New MJHT Poem on current track(pg15)

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falak

@falak01

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Posted: 15 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: sajan_monaya
OMG falak!!
awsum yaar!!
loved it!!
shooooooo cute one
thanks 4 the PM and do write more soon

thanx payu...😃😳

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falak

@falak01

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Posted: 15 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: nikki028
anku.........1st of all congo on ur new thread........by god......wht a poem dear........hamesha ki tarah it ws beautiful to d core..........it speaked soooooooooooooooo much in depths........i really dnt knw hw to describe....u perfectly described nupsi's feelings with ur heavenly talent of shayari.....my mosssst mossssst fav line ws...

Wohi Iss Simran Ka Raj Hai.........thnxxxxxxxx a special ton for this line alone......

btw do add me in ur pm list for mayur poems........once again my shayarni u rockd.....i still cant bliv...jis ladki ko pyar mein viswaas hi nahi hai vo kaise itne deep passionate true love related poems likh sakti hai!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!.......by god anku u r truly a miracle....

hi nikki di...😃

i tried my level besstt to make this poem romantic...and aapke comments se lagta hai ki kuch to romantic hai....😳😳

yeah that last line to just abhi abhi aad ki thi....😆

aur kuch yaad nahi aaaya so i added this line,nupur ki tarah socha to ye "raj" hi yaad aaya...😳😳

ok di i will add u to the pm list!!!

ha ha..i believe in luv" but i too believe dat true love exists in books only...😳

he he..ye ajooba aapko kitna pareshaan karta hai na??😆😆

thanx a lot for ur lovely comments di!!!🤗

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falak

@falak01

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Posted: 15 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: luvarti
AWESOME YAAR.....................KEEP IT UP

thanx abanti...😃

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Nikhila Chandran S.S.

@Nikki_Titli

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Posted: 15 years ago

#14

anku..........it ws indeed vry romantic dear.........aur us ddljwaale line toh touchd my soul.....srsly......

n btw agar is ajoobe ko mere liye thoda sa bhi waqt milege time spare karne ko toh plzz...meri celeberations mein zaroor aayiyega....waise u r already vry l8.......bt stil i want u to b there.....so do come ok....mere liye..plz....

toh ab kaun kisko pareshan kar raha hai,huh????????hehe....

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surbhi tyagi

@EtherealRati

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Posted: 15 years ago

#15

you are awesome at writing . loved the poem

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falak

@falak01

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Posted: 15 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: nikki028
anku..........it ws indeed vry romantic dear.........aur us ddljwaale line toh touchd my soul.....srsly......

n btw agar is ajoobe ko mere liye thoda sa bhi waqt milege time spare karne ko toh plzz...meri celeberations mein zaroor aayiyega....waise u r already vry l8.......bt stil i want u to b there.....so do come ok....mere liye..plz....

toh ab kaun kisko pareshan kar raha hai,huh????????hehe....

ok ok....ye ajooba wahan aane ki koshish karega..🤣

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falak

@falak01

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Posted: 15 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: surbhi123
you are awesome at writing . loved the poem

thanx surbhi...😃

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iwantitall

@iwantitall

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Posted: 15 years ago

#18

ANKUUUUUUUU.....=D

yehhh poeemmsss padnee ke liyyyeee dill to dhadakk gaya tha ree!!!

byyy godddd... kyaaa poeeemm thii bee!!

jaaaaaannn lewaaaa full onnnn

hayyeeee i looovveeeeee ur poemss cmpltlyy ankuuu

tightt jhaappiiiisss

sindhya

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CryingEyes-

@CryingEyes-

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Posted: 15 years ago

#19

Heyyyy Falakkk🤗,so you are back again with your rocking poems,congratz on finishing your first poem's thread,that shows koi bohut famous horaha hai😉.Omg mind blowing poem sweety,each word and every line is just superb and so true👏👏👏,sach main you have God-gifted talent.Keep it up and do write more and more and more👍🏼.Missing you shooo much,love you loads and loads😳😳.

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falak

@falak01

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Posted: 15 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: cool.sindhya
ANKUUUUUUUU.....=D
yehhh poeemmsss padnee ke liyyyeee dill to dhadakk gaya tha ree!!!

byyy godddd... kyaaa poeeemm thii bee!!

jaaaaaannn lewaaaa full onnnn

hayyeeee i looovveeeeee ur poemss cmpltlyy ankuuu

tightt jhaappiiiisss

sindhya

tere comments padhne ko bhi ye dil bad betaab tha reee.....😳😳😳

aur tere exams hain aur tu yahan chipki baithi hai???😆😆😆

love u too yaaar....tighlllliesssttt jhappissssssssss🤗