??
kya mayank ko apna pyaar,gunjan ko apni di aur samrat ko apni dost vaapus mil paayegi? dekhne ke liye keep reading
hey guys! thats it for today
i know it was boring update but i promise u all the next update will be better than this..do comment guys
thanks for reading!
luv
debo😳
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Posted: 15 years ago
Debo🤗
Thats Really Amazing
First Day Of Neetu Oops Nups Was Really Good 😛
And The Party Plan Sounds Really Exciting,
Cont.Soon
Thanks For The PM

-Mehek-
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Posted: 15 years ago

Debooooo.....🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗.....

Wat an update!!....haiii fbs to mujhe ane lage...specially wo pranav wale...😳... thanks for the pm... love u loadssss....🤗🤗🤗....
Edited by yashu_mjht - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hey DEBO, ye lo tumhare liye 🤗 🤗

Awesome update sweety...you rocked once again.......

Beautifully written.......n sweety its not at all boring....

keep it up n continue ASAP......thanx for the pm

love
Aditi
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Posted: 15 years ago
thanks alot!😃
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: kasufan4ever

Debo🤗
Thats Really Amazing
First Day Of Neetu Oops Nups Was Really Good 😛
And The Party Plan Sounds Really Exciting,
Cont.Soon
Thanks For The PM

-Mehek-

MEHEK! 🤗
thanks alot for ur awesome comment jaan!
will cont soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
wah kya update tha debo!
luved it!
waiting for the next part!
waise bade dinon se tere se baat nahin hui yaar!missing u
luv u
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: yashu_mjht

Debooooo.....🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗.....

Wat an update!!....haiii fbs to mujhe ane lage...specially wo pranav wale...😳... thanks for the pm... love u loadssss....🤗🤗🤗....

omg! thank u soo much yashu 🤗🤗
loved readin ur comment yaar!
love u loads too!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hey debo....!!
Awesome update...i loved it:D
n it was not at all boring...!
Since its samrat's plan i hv full faith in it..uske plans kabhi fail nahin hote😉

Cant wait for the next update...Do cont sooon...!
Thanks for the PM

Lots of Luv
ZJ🤗

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