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hey guys! i wrote a little soomething for MN offcourse and am a little aprehensive of posting it and didnt knoe where to post it! LOL
and also its not complete...its only half...u guys tell me how do u like it..and then i might continue..!
here it is! 😃
do like and comment LOL!

It was a fine morning some days after holi, where life had taken a lazy routine. College, studies, projects, canteen, home, dinner and offcourse the occasional nok jhoks between Mayank and Nupur. They were never short of the witty retorts that they had for each other. They loved to irritate each other and then make it up to the other one. One of their kind, they were. Mayank though being a caring and responsible husband would never leave a chance to tease Nupur and she, the acclaimed nautanki would never fail to always surprise him with her new adaas, nautanki and sometimes her sincerity.

That morning, after breakfast, both of them had taken up their respective works. While Mayank worked on some notes and assignments, Nupur was engrossed in clearing up the mess on her dressing table. Mayank would occasionally glance at her, shaking his head at the different expressions on her face while sorting out her things. He knew she was dying to speak, mutter and blabber on but was keeping quite so as not to disturb him. He smiled to himself and carried on with his work.

Nupur while sorting out her earings came across a jewel box. She picked it up and opened it. She had actually forgotten all abt it.

N- oh! Main toh bhul hi gayi thi! By god ye engagement ring toh ab bhi mere paas hai.

M- (looking up) kya hua Nupur?

N- Mayank, ye adiraj ki engagement ring toh maine usse waapas hi nahi ki. Isse apne paas rakhna toh galat hai na.

M- oh! Right Nupur! In sab problems aur tensions ki wajah se humne kabhi notice hi nahi kiya.

N- wahi toh!!

Nupur all of a sudden started giggling.

M- (looking perplexed) Mrs. Sharma, ab kya hua hai aapko? Tum bhi na ekdum Indian Cricket Team ki tarah unexpected ho.

N- (gigling further) Mayank, main ye soch rahi hun ki waise toh ye engagement ring hai hi nahi! Bechara Adhiraj!

M- (even more confused now) achcha? Ye engagement ring nahi hai? Tum thik toh ho na? kahin koi moti book toh sar pe nahi gira li..!

He teased her, getting amused.

N- very funny! But sach mein bechara Adhiraj! Usse toh pata bhi nahin hai ki hamari sagai kabhi hui hi nahi!

Mayank was shocked to hear this. He had seen Adhiraj making Nupur wea the ring on that day and being unable to stand the sight further has left the function.

M- matlab? Par..

Nupur cut him in between.

N- oh! Maine toh tumhe kabhi bataya hi nahi na. sorry Mr. Gyaani baba, aapse itni badi baat chupane ki meri himmat kaise hui.!

He rolled his eyes at her nautanki. She giggled again.

N- actually, lights off hone ke baad maine ring galat finger mein pehen lit hi. Main aise kaise usse sagai kar leti?! Ye haq to bas tumhara haina.

Mayank listened to all this stunned. He never knew.

Nupur continued ' aur waise bhi Shahrukh ne kaha hai ki hum ek baar jeete hain, ek baar marte hain, pyaar bhi ek baar karte hain, aur shaadi bhi. So us logic se toh hum engagement bhi ek baar karte hain. Shahrukh kitna intelligent hai by god!

Nupur was in her full nautanki elemnt and pouted at Mayank. He, on the other hand looked lovingly at his wife. He didn't know how to react. Should he tease his wife further on the SRK thing or should he thank her for doing this or should he'!

He felt sad within cause he knew how important these things were for her, engagement, mehendi and everything and the way they got married, they had no chance to do anything. They were not even engaged. He knew how she had dreamt about her engagement. But right now, he was not in a position to buy her a ring and seal the promise. He knew they were married and it was enough. But not for him. He wanted to do everything for her. He looked at her, realizing that this thought has not even crossed her mind. He was proud of her, remembering the Nupur before marriage and seeing her now. There was difference and yet it was same. Maybe this is called commitment and love.





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annie07 thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Wonderful Shinz........can u plz post it in Future scenes thread........
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: annie07

Wonderful Shinz........can u plz post it in Future scenes thread........


i would annie...and its not even complete but i actually dont have the link to that thread plus its nowhere around on the forum LOl..!😆

ioh ok...got it! 😆

oh and thanks! 😳
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Originally posted by: maria88

fantastic....do write more....



thanks sweety...i will! 😃 😳
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Nice..............👏
Mayank is really sooooooo much proud of his soo understanding wifey n also Nupur is vry vry lucky to huv a hubby like Mayuu....................

dey both r really made fr each other...............
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Posted: 15 years ago
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short, sweet and cute. thts what we call an OS! keep writing more.
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Originally posted by: yash.dilse

Nice..............👏
Mayank is really sooooooo much proud of his soo understanding wifey n also Nupur is vry vry lucky to huv a hubby like Mayuu....................

dey both r really made fr each other...............


thnks!

i knoe,...they are pefect! 😳
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Originally posted by: talkativetaurus

short, sweet and cute. thts what we call an OS! keep writing more.



aww...thanks sweety..! will write more! 😃
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nice one shinz cute update
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hye Marvellous OS.............totally Mindblwoing....................😳😳😳

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