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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: KomaliciousXOMN

im very glad dee tht u liked it..........sorry in first i didnt mention its for you.....but i correct it.....😛.......and yup hope no one dies............and thnxx dee meri bakwas hindi ko appreciate karne kel iye....😆..........i knw if i wuold have reveal thn the fans would have thrown chappals,,,,,,,,,😆........

but im really glad tht u liked it............and yeah i'll write more to irritate peoples..😆....
luv ya too......muahxxxxxxxxxxxx😳
and yeah thnxx to everyone who liked my work....will comment individually soon!😳

ill Be The First One To Throw You Chappals , Who Told You Your Hindi Is Bakwaas ?
Dnt Ever Say That !
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Posted: 15 years ago
komal it was realy very touching😭😭😭.........mayur part really made me cry..........hope both sisters r fine it the show

thanks for the pm jaan ......loved it🤗
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Posted: 15 years ago
sad and nice OS dear..=)

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Posted: 15 years ago
Komal it was lovely, especially Mayur part, it made me cry.. i want Mayur together. 😭
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Posted: 15 years ago
Komal, It was just too sad. Beautiful. Just so heartbreaking.
Great JobKomal. You made me cry.😒
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Posted: 15 years ago
its good
thanks for the site
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Posted: 15 years ago
This OS i wrote in such a pain bcoz the gret cv's seperated our both Mayur/Arti.But still afrter seeing the sbs i thnik there may be a chance.This is just a fiction to show for whom Rati will be back in this show thats all.
Here is one siggy i make for our Mayur (dont feel to post in on gallery)
"Birds of love"(Arti)
Rati is deep down hurt as she is no more a part of mjht.She miss the fun they she have with mjht cast.They shootings and evreryithng specially everytihng related to Arjun.She was missing his pranks,his wrestlings,he rubbing her nose.
She was remembering everything with a smile on her face.
Then she control herslef and thought to do some net.
She chekcs her email id and very pleased with fans emails.
She was reading every single email and was replying it too.
Afterwards she check smoe forums and was having mixed feelings.She was happy that to know that people love her this much but at the same time sad for two reasons
one that he fans are really hurt and depressed right now and second that some one were bashing Arjun that he should also have quit with Rati .
Rati was not mad at those fans but she felt bad for Arjun because its not his fault that she saw shown door of out.
She immediatly dialed Arjun's no. to talk to him but then she thought he might be busy in shootings so she drop that idea.

Arjun always call her and talk to her and always tell her that he miss her and give her information whats gonig to sets.
Everyone was with her at that time but the guy who has beenwith her the most was Arjun.

Arjun is also in the same condition.He go to sets do his job and then come back to home.He dont do pranks anymore because for him the only girl with whom he can play orakns with is Rati.
He is missing her like hell but didnt let anyone to know.

Arjun gave her final shoot of the day.Then Monaya enters.
Mohit: Hey Arjun wanna join us?
Arjun: where?
Sanaya: We are going to have party at Naveena's house? lets go!
Arjun: Sorry guys i'm not in that mood you carry on.
Sanay: What is going on Arjun? Since Rati left you are very changed
Arjun: No its nothing like that.
Mohit: Are you missing her?
Arjun: No......(he lied)
Sanaya: offcourse he is... infact i thnik you love her? i should inform Rati about this (excited)
Arjun: No no its nothing like that.
Sanaya: Really?
Arjun: Yeah!
Sanaya: Ok then we are going bye
Arjun: Bye

Arjun keep on thinking about Rati.He knows that he lvoe her but never told her.And as now they are almostr apart he cant let her know in anyway.

Arjun went to rati's house to meet her.he rang the bell of the door.Rati opened.
Rati: oh hey Arjun!
She hugged him
Arjun: Hi!
He enters the house
Rati: What you doing here?
Arjun: kya mein aa nahi skata?
Rati: Aa sakte ho mein oth aise hi puch rahi thi.
Arjun: By the way tum gayi nahi naveena ki party mein?
Rati: Just mood nahi tha. tum kyun nahi gaye?
Arjun: Aise hi.So how are you?
Rati: Good! by the way sorry Arjun
Arjun:Why?
Rati: I know people bashed about you thats why
Arjun: No-no you dont need to they were just depressed that why they bashed about me thats all.
Rati:Yeah!so mujhe miss karte ho?
Arjun: Tumhe no way.......time hi kahan milta hai kisiko..
Rati: Accha?
Arjun: Or nahi toh kya or mere pass phaltu time nahi hai inn sab ke liye ok?
Rati: Tumhe toh mein.
She slapped him sweetly
Arjun:Ouch!!!
Rati: Sorry-sorry lag gaya kya?
Arjun: Mazak kar raha tha... chalo ab mein chalta hun ok?
Rati: Ok.....bye
Arjun: oye take care bye
Rati:Bye.(smiled)

Rati was very glad that he came by only for her and in the other hand Arjun was relieved to see rati in better condition.

Next Day!!!

MJHT cast were discussing about the show.
Arjun: Whats going on?
Sushmita: NOthing bas show ki band baji hui hai...see the trps they are at minus.ab kya kare?
Arjun: Simple Rati ko vaapash late hain.
Sushmita: Kiase i mean we already shown that rati's character is death.
Arjun: Thats the biggest mistake
Sudhir: What?
Arjun: See aap logon ne ussi character ko end kar diya jo most popular tha. so what u expect from fans? they will never watch this show without Rati.
Sudhir: Arjun is right.
Arjun was very happy from inside
Sudhir: Sushmita asked the writers to write a comeback sequence of Nupur.
Sushmita: BUt sir do you think rati will come back.
Arjun: She will if you apologize to her.
Sudhir: We are not going to apologize.
Arjun: But sir...
Sidhir: Arjun its your responsibility to bring back rati.ok?
Arjun: but why me? i mean its cv's call right?
Sudhir: yeah see we'll re-arrage the contract everything but we are usy in sorting out the trp thing so you have to go there and inform her that she can join us rom tomorrow
Arjun: ok..

Arjun reched at Rati's house...
Arjun: Howz u?
Rati: fine, kya baat hai aaj tum khush lag rahe ho?
Arjun: Woh ek news hai jisse tum bhi khush ho jaogi.
Rati: what?
Arjun: cv's ne tumhe vapash lane ka faisla kar diya. (excited)
[Rati was shocked]
Rati: Really?? and they send you to tell me about this?
Arjun: Yeah!
Rati: Arjun please pass my message to them i dont accept it.
Arjun: What?why?
Rati: Because i do have some self-respect also.i mean they just threw me out of the sahow and now want me back without any apology.seriously?
Arjun: I konw this is inappropriate but still please come bak for your fans who are want you.
[Rati was getting soften]
Rati: But Arjun
[All in sudden dont know what happen to Arjun he gets emotional and in his true feelnigs started showing up]
Arjun: PLease come back for me...
[Rati shocked by seeing his eyes all moist and the words he said from deep dowm of his heart.]
Rati: what happen Arjun? why you are behaving like this?
Arjun: you know what Rati i respect your decision but just give me a answer of question,why a boy miss a girl badly in her absence? and i miss you that much. i think that there is no life without you. i really-really miss you Rati....I want you back not onloy as my Nupur but also my Rati...I want you ..😭
[Rati was confused ... she dont know what to answer]
Arjun: Whatever answer you get that will be the answer of my question, question of Arjun-rati.
[Then he left.]

Rati is still stuck into his question.Tihs was the first time she saw Arjun tihs muchhurt.She wasnot feeling good at all.She thinks the pain she saw in his eyes was because of her and it was really because of her.
Rati then recall all the arti moments in her head with a glimpse of smile on her face.She remember the day when he used to play prank with her,flirt withher everything.
Then she thinks about that question...then finally she got the answer

Rati: when a guy loves a girl he miss her alot in her absence thats the answer .
[Then Rati think carefully about it...]
Rati: oh god Arjun love me! he love me (with a happy smile)
[She was so happy to know it.She was like she wanted this from ages.]
Rati: Arjun love me, yes!

Next Day.....
[Arjun is in his vanity van getting ready for the shoot.He was not feeling good at all.Then he heard someone called his name from backside he turned around and saw rati standing.He was totally sohcked]
Arjun: Rati??
Rati: I'm back!
Arjun: So cv's apologize to you huh?
Rati: Yeah here is the aplogy letter.
[Arjun was somewhere dissappointed becuase he wanted her to realize what he feels for her and comeback for him.]
Arjun: Great! so my effort was nothinn worth to right?
Rati: Wrong. I came back for my fans who always loved me most of all for you.Arjun i want to tell you something.
Arjun: What?
Rati: I - I
Arjun: You???
Rati: I love you (softly)
[Arjun was in complete shock]
Arjun: You do?
Rati: yeah and i know when a boy miss a girl badly in her absence thts mean only one thing that he love her. Arjun i come out with me feelings because i dont want to loose you at any cost.I mean what if this show get off air in future then we will not be able to stay close with eachother.
And i dont wanted to curse myself in the future for not letting you know that i love you and loose you forever.I know how i passed my days and nights without seeing you and i dont want to go through that pain anymore.Arjun..
Arjun: I LOVE YOU Rati and thats all what i want to say because in these three words i can define my feelnigs for you and i promise one thing to you for sure ill never let you go. i promise.
ANd as our life is not a serial so now one can seperate us until he wants. (pointing to the god)

Then they hugged eachother tightly...The were feelnig the emotion of love,respect,vows and everything.Arjun and Rati now have became one soul.
Their journey of Mayank and Nupur makes them this much closer.

"Love is a magical thing because in pain people gets more closer!"
ThexxxxxxxxEndxxxxxxxx

DoxxxxxxxxxxxxComment!
Edited by KomaliciousXOMN - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
lovely ,amazing ,mindblowing and mind boggling OS yaar kash real life main bhi aisa hi ho aur rati arjun k liye mjht main wapis a jaye i will be so filmy na just like nupur always wants any how thx alot for the pm love u for that
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: zarfishan1983

lovely ,amazing ,mindblowing and mind boggling OS yaar kash real life main bhi aisa hi ho aur rati arjun k liye mjht main wapis a jaye i will be so filmy na just like nupur always wants any how thx alot for the pm love u for that

hmmmm...kash aisa ho jae...
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Posted: 15 years ago
aww.. komal...dat ws sooo cute....
luvd it 2 d bits...
-supriya

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