8 Surprises- ss on MN (vm,siggies-pg19,20,21) - Page 9

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Gr88888 part sweety.. now waiting for the next update... and do PM me......⭐️⭐️⭐️
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Posted: 15 years ago
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awesome part..!!!
waiting for the next part..
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Posted: 15 years ago
#83
its fantastic ..........i just finished reading both the parts ............it was so passionate and romantic........... loved it .........now cant wait for the last part ...........how i wish some this kind of a suprised for MN happened in mjht as well........... the ff is too good ..........
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Posted: 15 years ago
#84

Thanks guys for the comments

Here comes the last part


Mayank sat on bed facing nupur. He slowly moved towards her. Both are lost in their eyes.

There is hardly any gap between them. Nupur closes her eyes enjoying his breath on her lips.

Mayank slowly kisses on her forehead. Then kisses her bindi. He removes the bindi after kissing. He slowly traces his finger to the eyes of nupur. He kisses them gently.

He moves towards the nose and kisses it. Now he is tracing her cheeks. He is making circles on her cheek. He slowly kissed them and moved towards the ear. He slowly kissed on the earlobe and them removed her ear rings. Then he moved towards her chin. Gave a small peck and slided down to her neck. 😳😳

He left a trail of kisses and slowly removed the necklace.

He suddenly stopped what he is doing. Nupur opened her eyes and was looking at him questioningly.

He gave her the gift he brought for her. He asked her to change and come. Before leaving the bed

Nupur: Mayank tumhe samajh mein aaya 8 ka kya meaning hein.

Mayank : nahin nupur mujhe samajah mein nahin aaya. He makes a puppy face.

Nupur: Mein samjha du

Mayank : haan samjhavona

Nupur : She came closer to mayank. She cupped his face and bent his face down just close to hers.

She kissed his forehead and said I

She kissed his right eye and said L

She kissed his left eye and said O

She kissed his nosetip and said V

She kissed his right cheek and said E

She kissed his left cheek and said Y

She kissed his lower lip and said O

She kissed his upper lip and said U

Nupur slowly whishpered in his ear " this is what 8 means"

She quickly got up and went to the other room to change.

Mayank was still not back from the sweet moment. He slowly opened his eyes and remembered what actually happened.

He was lost in nupurs world. He slowly came out and was humming a song and waiting for Nupur.

so much to say that I love you
Now that so much I need you
How would it be if you leave me
Feel it for me to believe me
I want to love but not alone
Living for you and dying for you
I want to love but not alone
Living for you and dying.... for you

Nupur is also enjoying the song while getting ready.

She came out wearing a red saree with absolutely no makeup and minimum jewellery. She is looing dropdead gorgeous just like a red rose with drops of hue on it.



Mayank came towards nupur and checked her out from top to bottom. Nupur was blushing all the time.😳

He took out a small box aur nupur ka maang bhar deta hein. Nupur closed her eyes to take in the perfect moment.

Mayank: "Perfect"

Nupur : haan?

Mayank : U look perfect mrs. Sharma

Nupur : I am always perfect Mr. Sharma.

Mayank without even wasting a minute hugged nupur from back. He kissed her on the neck. He kissed her hair. He removed hair from her back and kissed her back.

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The dishes lay there as they are.

Inko dekhkar chaand bhi sharmagayi.

Pata nahin us raath chaand aur kitni baari sharmaayi. 7 dinon ki doori jo mitani thi unhe.

NOTE: Agar aap log kisi ko miss karthe ho tho unhe batavo ki aapkeliye who kitna special hein.

Is ek guesture se woh unkeliye aap special ban jaavoge. Express yourself.

Do comment and criticize.

Thanks for sparing with me and i hope u enjoyed the SS

Edited by prerana_mjht - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#85
omg prerana you rocked like any thing .............................
it was simply loved it and i even liked the outfit which u saw as nupur wearing .................
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Posted: 15 years ago
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u hav written every part beautifully..luved all the parts..it was surprise for all of us..simply luved it..
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Posted: 15 years ago
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prerna ...........this ss was too good............ i am so sad it got over ...............i reallly loved it alot ............you are an amazing writer ............do write more short stories on MN ..........plz ..................loved the ss lots ...........thanxfor writing it ............
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: mayurg2010

omg prerana you rocked like any thing .............................
it was simply loved it and i even liked the outfit which u saw as nupur wearing .................



Thanx a lot for liking it.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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the sweetest ff i read yaar.thoroughly enjoyed it........
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: stuti123

prerna ...........this ss was too good............ i am so sad it got over ...............i reallly loved it alot ............you are an amazing writer ............do write more short stories on MN ..........plz ..................loved the ss lots ...........thanxfor writing it ............



Thanx a lot
I actually had this idea and kept it in words.

If i have some more ideas in future i will try to write one
Edited by prerana_mjht - 15 years ago

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