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seema mittal

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Posted: 15 years ago

#341

Heyyy komal:)
amazing os yaar
keep writing
n thanx for pm

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mjht_admirer

@mjht_admirer

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Posted: 15 years ago

#342

hey Komal. so sorry for the delay yaar.
ur OS was really very cute and sweet too. the best part was the end where Arjun tells Rati to get fat as soon as possible so that he could tease her. hehe 😆😆😆😆 That is so much like Arjun.

thanks for the PM dear.

keep up the good work.

loads of love

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@Jenny..

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Posted: 15 years ago

#343

👏awesome os dear

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Posted: 15 years ago

#344

Jab they met...(MN OS)......
This one short is dedicated to my all CC members....
But spclly to rabi dee/afshu dee...as well as sanam dee as she wanted JWM 2 on Mayur..... 😛 😳 ..
SO here it goes..Sorry if it doesn't come up to the mark.... 😛

[A house all decorated.The house members was enjoying the occassion as am aarriage was ogingo n their.But a guy look lost in the happines of the others and his love.He went to the stage to congrats the beautiful bride and groom.]
Mayank: Congrats...(tears in his eyes)
Girl: Thanks...(worried)
Mayank: I hope jo khushi tum mujhe na de payi woh tum inhe de do.(whishper in her ear)Congrats man.
Guy: Thnxx........
[He wasn't able to be there anymore.He was in so much pain that he just wanted to kill himself.He took him as a looser woh has no one who he can call his own...]
[He walk and walk and walk......He was not aware were he is going ,what he is doing.In this lost situation he just wanted to kill himself so he reached to the railway station and a train wagon.He sat there on someone's other seat and have no idea where he is going.He just wanted to leave the place where he get so much pain.

A girl is running to catch up the train....
Girl: Aare roko..........train ko roko....
[Some people led a helping hand towards her.She catches the train.A girl with cute smile,shining and beautiful eyes.She has done a pony tail in a pink coloured suit with two luggages.]
Girl: By god...thank you bhagwan g apne aaj meri train rukwa li..Thank you wahe guru.
[She thanked the person also who helped her....hile she was about to sito n her seat she notice someone is already sitting there a despo looking guy.]
Girl: Excuse me??
[The guy didnt answer]
Girl: Excuse me??excuse me...
Mayank :Huh?? huh..........
Girl: This is my seat...
Mayank : Huh??
Girl: Yeh meri seat hai.......
Mayank : ohhhh......
[He get away from there.Then he sat on the other seat.That girl fix her luggages on its place.]
Girl: Hiiiiii???
Mayank: Hiiiii.....
Girl: Im Nupur......
Mayank: Ok.......(finding way to get away from the conversation)
Nupur: You???
Mayank: Mayank......
Nupur: Nice name....
Mayank: Thanks...
Nupur: So where are you from?
Mayank: See i'm not in the mood so plpzzzz
Nupur: Yaar yeh mood kuch nhi hota...muhse baat karo mood thik hojayega....so batao na where r u frm??
[Mayank gave her tough looks]
Nupur: Thik hai thik hai mein hi bata deti hun mein bhatinda se hun.I knw wht you will be thinking..ki yeh mein train mein toh mumbai se chadi...woh actually baat ye hai(Mayank getting irritate) ki mein hun toh bhatinda se but peechle 5 years se mumbai mein reh rhi thi you know doing my college....Bas ab w8 kar rhi hun Bhatinda jaane ka wahan jakar toh balle balle hi honi hai...
[Mayank only nod]
Nupur: Or tumhe pata hai.....
[All in sudden a tity cmae and asked for the tickets.Nupur showed her ticket but while asking to Mayank]
Mayank: Ticket?? ticket toh mere pass nahi hai........
[Nupur thought to help him.....]
Nupur: Titty bhaisab waise bhi train kafi khali ja rhi hai app inki ticket abhi kyun nhi kaat dete?
Tity: Thik hai.......kaha ki cahiye....
Mayank: Huh???
Nupur: Tum kahan tak jana hai?
Mayank: Yeh train kaha tak ja rahi hai?
Nupur: Delhi.....last stop......delhi ki ticket de dijiye....
[Tity hand him the ticket and went away........]
Nupur: Boss majra kya hai??? tum itne despo kyun lag rahe ho?
Mayank: You are the problem(scold) itni der se bole ja rhi ho bak-bak ki mera dimaag kharab hogaya, tum chup hona sikha nahi hai kya??
[Nupur was shocked.Mayank felt guilty about his behaviour]
Mayank: Woh i'm sorry.....mein pehle se hi kisi baat ko lekar tension mein hun.....and i'm really sorry....
Nupur: Its ok..dekho tum kisi or baat pe gussa the or phir ussi chakar mein tum mujhpe bhi gussa hogaye so i can understand it.....
[Mayank smiled]
Nupur: Ab baat-chit shuru kare?
[Mayank raised her eyebrows]
Nupur: Pata hai i really believe in love......mein bht saare romantic book padhti hun....or agar kisi movie ka hero handsome hai tab toh sone pe suhaga (Mayank is getting irritate)...Mujhe aajtak peak or mountains meink ya difference hai pata nahi chala.....Mere mom-dad log bht possesive hai.mujhe bola AC train se aana...woh kehte hain larkiyon ko AC train se aana cahiye.i mean yeh kahin ka rule hai kya?? i love shoes.mere pass 115 collection hai sirf jooto ke......I love new - new dress.....Mujhe gana sunna kafi pasand hai.(Mayank was shocked to see tht how this girl jumps from one topic to another) Mujhe maths bilkul pasand nahi hai....Mujhe punjabi khana bohot pasand hai....mujhe baateink arna bih pasand hai kabhi-kabhi......
[Mayank put his finger on his ears.........]
[At night while everyone is sleeping.And the train stoppedat some station.Mayank left the train and in between tht Nupur woke up.]
Nupur: Yeh kaha chala gaya??
[She aw him from the door of the train.And called out his name as the train started moving.]
Nupur: Ohhhhhhh Suno train chut rahi hai.......oye Mayank......
[She stepped out of the train for him.......]
Nupur: Mayank.......
[He is not listening her.He is just keep on walking.....]
[She ran after him as she saw he is not listening......]
Nupur: Are sunoooooo.........train chut rahi hai.
[He sat on a bench.....She went to him]
Nupur: Are chalo train chut rahi hai......
Mayank: Plz go....
Nupur: Are tum chalo.....
Mayank: Didn't answer.......
[Nupur gets angry......]
Nupur: Maro yahan pe.....
[She ran again to catch up the train......She was runnig badly to get the train but in the end she couldn't catch it.]
[She angrily turn to him......]
Nupur: You??dekho kya kar diya.........tumhari wajah se meri train chut gayi.......
Mayank: Meri wajah se?? hello maine toh tumhe nahi kaha tha ki tum train se utro mere liye...
Nupur: Par utri toh tumhare liye hi thi na......
Mayank: What?? it doesn't make any sense?
Nupur: It do make sense ok? and now its your responsibility to take me home Bhatinda with my stuffs....ok?
Mayank: What are you mad??No way......
Nupur: Dekho tum mana nahi kar sakte....tumharel iye maine itna kuch kiya and u r not ready ot do one thing for me.....
Mayank: wht??
[He find Nupur very innocent......]
Mayank: Fine......
Nupur: Good..
Mayank: Chale?
Nupur: Ek min main yahan ke incharge se baatk arlungi abt my luggages.....
Mayank: PLease fast mujhe tukmpe apna time waste nahi karna....
Nupur: Whatever....

[Nupur is in the office of the incharge of the railway.....]
Incharge: Maine call kardiya hai .....jab train ratnam ke station pe rukegi tab wahank e incharge apka saaman rakhlenge......
Nupur: Thank you sir.
[She was about to move.....]
Incharge: But how can you be so irresponsible.
Nupur: Excuse me??
Incharge: Itni raat ko tum akeli ladki...kya karogi huh??tum ladki ho ladki bhoolo mat.....ladkiyon ko itna udna nahi cahiye....dekho galti kar di na.or waise bih ladkiyan khuli hui tizori jaise hoti hain.....
[Nupur gets all in anger]
Nupur: Sir ab apne mujhe itna gyaan de hi diya hai toh mujhe aapse ek sawal puchna hai..
Incharge: Haan pucho pucho...
Nupur: Apne yeh jo gyaan bata hia kya iske charge lete hain or yeh free hai??
Incharge: Nahi yeh bilkul free hai.........
Nupur: Good kyunki chutte nahi hai merep ass.....sun buddhe khusat tumhe jitna bola hai utna karo okk.....over smart banne ki zarurat nahi hai samjhe??
[Mayank heard her voice from outside........]
Mayank: Hey bhagwan yeh ladki toh tuffan hai........
[Nupur came out of his office.....]
Nupur: Chale???
Mayank: Chalo.....

[They are waiting for taxi but couldn't get any.......]
Mayank: Lagta hai ab hume walk karke chalna hoga?
Nupur: ok mujhe koi problem nahi hai....it would be so fun na...........aandheri raat mein ek ladka or ek ladki jo ek dusre ko jhaante bhi nhi ek dusre ke saath chale ja rahe hain(being sarcastic).....
Mayank: very funny na?? picnick mananer aaye hain hum??
Nupur: Dekho hume har chiz experiencek arni cahiye.........cahe woh chiz buri hi kyun na ho.....
Mayank: Tum bht mast hoke jeeti hona?
Nupur: Haan aisi hi hun mein.......and you knw aisi life kafi rocking hai......bcoz is life mein mere saath jo bhi hoga uski zimmedar sirf mein hungi.....mein kisi or pe blame nahi kar sakti right?
Mayank: But abhi toh apni train chutne ki baat mujhpe blame kiya ?
Nupur: Aww woh oth alag baat hai..woh toh tumhari galti thi........
Mayank: Tum bohot weird ho or sweet bhi.......
Nupur: Hey koi chance mat marna i have a boyfriend....
Mayank: Dont worry nahi marunga.....
[Nupur smiled]
Nupur: By the way hum ja kahan rahe hian?
Mayank: No idea.....bas chal rahe hain.......
Nupur: Waise bhi yeh itna bura bhi nhi hai.
[BOth of them smiled....]

Do comment guys........
And let me know what you think about it.....
love Komal...... 😳

Edited by KomaliciousXOMN - 15 years ago

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Posted: 15 years ago

#345

ressssssssssss

Jab They Met❤️....OMG komal thank uuuuuuuuuuuuu🤗

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315925

Hibernated

Posted: 15 years ago

#346

awwwwwwwieee thats so adorable KSKB!
My fave movie on my fave couple!
YAY

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sehrish

@sizzysehrish

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#347

wowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww

m luvin it yr
komal hun its awesum blossom yr
loved every bits of ittttttt

hand up to u

luv sehr

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sai

@KaSh-Maneet-Fan

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#348

Awesome os
loved it
loved JWM
mindblowing
thanks 4 the pm

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affu123

@affu123

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 15 years ago

#349

res 😈
comment kab arungi iski gurantee nahi de sakti 🤣

edit:
wow LD
TU SACCHI jwm-2 dikha rahi hain 😆
continue kar isse 😉
i luv Nupus as Geet 😍 ....
kaash woh serial mein woh log Rati kko lelete 😆
Awesome 😳
thank u so much 🤗

Edited by afshanafreen - 15 years ago

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ramsha

@ramsha.aslam

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#350

WHAT IS THIS????....you can't end it like this😔.......
.................CONTINUEEE IT!!!!!!!!😃

I SO LOVED IT⭐️,it was shoooooooo cute.......SPLENDID JOB!!!!🤗

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