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Posted: 15 years ago
awesome komal🤗👏
......i couldn't have imagined rati's comeback any better than this......this was sooo sweet ......hope it comes true.....
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awesum Komal
😭missing my Arti
plz dont stop writing on mn n arti
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This was sooo sweet
I wish that happens. and cv apologize to rati in person.

Great work, do write more OS on Arti😳
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Posted: 15 years ago
fabulous OS komz,👏
loved it.....
it was shooooooooooooo shweet...
the sig was tooo adorable....ARTI forever....😍
do write more on ARTI...
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Posted: 15 years ago
fab os komal i know what u r going through its the same with all arti mayur fans
ur os was very nice hope such me cvs rati se mafi mange aur use wapis bulaye to complete our mayur arti just cant see them seperated
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wow komal it was so sweet and pls do add me to ur pm list



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Posted: 15 years ago
I named my this OS love as this is the most simple word which defines this uncontrollable feelings .
"Love"
Samrat is at Bar sharing his pain by drinking.Yesterday he met Gunjan by seeing her he gets lost into her and noticed tht how much his gunjan get changed.He tried to talk to her but she ignored him.He asked her "Gunjan i know i had done mistakes but please dont punish me for the lfietime.I cant live iwthout you, please dont live me....stay with me.Gunjan replied "why would i stay with a murdere who killed my dee?" and then she left.Her words feels to him like a sword inot his heart.

Present day!!!
He is at the bar full on drinking.He was very angry at the smae time sad.He was just about to leave but then he accidently ran into a girl as in between that the drink which was in Samrat's hand fell on her dress.She scold him "what the hell? you ruined my fav. dress" Smarat looked at her to apology and what he notic that a girl in purple dress,hair open,had put little make-up.He saw her and get shocked by seeing that that girl is none other than his friend Nupur.
He was totally shocked seeing her alive.

Samrat: Nupur?
Nupur: What?? and how you know my name???
Samrat: Nupur mujhe nahi pehchana?? Mein Samrat tumharadost?? remember?
Nupur: What?? excuse me
She was irritated by his question so she left.Samrat was confused by seeing her in this way.There were many question in his mind why Nupur is behaving like this? If she was alive why didnt she contact anyone??? why she ignored him??
He was very confused.
Later on a friend come to him.
Girl: Hi Samrat?
Samrat: Hiii!
[THen he saw Nupur calling that girl]
Samrat: You know her?
Girl: Offcourse she is my friend.
Samrat: Friend?? how you guys met??
Girl: Why you want to know?
Samrat: Please tell me its emergency.
Girl: I beleive you thats why i'm saying it to you...I met her in England about three years ago.
Samrat: England???
Girl: Yeah she was staying there with her family .We studied in the same college for three years.
Samrat: What??
He smelled that somethnig is wrong.
Samrat: Do you know her parents?
Girl: Yeah actually they are very good friends of my parents.
Samrat: Can you please give me the address of their house?
Girl: Samrat whats gonig on?
Samrat: Believe me i wont do anything wrong. just give me.
Girl: ok. here you go.
[She hang him the address.WIthout wasting a min he drive to her house.]
[He had chat with her parents]
He was on his way and then noticed that Nupur is standing at the road side all alone.And asked him for a lift.
Nupur: Lift..
[He stopped the car]
Nupur: Can you give me lift to my house?? hold on do i know you?? oh you are the bar guy.
Samrat: Actually i'm Samrat and yeah you do know me very well.
Nupur:SOrry Samrat i'm Nupur! can you??
Samrat: Comeon in.
Nupur: Thanks!!!

Samrat isdriving her home.He keep on looking at her because he was not able to believe what he just heard from her parents.He was very happy that Nupur is alive.
Nupur noticed that he is stairing at her.

Nupur: (clear her throat) tum road pe dhyaan rakho..
[Samrat get embarrased]
Samrat: Yeah sorry!
Nupur: So what you do?
Samrat: I run a college as a trustee.
Nupur: Wow thats cool.
Samrat: Yeah what about you?
Nupur: Nothing. i mean i'm searhing for a job right now
Samrat: Really? but you seem so rich?
Nupur: I'm but see the thing is that i want to make my own identity i dont want to live with my dad's identity.
[Samrat said to himself "Tum bilkul nahi badli Nupur"]
Nupur: Sorry.
Samrat: Nothing.Here you go.
Nupur: Oh thanks for dropping me home.
Samrat: Anytime!
Nupur: Hold on i didnt dicdate where my house is then how you know that i live here?
Samrat: Only onething my Sixth sense is very strong.
Nupur: Hmmmmm........strong enough to shock people. anyways bye and thnks once again.
Samrat: Nupur?
[Nupur turned back]
Nupur: Yeah!
[Samrat took out his card]
Samrat: If you are interested in teaching in a college then you are most welcome..
[Nupur took that card]
Nupur: Oh thanks i'll think about it.
Samrat: Ok bye.

Next Day!!!
Samrat went to Gunjan to tell her about this.He tried to tel lher but she keep on ignoring him.
Samrat: Chashmish meri baat suno.
Gunjan: Samrat mujhe tumse koi baat nahi karni,tum yahan se jao.or mera naam Gunjan hai chashmish nhi
Samrat: Ek baar meri baat toh sunlo.
Gunjan: Smarat please tum
Samrat: Gunjan Nupur zinda hai.. (shouted)
[Gunjan also get shock]
Gunjan: Dee zinda hai???
Samrat: Haan Gunjan Nupur zinda hai woh hume chor ke nahi gayi hai.Maine kal raat usse bar dekha tha.
Gunjan: Dee zinda hai!!!
[She was very happy to know.Her eyes became all moist as a happy tears]
Gunjan: Tum jhoot toh nahi keh rahe ho na Samrat???
Samrat: Tumse maine aajtak kabhi jhoot bola hai?
Gunjan: Par dee kahahai? or woh humse milne kyun nahi aai??
Samrat: Kyunki.........
Gunjan: Kyunki kya??
Samrat: Kyunki Nupur apni yaadash kho chuki hai.
Gunjan: Kya??
Samrat: Use apne past ke baare mien kuch yaad nahi hai....
Gunjan: Matlab dee hum sabko bhool chuki hai?
Samrat: Almost haan.....
Gunjan: Par yeh sab kaise hua??
Samrat: Yaad hai Gunjan 3 saal pehle jo log hume hospital alye the unki galti ke wajah se Nupur khaai mein gir gayi thi.Usi dauran Nupur ki body Mr.saxena ko mili thi.Unhone Nupur ilaag karvaya,hume dhoodne ki bhi bohot koshis ki but jab unhe yeh pata chala ki Nupur apni yaadash kho chuki hai tab unhone ne usse adopt kar liya tha.As unki koi beti nah ihai or unhe Nupur mien unki beti nazar aayi.
Gunjan: Toh dee pichle 3 saal kaha thi?
Samrat: Woh England mein thi Mr.saxena apni family ke saath England move hogaye the or ab woh Mumbai aapash aa gaye hai.
Gunjan: Zindagi bhi ajeeb khel khelti hai na Samrat...
Samrat: Haan.Par maine aaj Nupur ko college bulaya hai tum usse wahan mil sakti ho par gunjan ek baat yaad rakhna Nupur ko kuch yaad dilane ki koshis mat karna.
Gunjan: Kyun?
Samrat: Kyunki maine Mrs.Saxena se baat ki thi or unhone ne kaha ki uske dimaag pe pressure nah iapdna cahiye varna present bhi bhool jayegi.......
Gunjan: Ab kya karenge Samrat?
Samrat : Gunjan tum himat mat haro hum bhale nahi par waqt waqt Nupur ko uske pichli zindagi yaad dilayega...kya ab mein tumhe chashmish bula sakta hoon??
Gunjan ddint answered that...
Gunjan: Hume ab col chalna cahiye Samrat?
Samrat: Yeah!

[Mayank was just about to enter his lcassroom but then noticed that someone called him from backside.He looked back and saw it was Nupur.]

Nupur: Kya aap mujhe bata sakte hai ki Samrat ka office kaha hai???
[Mayank moved forward and stared at her.Nupur was being uncomfortable.He looked into her eyes.He smiled slightly and then all in sudden hugged her tightly..Nupur was shocked...]
Mayank: Mein janta tha Nupur tum vaapash zarur aaogi...i'm so glad....ab tumhe kahin nahi jaane dunga i promise...
Nupur: Excuse me.
[She broke the hug Mayank looked confused and from the other side SG reached their and Samrat told Gunjan to take Mayank away from there.]
Nupur: Aap koun hai? or yeh kya kar rahe hai??
Mayank: Nupur mein Mayank...tumne mujhe pehchana nahi..tumhara Mayank.......
Nupur: What??
[SG interrupted]
Samrat: Are Nupur tum yahan ho chalo mere office mein.
Nupur: Yeah ok.but this guy...
Samrat: Come na we will discuss in my office.
Mayank: Yeh kya ho raha hai Samrat? or Nupur tum aise kyun behave kar rah iho?
Samrat: Gunjan
Gunjan: Jiju aap chaliye mein aapko sab batati hun.....
Mayank: Par Gunjan.
Gunjan: Aap chaliye toh sahi.
[She took Mayank away from their.]

[Samrat and Nupur at his office]
Samrat: Sorry for that
Nupur: Yeah but what was that?
Samrat: Actually his name is Mayank he professor here.The thing is that he lost his wife and may be he finds her into you.
Nupur: huh??
Samrat: Her name is also Nupur! He love her more than his life.
Nupur: Oh! then im sorry for my misbehaviour
Samrat: Thats ok.....by the way what you doing here?
Nupur: Remember i told you last night that i want stand on my foot thats for what i'm here i want ot make the first step from here.SO if there is any place in this college then i would love to take it.
Samrat: I'mk so glad offcourse there is a vacancy of a eng teacher. wuold you like to do that?
Nupur: Sure infact eng is my fav. subject.
Samrat: Great you can join when you want.
Nupur: I'll join from today!
Samrat: Thats great.You will get your schedule form the staffroom.
Nupur: Ok and thanks alot Samrat.
Samrat: Its my pleasure.
[Gunjan and Mayank in staff room]
Mayank: Gunjan yeh ho kya raha hai?/ yeh Nupur ne mujhe pehchana kyun nahi?
Gunjan: WOh baat yeh hai ki dee apni yaadash kho chuki hain.
Mayank: Kya??
Samrat: Haan. (enters)
Mayank: Par yeh tumhe kaise pata?
Samrat: Woh actually.
[He cleared everything infront of Mayank.]
Mayank: SO meri Nupur mujhe nahi pehchanti?
Samrat: Nahi.......par hum usse sab kuch yaad dila sakte hain but directly nahi indirectly hume Nupur ko har woh pal yaad dilana hoga jo uske dil ke kareeb hai or iss plan ko successful sirf Mayank tum bana sakte ho sirf tum.
Mayank: Mein apni Nupur ko wapash pa ke hi rahunga.....
[Nupur is in staff room watching out her schedule in between that Mayank enters the staff room and saw Nupur there for a moment stared at her badly and memorized all the moments he spend with her but then he came back to the reality and enter the room and sat beside her.]
Mayank: Hey!
Nupur looked at him and greet.
Nupur: Hey!
Mayank: Look i'm sorry for what i did before i was just
Nupur: No problem i know the reason actually i can understand.
Mayank : Thanks!
Nupur: So tum yahan professor ho right?
Mayank: Yeah..
Nupur: Woh maine new join kiya hai,would you mind if give me a trip of college?
Mayank: No problem.
Nupur: Ok can we go now?
Mayank: Yeah i'm free now lets go.
[He is giving her tour]
Mayank: Or yeh hai canteen you know jab hum log yahan padhte hum san zada kar samay yahin bitate the.
Nupur: Really? i mean tum uss type ke lagte nahi ho. Tum ekdum padhaku type lagte ho.
Mayank: Actually mein waise hi tha......but jab meri zindagi mein Nupur aayi toh usne mujhe badal diya.
Nupur: Wow!!!
Mayank: By the way tumhara naam Nupur kaise pada?
Nupur: Dont know meri mom ne kaha jab unhone ne mujhe dekha oth unhe laga mujhe koi aur naam suit kar hi nhi sakta.
Mayank: Sahi kehti hai woh.
Nupur: Aage badhe?
Mayank: Sure!
[Then he enter in dance room]
Mayank: Dance room...
Nupur: Hmmmm.....so kya tumhare or tumhariiiiii Nupur ki kahani sse related hai?
Mayank: Haan........yahi woh jagha hai jahan mein or Nupur pehli baar ek dusre ke kareeb aaye the through dance...actually baat yeh thi ki hume dance perform karna tha....and woh toh filmy no. karna cahti thi.....par maine kaha salsa.......
Nupur: So kounsa dance form choose kiya?
Mayank: Salsa....
Nupur: Wow you know mujhe salsa or filmy dono hi bohot pasand hai.......mein bas mauke ka intezaar karti hun dance karne ke liye..
Mayank: Accha? abhi toh tumhare pass mauka hai or dastoor bhi.
Nupur: Nahi-nahi.....
Mayank: Kyun? dont worry mein accha dance karta hun.
Nupur: Nahi nahi aisi baat nahi hai...mein yeh soch rahi hun ki hum just mile hain or mein tumhe apne bakwas sa dance dikha kar bhagana nahi cahti.
Mayank: Tum Nupur ho woh Nupur jo kisi bhi activity mein bakwas nahi ho skati.
[Nupur was a bit confused]
Nupur: Toh thik hai chalo......
[The stand in the middle.Mayank put ihs hand on her wiast and moved her close to his body he just felt the old feeling when he first time danced with her.ANd then they started doing Salsa.Mayank repeated the same steps with her which he danced with Nupur in college show]
Nupur: You are really good at this.
Mayank: You too.
[Then he started moving her closer and that pressure her brain.Some blur pics were clickingi n her mind.She was memorizing some blur scene where a guy is dancing with a girl.She broke the dance and hold her head as it started paining.Mayank get woried]
Mayank: Tum thik toh ho na Nupur?
Nupur: Yeah yeah i'm fine just a little headache.i think bohot der ho chuki hai mujhe ab chalna cahiye.
Mayank: Ok..mein drop kardun?
Nupur: Nahi tumhe taklif uthane ki koi zarurat nahi hai i have my car with me.
Mayank: Ok.
Nupur: Bye toh kal milte hain
Mayank: Yeah bye
[Mayank dont wanted to leave her but he have to.Nupur left in her car]

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Posted: 15 years ago

"Love" Part 2........

Next Day!!!
[Mayank is waiting for Nupur to come.]
[In the other side Nupur reached to the college and accidently ran into Gunjan]
Nupur: Oops! i'm so sorry.
Gunjan: its ok....
Nupur: Thanks by the way hi i'm Nupur.
Gunjan: Janti hun...
Nupur: Toh tum Mayank ki saali ho right?
Gunjan: Haan aapko kaise pata?
Nupur: Woh kal tum use jiu bula rahi thi na isliye
Gunjan: Oh.......
Nupur: By the way sorry maine jo kal behave kiya tha......woh mujhe pata nahi tha jo tumhari behen ke saath hua....
Gunjan: Aapko sorry bolne ki koi zarurat nahi hai d......ek baat pochun?
Nupur: Pucho....
Gunjan: kya mein aapko dee bula sakti hun?? woh actually mujhe apme meri dee nazar aati hai.
[Nupur was really touched by that]
Nupur: Tum mujhe dee zarur bula sakti ho...
Gunjan: Thanks dee.
Nupur: isme thakns bolne wali koi baat nahi hai mujhe bhi humesha se ek tumhari jaisi choti behen cahiye thi...toh mujhe batao tumhare dee thi kaisi??
Gunjan: Meri dee bilkul aapki tarha.......ekdum bindass....woh bohot chulubully thi but at the same time strong bhi pata hi jab hum pehli baar Mumbai aaye the toh mein bohot darri hui thi par woh meri dee hi thi jisne mujhe vishvaas dilaya ki Mumbai itni bhi buri jagha nahi hai.Mein sirf ek baat kehna cahit hun aaj mein jo bhi hun sab apni dee ki wajha se hun....she is the best.
Nupur: Wow! lagta hai tumhari dee sachme ek rockstar thi.
Gunjan: Thi nhi hai!!!
Nupur: Gunjan sorry but mujhe ab jana hai classes ke liye der ho rahi hai.
Gunjan: Thik hai...
Nupur: But agar tumhe koi problem na ho kya tum mujhe aaj shaam ko company dogi.i mean meri mom dadse milne England ja rahi hai..or mein ghar mei akele rehna nahi cahti.
Gunjan: Thik hai dee.......mein chalungi...
Nupur: Great toh shaam ko 7bje milte hain?
Gunjan: Ok.....
[Nupur enters the staff room and found Mayank all depressed]
Nupur: Hii!
Mayank looke at her.
Mayank: Tum kahan thi? itni der kyun laga di? aate samay koi problem ho gayi thi kya?? tum kuch bolti kyun nahi ho.
Nupur: Tumk uch bolne doge tabhi bolungi.
Mayank: Oh sorry!
Nupur: Woh actually mein Gunjan se baat karne ke liye ruk gayi thi...isiliye late ohgayi....but mujhe nahi pata tha tum mere intezaar kar rahe the
Mayank: Or nahi toh kya mein toh darr hi gaya tha.
Nupur: huh??
Mayank: Kuch nhi......
Nupur: hmmmm.......mein chalti hun mere class ka waqt ho gaya....
Mayank: ok....Nupur lunch ke liye kahin bahar chale?
Nupur: Ok..........
[Nupur done her class.....She was gonig ot staff room but noticed that Samrat is sitting in his office and looking very sad...Nupur went to his office]
Nupur: May i come in?
Samrat: Oh Nupur aao na.......
Nupur: Kya baat hai tumhara mood thik nhi lag raha?
Samrat: AIsi koi baat nahi hai mein thik hun.
[He fake a smile....]
Nupur: Samrat ek baat bolun mein logon ko pehchan leti hun jab woh mujhse jhoot bolte hain.....kya baat hai batao na??? kya tum mujhe apni dost nahi maante??
Samrat: Tum toh meri best friend jaisi ho tumhe nahi bataunga toh aur kise bataunga.....woh baat yeh hai ki main jisse pyaar karta hun use maine kho diya.
Nupur: Matlab........
Samrat: Mein ek ladki se bohot pyaar karta tha hun....but maine past mein ek aisi galti ki hai jiski wajha se woh mujhe chod ke chali gayi hai.......mein usse vaapash pana chata hun Nupur........usse pata hia ki mein uske bina nahi reh sakta par phir bhi woh ..... (he looked at Gunjan who was just standing outside talking to ash and Nupur noticed that)
Nupur: Woh ladki Gunjan hai na?
Samrat: Tumhe kaise pata chala?
Nupur: Jis tarike se tum usse ghur rahe the aise toh puri duniya ko pata chal sakta...
Samrat: Oh sorry!
Nupur: Samrat ek baat bolun agar tumhara pyaar saccha hai toh woh zarur vaapash aayegi kyunk ikhud bhagwaan sacche pyaar ko nahi tod sakta hai..jo tod sakta hai woh ho tum....agar tumne umeed chod di or ladna chod diya toh shayad tumhe tumhara pyaar na mile..........isiliye tumhe ladna hoga Samrat apne pyaar ke lyie.....or jahan tak mujhe lagta hai Gunjan bhi tumse bohot pyaar karti hai.....
[Samrat get what she is talking about but still he wasshocked to see that Nupur who dont remember her past life is helping him to acchieve his love once again.He knew that in somewhere that old Nupur is alive and she cares aobut our feelnigs.]
Nupur: Ab mein chalti hun...mujhe Mayank se milne jana hai.
Samrat: ok......
[Nupur and Mayank are at restaurant having their lunch]
Waiter: Paneer sir.
Mayank: Yeh paneer kisne order kiya?
Nupur: Maine......tumhe pata hai mujhe paneer bohot pasand hai.......Tumhe nahi pasand kya?
Mayank: Nahi - nahi aisi koi baat nahi hai......mujhe paneer pasand hai infact Nupur ko bhi pasand hai....
Nupur: Wow! mujhme or tumhari Nupur mein bohot saari similarities hai.
Mayank: Hmmmmm.....
[They talked alot through out the lunch.....Mayank shared everything about his past life to Nupur And she was very impressed]
Mayank: Or usne mere liye apne dad ko chod diya tha........
Nupur: Wow!!! tum usse ab bhi bohot pyaar karte ho na?
Mayank: Bohot khud se bhi zyada.......
Nupur: Toh tum kabhi kisi or ladki ke baare mein nahi sochoge?
Mayank: Kabhi nahi......Nupur ki jo jagha hai usse koi or nahi le sakta.......koi nahi.
[Nupur felt little bad........]
Mayank: So ab hum chale back to college?
Nupur: Mayank actually mera mann nahi kar raha hai......kya tum please Samrat ko bol doge ki mein aaj nahi aa skati?
Mayank: Ok......tum thik toh ho na?
Nupur: Haan....or haan please Gunjan komere ghar ka address dedena hum aaj 7 milne wale hain......
Mayank: Thik hai.....should i drop you?
Nupur: No you carry on........bbyeeeeee
Mayank: byeeeeee
[Its 7'o clock..........Nupur is at her home relaxing then someone rang bell of her house..She opened the door]
Nupur: Oh hi Gunjan comeon in........
Gunjan: Thakns dee.......toh bolo kya karna cahogi aaj tum??
Nupur: Gunjan mujhe aaj sirf Nupur ke baare mein janna hai......woh kaisi thi? uska Mayank ke saath relation kaisa tha? tumhara saath samrat ke saath? i mean i want to know everthing.
Gunjan: Par kyun dee?
Nupur: Pata nahi Gunjan but somewhere mein khud ko Nupur se kafi connected pati hun.....i mean mujhe kabhi kavar aisa lagta hai ki tumlogon ko mein janmoin janmon se janti hun......
Gunjan: Thik hai dee toh suno meri dee kaisi thi........woh ek hawa ka jhoka thi,ek aisa gana thi jisse humesha gaane ko jee cahe,ek aisi movie jisse baar baar dekhne ka mann kare,ek aisi dawa thi jo kabhi karvi na lage,woh mere liye ma se bhi badhke thi,Samrat ke liye unke dosti ka mazbut dore thi or Jiju ke liye unka sab kuch.......Woh sirf ek aisi thi jo hum sab ka khaya lrkh sakti thi......unhone aajtak humare liye bohot kuch kiya hai...Mere liye unhone apna sapna cohd diya tha.......sirf isliye taki uss sapne ko mein jee sakun....Samrat ki har mod pe madad ki jab bhi main Samrat se naraz ho jaati thi woh hi thi jo humara ptch up karvati thi......or Jiju ke liye.(pause)
[Nupur eagerly asked]
Nupur: Or Mayank ke liye?
Mayank: Jiju ke liye toh jitna bola jay kam hai........unhone apni saari zindagi jiju ke naam kar di thi....
Nupur: aisa lagta hai ki Nupur tum sab kel iye khaash thi....
Gunjan: Bohot khaash........jab hum udaash hote the toh woh hume hasati thi......dee tumhe pata hai inn 3 saalon mein sirf hume pata hai ki unke bina humlog kaise rahe hain..........maine or jiju ne toh Smarat se baat karna tak band kardiya tha.......hume lagta tha ki aaj humare pass agar woh nahi hai toh uski wajha sirf Samrat hai sirf Samrat..........
Nupur: Mein tumlgon ke pyaar ko respect karti hun par tumhe Samrat ke saath aisa nahi karna cahiye tha.........woh tumse bohot pyaar karta hai Gunjan tumhe uska saath nahi chodna cahiye tha........aaj maine Samrat ki aankhon mein tumhe khone ka darddekha.........haan Gunjan isme Samrat ki koi galti nahi hai......bhale mein puri baat nahi janti hun par Samrat ne pehle hi khudko bohot saza de chuki hai abnahi.......ab usse sirf pyaar cahiye jo tum de sakti ho......
Gunjan: Tum sahi keh rahi ho dee.......
[They talked like for 2 hours and then Gunjan left as it was getting too late......]
[Nupur is thinknig about tht conversation she had with Gunjan......but mostly she is thinking about Mayank.....She started falling for him..]
Nupur: Kash Mayank mujhse pyaar karta....
[Nupur get shocked by what just she said.......she realized that she love him........]
[Her head starting paining again she started memorizing some blur scenes again.She memorized a girl and guy getting married,walking on the street]
Nupur: Yeh kya ho raha hai mere saath.......mein Mayan kse pyaar nahi kar sakti........woh toh abhi bhi Nupur se pyaar karta hai....Mujhe lagta hai ab mujhe sooh jana cahiye....
[She tried to sleep but ddint get any sleep..........]
[Its 4'o clock in the morning..She still didnt get any sleep.She know that she cant keep anything..She took thep hone and called Mayank...Her menta lstatus became so low that she was not aware of what she is doing.She left a message for Mayank.]
Nupur: Hii Mayank!
Mein tumse kuch kehna cahti hun..i know you'll find it crazy but i think i love you..i knwo i know that its just have been two day since we met.....but still i feel so connected to you.....aisa lagta hai ki mein tumhe janmon se jaanti hun......mein janti hun ki tum ab abih apni wife Nupur se pyaar karte ho....par Mayank mein bhi toh Nupur hi hun na?? bas tohdi alag hun...yeh baat hai ki mein tumhari Nupur ki tarha mahan nahi hun....but still Mayank.........i love you.....really....i really really love you...hope tum reply karoge.....
[She cut off the call and then went to sleep.......]
Next Day
[Nupur wakes up at 10'o clock and thuoght about last night.Then she realized that she told Mayank everytihng.]
Nupur: Shit!!! yeh maine kya kar diya.....stupid Nupur.......Ab Mayank tere baare mein kya soch raha hoga......mujhe Mayank se baat akrni hogi jald se jald......
[She gets ready.....She is driving on her way to college but then she noticed that Mayank is standing on the road it seems like his car gets damage...She didnt stopped the car and shouted Mayank from the car Mayank looked at her.She is not watching the road she is saying something to Mayank.Mayank noticed that a truck is coming staright to her he sohuted "Nupur aage dekho" she looked and saw a truck coming to her she immediately turned her car but accidently her car cracked on a tree.Mayank ran to her....]
Mayank: Nupur..........
[He saw blood was coming out of her head...He immediately took her in his arms and ran to hospital.]
Hospital!!!
[Mayank,Gunjan,Samrat everyone is worried about Nupur as she is in ICU]
Mayank: Na jaane kyun humesha mein Nupur ko kho deta hun.......kyun??
Samrat: Mayan ksambhalo khud ko Nupur thik hogi........
Gunjan: Haan jiju dee thik hongi hosla rakho......
Mayank: Hey bhagwaan please mujhe meri Nupur vaapash karde please............please (he cried out loud)
[Then the Dr. come.]
Mayank: Dr. kya hua?
Dr.: Shei s out of danger now.......
Mayank: kya hum usse mil sakte hain?>
Dr.: Haan zarur.........
[They ran into her room.She opened her eyes and saw them standing.She smiled and called out "Mayank"]
[Mayank came to her and hugged her tightly]
Mayank: Nupur mein bohot khush hun ki tum thik ho......or haan tumhe darne ki koi zarurat nahi hai kyunk imein bhi tumse pyaar karta hun.......
Nupur: Mayank mein janti hun ki tum mujhse pyaar karte ho.......or yehsab hua kaise??
Mayank: Nupur......
Nupur: Aise kya dekh rahe ho gunjan samjha na apne jija ji ko...
Gunjan: Dee tum mujhe pehchanti ho?
Nupur: Tu pagal ho gayi hai kya meintujhe kaise bhool sakti hun.......tum toh meri zindagi hai pagli....
Samrat: Nupur mujhe?
Nupur: Uffffff Samrat tum bhi na kaise phaltu sawal puch rahe ho.....tumhe toh mein cah kar bhi nahi bhool sakti.....or Mayank you are my better half tumhe toh mein hargish nahi bhool sakti......
[All three of them looked confused.Samrat went outside]
Nupur: Ab jab maine sabclear kar diya hai....toh kya mujhe yeh koi batayega ki meinhospital meink ya kar rahi hun?/ hum toh US ja rahe the na??
[Samrat came and whishpered to Gunjan and Mayank "Dr. ne kaha Nupur ki yaadash vaapash aa chuki hai or usse in 3 saalong mein kya hua kuch bhi yaad nahi hai....Mayank gunjan hume humari Nupur vaapash mil gayi"]
[They looked to Nupur and then hugged her............]
M,S,G: I lvoe you Nupur!!!
Nupur: Ab gunjan or Mayank tum log mujhe i love you bol sakte ho par Samrat.
Smarat: DOnt worry as a jija hi bola meri saali........(looked to Gunjan) right??
Gunjan: Absolutely..
[Then they hugged eachother.........Nupur looked confused]
Nupur: Yeh ho kya raha hai??
Mayank: Jo yahan ho raha hia........
Nupur: Huh??
[Then Mayank also hugged her tightly...........]
Samrat: Abhumari family puri hogayi right???
Mayank: Right......Nupur woh dekho kya hai......
Nupur: Kya???
[Mayank kissed her]
Mayank: Kiss hai...
Nupur: Mayank tum bhi na...
[Then they hugged eachother nad sajan hugged eachother......]
xxx They live happily ever after xxx
xxx The End xxx
xxx Do comment how you guys feel xxx
Edited by KomaliciousXOMN - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
I hope something like this happens in the show..
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey totally rocking os yaar!!
great job and fab work!!
loved mayur in it and entry of nupur wa really goood

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