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Posted: 15 years ago
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ONE SHOT ON MAYUR!!.it's a cont frm whr the thursday episode ended.

after mayank scremas at nupur and she tells gunjan that they r leaving for morena tomorrow.
they reach morena and are greeted warmly by thr family and frndz....
nupur and gunjan spend the one week holiday pndering over wht wnt wrong and where.....nupur finally comes to a conclusion that whtever was between her and mayank was just attraction not love.
nupur and gunjan decide that they will only focus on thr studies for which they actually wnt to mubai for.
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this one week was horrible for mayank....he was missing nupur like anything but his ego wud not allow him to make the first move....and over that on the very day nupur and gunjan were coming back frm morena mayank over heard uday benji and diyz convo......

Diya: yaar ek baat tu done hai nupr mayank se darti bahut hai....remember usdin whn hum teeno nay undono ko classroom main dekha tha...
uday: kub di???
Benji: abay dhakun jub nupur baray pyar se mayank ko oinment laga rahee theee ..yaad aaya..yaad aaya
uday :ohh haan correct
Diya: and how we cornered nupur after tht.....aur nupur kitna darii hui thee ..aur we tricked the truth out of her.....plzzz mayank ko mut batana kay tumko sub pata hai..hehehe
Benji: laykin i guess usnay bata diya mayank ko kay humain pata hai wurna wo itnay achay se thore humko treat kurtan apnay ghar pe ahahah.

Mayank felt disgusted!!!!.how could he....why does he always let his stupid anger take over him!!!..mayank cursed himself and evry single word that he had said to nupur b4 she was leaving started screaming in his head..........how could he hurt someone he loved so much how!!!!!........then he decided that he would himself go to morena and apologizee.....but it was already too late because the next day whn he entered the college to submit his leave application he saw them talking to sum other students.....he threw the application in the dustbin.
mayank thought the first chance he gets hez going to clear out all the misunderstanding......
he waited by the pillar...as soon as nupur was about to pass by mayank stopped her
M: nupur
N: haaan...oh hi mayank (she was being absolutely normal)
mayank was taken back by her behaviour
M: nupur wo us din....imm....main nay jo bhi kaha...ghar pe...uskay liey
N: ohhh wait wait....tumko sorry ya bura feel kurnay ke koi zarorat nahi...thekkay...and yes mujhay office jana hai im getting late ....
M: laykin nupur meri.....
but befor mayank cu complete his sentence nupur was already on her way .....
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OFFICE
N: sir yay meri application ........aaap plz mera section change kurdain
after sum questions the sir agreed and nupur got her section changed
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IN CLASS ROM
Mayank was wondering why nupur is late...the class was about to start but no sign of nupur....he had also saved a seat for her...right next to him.....his eyes were glued on the door....
the sir entered the class room....and started calling out for attendance....
SIR: nupur.....nupur bhushan....absent...kiya baat hai ek huftay ki chutyaan kafi nahi hoti hain aaplogon kay liey...
some random girl(lolz) : sir aapkay aanay se pehlay office se yay letter aya tha
sir opened the letter and read aloud : nupur bhushan has been transfered to another section kindly give all her result records.........
SIR: hmmm....y did she change her section......anywayz lets start the class...
Mayank just could not understand if everything was okay y did she change her section...and dint even inform him......this was driving mayank crazy and he finally decided that he needs to talk to nupur in detail......the class got over and mayank left quickly with mix emotions insecurity, fear, guilt, confusion...
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CANTEEN

mayank saw the whole group sitting on one table and everyone was laughing.....and so was nupur.....mayank started walking towards thr table whn suddenly he froze listening to nupurs word which was an answer to diyz question....
Diya: aur nupur tumhara aur mayank ka kesa chul raha hai...
Nupur: aray nahi diya...we r thru...i mean humlog ko laga wo pyaar hai but wo sirf ek attraction thee...tu abhi we just normal...
everyone suddenly stopped talking
N: array tumlog sub aisa kiya dekh rahay hoo...yay normal hai.........array aise misunderstanding tu hoti rehti hai...aksr hum attraction ko pyar samhuj bethtay hain......plz itna serious mut ho tumlog BY GOD!!!...chill karo yaar
the bell rung and everyone dispersd......

mayank kay pairoon ki neechay se kesi nay zameen kheenchlee hoo....he wasnt able to decide wht was going on...he cudnt believe wht he just heard...rather he cudnt even imagine nupur saying it......attraction..did she just call our true love attraction....
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GIRLS WASHROOM(lolz)
nupur was standing infront of the sink crying miserbly.....she wasnt able to keep the pretense for long...she broke down....it tore her apart to the core....it felt as if someone was was contantly stabbing her heart .........no matter howmany times she tried to make herself understand that it's over ...her heart would not listen...
N: nupur tu kyun nahi samhuj sukti mayank aur tu ek dosray kay liey nahi banay hain....humdono nay ek dosray ko pyaar kum dukh ziyada diey hain...tu pyaar kaisay howa...aur tujhay yaad nahi kistray usnay tumko jnaya say pehlay insult kara tha....pyaar apni jaga hoti aur respect apni jaga....purr....and she broke down again..
after sumtime whn she felt a bit better she left for her class.
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CHUTTI TIME!!! (=D)

mayank was waiting outside the college lost in his thoughts....not even sure wht was he waiting for....did he still want a confrontation...rather de he even deserve it...
nupur on the other hand was in the library studying for the upcoming papers...that was the only way she could distract herself.....nupur looked at her watch..
N: by god!!! itni dair hogaee aur mujhay pata bhi nahi chala....uff tu bhi na nupur kesi cheez mai lug jaye tu tujhay pata he nahi chulta abhi mayank hota na.....
she quickly shooed away the thought....
she almost ran out to the college gate and stopped to see that mayank was thr leaning against the gate...
N: array mayank tum gaye nahi abhi tuk
M: tumhai kiya fark purta hai...
N: nahi ...wo tu main aise he pooch rahee theee..
mayank just stared at her...trying to fig out the truth...
nupur nervously lowered her eyez
N: ummm acha main chultee hoon ..
but before nupur even moved an inch mayank pulled nupur by her hand ...soon nupur realised that she was ppinned to the wall with mayanks hand on her bothsides.
nupur: mayank...ya tum kiya kur rahay ho..choro mujhay...
M: nahi pehlay mujhay meray saray sawallon kay jawab chaye
N: muhay tumse koi baat nahi kurnee...chorr...mujhay jaanay doo
M: tum mujhse pyaar kurtee ho ya nahi??
N: shayad tumhai batana bhool gayee mayank...main nay humaray baaray mai bahut socha mayank...aur issi nateejay pay phunchee hoon...yay pyar nhai tha mayank .....
M: ohh i c...so i was just a crush...attraction right
nupur lowering her gaze
N: haan...shayad
mayank slowly raised his hand and started tracing nupurs face
M; so u can let anyone come that close to u....tum kesi ko bhi apnay itnay kareeb aanay dooge jissko tu pyar nahi kurtee bus attraction hai....
N: maian apni gultiyan repeat nahi kurtee mayank sharm
she removed his hand pushed him away and left for her houese
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the next day the group decided to go to the newly opened club.mayank and nupur were invited to ....both were reluctnt at first but agreed..
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AT THE CLUB!!
everyone was having hell lot of fun except for mauank and nupur .nupur was as usual pretending and trying to blend in but mayank was sitting far away frm thm lost in his own world which did not go un noticed by nupur....
mayank asked for a drink which shocked nupur....mayank never consumed alcohol...laykin ab....aaab
and not only one drink but he gulped down one after the another.....nupur got worried because she knew wat a scene he wud create after that...she got up and went towards mayank
Nupur: bus mayank ...tum pehlay he bahut peee chukaya ho
Mayank: shhhhhhhhh.... tumhai kiya problem hai...
Nupur: acha mayank chalo ghar chaltee hain theekay
nupur tried to hold mayanks hand but he pulled away....
Mayank: tumhai dikh nahi rha ameray aur drink kay beech main attraction ho rahee hai...shoo jaoo tum yaha see!!!
Nupur: mayank plzzz chaloo meray saath...hum bahur jaakay baat karain
Mayank: yesh madam .......jaishay tum kahoo...
nupur took mayank out of the club and reached the parking lot....
mayank: nupur
nupur: bolo mayank....
Mayank: im sorry...plzz mujhay maaf kurdoo.main bahut buraa hoon.humaisha apna promise torta hoon...tumko hurt kurta hoon...plz mujhai maaf kurdoo...mujhsee door mut jaoo....main tumse sacha pyaar kurta hoon...aur ainda se tumharee poori baat bhi sunoga.plz...
mayank was holding nupurs hand
nupur dint knnow wat to say......cud she trust herself again...thr love again
MAyank: nupur tum mujhai danto...punishment do...pr plzzz bolo kay tum bhi mujhse pyar kurtee hoo...plz bolo tumnay mujhay maafkiya
mayank had tears in his eyes...nupur's heart won and she instinctly hugged mayank
Nupur: i love u mayank......
atlast mayank's heart felt the peace that was missing for so long....they dint leave eachother...after a while mayank started feeling dizzzy ...both of them sat down and ...mayank layed his head on nupurs lap...all content like a little boy......nupur bent down and kissed mayank on his cheek.....her mayank..
.and waited for the gang to come back so tht thy can leave..
hope u guyz like it
sorry for all the errors
plz hit the like button if u like it!!!

LUV *~^AnA*^!

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mohseena thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
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.........koi tu purhooo......u can openly say it if it sucks!!!!>...cux i think it duz lolz!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey anna this is soooooooooo well written, i am proud of you for maing nupur so sensible and not at all rude, mean and insensible.
its amazing, why would you say that it sucks man, it was truly very well writtrm man.Keep it up.
i so want nupur to deal with this sensibly and no showering of nonsensical attitude as in the locket track man.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: Senny

hey anna this is soooooooooo well written, i am proud of you for maing nupur so sensible and not at all rude, mean and insensible.

its amazing, why would you say that it sucks man, it was truly very well writtrm man.Keep it up.

i so want nupur to deal with this sensibly and no showering of nonsensical attitude as in the locket track man.


awwww thank u senny..........thank u shoooo much!!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hi. 😊

U back?? Welcome back gal. 😊

Well . . . this OS is very very cute!! I loved it to the core. You are an excellent writer, keep up the good work. 🤗
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: Jiah.Angel

Hi. 😊<br><br>U back?? Welcome back gal. 😊<br><br>Well . . . this OS is very very cute!! I loved it to the core. You are an excellent writer, keep up the good work. 🤗<br>


yaar thank u .........university keeps me sooooooo bzy u have no idea!!!>......
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hey..wtz ur name..?..anyway nice OS..
So Nupur thinks it was just attraction?!..well she shudnt..they both know it was love!
n Mayank tried a lot to convince her i guess..but she didnt listen..
Mayank getting drunk was good i think..atleast Nupur was ready to forgive him..!..n their scene was cute tat time..
thnx 4 d PM
do write more
-Aish
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: aish_punk

Hey..wtz ur name..?..anyway nice OS..

So Nupur thinks it was just attraction?!..well she shudnt..they both know it was love!


n Mayank tried a lot to convince her i guess..but she didnt listen..


Mayank getting drunk was good ithink..atleast Nupur was ready to forgive him..!..n their scene was cute tat time..


thnx4 d PM

do write more


-Aish


yaar the reason i wrote that nupur thinks is attraction becuz at this age everything is confusing..........we cant really diffrentiate between loe and crush...and secondly mayank actually insulted her.remember the dialog : tumharay bolnay ki bemaari...."
but in the end her heart melted na. =D thank u for reading it!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey very nice one shot mayank being drunken was a good idea
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Posted: 15 years ago
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vry sweeeeeet n awesome OS dear..........lovd it vry much.........

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