||My OS Gall|| How they met- PG 1

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Hola!

Sorry guys! I know i'd posted this earlier But it got closed unfortunately. So, here I am opening an OS galls for all the SG or MN oneshots I write! :D

I hope you like this OS :) Do comment or criticize :D! I've written this AS a form of feelings I thought they might be feeling at that time :D! A refreshment to think about the good old days :D

Thanks AVANI for giving me the permission :)

How they met!

Gunjan's POV

Here I am In a Unknown Place, in Mumbai..I dont Know Why I agreed to come here. I could have easily stayed at Bui's place in Morena with chinky. Why did Di have to force Me to come here? This feels so Awkward Entering a room Where the Lights are all closed. Di looks so confident that everyone would like her and I'm So nervous. Di mutters something about Clothes. I mean What? Everyone looks nice in the dark . OMG, Why did Dia have To invite us to such a Party? If this was a welcome Party, Was everyone expected to scream "surprise"? But It isn't a Surprise anymore now that we know. And where was Dia? Why Was this party room or Any room dark? WHY?

Scary Noices intrude

OK. This wasn't the way I wanted it..Someone was trying to scare me and very well succeeding. Di asks him Who he was and the lights switch on suddenly. What was happening? Why were these People trying to Scare us off? OMG! A guy is coming so close to me..Bachao! In some sort of self defence, I push him and he falls on a thing like a trolley. OMG! WHAT HAVE I DONE? Another guy comes. He looks Smart and is in a White vest. Our eyes meet and I dont know why I am getting lost in his Eyes. I look at him. Suddenly I remember what Had I done. I curse myself for forgetting and Move forward to the guy in the white vest and say that I am sorry And I had no intention to Do this and it was only due to that guy and she shuldnt have misbehaved with them.

Di Tells That I had done nothing wrong and There was no need to say sorry to these sorts of Guys. Di drags Me by my arm But my Mind is somewhere else , Maybe wondering if Those guys Had forgiven Me.

Samrat's POV

Ok, We are all set. Everything is done for the morena behenji's. They look positively scared. Am I doing right to them? Oh Gosh, Sam you aren't even seeing them properly in this dim light, Why are You sympathizing with them? I am enjoying These scary noises By jacko and Benji. Atlast They Are able to do something in the right way.

The Lights switch on But why is Jacko Going so Close? She pushes Him Into a trolley like thing and he crashes. I can now see Her face Completely. She looks positively angelic inthat orange colour salwar. I never expected a behenji to look so pretty.She asks for forgiveness from me and I wonder why my eyes Dont seem to leave her for even a moment. Her sister drags her and makes her go amd tells her that There was no need to say Sorry to these type of guys. For the first Time in My Life, I seem to feel sad for playing a prank on someone. These thoughts are brushed away quickly as I plan to move forward with the plan and dress Up as Bhavesh.

BUT the big question was "Am I doing the Right thing?". I dress up as Bhavesh

Sort of Narratation in the BG : We don't know How they met. We dont know how They felt. But the Only story worth watching is How they fell in love [Original Line ]

Gunjan's POV

We walk forward. I'm surprised to see these people. They are barely dressed and I cant imagine how brainless they are. I now atleast this scene cannot be described as a party. ABSOLUTELY NOT!I try to tell Di but she is too busy staring at something. I get frustrated and try to drag Di by her arm as I wanted to GO. With allthis people barely dressed and so rude, it was Better to leave even if the party was to welcome us. Yeah, To welcome US. I cant believe a welcoming party would be thrown like this filled with all rude people.

Di says that she thought that in this place, the people were wearing clothes like they were making a favour to someone. ATLAST, Di agrees with me. I drag her to leave She seems to try to make me stop. BUT WAS I listening?Of course not. The sooner we leave this madhouse, the better.

I drag her to leave but we bump with someone. NOT again.

It was Dia. I look at her from head to toe. She was as barely dressed as the others. City Fashion? If this really was the city fashion, NOWAY was I going to like living here. Preposterous.

Dia and Di hug and simultaneously bump their heads. I giggle.

Di tells everything to Dia. Dia says that it was a POOL party. Di nudges me. I look. Even If it was a pool Party (whateverthat is) It was no excuse for people to dress like that.

Dia asks if this sort for thing didn't happen in Morena.I shake my head. Thank goodness it didn't. happen in Morena.

Another girl comes and asks where Morena was. Di answers that it was in Madhya Pradesh. Everyone comes Including that guy I pushed. They seem to be mocking at us. I think for the 100tth time, why did I have to come here? This was not my type of place.

Dia ask them Not to make fun of us. They chorus "whatever you say Dia". What people!

That boy whom I pushed [TBWIP] [I seriously have to know his name FAST] asks where our swimming costume was. Di regretfully answers that it wasn't there.

TBWIP asks if we were used to swimming in Morena in salwar suits. I wanted to push him again the way he answered Di!! I didn't know swimming and was Partly thankful for that otherwise Iwould have to wear costumes like that

Dia asks Annie to show us the party. She takes us from there.

Samrat's POV

I'm dressing up as bhavesh and Dia sees me and Mouths a 'WOW'. Of course Everyone who seesSamrat is meant to exclaim 'WOW'. I mean who can look cool even in a nerd type costume. I read my lines again and flashed a thumbs Up to Dia.

Gunjan's POV

Dia says that she would introduce us to all. I wanted to protest as I wanted to leave buT Di silenced me.

Dia beat a glass to Get everyone's attention. Poor glass

Dia asks everyone to meet us, Nupur and Gunjan from Morena. Dia pronounced it differently and it sounded like Mouiraina. All laugh. Was my own sister making fun of us? No I think it was purely unintentional as She corrected herself and said it properly. We put forth a 'namaste' to all.

Samrat's POV

I stand Just back to morena sisters. Dia winks at me and I put my Glasses which were slipping to its original position. I go to them and blabber off my lines which I had practiced to perfection with a little here and there. Gunjan or rather Gunjanji in Bhavesh style seemed to buy the whole thing. How gullible. But I could feel something as if I was doing something wrong to her.

Gunjan's POV

Bhavesh, atlast someone as simple as us. Thank God. Some normal people also lived here who were respectable. I didn't expect to meet someone like him in such a wild party like this. Atlast a Companion whom I can trust.

>> Some time later>>

Gunjan's POV

We see Dia dancing wildly with some boy in only a banyan. How could she? I mean didn't chachaji prevent her from doing so and wearing barely coverable clothes? Di also was going to dance when I stopped her. It was bad enough that one of my sisters would dance like that shamelessly But not Di. I tell di about the boy. She also is surprised. I continue by telling her that I thought that except Bhavesh, everyone looked like they eve-tease.

Samrat's POV

Dia tells me that I had done a superb job on Acting. Of course Samrat dosent leave anything halfway. Dia asks me to handle Gunjan Coz Nupur's preparations were handled. Of course, I had no objection. But I have a feeling that it'd be fun but something disastrous may come out of it.

Gunjan's POV

Some friends of Dia come and ask Di to dance. They tell her that They will teach her how to dance. Di tells them that at morena, She had won the first prize 3 times. Good showing Di. They say that Di had a passion for Dancing and they had a passion for making someone dance. They try to take Di.

NOO Di, you cant go. You have to stay with me. I'm already soo scared. Please don't leave me.

Di is dragged by those friends of Dia. I stared after her.

Samrat's POV

I look ather looking scared and frightened. I chuckle.

Gunjan's POV

Some tell Di to dance. She is on the stage now. She asks me in sign language if she should dance. I nodd my head. She turns around and begins to dance. She dances quite nicely according to me But I don't know why everyone seems to be mocking at her. After it finishes, Everyone claps. So maybe it was just my imagination. They were genuinely interested in her dance. I too clap and flash a thumbs up to her.

She made her way to me and we both hugged. I'm soo happy.

Samrat's POV.

My friends ask me what I was going to do. Hah! I had a plan already. I go up to the mike and say in the Bhavesh style that after that greta performance it was Gunjanji's turn.

Gunjan's POV

No way Am I going to Do anything. NO, no no. Di tries to comfort me and reminds me of the blindfold game when I had won a prize and Di had stole it. Uday bhaiya seemes to have heard it. Oh No... how can I refuse him? He already seems o have conjured a cloth up. GREAT.He took off my Specs while I was protesting and Di comforted me and made me feel a little better. He tied the cloth around my eyes. I start to tear but fortunately control myself. Bhavesh says that he would be with me during the game. A relief.

Uday Bhaiya drags me aa little and I lose hold of Di's hand. How little and scared I feel. It was as if there was no-one to hold on to, no one to confide in and no one to blindly trust and go wherever she/he would lead me.

Uday bhaiya leads me and leaves me. I feel so scared, so deprived.

We begin playing the game. Everyone throws in his/her voice in order to confuse me. Oh No, I cant find anyone. I wander about not knowing that I wason the edge of the swimming pool.

Samrat's POV

What a joke! I'm seriously enjoying this blindfold game.

But wait, Gunjan is going towards the edge of thepool. OMG! Is she going to fall? I want to go and tell her. No Samrat, you'd foil the plan. But I cant let her fall, can I?

The right part seemed to be more dominant and I rushed to tell her. I could feel everyone 'tching' But I am doing what I think is right.

I try to tell her but she couldn't hear. I wonder why. As on an impulse, I grabbed her hand. I don't know what happened but she seemed to be startled and she slipped taking me along with her.

Gunjan's POV

I'm wandering about. Suddenly Bhavesh comes and warns me about something. I ask him again. He grabs my hand. I get frightened and I try to step back. I fall with him into the water. The only conclusion I can gather in my drowning state that I have fallen in the swimming pool!

Samrat's POV

There. I'm all drenched. Atleast I was in a a better condition than Gunjan. I overhear her sister Screaming that she did not know swimming. Omigosh, We only meant it as a prank! We did not mean evento make someone fall in the pool, let alone make her drown! Atleast not I.

Fortunately I know how to swim! I swim to her in an attempt to rescue her.

I lift her up in my arms and take her near the edge of the pool where she is lifted up by eager hands.

I silently thank God.

I ask her if she felt all right. Never in my life had I felt so anxious for someone. If I say I was very worried, it would be a Major understatement.

Gunjan's POV

I don't feel soo good. Of course, who would feel good when they have just been saved from drowning in a pool? I cough up lots of water trying to catch my breath. I feel suffocated.

Bhavesh asks If I was all right. I'm touched by his gesture. I mean He was only trying to save me from falling into the pool and I only ended up making both of us fall. I look at him as I feel Di making me stand up and taking me.

My eyes cannot leave his.

Samrat's POV

I watch her fleetingly as her sister makes her stand up and takes her.

Her gaze is also fixed on mine. There was something about her gaze that made me anticipate about something, Something that made me me jump for the joy of it or something that held eternal gratitude for me.

Never in my life Have I felt so confused.


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