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Keeping current misunderstandings btw my Fav MayUr; I wud b very happy if CVs show that these misunderstandings helped their relationship to get more stronger.

Keeping this in mind this is my sincere attempt to write how this track might end.

Two days had passed that nupur left for delhi. Mayank was missing her badly but his ego refused to accept the very fact. He started trying for the new job. Today was his interview in the very reputed firm n he really prepared very hard for the interview; this time without any distraction.

As expected he got the job n the pay scale was also very attractive. He accepted the job without even thinking twice. He was very happy n wanted to share the news with his better half but damn his mighty ego again didn't allow him to do that.

He went to college to take the notes for the topics he missed during the last few days. He met gunjan in the college and shared the good news with her n gunjan immediately asked that whether he told it to nupur or not?????

G: jiju kya tumne yeh khabar di ko batayi????

M: nahin. Waise bhi usse kaunsi khusi honewali hai???? Vo to bas apne baare mein sochti hai??? Usse kya farak padta hai meri khusi se???

G: hearing this gunjan was so angry on him dat she just bursted out on him n told him the conversation which she n nupur had before nupur leaving for delhi (inspite of her promise to nupur dat she wont tel anything to mayank). Ab samajh mein aaya ki din e kyu schlorship ke liye apply kiya??? Sirf tumhara sapna apna banana ke liye. Usse kab kitabon se pyaar tha but phir bhi ussne apni puri jaan laga di is schlorship ke liye aur tum itne bade loser ho yeh mujhe pata nahin tha kit um apne haar ke liye di ko blame karoge. Aur waise bhi di ne tumhe us raat phone kiya tha par tumne kaha receive kiya to vo kaha se tumhe kuch explain kar paati??? I m really hurt jiju kit um di ke saath aisa kar sakte ho

She left

Mayank hearing all this was speechless. He had no idea dat wat he shuld do further to rectify his mistake but one thing now he knew for sure that ha durt nupur very badly n this time he his going to take very long to rectify the mistake. May be this is going to take a toll on their relationship.

He started towards home all the way thinking that now wat shuld he do. He was filled with the feeling of guilt. Now he needed nupur or MAA badly to put his head on either of their shoulder n just wanted to cry loudly.

He entered home. He wasn't feeling of having dinner so just went on his bed n lie there thinking the same. But then suddenly he realised dat if nupur was here she wuldnt hav liked him skipping his dinner so he went n started cooking. He cooked food n sat on the table. He ate just one or two morsels n just got up from the table. He was so choked that he was unable to do anything. He went to bed but there was no sleep in his eyes. He just kept thinking of nupur dat wat she must hav went truh wen he refused to support her. Thinking this he slept.

Next day morning he woke up but felt like doing nothing. So he had no breakfast n decided dat he wont go to college

The same thing used to repeat everyday. He was feeling so much guilty that he did nothing for next 4-5 days. Neither he ate properly nor he attended college with his full attention in the lectures neither he bonded with the gang. Due to this emotional trauma no proper intake of food he grew weak n fell ill.

Many times he picked his phone to call nupur but he had no courage to say anything. He was so ashamed that he knew dat even 100 sorrys cant heal the heart broken nupur.

Finally the day of nupur's return arrived. She was hopeful dat these eight days distance was enough for both of them to realise that more than anything else in this world they needed each other's support n care. She was kind of sure dat mayank will cum to receive her on the airport but due to his illness he was unable to go to the airport.

Nupur was even more hurt n thought hav I done such a big mistake dat he even didn't came to receive me??? Is he loving this distance??? Thinking all these she started for home alone. She reached n was surprised to see the messed house which wasn't at all the mayank sharma's home.

She saw that food on the dinning table was as it is. The house was not at all clean, she wondered that wat has happened to mayank n then thought dat may b he must be spending most of his time in the library so this is the condition of the house. She thought of first having shower n then cleaning the house. She went in the bedroom n was surprised to find mayank lying on the bed. She noticed that he has bcum weak n just headed towards him to find out wat has happened. Mayank saw nupur was very happy but he was unable to speak up to her bcoz of his guilt n also due to his illness.

N: kya hua tum aaj college nahin gaye?? Aur ghar ki yeh haalat?? Tum thik to ho naa? She just checked his forehead n noticed that he was suffering from high fever. Without further asking any questions she just called the doctor

Doctor examined n told that this was due to no proper food n may b sumthing is bothering him very much which he is unable to express.

He needed proper food n more than that proper care n love to cum back to normalcy.

Nupur started thinking that was this due to her. She thought that her going to delhi leaving mayank alone wen he needed her support has hurt him very much n so he took no care of himself wen she was not around. She started blaming herself for mayank's bad health. Then she said to herself that all said n done now I will do nothing dat will hurt him. I will live the life exactly the way he likes. May b he don't need me in his life but one thing is certain that I need him the most in my life n I will do anything to make this relationship work.

Nupur had to join to her new job after a week. She thought of giving up the job but she culdnt do that bcoz every candidate had signed a bond with the company to serve the same company for two yrs after the training n leaving the job wuld mean paying the compensation for breaking the bond. She said lets see how the things work out but let me first bring mayank back to his normal health.

She took care of mayank. She fed him proper n prescribed food. Gave him medicines n took his proper care. It almost took 3-4 days for mayank to recover.

During this time they hardly talk to each other. Everytime mayank tried to talk to her about their fight she wuld wisely change the topic thinking that again the same things n argument will further worsen the things n she decided not to discuss that topic again in her whole life.

Mayank recovered n he also had to join his job. He told the nupur about his job n she was very happy that finally now he will b able to fulfil his dreams

Both of them joined their jobs. But nupur was changed completely. She just bcame perfect n more responsible exactly the way mayank wuld love her to b. she woke early everyday, she wuld do all the household chores make the breakfast iron his clothes make his lunch box ready; that means everything perfect. She gave mayank no chance to complain about anything. Days were passing by mayank noticed this change in nupur n was happy for first few days but as days passed by he noticed that sumthing was seriously wrong with her n she was not speaking up her mind to him. He knew that this was all due to that nonsense schlorship misunderstanding but everytime he tried to clear ur the misunderstanding she wuldnt allow him to do that thinking that the same wuld again aggravate the things n make him upset.

She just knew one thing that she cant lose mayank or their relationship at any cost. Those 8 days were enough dose for her to make her realise the importance of their relationship. But she failed to understand that same was the condition with mayank n also he has understood that he needed her the most in his life n that his dreams wont mean anything if nupur wasn't with him.

Their life was just perfect. Mayank said to himself " ab kush hai naa? Teri life to ekdum perfect hai jaisi tu chahta tha. Kya kiya yeh tune mayank??? Teri pyaari, chirpy, filmy nupur ko tune kya bana diya hai. Ab naa hi vo pehle ki tarah khana jhalati hai aur naa hi tujhse kabhi koi expectation rakhti hai. Naa hi tere late ghar aane pe tujhse naaraz hoti hai bas jaise tu chahta hai waise hi rehti hai. Kabhi koi demand nahi yaa kabhi koi explanation nahin maangti" I miss u nupur, meri pyaari, filmy, jyaada bolnewali nupur. Mujhe pata hai ki maine tumhe hurt kiya hai lekin main tumhe wapas paa ke rahunga. Iske liye mujhe jo kuch karma pade.

That's it for today guys'. I will update it soon but do let me know that will u like to read the next part

Plzzzzzz comment guys.

you are free to criticize it. also u can suggest me the further story as u wuld like it to b. but plzzzzzzzzzzz share ur views.

Part II

Mayank started trying out ways which he thought would help nupur open up to him n speak her mind to him. He tried various ways.

Sometimes he wuld ask nupur to allow him prepare breakfast for both of them but she wuld say no, its ok u just get ready for the college I'll manage it.

He knew that nupur liked to spend quality time on weekends. Hence sometimes On the weekends he wuld purposefully indulge himself in studies hoping that nupur will b angry n wuld vent out her anger on him. May b in that anger she may open up to him. But she did nothing like that. She wuld just engage herself in some other chores while mayank wuld just wait for her reaction.

Sumtimes he purposefully asked her to accompany him for the walk in the evening even if he culd make out from her face that she had a tiring day at the job. But she still wuld not disagree with him. She wuld accompany him without complaining.

It was almost a month but nothing helped nupur to open up to him.

He received his first salary n bought nupur a dress but not her favourite colour. He wanted to do sumthing which wuld just excite her n she wuld just burst out at him. He knew that sumthing shuld trigger her anger n she wuld in that anger will speak up everything wat is going on in her inside world. He gave the dress to her. She accepted it n said that she just loved the dress. Mayank was so surprised with this that she didn't complain at all abt the colour.

Nupur just said to herself "has he forgotten my favourite colour?? Never mind. At least he bought sumthing for me frm his first salary.

I shuld feel happy abt that.

Mayank tried every possible way but nothing touched her heart. It wasn't that nupur didn't understand his love it was just that she didn't wanted to say or do anything which wuld upset him. She had imbibed on her mind so strongly that she wuld live the her life only the mayank liked it.

They used to chat a lot during their breakfast n dinner time but never nupur spoke anything abt her schlorship training or abt her job. Mayank wuld purposefully discuss his job matters with her hoping that someday she will also discuss her work atmosphere. Hoe are the people she is working with? How she is managing the things at her work place. But never she did that. She listened to what mayank said n wen mayank asked her abt her day she wuld just reply as it was good or it was tiring but never spoke anything more than that.

She thought that it was her decision to take up the job which had hurt his ego n so he suffered so much a month back. So its better if she didn't talk abt her job to him. She also received her first salary n thought of gifting him but she was afraid that it wuld again hurt his ego n he wuld b angry so she bought his favourite perfume but kept it with herself. She didn't give it to him.

Days were passing by. Mayank was really worried that wat he shuld do to bring his old nupur back. Everyday he used to think of ways but those were in vain.

Oneday he was returning home n suddenly it started rainig. Mayank didn't care n he kept walking towards home. He reached home. Nupur saw him drenched in rain and shouted at him "tum bheegkar kyun aaye ho??" suddenly she realised that she shuldnt b angry with him n she lowered her tone n said "thodi der kahin shelter main wait kar lete. Baarish rukne ke baad aate." She went inside to bring the towel for him. Mayank was happy to hear her high pitch volume. It was almost after a month or two dat he saw the hint of dat old nupur. Mayank was waiting dat she will now cum n dry his hair but instead she handed the towel to him n said "baal phoochlo varna thand lag jaayegi" (only bcoz he didn't like anyone touching his hair) mayank was very upset but now he had got the hint that wat he shuld do to bring his old nupur back.

Next day he returned home n nupur realised that his lunch box was untouched. She asked the reason n he said that he didn't get the time to hav his lunch. Nupur was angry but didn't say anything.

Mayank very alternate day or after two days started skipping his lunch purposefully. Sumtimes he purposefully went home late without informing him n that empty stomach. All these used to bother her very much but still she wuld say to herself "gussa mat kar nupur kaam bhi to utna hi important hai. Tu janti hai vo jab kisi kaam mein engrossed hota hai to usse na bukh lagti hai aur na waqt ka pata chalta hai". Mayank everyday hopefully went home that today may b her patience wuld give an answer n she wuld burst out her anger. But he failed everyday.

One day nupur returned home very happy. She wanted to share it with him but without letting him know the actual reason of her happiness. So she cooked all his favourite dishes for the dinner n also baked a cake. Mayank returned n noticed her happiness he asked her "kya hua aaj bahut kush lag rahi ho aur cake bhi banaya hai koi khaas baat??" She replied "kuch nahin bas aise hi aaj jaldi free ho gayee thi aur kuch achcha khaane ka maan kar raha tha. Bas isiliye". Hearing this he was happy that after ages she did sumthing for herself but he didn't fail to realise that every dish she cooked was his favourite one. They both enjoyed the dinner n chatted for long.

Next day again he skipped his lunch purposefully.

(In the college) vinay (one of the candidate who also won the schlorship alongwith nupur came to him n said) "kya mayank tumhe to party deni chahiye hum sabko"

M: kyun maine aisa kya kaam kiya hai??

Vinay: tumne nahin. Lekin tumhe nupur ki success to celebrate karni chahiye

M: matlab?? Main kuch samjha nahin??

Vinay: kyun nupur ne bataya nahin usse kal outstanding performer ka award mila. May b shayad vo tumhe surprise dena chahti ho. I m so soory yaar maine uske surprise par paani pher diya. Chal bye

M (to himself) achcha to isliye itni kush thi kal. But phir usne mujhe bataya kyun nahin? He banged his hand on the table. It was a broken table so one of the nail just hurt him n blood started cuming out. But he culdnt feel this pain bcoz deep inside his heart he was hurt badly by nupur's behaviour. (He started for home. All the way he was thinking) kyu nupur ab tum apni kushiyaan bhi mujhse share nahin karti?? Kya mein itna bura hoon?? Meri ek galti ki itni badi saza ki tumne mujhse meri pyaari nupur hi cheen li?? (suddenly it started raining) mayank kept walking in the rain. Kya tumhe sach mein lagta hai ki tumhari success se jalta ho jo itni important aur itni achchi khabar tumne mujhe nahin sunai. Mein apni saari baatein tumse share karta hoon aur tum?? Tum mujhe apni us galti ke liye maafi bhi to nahin maangne deti. Jab bhi tumse schlorshipwali baat ke liye maafi maangna chahta hoom tum baat badal deti ho. Kyun nupur kyun?

He reached home. He rang the bell. She opened the door n saw him all wet. This made her angry but she kept quiet. She just took the books n lunch box from his hand. She felt it heavy n suddenly she understood that he had not ate his lunch. She was unable to control herself n just bursted out at him

N: "tumne aaj bhi apna lunch skip kiya?? (moving towards room to get the towel for him) tumhe itna kya kaam hota hai kit um apna lunch karma bhool jaate ho? Ab yeh tumhaara roz ka naatak ho gaya hai; Isi tarah karte rahe to phir se bimaar ho jaagoge (cuming towards him to give the towel) yeh lo apna sar pooch lo (mayank forwarded his hand to take the towel n nupur saw his bleeding hand.) Ab yeh haath ko kya hua?? Mayank was abt to reply but she started drying his hair n she continued "tum bilkul apna khayal nahin rakhte. Apna nahin to kam se kam mera toh khayal kar liya karo. (Mayank was actually liking to hear her scolding. This was it. He wanted to see this nupur from so many days. He was just enjoying the way she showed her love after so many days. He did not bother to stop her. She ran to get the first aid box n returned n she continued)Mein jaanti hu tumhe meri koi jarurat nahin lekin mujhe hai tumhe kuch ho jaata hai to meri jaan nikal jaati hai. Aur kya karu mein tumhare liye? Maine apne aap ko badal to diya hai, jaise tum chahhte ho waise rehti hun? Kabhi kuch nahin kehti phir bhi tum kyu nahin samjhte ki mein tumhare bina ek pal bhi nahin reh sakti" (hearing this he was choked n tears came rolling down his eyes. He just put her hand on her mouth she looked up n she realised that he was crying) suddenly her voice lowered n she said "I m sorry mein tumhe hurt nahin karma chahti thi" she was saying this but mayank just hugged her tightly. Nupur tried to break apart but he didn't allowed her to do that. He cried. They were in the same position till he calmed down n after sumtime he break apart their hug n said to her nupur mein bhi tumhare bina nahin reh paata hun. Bas mein kabhi yeh tumse thik se jata nahin paaya buit mere liye tum meri saasein ho agar tum ho toh mere liye yeh zindagi hai varna mere jeene ki koi wajah nahin. Maine kitni baar tumse apni schlorshipwali galti ke maafi maangne ki try kiya but tum kabhi mujhe us topic par baat hi nahin karne deti ho. Mera yakin maano mujhe pata chal gaya ki tumne jo kuch bhi kiya vo hamare liye tha aur tum selfish nahin ho selfish to mein tha jo tumhare kushi mein tumhara saath nahin diya. Kya tum mujhe sach mein maaf nahin kar sakti?? Tumne apne aap ko kitna badal diya hai aur yeh dekhkar mujhe apne aap par itna gussa aata hai ki meri wajah se tumne itna kuch sahaa aur mein guilty feel karta hun kit um kabhi mujhse kuch bhi nahin kehti. Mein apni uss nupur ko itna miss karta hoon. Jab bhi tum mujhe late aane par yaa khaana naa khane par daatti thi to mujhe aisa lagta tha ki koi to hai meri itni care karta hai. Jo mujhpe apna haq jatata hai. Jab bhi tum mujhse koi bachchowali demand karti thi to mujhe itna achcha lagta tha. Mein bahut special feel karta tha ki jis ladki ne kabhi apne bauji se koi zid nahin ki vo mujhse zid karti hai. Mujhe itna importance deti hai. Lekin tumne to apne aap ko hi badal diya Nupur tried to explain "meine to yeh sab" mayank interrupted "mein jaanta hon tumne yeh sab mere liye kiya lekin mujhe bilkul achcha nahin laga" nupur consoling him "ab jo ho gaya so gaya, saari pichli baatein bhool jaate hai aur phirse ek nayi shurvat karte hai". They both hugged each other n that night they both slept peacefully.

Next morning:

Mayank woke up early n was so happy to see nupur sleeping peacefully beside him. He just kissed her forehead n got up. He went n called up diya told her sumthing n diya replied "thik hai sab kuch ho jaayega"

Nupur woke up. They both decided to spend whole day with each other. No college no job. They both went out on the beach in the evening. Enjoyed their day n returned home in the evening. She unlocked her house enterd inside n suddenly heard a loud chorus "SURPRISE". She was stunned to see the whole gang with flowers, chocklates. She asked n then mayank told that it was the party to celebrate her success at the job.

Diya bought the cake. It was pineapple cake to which nupur replied "Kya mayank choclate cake nahin bol sakte the tumhe Pata hai naa ki mujhe choclate cake pasand hai" hearing this they both looked into each others eyes n laughed loudly. Nobody other than they both culd understand the reason of their laughter"

I know its bit long but I hope dat u guys love it. Guys please comment. Pl share ur views that whether I shuld continue writing such OS or I Just bored u guys.

PLzzzzzzzzzz PLzzzzzzzzzzzzzz do comment.

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nice one ..😊

please do continue soon....
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nice OS dear ...........and for the next part MN talking to each other nupur returning to her usual self ...............dat would be amazing to read ...........do contiue soon ...........
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very nice os!
pls pls pm wen u upd8 next!!
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superb os plz plz cont soon n thanks a ton for pm
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plz pm me wenever you write anything abt mayank.

and this os was just heavenly..

comtinue soon./.

pari

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hay i jst loved ur os plz do cont soon
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lovely amazing OS plz plz plz continue soon and thx alot for the pm
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i loveddddd this..sumthing similiar i want to see .. on mayur
wanted next part soon
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its awsome dear.loved it to the core.do update it soon.and don't forget to pm me.

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