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Beet

@Beet

Rocker

Posted: 15 years ago

#61

Awww.... Komal it was a very well written OS! You beautifully captured all the emotions and feelings. It was really lovely. I especially loved Mrs. Nupur Bhushan Sharma part. So cute!☺️

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Posted: 15 years ago

#62

Thanks to everyone......

A big hug to .

aswathy dee, ayeshu,ardhana,mahima,sana,mjhtnupurmayank,kirti & Dee.Mayur_Arti .........

thnxx to everyone..........🤗

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Shivangi Singh

@shivangi278

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#63

hey komal 🤗
rocking OS dear....
"As peacock has a colourful wing Mayur also have colourful love"
loved this line,
keep writing more!!!

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samira

@-Samira-

Rocker

Posted: 15 years ago

#64

great one hon really cute thanks 4 pm me

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_ArTi4ever_

@_ArTi4ever_

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#65

amazing OS.loved it to the core.

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Divya

@MyInspirationz

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 15 years ago

#66

That was beautiful Komal.. especially the ending...

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Aneesha Kaushal

@theaneesha1992

Rocker

Posted: 15 years ago

#67

so chweet jann....want to give u a big 🤗 u just keep getting better and better ....be it romantic one(previous one) or this emosional one all sure mn so perfectly

just wish the writiers show somethinng like this!!

most special was the 'sorry mrs nupur bhushan sharma'(can so image it with mayur dimple smile and ratis- ☺️) .........and the not grateful part luved it