short story on *MAYUR* chotu update on pg2

well guys i was getting bored so thought that i would write a short story on mayur 😃
remembering all the good old days 😉
Character sketch
Mayank: A handsome guy so is dedicated to only his job and is proud that he has achieved all this on his own. Fells he would never be in love and that it is just waste of time and life
Nupur: A modern kind of girl who has just completed her MBA and returning to back to her sis and the rest is just mjht.


It's a highway road
and no one around for miles
and a girl is standing there waiting for someone to rescue her from this deserted place
The girl: "this stupid car was never reliable why did i even think to trust it . shit ! now i am stuck in here with no one except this unreliable car ."
she checks her phone for network but it's out of coverage area
Girl: "how am i even going to reach home. gunjan must b waiting for me i just hope she is not tensed "

just as she is lost in her thoughts a car drives by her side and god save her luck it stops before her.
as the girl looks at it she thinks that it's the luckiest day in her life that someone has come to save her from The disgrace of her car and highway.
The girl almost runs towards it just hoping not to miss the car
Just then a handsome guy gets of the car and walks slowly towards her.
The guy: "seems like u had a car break down in here"
The girl:" well i would have been shocked if would not have a break down. you know it's the most unreliable car anyone can ever own in the world but yet u see i am using it . sometimes i feel......
The guy:" you can tell me the story wen we done with mending your car. do u mind if i have a look, maybe i'll b able to set it right "
the girl: "yeah sure. by the way i am Nupur was just planning to go back home where as my car had other plans for me "
she gives him her hand to shake and he takes it being obliged
The guy: "i am Mayank! was just going to pick my mom from one of her friends sons shaadi ."
And stated to check for the problem in the car
Nupur: thats great! u know i loveeee shaadi's . they r so much fun dance, masti, songs, new dresses .....
Mayank: yeah yeah . Nupur i can work properly only wen i concentrate and i can concentrate only wen u maintain some silence . i would like if u listen to me u see

"khadoos" Nupur says to herself and then looks at him thinking "handsome khadoos"
she looks at him thinking black actually suits this guy a lot and the shirt is perfect for him shows off his body so well. He is defenetly a khadoos but really very gud looking too.Must have dated a lot of girls till today.........

Mayank: Nupur there is engine break down we need a mechanic for it. if u want i'll drop u to the place where u need to go.
Nupur: but u had to go pick ur mom isn't it but i won't mind if u want to help after all a handsome guy always should rescue a beautiful girl.
Mayank: excuse me!
Nupur: nothing nothing just forget it and yeah we should leave fast u know my sister must be getting real tensed cause i am late and also i don't want .......
Mayank: ok ok lets go.

Nupur is removing her luggage from the car and Mayank happily helps her out with it .

"awwwww...... this guy not that bad after all. he does not talk much otherwise he seems a really good guys." nupur thinks in herself
as Mayank carries her bag towards his car "kitna bolte hai yar . wen she was born she must have started to talk instead of crying " he thought

they sit in the car and start the drive of their life .

hope u'll like it guys
well i changed the character of mayank and nupur a bit.😉
and yeah will continue and write some more
i have an idea about how to end it hope u'll like that too 😃

Nupur was wearing something like this

and Mayank something like this one



guys do comment and criticize 😃
and yeah do press the like button if u liked it 😛

Originally posted by: mjhtnupurmayank

very nice...

thanks yar 😛

Originally posted by: mjhtmayurluver

nice one..

thank ya glad u liked it 😳

awesome shlpa....will w8 for u r nxt update

Originally posted by: naina4MAYUR

nyc yaar.....plzzzz continue

thanks yar naina
and yeah will continue soon
just waiting for my brain to give me good ideas 😆😆

Originally posted by: shama420

awesome shlpa....will w8 for u r nxt update

awwww.... thanks shama janu 😳
and howz the character change
i wanted to write the things i want to see in mayur
so wrote this 😉

@shilpa mehta...:

part two :

Nupur is all angry in herself because she is sitting with this guys who does not speak at all and never even learn't to listen . where am i stuck i just hope i reach home as fast as possible though i am sure how i will survive for so long without SPEAKING. i really wonder hoe this guy manages to do that . she thinks in herself

Nupur: Mayank! can you open the windows it's nice and airy outside. Don't u like fresh air ??
Mayank: yeah sure. [and brings the windows down] i just thought that u would prefer AC more than fresh air but yeah i love fresh air too.
As mayank complets saying this he waits for nupur's reaction but there is no reaction from HER.As he looks at her enjoying the gentle breeze and gentle touch of leaves on her hands "well itni bhi bure nahin hai bas kuch gyada he bolte hai" and then carefully keeping his eyes on road also admires the way the hair her is gently swaying ."wow man! she is beautiful her eyes,her smile,her....." and suddenly the car jerks as he puts the breaks "dude ur out of ur mind, what the heck ru thinking. just put it off and concentrate on ur driving" he thinks
nupur falls forward really hard almost getting herself hurt due to the sudded break.
"are u mad! what do u think would have happend to u if something happend to me . do u think u would even be alive after after attempting such a thing and also.....
Mayank cute in middle " hey i did'nt mean to, i just got distracted. i am sorry."
"what! what did u say ? i could not hear u properly" she asks " I AM SORRY! is that alright "he shouts
"well yeah. by the way what made U distract . did u see any other angry young man ?"
"WHAT? anyways whatever i said sorry what else do u want me to do " Mayank said. " if u don't mind u can buy me some food i am really really hungry" nupur said with a childish look on her face.
"ok i'll take u to same good dhaba" he said."dhaba! don't we have a good restaurant around in here ?" she asked." yeah sure u can tell me wen u builed one around in here" he said in a irritated voice
"i think i should just shut up" nupur though in herself.but nupur will be nupur.

"so do you have a car showroom " nupur asked. Mayank started to laugh hearing her question.[awwww... he looks so cute wen he smiles nups thought ] "and what made u think so " he asked
" your so good in handling cars and u can mend them too expect sometimes ur a bit rash with it [she smiles on this] so i thought that ...
" well no i work in a company as a cheif execute" he said smiling involatarily looking at her

Originally posted by: naina4MAYUR

@shilpa mehta...:

i think u shud charge ur brain.......so v can get a gud update soon.....

he he yeah i am trying to do that
wrote a small part and continuing it
have a look 😛

Silpu.....gr8 yaar.....and i'm jst imagining ArTi in dose 2 beautiful dress..